New Chapter for Never All Together
Never All Together
rainfromheaven31 Reviews | 5.29/10 (31 Ratings, 0 Likes, 19 Favorites )
"I loved you then, and whatever sin it is, I love you still!" Hermione Granger never imagined that her wildest fantasy of being with James Potter could come true. But while for Hermione it had just been yesterday, for James it had been nineteen years ago. A sweeping tale of how love transcends time, just to prove it can.
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I'm so glad that you updated again! And so curious how you are going to solve their predicament! Actually caught myself hoping that Hermione and James will end up together, but given history, it's not very likely. Harry (or Ron) makes a poor substitute to your James in my eyes. Never read this pairing before, but it's really good. If Hermione is to lose James, will she have at least Remus or Severus? And will they have at least a few more lemons together...? Don't worry, I'll stick with this - just don't abandon it pls! I think this story deserves many more reviews than it got so far.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Hello! I'm relieved to have finished another chapter as well. :P Oh, so you're hoping that it will be Hermione and James in the end? I love it when readers take sides, haha. :) And I'm glad to know you like my James and that you like this pairing (or maybe even how I write it, haha). Hmm. I don't know about Severus, since I've not written much of him in this story. James and Hermione lemons? Haha we shall see. I suppose I might include a scene, but it will only be included in some sites that permit it (like here, maybe, haha). Thank you for telling me you'll stick with this! Don't worry, I wouldn't dream of abandoning this, seeing as I've already written out the ending. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :D
Response from HannahSmith (Reviewer)
The fact that I like this pairing, has everything to do with how you write it! James is a very sexy guy here. Please give us a lemon...
ditto! thanks so much for the update! i don't mind the pace as long as you can guarantee us an ending at some point, haha!
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Thank you as well for continuing to read this story. It will end, don't worry. I've actually written out the ending, and I can't wait to get there, but I must be patient and flesh the details out. :) Thanks for reviewing!
What do I think? I think it is great! More please?
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Thank you! :) I'm having difficulties with the next chapter, so I don't think it will be up anytime soon. But thanks so much for reading and for reviewing! :D
I just found this story and have only read through chapter two. I thought I would drop you a note to say I really like it. I have never read a Hermione James fic before. I find your story fascinating so far. I am anxious to read on. I just wanted to offer some encouragement and say I like your writing and plan to continue reading the story. I have it saved as a favorite.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Oh, wow. I don't know what to say, except that I'm glad you gave this a chance and that you liked this thus far. :) Thanks, thanks!
Very nice.
I liked Hermione's gift and that Sirius is finally thawing to the idea of Hermione with James. Her using the one expensive thing she owned to get him something was very like her, but setting the year-turner loose on the market wasn't a very smart move on her part. I mean, what if Voldemort or another bad guy gets a hold of it?
Adding the Mirror of Erised, and having James run to get Sirius (the same way Harry had run to get Ron) was a nice touch. I especially liked that they were smart enough to figure out how it worked on their own.
Will be looking forward to the next update!
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Thank you! :) Sirius, in the first place, was just looking out for James. I think he just wanted to be sure that Hermione will be good for his best mate. In the future chapters, Sirius' attitude towards Hermione will play an important part. :)
As for selling the Time-Turner, well... I guess this won't spoil the story, but I had thought that since the store owner already wore it around her neck, she doesn't have any plans of selling it. Butyeah, what if it was taken by force...? Hmm. Very good point. That is definitely a loophole in the plot.
The Mirror of Erised is probably one of my most favourite magical objects, so I just had to put it in. That bit about it being similar to boggarts and showing something unique to each individual (and showing only something to two people if they have the same desires) will be important later on, like two chapters from now. Haha. :)
Thanks for reading, and happy new year!
I didn't think this chapter was boring. You have to keep building their relationship to a point where it is ingrained into them. That's why they could feel something for and about each other in the early chapters. I wish she didn't have to go back to the future so quickly though.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Wow, thank you! :) I'm glad to know you see the same way I do. As for your request, I don't it'll be that soon anyway. Haha. :D
Another nice chapter but after reading it three times I am ready for the next one. Is it coming any time soon??
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Hi there. Sorry for the very long delay. I hope to have it done in two weeks. It's just that the sem's ending, and my professors are switching into high gear. Add that to the fact that my laptop crashed! Argh. Haha. I apologise again for keeping you waiting, but hopefully you won't be disappointed when it's up. :)
Nice chapter. I was waiting for Hermione to just grab James and snog him senseless!! But noooo you have to make me wait and wait. :( Is Sirius gonna lighten up on her at all in the future??
