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Rose

Triskell

8 Reviews | 8 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potions Under Duress 565 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Hermione Granger Severus Snape

One shot - Response to "An evening with Severus Snape " challenge on Livejounal Community Romancingwizard.

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Chapter 1: Rose

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Triskell

Member Since 2005 | 2 Stories | Favorited by 2 | 28 Reviews Written | 10 Review Responses

I am a twentysomething French female. As everyone, I like reading fanfictions. My favourite ship is Hermione/Snape, but I just discovered Minerva/Tom and I may try to venture a bit there. You can find me on Livejournal, I am LJ addicted. So, if you want to say hello, please do, I love making new friends!

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10/10

elsolel

I cannot phrase what I would like to say about this little story. There is so much in so few words! Absolutely gripping.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Quite sad, but it still leaves some hope for them. I think it's got beautiful imagery, and I don't give a flip what any other archive says, it's worthy of being recommended. Keep your chin up. You write well in English and should continue to do so.

Response from Triskell (Author of Rose)

thank you Southern Witch. I'm glad you took the time to read and review. It's not easy, but people over at LJ, were quite convincing! I also discovered this story made it to Shiv's digest on LJ, so you're probably right as well!

Thanks again for that!

10/10

harmony_bites

This is lovely--like a rose, with wonderful use of language.

Response from Triskell (Author of Rose)

thanks for reading and for commenting here and on LJ. I am so glad you took the time to do so. Your review made me smile, you know. :)

7/10

KMJ

Yay!!!

Hermione will live!

-KarlaMarie

Response from Triskell (Author of Rose)

I couldn't break Severus' heart! :)

10/10

karelia

Personally, I cannot see any lack of plot development or other such tripe accusations. Your story is well written and while it doesn't leave me exactly satisfied (only because I absolutely prefer completely happy endings), I'll keep my eye on you for anything else you write. You have a unique style, which I like. Please continue writing. I know quite a few non-native English speakers (including myself), and I want to say here that it's not unusual at all to have a chapter/story returned from a beta with many requests for corrections. What counts, though, is your plotting, and you're doing that very well! Grammar, spelling, and punctuation you can learn. Plotting is something you need a talent for, and you clearly have that! Go on, write more! :-)

Response from Triskell (Author of Rose)

thanks a lot for your honest review ladyinthecloak, it took me some time to discover you're also lady

Response from Triskell (Author of Rose)

I am really glad you told me what you think, because you are not a Native Speaker, so you understand a lot more how I feel.

I'm glad you think I'm a bit skilled when it comes to plot, I have always so many ideas, but alas, not easy to write!

But you're so right, I shouldn't give up. I know it will takesome time, but why not. Although, English grammar has alwaysbeen so difficult for me (much more than the German's one, if you can believe it!)

Thanks again for that!

0/10

Doomspark

Nice!

Response from Triskell (Author of Rose)

thanks for that!

0/10

orm irian

Nice little piece, Triskell. Is it a one-shot or will it continue?

Response from Triskell (Author of Rose)

it was written for a challenge, I'm afraid there won't be more. Thanks a lot, Orm Irian, for that! I'm really glad you took the time to read!

0/10

EverMystique

The back and forth was a bit difficult, but this particular short needed told in that form. Therefore, well done.

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