New Chapter for April Fool
April Fool
CyanaWhite39 Reviews | 39 Ratings, 0 Likes, 97 Favorites )
Ron decides to play a prank on Hermione in honor of April Fool's Day. Unfortunately for him, things don't go quite as planned – and, yes, Snape is involved. One-shot. HG/SS Pairing. *Complete*
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CyanaWhite
Member Since 2006 | 2 Stories | Favorited by 29 | 18 Reviews Written | 128 Review Responses
Hiya! I recently graduated college and have entered an intense training program that keeps me overwhelmingly busy. As a result I have developed a split personality. I'm a savvy business woman by day and an avid Snape groupie by night. Loving Severus Snape can be exhausting, but oh so worth it.
Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
Reviews for April Fool
Hey!
Well, I can't really unterstand why they are so mad with Ron. Honestly, without him the two of them would never have come around to tell each other that they want the other - or even love each other. They should thank him^^
But okay, the intent with definitivly cruel. So a bit penalty is quite okay.
It's a really great little story. I laughed quite a lot. Thank you.
Fly
I've read this before but really enjoyed it a second time. Lots of fun
spiders and nudity. LOL. Not a fun combination.
Love the set up and culmination. Enjoyable reading.
Great story all around.
Ohhhh that was EEEEEEEEEEVIL ... but a hell of a lot of fun! ^-^
this story is really good and SO funny. and who cares if you pick on Ron ?
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
Thank you so much for the review. (and you're right, it's okay to pick on Ron. lol) Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
Thank you so much for the review. (and you're right, it's okay to pick on Ron. lol) Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
That was so hot. And funny. I really enjoyed that.
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
Thank you for the review. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
Lol. Very funny, indeed! Yes, a little OOC (more for Snape than Hermione, lol), but I liked it all the same, lol.
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
Thank you for the review, it means a lot. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
Amazing one-shot!! Love it =)
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
Thank you so much for the kind review, I'm truly glad you enjoyed it. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
Anonymous
A bit OOC and slightly too quick with the sex.
Author's Response: Well it sort of had to be quick, it is a one shot after all, and yes it is a bit OOC. I hope you enjoyed the story anyway, thanks for the review. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
Angel Mischa's response: Hehe - It is a really good idea. Oh Ron, what a silly boy you are ...
Great!!!!!!
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
Thanks for the review! Truly appreciated. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
lol
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
Thanks so much for the review, even though its short and sweet, it is very much appreciated. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
That was so GREAT! I don't normally leave reviews, but I liked your story sooooooo much that I just had to.
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
Thank you so much for the amazing review. I'm so glad you decided to leave one, it really motivates authors when you review, you should try it more often ^_^. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
So much fun is this. it' really a good job. just what stupid question : I can't figure out what OOC means. I suppose it' some Out Of C... I'm French so I don't catch everything yet. Could you help me ?
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
OOC means Out of Character. Inquiete toi pas, tu vas apprendre les termes rapidement. Je suis francaise aussi, alors laisser mois savoir si vous avez autre questions. Je serai contente de vous aidez. Merci pour la revue. Beaucoup D'Amour, CyanaWhite
A very amusing (and sexy) story, thank you.
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
A little sexy Sevurus is always a good thing! Thanks for the review. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
Oh that was too much! lol... I loved how you didn't have Hermione and Severus have a long conversation before taking advantage of their situation that they weren't entirely aware of. It was quite humourous and a fun read! Write more!
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
I'm so happy you liked it. As for the long conversation between the couple, I just figured most of us have read it 100 times before, so I left it out. It was refreshing not having to write it, lol. Thanks for the review! Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
Absolutely adorable… and I loved it!!! I don’t even care that it’s OOC! Well done…
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
LOL, glad to hear that the OOC didn't matter much. I was kinda hoping that in the context of the story it would be acceptable. Thanks so much for the review! Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
Very amusing! A good way to end the week!
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
Always good to unwind at the end of the week! Thanks for the review. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
you know again with you i was just think of this story 2 days ago how is your next story coming along i have not talk to you online in while.
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
My other story is on pause right now. I just don't have the time to commit to it right now. I have the plot in my head and my muse has been bugging me, so I might get back to it soon. The first two chapters are complete. Sorry about not talking to you lately, I'm rarely on except to respond to reviews. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
He's so easy to pick on... he sort of brings it on himself!
*Snort*
I enjoyed this story... I agree, it was OOC - but then, it only seems to be obvious when Hermione and Severus were in the tower. The rest of the time they appeared to be in C, so I wouldn't worry too much. *grin*
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
Ron is so much fun to write. And you're right, the OOCness isn't so bad, especially in the context of this story. Thanks for the review. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
LOL Loved the story immensly... Cheers!
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
Oi that was brilliant! I love pick-on-Ron stories, and this is awesome!
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
Thanks for the great review! Readers like you make writing just that much better. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
Cute and fun. :D
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
I do love Ron. But I still enjoyed this one. Nice work.
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
LOL sorry about that, but he's so fun to pick on. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite
Ok, I'll admit, I do like Ron. I think that once he grows up, he'll be a good guy (not deep mind you, but more human like and less little boy).But, I loved Hermione and Snapes revenge!
Response from CyanaWhite (Author of April Fool)
Here's the funny thing, I kinda like Ron in canon, but since entering the fanon world I found myself disliking him. He's a prat in our little community, lol. I do believe Ron will be a good guy in the final book. Thanks for the review. Lotsa Love, CyanaWhite