I almost didn't read this { I am a "Severus Lives " " Happy Ever After " kind of gal, but I'm glad I did, there was some stomach churning moments , but in the end we get both. 

Whew, just in the nick of time, too! Maybe now Severus will be allowed to go free?

Very well written. Thank you for sharing.

wow that was increditable(hope that is spelled right)  have you ever thought of writing a sequel to this like what happens next because this was great

Good heavens that was cutting it a bit close wasnt it? I was worried!

yes!  happy ending!  thanks

I know I'm going to be somewhat unpopular saying this, but I think the story would have been better if he hadn't been saved at the last minute.  I was *happier* that he survived, but it felt a little like a deus ex machina, perhaps because I haven't read the story it's based on.

 That said, like greenwood, I thought Ron's thoughts were great.   Both that AND the fact that the declaration was meant to be a last goodbye make me think a sequel would be a very good thing.  Are you sure we can't persuade you?

Beautiful!~

For a long moment there I thought it was all over for Severus! I almost thought that Harmione was going to go with him. You had me gripped in a fleeting feeling of true love. It ended a bit too soon I thought. You really could have worked us a bit there...just a thought! Great idea with the whole setting and who was present. I really liked Ron's thoughts (they seemed very much in character for him).

I'm delighted to see this cluster of drabbles posted here.

Close call indeed.  Just to be safe I checked the reviews -- glad I did.  Good story!

I wasn't sure about reading this since I'm a happy ending junkie and the summary and warnings certainly didn't suggest any happiness ahead!? But, I figured I'd check it out and I'm glad I did.? I hope you're considering telling us what happens next - I think you'd do a great job at it.? Thanks for posting your story!

Whew! That was a close call.