part III
Chapter 3 of 3
shalimar1981Hermione does Remus a favour that leads to more... Now what will the others say?
ReviewedThe Haircut part III by shalimar1981
"Hey, Lupin, nice hair," Ron said when Remus came in for dinner a few hours later.
"You like it? Hermione cut it for me," Remus replied proudly, realising too late what Hermione's frantic waving behind Ron's back meant. What was the matter?
Then he remembered how she had finished his haircut.
"Well, it's okay." He tried to tone his enthusiasm down a bit, watching Hermione's reaction. Seeing her smile at him in relief relaxed him a little.
"You were certainly more enthusiastic earlier, Remus. She did you a favour. The least you can do is be appreciative of her efforts," Molly remarked, frowning at him, before she turned back to the stove.
"Believe me, I am," he muttered under his breath, low enough so no one would hear.
"Why do you never cut my hair?" Ron whispered to Hermione with a sidelong glance to see if his mother could hear him. Hermione kicked his shin if Ron's grunt of pain and annoyed look were anything to go by. Then she pointedly ignored him and got up to help Molly distribute food into various bowls.
Remus got up to help as well. Their hands touching and the intense looks exchanged between him and Hermione seemed coincidental and, they thought, inconspicuous. Until...
"Does she have something in her eye, Lupin?" Ron asked, tactful as ever.
"Ron! Shut up!"
"But he's looking at her as if—"
"Ron—"
"—OH!" Ron stared at Hermione as if his world had come to an end. "But he's old, Hermione! And... and..."
"He's not!" Hermione replied heatedly, her cheeks flushed in anger and gripping a juice-pitcher tightly. "He's kind and gentle and intelligent... and he's a man! He knows what he wants. And he likes my hair!" she yelled, then brought a hand to her mouth in mortification. She lowered the pitcher and flopped down into her chair with a thump. Hands wringing in her lap and face flushed in embarrassment, she studied the table.
"Well." Harry's gaze was alternating between Hermione and Remus, who was looking at her as if she had just given him the world. Remus sat down beside her and slid his hand beneath the table, grasping her hand gently and giving it an encouraging squeeze.
"That was very enlightening and all, but could we please eat now?" asked Fred, breaking the awkward silence.
Molly heaved a sigh of relief, and everybody relaxed, the tension abating.
They all started eating at once and watched the newly established couple with interest. The two of them kept holding hands all throughout dinner, blissfully ingnorant.
Afterwards Molly bustled them out of the kitchen, returning to clean the kitchen with the others.
When she closed the door behind her, Ron voiced, not a little incredulously, what they all had been thinking since Hermione's revelation. "He likes her hair?!"
A sound smack was all the answer Ron received. "Mom! What the bloody hell was that for?"
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Haircut
15 Reviews | 6.0/10 Average
Smack him again! That was hilariously written, dear. Well done. :)
Excellent! Great build up, full of tenderness and charm with a superb ending.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Sorry, for taking so long! Thanks for your review! The series is actually not finished yet, but I have been unable to find the time so far to continue it. I'm glad you liked it so far!
Shal
cute
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Sorry, for taking so long! Thanks for your review. I'm glad you liked it!
Shal
(as Hermione):*squee!*
i think every girl in nrw love has done exactly that... thing. where ya kinda jump a lil and squeel and grin like an idiot. yup.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Exactly. I mean what other behaviour shows how happy and excited one is? lol It's like a necessary requirement.
Shal
Oh that is soooo sweet!! I love how he caught her eye in the mirror, and grabbed her hand on his way out. Just wonderful!Is there more??? Oh please let there be more!!!!
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Thanks! I loved those bits as well.
And there is more! Never fear. :)
Shal
Oooohhhhh.... nice..... lol. i wanna play with Remmy's hair!
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Hm, can one tell that I want to play with his hair as well? LOL *sigh* Well, at least Hermione can!
Shal
I like it!! Very cute. I almost feel like I was eavesdropping on an intimate moment. Very nice writing.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Thank you! That's what I had in mind.
Shal
*sighs* After reading it several times I think it's still lovely.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Tee-hee, thanks, dear! I'm happy the drabble stands the test of rereading!
Shal
Just lovely.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Thank you. I'm glad you like it!
Shal
A lovely story, thanks for sharing it. Cheers!
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Thanks! I'm glad you like it.
Shal
Very cute! Nice little fic. I hope you continue it! I especially liked Remus' interaction w/ Hermione where he thought that Molly wasn't catching on.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Sorry about taking so long to reply, am helping the SH/Mage move. Thanks you for your review. Am glad you like my little drabble-story. I so love the two of them, they need some cute interaction! :)
Some more parts are in planning, but I admit I haven't started writing yet. But they will come soon.
Shal
Awww still so sweet!! Wonderful!!!!!!
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Awww, how nice! Thanks!
Shal
*sigh* I love Lupin. So glad you wrote this story about him and there IS something very erotic about playing with someone's hair.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Me too! Isn't he just... *sighs*
Well, have some more drabbles lined up for your enjoyment then! Keep tuned or visit my livejournal. There are several more posted with RL/HG.
Playing with someone's hair is very erotic and intimate, I agree.
Shal
Awwwww.
Still as sweet and lovely as the first time I read it.
*sighs*
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Aw, thanks so much, Maddy!
Shal
Yup - mentioning Ron two reviews in a row; but he's so funny when being his clueless self."He's kind and gentle and intelligent... and he's a man! He knows what he wants. And he likes my hair!" ~ Cute. =]
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
He, he. I know. I like him as clueless as he is sometimes.
Thanks for your review!
Shal