Meetings and Consequences
Chapter 3 of 19
cearraeOur tale begins immediately following the tragic events on the night of Dumbledore's murder. Where did Severus Snape go? Who helped him? The story is an exploration into the many faces of an undercover spy. Who is this man? What is his true self? Can redemption be found in loving another? Travel a while with the Slytherin spy and see how his life evolves.
ReviewedDisclaimer.
This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including, but not limited to, Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books and Raincoast Books, and Warner Bros., Inc. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.
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Kudo's to Laurabeth, my beta, again I have a feeling she's going to make this story pretty good.
We continue on. Things don't get any happier... yet. There are always consequences for our actions regardless of how we try to escape.
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Meetings and Consequences.
The old bed rattled as Bella pulled against her bonds, struggling to free her hands. She growled in frustration and glared at the wizard who was causing her exasperation. The payment was not quite what she thought it would be.
"Enough, Severus, no more teasing," she bleated. "You've had your fun, now; tell me what it is you want." Bellatrix looked at the wizard who was lazily stroking her legs from his kneeling position between her thighs.
Severus offered her a sarcastic grin. "Come now, Bella, we're just catching up on old times. I remember well your tutoring sessions with newly marked brethren where we were tied in just such a way for your amusement; albeit a lot less comfortably." He slid his hands up her sides until he could cup her breasts and pinch the nipples. As she moaned and arched her back, he began to whisper his demands. "I need a job to keep me in his favour. I need ammunition to fight with, and that means information." He slid one hand down and began to tease her centre in a way that made her gasp.
"I taught you well," she hissed through clenched teeth. Bella had her eyes closed and was twisting her body in an effort to ease her arousal. "Please, Severus, you must let me have my release. Please... "
Severus laughed and bit her neck, leaving a mark. "I've learned far more from women who lectured with tender and skilled hands than you've ever shown me. Now, beautiful Bella, tell me, what is it in Borgin and Burkes that must be retrieved?" He paused and waited for her answer.
"Argh!" she cried. "Severus, you are cruel."
"I'll take that as a complement from the mistress who defines the word." He sat up and made to withdraw.
"WAIT!" Bella closed her eyes. "It's very ancient and it belonged to an ancestor of Ravenclaw. He was a Warlock of the Clan of the Raven. The object is a rod with the Ravenclaw eagle mounted on it."
Severus returned to rest between her legs once more. "Thank you Bella. Now for your just reward." He leaned down and with a hard thrust, entered her. Their coupling was rough and lasted at length before Severus finally allowed either of them any release.
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Severus woke the next morning with the witch's arms wrapped around his torso. In her sleep, Bellatrix could pretend to the hard beauty that had been hers before her time in Azkaban. Her striking eyes and full lips, along with her sinuous body, had left many a wizard stirred and desirous of her company.
Making no pretence of easing himself from her embrace, Severus rose and began pulling on his clothing. He would make a trip to the local public baths and shower later. The old house had a gas geyser mounted over the bathtub that provided hot water for ablutions, but he wanted to be purified after his night with the Dark Lord's favourite. Sitting in a bath never left him feeling clean. He felt the need for hot pulsing water to cleanse away her scent.
"Severus, what time is it?" Bella pushed herself up and rubbed her eyes.
Snape looked at his clock. "Just past eight o'clock," he replied, as he pulled on a dark blue jumper.
"Oh! What a ridiculous time to be awake." Bella lay back and opened her arms. "Come back to bed, Severus. We can have some fun before we greet the day." She smiled at him suggestively. "If you want, we could make this a habit. You always were my favourite pupil."
Severus rose from his seat. He picked up the robes Bella had discarded the night before and threw them at her. "Get your lazy arse out of my bed. You got your jollies and I got to scratch an itch."
"You ungrateful bast--." Bella was cut off in mid-declaration by Snape's hand wrapping around her throat.
"What did you expect, Bella? Grateful grovelling from a man who had gone too long without?" Snape laughed. "Don't flatter yourself."
"You... you never have women offering you their bodies freely. They take one look at you and run the other way, unless you're bent on raping them," she spat back at him.
"They don't know what they've missed." He reached over and pulled her out of the bed. "Now, get dressed and be on your way. I'm sure your husband has missed you."
Bella pulled back her hand to slap his face only to have it caught by Snape before it struck. "I don't think so, madam. I never give whores the upper hand." He pulled her after him as he made his way downstairs. Bella clutched her robes to her chest as he pushed her towards the hall.
