omg... that was chilling. I actually got goosebumps while reading that. wow...

Lovely....Such a beautiful song, too.

thats sad, she dies during childbirth.

I didn't like how it was in point form all the way through the story.  it is an interesting story line that would have made a brilliant story (short or otherwise), but i really didnt like how you over used point form. Less is more, i think would have been the case for this. (although i doubt i would have done any better...lol) I enjoyed the 'story' as it made sense and all, it was just slightly annoying to have to read in this form.

-KarlaMarie 

Wow... that's really intense.  Great story.  Thanks for sharing.

oh how I love this song anyway and as I love ss/hg too I think you have done a great job putting the two together

Liked your story. I usually don't read the songfic ones because the story never goes with the song the way I think about it. You did a good job with this one. Wish it had ended happier though; I'm a happy ending junkie. Maybe next time!

That was so sad.