Severus, You'll Be a Dad Soon
Lorraine Bluestar10 Reviews | 10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )
Severus always liked to excel in everything he started, but when it came to fatherhood, he had no idea how to deal with it.
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About Lorraine Bluestar
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Lorraine Bluestar
Member Since 2005 | 14 Stories | Favorited by 28 | 19 Reviews Written | 55 Review Responses
Hi everyone, first of all thank you for taking your time for reading my fan fics, I really appreciate it?
I live in Mexico and work in Advertising Research. I love my work, it suits my curiosity and that tendency I have of knowing everything.
I?m a huge fan of Harry Potter books. Hermione is my favourite character and when a friend introduced me to fan fiction I found HG/SS pairing and I just loved the idea.
Enjoy my stories and feel free to review, in fact, please review and let me know if you like them. Any kind of critics will be welcome, they help me to improve.
Special thanks to Melanie who did the lovely image in this page. This is part of a larger picture she did for my story ?We don?t say goodbye?.
Just in case you were wondering, neither How to Make Snape Happy in ten Steps or the Pink Swans saga had been abandoned. They have only been neglected by my muse, and ignored by my RL. My apoligies to all of you that have been following those stories.
Have a nice day.
Reviews for Severus, You'll Be a Dad Soon
Very well told, from the abhorrance to disinterest to shock and awe. Nicely done.
I fell in love with my husband within a week. Everyone I knew told me he was a rogue! I think he is my Slytherin, and he's perfect, and I am so lucky.Your story brought back the birth of our daughter...I remember the nurse wanted to take Penny away and clean her. My husband just held her, his face totally alight. Thank you for bringing the memory of Penny's birth back to me...he even threatened to kill the doctor, if he did not stop my pain!! Best wishes, and thanks for the pensieve story which brought back one my happiest memories.
Response from Lorraine Bluestar (Author of Severus, You'll Be a Dad Soon)
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Very nice!!!!!!!
I think you got Snape right. I am sure he would have all those questions on his mind if he would ever become a father.
I also liked to read a tearful pregnant Hermione, many pregnant women behave like her and it was just lovely.
Finally, I loved the way Sebastian melted Severus' heart. I am sure every father in this world feels the same when they see their child for the first time.
Congratulations!!!!!! 
Hugs for you 
PS. If any of us behave like Hermione when we are pregnant we must promise to have a huge stock of Ben & Jerry's Homemade Chocolate Fudge Brownie Ice Cream so we can run to help the other with a nice mouthful of ice cream.
A very sweet story.
Loving it. Thank you for the lovely story. 
yay!! i really enjoyed this piece, especially the byplay between harry and snape. and ginny still calling him 'sir'! his final reaction to the baby was sweet and touching without being too sappy. great job!
That was so adorable. I love how it went against the norm; how Hermione wasn't all 'radiant with impending motherhood' and how Snape still loved her anyway - and grew to love his son, too.
Great one-shot. I love the name Sebastian to.
Oh, that was very sweet. I enjoyed it immensely. Good job on bringing out both the characters of the two main...characters, hehe.
One bit of constructive crit.: " Hermione have never been overweight..."
Is that supposed to be "have" or should it be changed to "had"?
All in all, superb! Well done!
~Julia~
Nope, nope, nope. It's too short. Or it needs a companion story of some sort. Yep, yep, yep--you need to write more!;-D~Lotm