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Heat Wave
StormySkize25 Reviews | 7.04/10 (25 Ratings, 0 Likes, 23 Favorites )
London is in the middle of a heat wave. Hermione Granger and Remus Lupin are both just trying to find a way to cool off. Neither of them anticipated just how that would happen.
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StormySkize
Member Since 2005 | 13 Stories | Favorited by 172 | 431 Reviews Written | 998 Review Responses
I am in my late 50's and I didn't even start reading Harry Potter until after the third book came out. My granddaughter got me 'hooked on Potter,' and while surfing the net one day, I found a fanfiction site. That was it! My first story, "Renaissance," was published on Ashwinder a month later and I've been writing ever since. I am primarily a HG/SS shipper, but I also enjoy reading and writing RL/SS. I live in Tampa, Florida with my wonderfully adoring and supportive husband, and three completely spoiled cats. (Kallie, Mysha, and Smudge {who was the inspiration for the cat that Severus gives Hermione in my story "Renaissance."}) I'm always happy to correspond with my readers and I answer ALL reviews. I'm always looking for plot-bunnies, so feel free to throw some ideas out.
Reviews for Heat Wave
A lovely fade to black! I will imagine they lived happily ever after!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
That's the great thing about fan-fiction, isn't it? We can make anything happen. I'm glad you enjoyed. I loved writing this story. Thanks for reading and for your lovely comments throughout.
Payback is hell!! Do we get to see the thawed pixie going after Forge?
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
Nah, I left the payback up to the imagination of the reader. Would have been fun to see, though, wouldn't it?Thanks for reading.
Is this really what a nudist event is like? Did you do research? It all seemed so casual. I would have been lurking behind a pillar!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I actually did quite a bit of on-line research. Although rules vary from club to club, as Remus stated, some rules, such as no pictures and carrying a towel, are pretty universal. I would have been lurking behind a pillar, as well! I'm not nearly as 'cool and collected' as Remus and Hermione. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Severus in a griddle? he may never forgive you. I am captivated by the idea of Remus as a nudist. Where do you come up with these ideas?? ((is amazed))
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
Did I really write 'griddle'? lol I'm not sure how I came up with the idea. I know the story was in response to The Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenge. The prompt I chose was something like, 'not the usual someone walks in on someone else naked' story. I thought the idea of Remus seeking out herbal remedies made sense. I could also very easily see him chucking the whole wizarding world and living among Muggles. He's not usually very well accepted in the wizarding world! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I love the Remus/Hermione pairing almost as much as I love Severus/Hermione. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
WooHoo! A new RL/HG story. Thank you! Remus is my favourite, and RL/HG is my favourite pairing.
This was a wonderful story, but way too short. LOL! Is there a tiny chance for a little sequel? The world needs more RL/HG!!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I agree, the world needs more RL/HG ... and maybe some RL/HG/SS, as well! This story is complete and I have no plans for a sequel. Right now, I'm busily working away on my HG/SS story for the LJ Winter Gift Exchange. I have less than 4 weeks to finish it and I'm getting desperate ... lol. Afterwards, who knows what's next? If you got something specific in mind, please let me know. I'm always open to new plot bunnies. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review. It is appreciated.
Response from ksianna (Reviewer)
Oh yes, I don't mind RL/HG/SS; it's my favourite threesome. I always have problems finding plot bunnies. Well, I find bunnies, but without plot. Therefore the two stories I've written so far are PWP, and also my next fic, which will be RL/HG by the way, will be PWP. LOL!
Great job, I really enjoyed reading this! We all need some fluffy sweetness in our lives, and this hit the spot.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I'm glad you enjoyed. HG/RL is one of my favourite pairings and there aren't very many stories out there! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
This is great. The explaination for the air conditioning works really well. I think this is a wonderful story.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really had not been aware that air-conditioning is not the norm 'over there.' I had to be creative to explain why Hermione's flat was air-conditioned! I'm glad you thought it made sense. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review. I appreciate it.
Great story.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Funny ending. Considering what a klutz I am, I know how humorous accidents can be to everyone else. Look forward to the next chapter.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment.And thank you for all the lovely stars!
Very intriguing! I can't wait to see what they do next.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a review. And thanks for all the lovely stars!
No pockets, indeed! Great chapter, I'm enjoying the easy banter between the characters. I think I see where the A/C is coming into play...and I like it.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I'm glad you're enjoying. I had a lot of fun writing this story. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review. And thanks for the stars!