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Hahaha. Hermione snogging James senseless will have to wait until next chapter, I'm afraid it will have to wait until next chapter. ;)Yes, of course. Sirius is a really nice guy; it's just that he doesn't like a girl tagging around with their group, you know? But I have prepared a scene in which he really, really talks about Hermione. :)Thanks for reviewing!
Things are moving forward for James and Harmione will finally get her wish. Sirius is still the mischievious marauder and also witty. Update soon.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Yup, Hemrione will soon be very happy, but.... LOL. Haha. I hope I did not overdo Sirius. :) Thanks for reviewing! :)
Awww, my heart goes out to James. Lily will realize what she is missing once James finally moves on. Maybe this is a way for Harmione to be with James after all, she is so in love with him. Update soon.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Yup, I guess that's what would happen next. LOL. Just kididng. Maybe. We'll see. :) Thank you for the review! :)
Wow. It seems like Harmione is having second thoughts, but I don't think she will give up just yet. I wonder what length will she go to have James for herself. I believe Dumbledore being wise as he is will eventually find out why Harmione is there.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
:)
You make me smile with your predictions. Haha. :) You were right in saying that Hermione wouldn't give up just yet, but remember, there is only so much she can do. As for Dumbledore... well.. He's not bound to find out anytime soon. :)
Thanks for taking time out to review!:)
Ahh...so Dumbledore saw them together, huh? Wouldn't it be something if he decided to call them on it and even threaten to blackmail them by swearing he would tell Harry and Lily if they didn't confess? But just the same, I mean, really...Harry's so-called girlfriend cheating on him with his own father?? Oh, is something ever going to hit the fan when all this comes out!
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Like I said, Dumbledore is going to play an important role in the story, only it's not going to be evident in like... maybe the first ten chapters or so. But he is going to make a decision on James's behalf later on, something he might come to regret, which will explain why he's letting the two of them (James and Hermione) get on with it for the moment.So there. As for Hermione being with James... well, if some other fans think she could be with Snape, why not with James? LOL. I think Hermione is the type of girl who likes stability, and more often than not such stability can be found in older men, especially if they are in a position of power.Yes, there really is going to be trouble. But if you're expecting something like ... a scandalous confrontation, maybe, I don't think it will be there.Again, thanks for the review! :)
Quite well done, at least so far. The only problem I can see now is that both Harry and Lily are suspicious. Hate to think what's likely to happen if they should catch Hermione and James together at some point...especially in a compromising position! Even at that, I'd like to be a fly on the wall (so to speak) when and if there's an actual confrontation between all concerned.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Thank you for saying that it's uh... quite well done. I was concerned that to most people the story didn't make much sense (at least at this point). I don't think I'll let either Harry or Lily catch the two of them together anytime soon. In any case, I wouldn't want it to be ... you know ... when they're in bed together (I'm debating with myself if I should actually include that later) or something. But thanks for being so interested in what their reactions are going to be like! ;)Thank you too, for taking time out to review. :)
I love this story. I'm addicted! I can't wait to read more!!!
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Thanks for taking time out to review, even if it really is long. I was afraid this chapter would bore everyone to death. ;) I think I'll get Chapter 8 done (hopefully) by next week. My professors are just so heartless. Haha.
This chapter is interesting. Harmione being in love with James Potter while he is married to Lily. Also the bar scene. I hope that nothing dreadful happens to James. Update soon. I will continue to keep watch for this story.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
There is actually a lot more to it than meets the eye. I am trying desperately to update soon but schoolork won't let me. Sigh. At least I've finished half of Chapter 7, so hopefully it won't be long before it's up.Thanks for the review! :)
I love this story! It's getting very interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Wow! Thanks for consistently reviewing the chapters. :) I really, really appreciate it.
Ok, I get that this is an AU, but there are some basic facts in canon that you ...misplaced. Honeydukes and Zonko's (that you mentioned in the first chapter) are not in Diagon Alley. Also, Floo Powder is not swallowed. According to the Lexicon (as I do not have the books handy right now), "The powder is thrown into the flames, which burst up emerald green. To travel, a witch or wizard steps into the flames and states her or his destination (another fireplace on the Floo Network)."Now that that is out of the way... I absolutely love this story! I think that you've definitely come up with an interesting, original AU, that is a good read. There is an unspoken past/future between James and Hermione that implies that she is someone from his past. I do wonder if this will involve time travel or something of the like. I'm not particularly fond of Harry and Hermione, but you've done a good job of keeping the Trio fairly in character, enought that is still works. I adore how you've characterized Lily. Keep up the good work. By the way, do you have a beta?
