Chapter 2. Filia
Chapter 2 of 9
SS LupinHermione consumes a chocolate created by the Weasley twins and can't take her eyes away from Severus Snape. My response to GinnyW's "Valentine's Day Chocolates" Challenge at the Yahoo!Group, Potter_Place.
ReviewedHermione sighed into her bathtub and watched the water ripple away from her. She shivered from the increasing chill in the air. Hermione reached for her wand on the nearby sink, but her fingers brushed against another object.
She sighed again and grabbed both items. As she muttered a warming charm to heat the water, Hermione reread the pink card in her hand.
The poem, for all its sickeningly sweet sappiness, had made its point. She was invited to some ridiculous ball for Valentine’s Day, and at Hogwarts, no less. Hermione laughed. How did Professor McGonagall agree to such nonsense? she thought as she traced her finger against the Headmistress’ signature.
Of course, Hermione would be socially obligated to attend. How could she not go to such a grand spectacle – she who had helped defeat Voldemort and his Death Eaters alongside the Boy Who Lived? Why should she bother with all of this silliness?
Perhaps to see your friends? A stray thought queried.
Ah, but there was no point in that. Ron and Lavender had their family, and Harry and Luna were probably on their way to starting one. Ginny would most likely get her into some trouble with a sore sight of a wizard…she always did when Hermione agreed to go out with her on an evening excursion.
If Hermione did go to the ball, she would have to use her accustomed post as a wallflower. Years of annual victory celebrations after the war and Order of Merlin ceremonies had taught Hermione to sit at the sidelines.
But what if I could find lo – someone I liked? Hermione snorted at the thought and set the invitation and wand back on the sink. She then reached for a glass of wine that was waiting to be consumed.
As if that was likely, she thought while sipping on the wine. I have spent five glorious years on my own, and will spend another five years as such!
“Cheers to being single!” Hermione hiccupped as she clinked her glass against the edge of the tub.
As Hermione submerged her head underwater, she still hadn’t answered the question – would she go?
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“Are we in it, or are we in it?” George waved the pink invitation in front of his brother’s face.
Fred snatched the card from his brother’s hand and read it over again. “Could I just think about this for a second?”
George took the card back and hid it behind his back. As Fred tried to grab it from him, George said, “It will be right fun, it will!” He used his other arm to wrestle Fred down to the floor.
“I never said it wouldn’t,” Fred gasped as he flipped George over and stood over him. “It’s just that the antidote won’t be ready for another week or so–”
“It was your plan from the start – you executed the first step before you even told me what it was that you were doing!” George pretended to get up and grabbed Fred’s foot instead.
Fred shook off George’s attack and sat on a chair. Their chair. The whole Weasley's Wizard Wheezes Shop and the flat above it were theirs. The Hogsmeade branch of the company, formerly known as Zonko's Joke Shop, was being renovated as a store and manufacturing centre. It would be a great risk to what they had to carry on with the plan… and yet… Fred placed his head in his hands.
“You’re right – I’m just nervous, that’s all,” said Fred as George went over to him and placed his hand on Fred’s shoulder. That was precisely what he needed.
George cursed, pulling remnants of the well-aimed water balloon out of his hair.
“It never gets old, George, it never gets old.” Fred grinned and picked up the fallen invitation from the floor.
George shook his head, splashing water onto his brother before muttering a charm to dry himself.
“Neither will our plan,” he said while staring at the dampened pink card in Fred’s hand.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Valentine's Eyes
13 Reviews | 3.54/10 Average
Knock the jerks speechless! Serves them right for testing a potion without having an antidote already made.
Of course she does! She just doesn't want you to kiss her only to break a curse. The question is... will he understand that?
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Valentine's Eyes)
LOL! Thanks so much. Loved your reviews through this. :-)
Wow, she's really insistent about not breaking it through a kiss... wonder what she's hiding?
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Valentine's Eyes)
*grin* A little too stubborn, indeed.
Ack... no antidote for a WWW creation sounds dangerous.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Valentine's Eyes)
LOL! Those twins and their crazy deeds. :-)
I like that the beginning is from Harry's perspective - and that HE doesn't like the holiday. So often it's Snape or Hermione detesting Valentine's and everyone else LOVING it. :)
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Valentine's Eyes)
Thanks -- I'm sure that Snape and Hermione can't be the only ones in doubt of the holiday.
A nice, sweet fluffy story to warm the heart. Thank you, I enjoyed it :)
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Valentine's Eyes)
Thank you so much! :-D
I just adore this story. So sweet, it always goes down easily ^.^ Love it.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Valentine's Eyes)
Thanks so much! It was my first completed fic, and I love hearing that people still enjoy reading it. :-D
Ooh, I love that this has HP/LL. They are my secret guilty pleasure ship. Reading on!
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Valentine's Eyes)
Thanks. If Harry has to be with a girl, I'd rather it be Luna. :-)
Yes, if a man can cope with a woman vomitting around him, he;s a keeper :D
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Valentine's Eyes)
lol! Thanks for the review. :-)
Mate this is confusing as your only suppose to write "complete" if you have posted a 'complete' story, i thought that if you have finished it but not yet posted it, you alert your potential reader in the summary that it is a completed work. Keep that in mind as it really saves your readers from becoming slightly disappointed and annoyed when they realise that you really havent posted a completed story!
it is sounding good tho. so make this complete soon by posting your chapters fast mate!
-karlamarie
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Valentine's Eyes)
More is definitely on the way. Thanks for reviewing.
Great start! More soon please?~HR
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Valentine's Eyes)
Most definitely. :-)
Great start to your story. Wonder what those twins are up to. It says your storyis complete, but I'm hoping that's not the case.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Valentine's Eyes)
I only put it was 'complete' because I finished writing it a long time ago. I will be posting new chapter regularly until it's done. Thanks for the review! :-)