You're the one teasing US!? But pleasing us, too, of course. I'm enjoying your story and looking forward to the next chapter.? Thanks for your work!?

Totally enjoying this fun jaunt.It had to be a Hogwarts Alumni that owned the shop.  Who else?  heheGreat work!  Love it.

*grins*  oh this is getting better at each turn.  Mmm I wonder if he would like to beta some other books. lol

A good story so far. Snape is really clever to take a copy of this book. And I really like his voice inside his head. I can´t wait to read the next chapter!

Very interesting! This is a keeper. Can't wait for the rest of the story. even taking it a chapter at a time, you have done a very good job of holding the attention of the reader.             

Oooo, naughty Severus!!  *LOL* 

I can picture perfectly Snape's mortification in the bookstore, knowing that the cashier knows why he's getting the book he is - that was excellent fun at the expense of our favorite Potions master!

Birlliant chapter, I can't wait for the rest

Wow! Now there's a twist! It's always good to read something with a fresh idea. well done my dear!

Tease.

That is very clever Mr. Snape...hehehe

Another good chapter. I'm looking forward to more and can't help wondering when they will meet up again or--snerk--if she's possibly doing the same thing with her copy. Hehehe

Am I first for this chapter?  Woo-hoo!

Another lovely chapter! I just love how Hermione stood her ground and how well Severus knew what her reaction to his goading would be. And I adore the little voice inside his head - it's hysterical! Well, he's just a tad obsessed with her, isn't he? LOL Lovely descriptions, dearest. You've set the scene so well. The next chapter should be interesting indeed ... ahem ... yes, interesting indeed. 

Bah, there should be one more chapter to this story, where he takes her home and shows her how much better with chocolate it is lol. Cute story, though you never said for sure why she ignored Marcus? I just assumed it was because he's an employee..

A very sweet ending.  well done.

Another delicious chapter.

“Hello, Hermione.”  It seems that Severus can be a very naughty boy when he puts his mind to it.  Imagine the look on Hermione's face if she only knew what he was up to.

Beautiful start, can't wait to read the next chapter.

Oh, what a nice story...self-made chocolate, a cup of well-done coffee, yes, thats a little pleasure *sigh*

I wish, I could be that little happy witch, which dates with this "old" man. *g*

A very sweet story, but with one failure in it...when I read this, I have to go for a search...chocolate. I became a little need to eat *g* not so bad as it sounds, I think =)

Thanks for this, but do you write more or have you even done? I wanna read a little more about this couple and thayre way to use this sweet *hug*

Greetz from Germany,

It was good.  You should add more to it though.

Initially I balked at Snape's cruelty to absolute strangers, but then I brought myself back to canon and realized that outside of my fangirl's warped perceptions, that's exactly how he'd act. I love your sharp-tongued, seductive Snape, and I look forward to seeing more of him!

Aww...I liked that and really want to read more...but that is what a good author does:  makes the reader longing for more.Good job!  Thanks for posting this story.

Verrrry nice! I love that Hermione is a business owner and makes her own chocolate (a la "Chocolat"). I was happily surprised that what took place was between Snape and the enchanted book rather than with Hermione herself. Quite a naughty little twist!

I may never look at chocolate the same way again.  I love this story and your writing.  Can't wait to read more of your stuff.

What a sweet (if you pardon the pun) story.  Very romantic how you got them to know each other.  I never would have pictured Hermione a chocolate maker, business owneryes, but actually making candy, well that was a surprise.

I loved this one! You did an excellent job on this.

I like it!? Looking forward to more ...