Against the Wall
averygoodun33 Reviews | 33 Ratings, 0 Likes, 41 Favorites )
Auror Granger makes a rash decision. Will she live to regret it? A one-shot with two endings.
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Right. I would like to state, for the record, that I WILL finish "She Married Her Choice". I will. Assuming I am in control of my own destiny and accomplishments, that is. ;-)
Unfortunately, real life (mainly an attention craving three-year-old) and inspiration have been keeping me from creative endeavors for a while now. I do foresee a time when that shall pass, but until then, I ask for your patience.
Thank you!
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It begs for a continuance... at least I do.
Thanks a lot for writing
Just got linked to this story and oh, it´s amazing! More angst to the people!
Just got linked to this story and oh, it´s amazing! More angst to the people!
This was much darker, but I think I like it better than the first. Though, I am a glutton for a little punishment... 
I definately prefer this ending, it has smut, angst, betrayal, pain and blood. What more do you need?
Great work!
I must have read this a dozen times and I still get shivers... I love how you write Severus.
very good! loved both versions. but this one really left it open for what happens after.................
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Thanks! I like resolutions with the chance of ambiguity myself. :-)
I like the second one. Kinda a "horns holding up his halo" story. Well done!!
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Tis. Thanks so much!
OH, THERE HAS TO BE A NEXT CHAPTER FOR THIS VERSION. IT JUST LEAVES SO MUCH OPEN. COME ON .... PLAY A LITTLE MORE WITH IT.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
I do have something in mind (buried way, way back there), but I really want to focus on the other stories I'm writing at the moment, so I don't know when (or if) I'll get around to it.
But thank you!
i dont know which ending i like better....while i like the fluffy happiness, i also like the lingering questions left by the second one. but very well written indeed thank you!
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Thank you! I'm just glad you like it at all!
Cheers!
Wow- I love the angst version of this (I'm sick I know) especially because he Does heal her... he's just being him and doing what he has to do.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
I like the dark version better as well. I just think it fits the story better. Plus it has the handy side effect of racheting up the angst a few notches. ;-)
Thank you!
both of these stories are very good...............nice ending on both......looks like an opening for another chapter!
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Thank you! It's possible I'll write another chapter, although I have other committments to deal with first. Cheers!
Bravo indeed! While I loved them both, and I am such a sucker for happy endings 'Bravo' was my favorite. Great job on both, though.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Thank you! I like the fluffy one because I successfully managed to write a fluffy ending (not my forte), but I think Bravo is my favorite as well. Cheers!
Well it isnt that dark since he healed her before he left. I was imagining something much worse. Now Auror Granger will have to find him!
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
I said it was darker, not completely dark.
I don't know that Granger will go looking for him anytime soon. He may find her before she looks for him. Thanks for the review!
okay that was H-O-T hot! I am off to read the dark ending.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Thank you! 
I'm glad you think so!
ohh this has angst, yet it is also clear that he is notentirely bad..:)
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Yeah... but not entirely good, either. *smiles*
Thank you!
Very nice! Gets the heart racing.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Thank you!
sooo did NOT see that coming! Well done!
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Cheers!
While not as happy as the first part, not as bad as I thought it was going to be. I am so glad he healed her!
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Darker, not completely dark. I don't like writing completely dark (and now that I have written a truly dark piece, I can say that with all honesty).
I couldn't kill her off. I just couldn't. I couldn't do that to either of them.
Thank you!
I do love a happy ending! Well done!
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
LOL! I'm glad I could provide one, then! Thanks for letting me know!
I love the second ending! Wow, that was great! The first one was good too, but this just seems so much more like Snape's character. Very cool!
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Thank you! This one was the ending that came with the story, so to speak. It's the one that flowed out and just had to be written. The other one (which I like as well) was written specifically for Sun, as I know she prefers light over dark.
Cheers!
Despite Severus' actions, there still seems to be a window of hope--or else why would he have healed her???
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Yes, there is a hint of hope. But... Thank you!
ummm--YUMMY. . . . more smutty than fluffy. Cool, cos I don't really dig angst.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Thanks! I'm thrilled you liked it! Cheers!
They were both really good, but the dark one was especially interesting. I almost wanted him to stay bad, but you redeemed him in the end. Lucius watching was a nice touch.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Against the Wall)
Thank you! I almost made him stay bad... but I just didn't have the guts to kill off Hermione. Came close, though.
Cheers!