The only hiccup I saw was 'naval' ring, which refers to something in the Navy. You want 'navel' instead!
This is a hoot, and I'm really enjoying it - thanks!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
Did I really write 'naval' ring? lol Talk about your faux pas! I'm glad you're enjoying in spite of my boo-boo. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review. And thanks for all the lovely stars!
Whoo-hooo!
Thanks so much for writing this story! I was afraid due to its weirdness that this prompt would receive no response.
I really like your take on it. Remus a nudist! lol That's much better than what I came up with. And Hermione's boss! Priceless. Had one of those myself a while ago, so can relate. I'm curious and excited to see where you will take this story. Tee-hee
Till soon,
Shal
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
Ah, so you're the one responsible for this prompt! I like Remus ... a lot! I thought for a long time about a way to make the situation between them realistic. Since we really don't know a lot about Remus from Canon, I was able to postulate a theory to explain why he might embrace nudism. It seemed logical to me that he might seek refuge in places where he would not be judged. Since that was unlikely to happen in the wizarding world, the Muggle world offered a lot of possibilities. And with Hermione's 'history' of sticking up for the rights of others, it didn't seem like too big a jump to see her not only accepting his choice, but being willing to explore it. The story is all written in four chapters. I will be posting Chapter two later tonight or tomorrow. I hope you will continue to enjoy.Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment. Thanks for the great prompt. And thanks for all the lovely stars!
Response from shalimar1981 (Reviewer)
Sorry, for taking so long to reply, was held up helping with SH.
As for the prompt, I am indeed responsible for this crazy idea. But I had help. I watched an interview with Germany's icon of the sexual revolution, Ushi Obermaier, one night and got this crazy idea. lol
I find your reasoning about Remus' choice very believable. Made me envious of not thinking of it for my take on this prompt. lol
You're welcome to the comments and the stars. You deserve them. :)
Shal
Love it! Great start.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I'm glad you like it. I had fun writing it. This is my first foray into this 'ship, but I liked it. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment. And thank you for all the lovely stars!
I must admit that if your description had said ?Remus and Hermione go to a nudist party? I?m not sure I?d click to read. But you didn?t write that, so I did click, and I?m glad I did. I read mostly SS/HG, but I have a soft spot for Remus. I love reading a Hermione that?s feisty and curious, which you have done very well. I will not thank you for making me think about what Snape would look like in a girdle, but I do like how that one line lets you know your in a different ship. Do you think Neville?s boggart has a girdle on? I?m looking forward to see what happens at the party.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I never thought of poor Neville's Boggart wearing a girdle, but it does paint quite the picture, doesn't it? Like you, I am primarily a HG/SS shipper but I must admit that I really like Remus a lot. I was quite happy to work with this prompt and give ol' Remus a shot at Hermione for a change! I also enjoy reading and writing a Hermione who has moved past (most of ) her insecurities and is ready to stand on equal footing with adult wizards and witches -- even those that are her former teachers. After all, they've gone through a war together. I wasn't quite sure what to write in the summary, actually. I wanted people to know it was a Remus/Hermione story, but I didn't want to give away too much, too soon. The story is all written in just chapters of approximately 4000 words each. I'll be post chapter two in a couple of days. (I hope, at least. Sometimes real-life rears its ugly head and there's no getting away from it!)Anyway, I'm glad you like the story so far. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review.
Interesting begining - unusual, and yet intriguing...
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I am primarily a HG/SS shipper, but I also like HG/RL. I was intrigued by the prompt and decided to try my hand at a Hermione/Remus story. It is a pairing I have never written. I'm glad you are enjoying. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a review. And thanks for the stars!
Loved it! This story has given me a warm glow at its tenderness.
Remus is my favourite character so it's lovely for him to find love!
Brilliant!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
Thank you so much! Remus is one of my favourite characters, as well. I hope the fandom will keep him alive for many years to come. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment.
How lovely! Just the thing to get in the mood to summer for...
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
First of all, let me apologise for not responding to your review sooner. RL has bitten me on the arse of late! (RL, as in "real life" not "Remus Lupin" -- I actually wouldn't mind if HE bit be on the arse!) Anyway, thanks so much for the lovely review!
*squee*
There's not enough RL/HG fics and even less well written ones. yay!
