part II
Chapter 2 of 3
shalimar1981Hermione does Remus a favour that leads to more... and what happens when they get caught...
ReviewedThe Haircut part II by shalimar1981
"Remus, are you in he涌h."
Hermione removed her hands from his hair and picked up comb and scissors, resuming cutting, her face flushed. Remus opened his eyes and smiled genially at Molly Weasley.
Speak of the devil.
"Hello, Molly."
"Remus. I'm sorry to interrupt," she said, looking back and forth between him and Hermione with interest, "but I need your help in the garden. Something is hiding in the bushes, and it doesn't seem to be a gnome."
"I'm finished," Hermione replied, combing loose hair out of the greying strands, still slightly red in the face.
"Oh, good. Then I'll be right with you, Molly."
But Molly didn't leave. Instead she came to stand beside Hermione, observing her handiwork critically.
"Hmm, you've done a good job on this, Hermione. Whose hair did you cut before?"
"My father's," Hermione replied simply. She laid comb and scissors on the small table beside her and removed the clothes-peg holding the towel around Remus' neck in place. Taking the towel from around his neck carefully, she Evanescoed any loose hairs from it and the floor.
Remus got up from his seat on the sofa and walked over to the mirror of the vanity. "It looks good. Thank you, Hermione." He looked into the mirror, checking his reflection for a moment before he looked straight at Hermione, staring at her intensely. "Lovely."
Her face flushing once more with heat, she held his gaze till he broke eye contact and turned to Molly.
"So where's that unknown beast in the garden?" Leading Molly out with a firm grip on her arm, he took care that what his other hand did was not visible to her.
The moment he passed Hermione, he grasped her hand and squeezed it tightly for an instant before he had to let go of it again to leave the room with Molly, shooting Hermione a quick smile before disappearing around the corner.
Hermione stood frozen in the middle of the room, listening to their progress down the stairs.
When she heard a door shut several floors below her, she unfroze instantly. She leapt up and down with an ecstatically happy expression on her face in an unusually immature display of emotion. Though she took care to only use the balls of her feet as to not make any loud sounds.
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Haircut
15 Reviews | 6.0/10 Average
Smack him again! That was hilariously written, dear. Well done. :)
Excellent! Great build up, full of tenderness and charm with a superb ending.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Sorry, for taking so long! Thanks for your review! The series is actually not finished yet, but I have been unable to find the time so far to continue it. I'm glad you liked it so far!
Shal
cute
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Sorry, for taking so long! Thanks for your review. I'm glad you liked it!
Shal
(as Hermione):*squee!*
i think every girl in nrw love has done exactly that... thing. where ya kinda jump a lil and squeel and grin like an idiot. yup.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Exactly. I mean what other behaviour shows how happy and excited one is? lol It's like a necessary requirement.
Shal
Oh that is soooo sweet!! I love how he caught her eye in the mirror, and grabbed her hand on his way out. Just wonderful!Is there more??? Oh please let there be more!!!!
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Thanks! I loved those bits as well.
And there is more! Never fear. :)
Shal
Oooohhhhh.... nice..... lol. i wanna play with Remmy's hair!
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Hm, can one tell that I want to play with his hair as well? LOL *sigh* Well, at least Hermione can!
Shal
I like it!! Very cute. I almost feel like I was eavesdropping on an intimate moment. Very nice writing.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Thank you! That's what I had in mind.
Shal
*sighs* After reading it several times I think it's still lovely.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Tee-hee, thanks, dear! I'm happy the drabble stands the test of rereading!
Shal
Just lovely.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Thank you. I'm glad you like it!
Shal
A lovely story, thanks for sharing it. Cheers!
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Thanks! I'm glad you like it.
Shal
Very cute! Nice little fic. I hope you continue it! I especially liked Remus' interaction w/ Hermione where he thought that Molly wasn't catching on.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Sorry about taking so long to reply, am helping the SH/Mage move. Thanks you for your review. Am glad you like my little drabble-story. I so love the two of them, they need some cute interaction! :)
Some more parts are in planning, but I admit I haven't started writing yet. But they will come soon.
Shal
Awww still so sweet!! Wonderful!!!!!!
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Awww, how nice! Thanks!
Shal
*sigh* I love Lupin. So glad you wrote this story about him and there IS something very erotic about playing with someone's hair.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Me too! Isn't he just... *sighs*
Well, have some more drabbles lined up for your enjoyment then! Keep tuned or visit my livejournal. There are several more posted with RL/HG.
Playing with someone's hair is very erotic and intimate, I agree.
Shal
Awwwww.
Still as sweet and lovely as the first time I read it.
*sighs*
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
Aw, thanks so much, Maddy!
Shal
Yup - mentioning Ron two reviews in a row; but he's so funny when being his clueless self."He's kind and gentle and intelligent... and he's a man! He knows what he wants. And he likes my hair!" ~ Cute. =]
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of The Haircut)
He, he. I know. I like him as clueless as he is sometimes.
Thanks for your review!
Shal