"I need my shoes and my wand," she spat through clenched teeth.
Severus pulled out his own wand and summoned her belongings, throwing the shoes at her feet but keeping her wand. "You have two minutes," he told her and looked at his watch to time her.
"Our Lord will hear of this," she muttered as she struggled into her robes. Shoving the extraneous articles of underwear into the pockets of her cloak, Bella forced her feet into her shoes and threw the cloak over her shoulders. "My wand," she demanded.
"Let me show you out, my dear Bella." Snape pointed to the front door and followed behind her as she walked towards it. Severus un-warded the door and opened it, letting Bella exit.
"I look forward to hearing from our Lord; I expect that he shall call very soon." He passed her the wand. "Have a safe trip and do give my regards to Rodolphus." He smiled as he slammed the door in her face.
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The kitchen of the Weasley household was bustling with activity. Two house-elves, Dobby and another Hogwarts' elf, were labouring under Molly's sharp eyes to produce a veritable feast. The twins had temporarily closed their shop and were busy erecting and decorating a marquee tent for the wedding reception with the help of Ron and Harry. Ginny and Hermione were gathering flowers to make decorative baskets and wreaths.
The wedding ceremony would take place under a night sky, so that all creation would witness the hand-fasting and binding of Bill and Fleur. The guests would stand in the sacred circle, and an elder would hear the oaths and make the binding.
Harry came into the kitchen to get a cold drink. He looked at the food filling the magically resized cold box as he reached for the pumpkin juice. "Wow, Mrs Weasley, this puts a Hogwarts' feast to shame," he complimented his surrogate mother.
Molly smiled at the flattery. "Well, it's not everyday your oldest son gets married. I'll not have it said the Weasleys stinted on a wedding. Dumbledore always enjoys... oh my." Molly suddenly realized what she was about to say. She sat at the table and dabbed at her eyes with a tea towel. "It's so hard to think of him as gone. He was going to officiate, you know."
Harry sat across from her. "Sometimes I wonder how I'll carry on. He always had something up his sleeve. It was as if he always had a giant secret he wanted us all to guess at. I never thought of him as being just... an old man." He looked into his glass of juice, not wanting Molly to see the tears threatening to fall.
"Harry, we're all just human beings. Even He Who Must Not Be Named had a mother, God rest her soul."
Molly stood suddenly. "Right, that's enough of that, come on." She reached over and tapped Harry on the shoulder. Harry finished his juice and stood as well.
"Harry, be a dear and fetch the boys from the field for some tea. Fleur is bringing her mother and sister later, and we'll all have a light supper then." Molly shooed Harry along and watched as he disappeared behind the hedges. She turned back to the kitchen and looked over the day's labours.
"Alright, you two," she called the elves, "enough for today. Put some preserving charms over this lot and move it out to the tent. After that you can go, but be back bright and early tomorrow."
"Excuse me, Mrs. Harry Potter's Friend, Dobby wonders if you know what tomorrow is?" asked Dobby.
Molly scowled. "Of course I do. It's my son's wedding day."
Dobby blushed and wrung his hands. "Of course, Mistress, but tomorrow is special for another reason."
Molly crossed her arms in front of her. "Don't worry, Dobby, I remember; Merlin knows you've dropped enough hints. We will celebrate Harry's birthday at lunch tomorrow." She thought for a moment and added, "If you are here, you may attend."
"Mrs. Harry Potter's Friend, you are too kind to Dobby. Dobby was rude to suggest that such a great mistress would forget." Suddenly, the elf grabbed a wooden spoon and began beating himself about the head.
Molly dashed forward and grabbed the spoon. "Stop it, you foolish little creature; I need you fit for tomorrow."
"Thank you, mistress; we shall be here early, as you have ordered." Dobby and the Hogwarts' elf began casting charms over the food and moving it out to the tent. As the table cleared, Molly set out soup and bread for her extended family. She was never more content than when she was providing for those she loved and cared for.
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Jenny Doulton, library clerk, recent divorcee and self-declared frumpy Manchester lass looked at herself in the mirror and pulled her hair up, then let it drop.
"Let's face it, girl, you have all the pizzazz of a day-old bread pudding," she said to her reflection. With a sigh, she picked up her handbag, a box of stuff for the jumble sale at the school and went out to shop. Maybe a little Victoria Sponge from Marks and Spencer would improve the day.
