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THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer
notsosaintly289 Reviews | 7.12/10 (289 Ratings, 0 Likes, 465 Favorites )
Even know-it-alls don't know it all. **Note: This story is on haitus. It isn't abandoned; I simply have no idea when it will be continued.
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holy.crap. wow. Keep 'em coming!...umm, I mean, keep the chapters coming of course! heh heh hmmm....
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
It's easier to keep them coming than the chapters though! *lol*
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Professor Snape is a TEASE. Seven chapters of tease! He's lucky that Hermione is young and naive. If this grown woman got hold of him, lessons would be over, and the advanced curriculum started.
Best build-up ever. Ever. Superb tension. Who knew dry-humping could be so... rowr? I think I'm giving up writing sex scenes now. *hangs head in shame at pathetic attempts*
Just joking! I'll keep banging (*cough*) it out, but you better get to work too.
Author's Response: LOL! I am going to start keeping track of how many people tell me he's a tease. Let me tell you, if Hermione was a grown woman, she'd be giving HIM lessons on this stuff. I mean, really, what man knows exactly how to please a woman? I have never met one in my 39 years. (Not to discourage the younger women out there!)
That lesson made my hart beat faster!I can't wait to see what the next lesson has in store.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Keep on reading!
A brilliant update, I sincerely hope the next one will be soon:-) I also hope that those two nosy prats who calls themselves her friends will stay away from her lovelife. Don't they know that we readers want Hermione and Severus to live happily ever after, together with their2 or 3 brilliant children? Make them go away an play with their brooms for a while, Hermione has much more important things to attend to, like Severus:-))
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
"Boys, if you want to play with your brooms, don't do it in front of other people. That's private."
That was good,it made me wish I was Hermione.I can't wait to read about the next leeson.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Ah, see, writing is my way of actually becoming Hermione.
I can tell i'm going to like these lessons.That was so sweet the way he kissed her though,it's just the way you want your first real kiss to be.If the rest of the lessons are like this one I can tell i'll be reading till the end.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
The rest of the kisses ... and everything else too! Enjoy reading!
No, no, no... There's no more chapters left to read!!! *calms down*Ok. This is brilliant. Absolutely beautiful. Stunning. Sensationsal. And amazing. Your characterisation is wonderful, both Hermione and Severus are well-defined and definitely not out of character. The story itself... Amazing. The subtlety and the patience is enough to drive me over the edge. It makes me feel like I am Hermione. Please, please update this story soon.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Thank you for the entire review. The best part is that I make you feel like you are Hermione.
oh my goodness ! what a chapter!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Now THAT is a proper detention, eh?
I liked the similarity to Mellors' hut in LCL. Very intense but beautiful
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
It was completely subconscious (the hut similarity), but I'm glad it happened.
Oh.....Wow!Not just a wonderfully hot scene, but all the tension was superbly wrought throughout.Now, if only the tense anticipation wasn't so drawn out between chapters....
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Hi, Dawn! Yes, I sort of become comatose in between chapters. I've gotta quit that.
step by step, they progress inexorably to the main event...:)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
The main event... You know, by the time it gets to that point, I will have to make it pretty spectacular, I think.
Oh my. this is... wow.Hot.yes, well, excuse me, I must go find the hubby ;-)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Have him read the lesson ... after all it IS a tutoring session! But if you're lucky, he doesn't need any help.
Wow, you leave me gasping for breath and wanting more of this sory soon!Great work!gab
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Awesome! Mission accomplished then.
I need a cigarette. And I don't even smoke.An update well worth the wait. That was beautiful and hot and lovely. Just awesome Thank you, and please ma'am, may I have some more?*greedy grins*Whenever you can, of course...
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
*cough* I believe you mean to say "Please, Mistress, may I have another?"
Response from pokeystar (Reviewer)
*doublecough*Well, I was going for pathetic orphan with puppy dog eyes and an empty gruel bowl at the poorhouse......but, anything your pervy little heart desires.*bows to greatness*
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Thank you. I so needed to laugh right now. (And my little heart is quite pervy, thank you. *smirk*)
Okay this detention was too hot to be sure. It is a wonder that Severus is holding himself back - he wants her desperately and is behaving so well. What a man.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Yes, isn't he nice? Ach, he should just ravish her and be done with it! Yeah!
Is that the wizarding equivalent of cyber-sex?? very hot!!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Yup. Or phone sex (or is that now obsolete with the advent of cyber sex?).
Dear Lord - what a hot chapter. I love a good snog and a feel-up and they certainly had plenty of that. What a wonderful way for them to come together and I loved the other huts parts - I could see that in times past.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Having huts creates places of convenience. Sort of like mini Rooms of Requirement. "I require a room!" *lol*
I thnik he's turned into a tease... poor girl is just about boiling over ! ( just the way he planned no doubt LOL)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Ah, now you are the second person to use that exact phrase (that he's being a tease). Naughty Severus.
Now that sounds like a detention any girl would be happy to have...
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
... Detentions are nice. (Keep reading. You'll see what I'm talking about.)
Well- the both know the other feels the same. I always thought Hermione to be a great choice for him. The physical tension and desire is great.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Personally, I think they are the best pairing out there. But that is only my opinion (though I think there are thousands of us out there). It may even rival HP/GW in number of readers. *hopes*
Okay - that is a set of seriously sexy letters... wow is all I can say - it was a wonder that he did not go to her rooms after the correspondence. Well I can say want is a plenty and desires are raging. Good chapter.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
Erotic writing is certainly a lesson in itself.
Oh dear , poor wee Dennis really is no competition is he?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
*holds wee Dennis in one hand* *holds sexy Potions master in other hand* Wee Dennis? Sexy Severus? Wee Dennis? Sexy Severus? Um, let's see now ... Sexy Severus! *tosses wee Dennis to the wolves* (chomp)
Wow - so he knows she is innocent - I hope he is not playing with her. I hope that he wants more.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
You don't think Severus is a ... tease, do you? Merlin forbid!
Wow - great second encounter.... I do think Dennis this time needed her help but was still flirting and Severus well Severus is seducing.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
:) He is, isn't he? (I love Seducing Severus.)
What a lesson - breathe girl. Poor girl never knew what hit her - lol.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of THE TUTORING SESSION: A Virgin's Primer)
*lol* No kidding.