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Haha! I also wondered why no one brought my attention to the fact that Honeydukes and Zonko's are not in Diagon Alley but are in Hogsmeade. I realized my mistake only when I was writing the sixth chapter of this story. I also checked out how to use Floo powder, and you're absolutely correct. I suppose the reason why I thought the powder is swallowed is because the idea that Harry choked on his first try [CoS] stuck in my mind. Hehe. Rest assured, I will change the chapter to suit those canon details. Thanks again for pointing those out! :)Thank you too, for the favorable remarks you've made on the characterization and plot. The story will involve "time travel or something of the like" but I won't say anything more just now. As for a beta, I have been looking for ages, and now I finally found one! Cheers! :) The beta I've emailed just replied tonight and told me she would be happy to help me with the story. But I guess I should modify the chapters first before I send those to her.Anyway, thanks for giving a quite comprehensive critique! I really, really appreciate it. :)
Response from Delayed Poet (Reviewer)
Oh you're absolutely welcome! If the story itself hadn't been a wonderful read otherwise, I wouldn't have bothered, but this was too good to just walk away from! I'm so glad you've found a beta, they're really wonderful because they'll catch things you never would simply because you wrote it! Harry choked on the Floo powder because he wasn't prepared for the smoke it caused when dropped. *shrug* I do think that's why, anyway.I can't wait to read the next chapter, though! Teehee, I went over to fanfiction.net just to read the fifth chapter!Happy Writing!
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
You did? That's so sweet of you! :) What did you think of it?
Response from Delayed Poet (Reviewer)
Yes, I did... I honestly don't remember... Real life has pushed my favored life right out of my mind, if you know what I mean! I'll probably read it again when you post it here, though....
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Whoa. I'm worried. That might mean it did not leave much of an impact on you. Hehe.
Response from Delayed Poet (Reviewer)
Oh! No, no, no.... It wasn't that I didn't remember the story, it was that I didn't remember that chapter in particular! lol.... I love this story and I can't wait for more!
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Chapter 5 has been validated on this site. :) Hope you check it out!
I can't wait for more!!! I really like this story, and the Hermione/James pairing. What happened in their past??? I need to know! hehe.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Hi! Sorry for the late response. Thanks for reviewing. :) Chapter 4 has already been validated. Hope you look it up. As for what happened in their past, well that's coming up real soon. Thanks again! :)
Love it!! Please keep updating :)
I loved this hot chocolate chapter. Hermione and James are now my second favourite pairing, in large thanks to you. I can't wait to see how you develope their relationship. I'm just worried about James should Hermione go back to her time. I'm glad this site lets you know when a story is updated or I would be checking everyday.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Hi! Sorry for the late response, but I'm glad you loved this chapter. ;) Oh, yeah, James. Haha. Well, we'll just have to see about that. ;)
This was a good chapter. Never apologize for prolonging Hermione and James relationship, the more you give their relationship time to develop the more it makes your story realistic.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Well, I only apologised because some people were getting impatient about this. Haha. Glad you enjoyed this anyway. Thanks for reviewing! :)
I know it hurted Sirius not to hex Snape especially when he made a comment about his family; and it baffled Snape that Sirius did not respond like he thought Sirius would. And Hermione's name being seen on the map would leave a whole lot of questions for the Mauranders to ask her. I wonder how Harmione will take it? Update soon.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Yes, I agree. Sirius normally would have wanted to curse Snape senseless. Ah, and of course, the map. Everybody reacts about the map. Haha. But its initial appearance is a mere prelude to it's next (and more explosive, maybe) appearance. In this chapter, I just wanted to show that it was Peter who first heard of Hermione. :)Anyway, thanks for the review!
I loved that ending. I was waiting for that map to make an appearance. I think your characterizations of MWPP are spot on. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Thanks. Haha. But I'm afraid the mention of the map is a mere prelude to its more important appearance later on. LOL. Thanks for the review! :)
I've just found this story today and decided to read it even though it is not complete yet. I hate being left hanging and waiting for an update so I hope it won't be too long from now. I see that it is posted on other sites as well with only two of them this far. I am a Hermione fan and will read her with almost anyone...except Ron(major squick there for me) but I have only read a couple with her and James. This story has a lot of promise and no I am not confused at all but obviously certain people know more than others. I can wait to see how you will pull everything together as this goes on.
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Thanks for giving it a chance! :) Don't worry, I update as soon as possible, almost once every week. And yes, it's posted on other sites as well. Thanks for saying it has a lot of promise (it made me smile, haha), and yup, you're right, some secrets have yet to be revealed. Hope you continue looking out for it. :)Oh, and thanks for taking time to review! :)
I love this story!!!!! I'm so happy you updated! Can't wait for more!
Response from rainfromheaven (Author of Never All Together)
Thanks! :) It'll be soon; I've already finished the next two chapters, but I'm still looking over them again to see if I've missed putting something that might be of great importance later. There. Thanks for taking time once more to review! :)