She made her way to her old primary school and walked through the gates to the doors leading to the School Hall.
"Hello, Mrs. Fraser," she called. "Here's the stuff for the jumble sale. Not much, just a few things of my mum's that nobody wanted."
"Thanks ever so, Jenny," replied the older woman, who was taking in the donations. "You must drop in on Saturday; we're having a nice Tea Room and bingo."
"I wish I could, Mrs. Fraser, but I've got to work. Saturday's one of the busiest days at the library." She smiled. "If you see something I might like, why don't you pick it up for me, and I'll pay you."
Mrs Fraser smiled back at her. "Dora Smedley is doing her homemade chutney; I'll get you a jar."
"You do that, thanks; must run, bye." With a smile and wave, Jenny left the hall.
Jenny looked down the corridor towards the school office and noticed some framed pictures. Curiosity got the better of her, and she walked over to browse the small gallery. She chewed on her nail as she gazed at the old photos taken of prize giving awardees and sports teams of previous years. She stopped when she came to a picture of the chess club that had won the inner city championship for their age group in 1971. There he was; the chap she'd met outside the school that day. Checking the names listed at the bottom of the picture against the faces, she found out who he was.
"Severus Snape. That's who you are." She looked once more at the picture then left through the front doors.
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Thursday, July 31st, 1997. Snape looked at the calendar hanging on his wall. He was finally alone, finally able to think. Away from the eyes of his Death Eater cronies and Order comrades, he could be Severus Snape, half-blood wizard, half-blood Muggle and emotionally exhausted man.
Rubbing his hands over his face once, he pulled himself up from the sofa and got ready to go out. An owl had arrived the evening before with a letter from Narcissa, telling him the money transfer had been made. Her donation had been sent to the Muggle bank as well.
Opening a drawer in the sideboard, he pulled out a wallet. It contained a driver's licence, credit card and bankcard. He chuckled to himself, imagining his Slytherin students' faces if they could see him like this. He pulled on a light jacket and made his way out.
Severus made his way to the closest bank that had an automatic teller. He pushed his card into the slot and keyed his secret number. A few keystrokes later, a small wad of pound notes were dispensed. He quickly put the money in his wallet and left.
Taking a deep breath, he looked up and down the street, deciding which way to go. He looked up and saw Marks and Spencer. He recalled they offered a good range of better than average food and decided that was the place to start.
As Severus looked around the large shop, he was struck by how bright everything was. He'd been so immersed in the wizarding world, he'd forgotten how open and airy the Muggle world could be. Wizards seemed to prefer the Victorian clutter of a bygone era and most of their shops were dusty and cramped.
He walked around with a hand basket and made a few selections, then moved to stand in line to pay. As he waited for his turn, he mulled over in his mind what to buy at the off-licence. His reverie was ended when a cart banged into the side of his leg, painfully.
"Sorry, I wasn't watching where I was going... Oh, it's you."
Severus turned, looking to see who had spoken. The woman he'd met outside the school.
"Indeed, it is I," he responded through gritted teeth as he rubbed his thigh.
"I'm really sorry. I got distracted by the signs." Jenny pointed to an overhead display. "Are you all right?" she asked.
Standing straight now, Severus sighed, "I'm fine; I've suffered worse."
"My mum always gave me grief over not watching where I was going," she continued, just to make conversation.
"Perhaps then you should bring her with you next time," he replied tartly.
"Wish I could," she replied quietly. Severus looked at her. "My mum passed away in May." Jenny shrugged and offered him a sad look.
Severus felt uncharacteristic regret at uttering such a discourteous comment; it had only been an accident. "I'm sorry, I was rude; my condolences on your loss."
"You couldn't know," she replied with a small smile on her face. "Listen, we didn't really meet properly at the school the other day. I was just so happy to see a familiar face after being away for so long. Let's start again. I'm Jenny Doulton and you are Severus Snape, right?" She held her hand out once more for him to shake.
He still didn't take her hand, "How did you come to know my name?" he asked, surprised at her discovery.
She dropped her hand for the second time at an attempted meeting with Snape. "Is it some deep dark secret? Do you have an aversion to shaking people's hands when they introduce themselves?" she asked tersely and then more evenly told him, "I saw your name on a picture when I dropped some stuff off at the school."
He nodded and extended his hand, "Indeed, I am Severus Snape, Miss Doulton."