I love the story. I love your characterisation of Remus. You even managed to get him out of the relationship with Tonks in a believable way. And your take on the prompt make this story very unique.
I'll stop babbling... I just love it. :)
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I loved writing it. After SS/HG, this is my favourite pairing. (I'll admit to a weakness for RL/SS, too!) Thanks for the wonderful review. And thank you for all the lovely stars!
As I sat reading the final chapters of this delightful little story, a storm began outside. Now the sky is clearing up... I wonder... hehehehe!I loved this story. I am actually a SS/HG shipper and I often forget how great Remus and Hermione do together. Thanks.~*~Selene~*~
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I'm so glad you liked it. I'm also primarily a HG/SS shipper, but I also enjoy Remus/Hermione and even the occasional Remus/Severus. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a review. And thank you for all the lovely stars! P.S. I hope you have someone to share the storm with!
Yay! this is a great story. I really enjoyed it. As much as I love the smutty stuff, this nice romantic with just a hint to the imagination is fun to read....I also really like the rl/hg pairing too, it's not one that is written about too much.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
Although I love the HG/SS pairing, I find I also enjoy HG/RL. And you're right, there aren't nearly as many stories written about them. I'm glad you enjoyed my little tale. I loved writing it. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review. And thank you for all the lovely stars!
*sigh* I loved it.
Your characterisation of the two was flawless, just like I imagine them; the progress of their relationship was quick, but not hurried. I really loved the description of their days, especially the description of the storm at the end.
This was a really great fic, considering it came from a prompt like mine! My take won't be half as good.
Till soon,
Shal
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I'm with Hermione -- as long as I'm someplace safe, I love storms. As a matter of fact, I fall asleep every night to the sounds of thunder and rain. I have a CD called "Thunderstorm in the Wilderness" that I play every night. Your prompt was great, though Remus is a bit young to have been part of the 60's sexual revolution, but I got the general idea ... lol. I'm happy to know that you thought my characterisations of the two of them were good. We really don't know a lot about Remus from Canon, so it's a lot easier to ascribe attitudes and actions to him. Hermione's character is more defined in Canon (and Fanon, as well). I had a lot of fun writing this story. I'm terribly fond of Remus and I hope that Jo is kind to him in DH. Thanks again for the great prompt, the great reviews, and all the lovely stars!!
LOL, Remus brought low by a Cornish Pixie!
“Mum says to rub it in good,” Ginny said with a small giggle.
tee-hee
The hair conversation was so cute! I have something like it in one of my drabble series, lol
Shal
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
I just loved the idea of Remus being knocked on his arse by a Cornish Pixie. I could just 'see' him pulling and pulling on that drawer knob and then ... whooosh! ... the drawer flies loose and down he goes! Nothin' hurt but his dignity! As for the hair conversation ... well, don't we all think our hair ... or our eyes ... or our ears ... look worse than they really do? Hermione despairs of ever taming her hair ... and Remus thinks it's gorgeous. On the other hand ... Remus thinks his lycanthropy makes him unsuitable ... and Hermione declares that there're 30 other nights per month, aren't there? It's all a matter of perspective, isn't it? I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and for the great rating.
Awww, it's just so cute that the two of them hold hands and flirt but are totally oblivious that the other is naked. Nicely done!
Shal
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
Thanks so much. I'm so happy that you are pleased with how I handled your prompt. I really enjoyed writing this! Although my first 'love' is HG/SS, I'm also very fond of the HG/RL ship and I've been trying to find some good HG/RL stories. Thanks for the great prompt and for the lovely comments.
Aaaah! I almost read an RL/HG fic.
I saw your name, and of course, began reading.
You know I love your writing...
This first chapter is briliantly written, as anticipated.
Then, I thought I'd check the chpater titles to see when Severus might be introduced. Of course, I then noticed the pairing...
*shudder*
I hope you write a new SS/HG soon!!!
I do love your work, and would dearly love to read some. It's just that I'm an SS/HG purist.
I rated this chapter 5 stars, anyway, as your writing, as always, is of the highest quality.
I couldn't read a non Snape centric fic - I think I'd go blind. LOL
Response from StormySkize (Author of Heat Wave)
Well, at least I mentioned Snape! lolThis is a HG/RLl fic, but there's no snogging till the very, very end. Go ahead and give it a try! No?? Well. thanks for reading anyway and for the great rating.