She took his hand, finally and formally, meeting the tall dark man.
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Harry's birthday celebration had been brief, just a few presents and a cake with candles for pudding after lunch. Not that he minded much; it still far exceeded anything he'd received from the Dursleys. Besides, the wedding was the story of the day, and he was just as happy not to be the centre of attention.
"Molly, Molly," called Fleur's mother, "Ma chère fille, she 'as, 'ow you say, le hoquet." She gave up and demonstrated the hiccups.
"Not to worry, Iris; it's just nerves I expect. Here, a nice big glass of chilled juice." Molly poured the icy beverage into a glass and passed it over.
"Merci," the bride's mother replied, as she bustled back upstairs.
Arthur Weasley entered the kitchen, rubbing his hands together as he looked around excitedly at the chaos that was his home.
"Molly, dear, the guests have started to arrive," he told her, planting a kiss on her cheek. "You look a treat, Molly Weasley. Folk'll have a hard time deciding who the bride is," he teased.
Molly smacked his hands. "Behave yourself, you silly old flirt. Do I look nice?" she asked, shyly touching her new hat.
Arthur put his arm around her shoulder, "I couldn't think of a prettier witch who could be seeing her son wed. You look lovely, Molly." He kissed her once more before wading into the crowd of Weasleys to round them up. "Come on, you lot, we've got guests to greet."
Later that evening, Harry and Hermione stood in the Wedding Circle and watched as Arthur and Molly led in Bill while Fleur entered with her father and mother. When the parents joined the outer circle, everyone joined hands to form an unbroken chain. Harry looked up at the crescent moon and wondered if his parents had married like this. He paid little attention to the words being said and only noticed when the elder raised his wand, causing a magical glow to form around the hand-fasting couple. They were then declared husband and wife amid the triumphant cheers of the Weasley men.
"That was lovely," declared Hermione. "Come on, we should congratulate them." She grabbed Harry's hand and pulled him forward. They walked through the impromptu reception line, taking their turns embracing and wishing the married couple well.
"So, Harry, will we be brothers soon?" asked Bill, as he shook Harry's hand.
"Oh, uhm, I don't know about that, Bill," Harry answered hesitantly.
"I thought you and Ginny, you know, were together." Bill looked a little uncomfortable.
Harry nodded and looked at his feet. "We were for a bit, but we decided... no, I decided I couldn't have that between us until everything is over." He looked at the older man hoping for understanding. "You know what I mean."
"Harry, I know what you mean, but it doesn't have to be that way. Ginny understands what is going on better than most," Bill replied.
Harry then shook his head, "I won't risk it. I care for her far too much." With a final shake of the hands, Harry left the couple and headed off to see Remus.
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Severus sat in his living room after tea, reading a Muggle newspaper. If he was going to be in the Muggle environment for a while, he thought he should be caught up on current events. He didn't want to sound foolish if he should be asked a question. He was chuckling over a particularly vulgar comment made by a local politician regarding one of his peers, when he felt the tingling in his mark, which presaged the full burning of a call to the Dark Lord.
He knew it had been coming for weeks, but it was now mid-August. Why had it taken so long? Best not to dwell on it, he thought, as he prepared to leave for the Apparition to his Master's side. He'd either be back in business or crow's carrion by the end of the evening. It only mildly disturbed him that he actually considered the latter as slightly preferable.
He left his house and made his way to an alley running behind a deserted warehouse. Here, he donned his Death Eater robes and Apparated to the meeting place. As he appeared, Severus looked up at the sky, trying to gauge his location. The horizon was marginally brighter than it had been when he left, meaning he was further west of his home. There was a distinct sharpness to the air, which indicated proximity to the sea. Possibly the Isle of Man then, with all the ancient magic surrounding the area.
Joining the assembly, Severus dropped to his knee in the approved manner for greeting Voldemort. They waited silently for his appearance. Severus scanned the masked faces with his eyes, not moving his head. It was easy to pick out the Lestranges and Rookwood. They had always presumed superiority in the Dark Lord's eyes. He noted heads turning and bowing, indicating the approach of He Who Must Not Be Named.
Voldemort stood before the bonfire that had been erected in the centre of the circle. His skin glistened in the firelight, giving him an unearthly appearance. Not so odd, thought Snape to himself, since there was no other creature like this walking the earth.
"My loyal followers, we are come here tonight to bear witness to those who lack courage and conviction in our cause. Those who would seek to hide themselves from our displeasure." Voldemort signalled to unseen servants.
Severus gasped inwardly when he saw Narcissa and Draco dragged into the centre of the circle. They were haggard and bruised. He could only surmise they had been held in captivity for some time. He imagined he saw Bellatrix start as well.
"Those who seek my favour and then fail to achieve the simplest task set them should not think they can avoid my displeasure." He walked over to Draco and dragged him closer to the fire. "This boy thought himself worthy to be among my most favoured, taking the place of his father." He forced Draco to his knees. "Yet, he could not summon the Killing Curse."
Draco trembled in fear and looked up at his mother. She stood silently, tears streaming down her cheeks. She had tried to save him, but had instead thrown him into the path of the one they had tried to escape.
"A pity you didn't know Karkaroff had already been dealt with, isn't it, my dear?" Voldemort addressed Narcissa now. "But a mother's love for her child is a greater power than common sense, it appears." Whipping himself around, he addressed the gathering, "Bellatrix, Severus, approach me, NOW!"
Severus and the woman strode quickly to the centre of the circle and fell to their knees once more.
"Bella, I am most disappointed. Why did you seek to help these traitors?" he asked gently.
"My Lord, they are my family. I could not deny them my help. Truly, they meant no disloyalty to your cause. They only sought safety from the Aurors who might force information from the boy." Bella lowered her eyes deferentially. "I ask forgiveness for my presumption."
He turned to Snape, "And you, Severus, why did you make such a promise to them?"
"Honoured one, the task you set was important to our success. To his credit, the boy succeeded in allowing your servants to enter the castle. He is young and had not the experience needed to cast the curse required of him. The assassination needed to be carried out. I completed the task."
"Ever the politician, Snape. Nonetheless, I will brook no disobedience in the future." He approached Draco once more. "As for you, you snivelling young tadpole... Crucio!"
Draco fell over and writhed in agony as his mother watched, sobbing aloud now at her son's torture. The Dark Lord finally lifted the curse, leaving the boy sucking huge gasps of air to fill his lungs. Turning once more to Bellatrix and Severus, Voldemort cast the same curse on them. He held it longer on the experienced Death Eaters before releasing it.
"Now, let us give you a little more experience to help you obey in the future, young Master Malfoy." Voldemort signalled to two men who pulled Draco to his feet. "Watch and learn." He turned and looked at Narcissa who now stood alone. Her eyes widened in the realization of what was about to happen.
"I love you, Draco, never forget that," she shouted quickly.
Voldemort pointed his wand at the blonde witch who now stood proudly erect. "Avada Kedavra!"
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33 Reviews | 8.7/10 Average
HI. wow what can I say? you made Severus falling in love with a muggle believable.
great job.
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Thank you! It's nice to know the story is still being read.
Hello: This was one of my favorite stories! I read all of this on Fan Fiction and also the continuing stories of this wonderful couple. I can no longer read the stuff on FF so if you please could you include all the other stories here? I'm sure they would be well received.
I think this story is better than DH; for the Severus factor alone (and more people live). There shouldn't be to many chapters left right (and thank you for Jenny)!
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
You're right - we're winding down.DH was a bit of a let down, I agree. Not sure I'd let a child read the story. There was far to much death and it mostly seemed pointless. (Poor Dobbie)
Words do not describe how well written this story is. I'm looking so forward to Deathly Hallows but I think this story is giving it a run for it's money. When a story takes you so into it that you become part of it (hard to explain) than that's damn good writing. Looking (so farward) to the next installment.
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Well, there's still a little more adventure ahead. Coming soon.
Oh, I like the thought of using the Dementors as the way of disposing of Voldemort's soul. Very Good!! It is so obvious a solution. I'm enjoying your fic, btw. Snape is perhaps a little too soft and sentimental but "love" does have its own magic. Looking forward to your updates.
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Thank you. I figured if Snape ever met someone special, he would mellow towards her first and she might colour his approach to others. I think I kept him snarky enough.
This is the best story...please don't keep us in suspense. Also, thanks for using Petunia instead of Jenny; *not Jenny, not Jenny*...
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Thsnk you. znext chapter is with the beta - excitement yet to come!
The plot thickens and Moody needs to get that stick out of his ***... *cough* Mean ol' Auror!Great chapter, full of intrigue and surprises. The return of Krum was fun to see. Herrr-myyo-ninny! lol
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Thank you. Yep, Moody's a mean one in this story.
Wow this is so wonderful!!!! And Moody...fuck you!!!!
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Oh, he's a mean one. He's not finished yet, wait and see!Thankscearrae
Response from sregner (Reviewer)
Now I look at that comment...sorry! But I was so angry! I will try and watch my typing from now on! But Moody still SUCKS!!!!
Oh I like this very much! It amuses me greatly to see how comfortable Severus is with Muggles technology and with living among and falling in love with a Muggle. Very well written OFC, as well. I normally do not read stories where Severus falls for an original character, but I'm quite glad I read this one, for the writing is superb and the plot is very well developed. I do wish to point out, though, that when you started the story, you set the date in 1997, however after the New Year's chapter, you jumped the date to 1999, whereas I belive it was meant to be 1998. Anyway, I do hope you update soon, for I am enjoying this story very much!
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Yes I realized my error. When I get a chance, I'll go back and edit. The timeline in years is necessary for plot later on. Thank you.
Oh my, what a wild ride. I clicked on chapter one as a whim and have spent my afternoon reading. I want more...now!
I love Snape's determination to carry on in spite of the odds. I love Jenny. However, as a librarian, I must protest her description. We are not frumpy. Not at all.
I do hope things will turn out well for Jen and Severus. I hope Lucius will not sacrifice himself, but I can see that he might.
More! I just want more.
Please, kind author, please could I have some more?
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Now, now, patience is a virtue - the story is finished actually and it will come as fast as my beta can, uhm, beta!Thanks
Oh this is so wonderful...what a story. But I'm so scared that Jenny is going to be hurt. Please, please don't do that! Thank you
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Thank you. More adventures to come - wait and see.
Another great chapter. I'm excited to see Jenny's reaction to all that Severus may explain to her. I love this story.
I like this story! I'm sad Narcissa died, but I'm glad that Lucius is on the light side. And I hope things work out with Snape and Jenny.
Ooooo! What an exciting story you have brewed for us. Bravo! Interesting thing to have SS have a muggle love interest, but will it work out in the end? Can't wait to see what happens next... soon? Cheers!
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Well, it is a love story, so what do you think? The path to love is never easy, however, and that always makes a good story.Thanks for the review.
I'm still really enjoying your story. I especially like Jenny, probably because I can identify with her so well. She's a great original character; very real.I also think your take on Voldemort is very accurate. He's nuts; he's removed too much of what makes us human not to be.
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Thank you - glad you're enjoying. I've had comments like yours about Jenny from others. When I envisioned her, I saw a very plain woman who you would look right through when you pass her on the street. She's an everywoman, if you will, and if we're honest about it, she's the majority of women in our society. BUT - never underestimate the everyday woman!
Response from jessajohns (Reviewer)
Definitely! The everyday woman can amaze you!
Very good chapter. I like Jenny. Interesting idea to have Snape contact the Trio through Hermione's parents.
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Thank you! I like Jenny too. She's just plain, straight forward, but smart, Jenny!
Intriguing.
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Thank you. I hope you continue to read and review
I glad to see you've posted this story here, they have far too much SS/HG and need more SS/OC and SS/any adult canon female except Hermione to balance it out. This is one of my all time favorite stories and I think it should have a lot more readers. Jenny is probably my favorite OC of all, she's a normal human female and she's very lovable. I've recommended it to all my friends. Marilynn
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Thanks Marilyn,It's not easy to post at the admin'd sites. Every site has different requirements, but I think Jenny deserves the exposure - she's worked hard for it!Linda
that was one of the best fics i've read in a long while! well done
Response from cearrae (Author of The Old Walls Crumble)
Thank you!
ola cearrae, PLEASE have an epilogue! :) this thing still has so MUCH steam! :)) and legs to run on!
did harry potter eat voldemort's soul fragment? i don't really understand? so isn't that dangerous?
"I'll take that as a complement from the mistress who
defines the word." He sat up and made to withdraw.
- compliment
and in this chapter, it's a dental 'practice', not 'practise'
your writing is much different from others but still very palatable!
Yes, Aunt Bella. Ive not had much practise though,
he replied cautiously.
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should be 'practice' in this case. trust me. i'm singaporean!
interesting angle! bella caring about her sister and nephew? :)
i always read the epilogue first before reading the story... what a wonderful epilogue! more people should read it. i had only known of this existence because of 'random story'; then i checked whether it was completed and it was!