Chapter 6: Memories
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Chapter 6: Memories
After washing up and a quick nap, Hermione was ready to work. To her knowledge, Ernie was still talking to the Headmistress. She stood for a moment trying to decide what to do. She concluded that talking to Minerva was indeed a good course of action. Hoping they hadn’t gotten too far, Hermione made her way to Minerva’s office.
Hermione arrived, gave the password, and proceeded up the moving staircase.
“Come in, Hermione,” came Minerva’s voice through the closed door.
Hermione thought, jokingly, that omniscience must come with the duty of Headmaster or mistress. Upon entering the office, Hermione noticed a Pensieve sitting on the desk.
“We have just finished watching the preliminary questions that I asked the morning after the murder,” Minerva explained.
“Since you were present for those, you haven’t missed anything,” Ernie added.
“Ernie, I don’t want to be in the way, but you know me well enough to understand that I will not sit back and let others do the work. I want to contribute all I can to Severus’s case.”
“I’ll need an assistant in this case, so I don’t see any reason why you couldn’t fill that position.”
Hermione was thankful for Ernie's willingness to accept her help. She would have something to do instead of sit around and worry day and night.
“Now that that’s settled, do we want to watch the next session?” Minerva asked pointedly from her desk.
They all gathered around the Pensieve. Hermione reached to touch the substance with her right hand and was transported into the memory from the Head's office. She had learned earlier that certain places in the castle were programmed to record whatever happened in them. Ernie and Minerva soon followed.
They had arrived in Minerva’s office. Looking around, Hermione saw Dawlish leaning against the Headmistress’s desk. He was occupying his time by sifting through the parchments on the desktop.
Minerva bristled beside Hermione. Hermione surmised that the Headmistress had not seen this memory before.
Just then, noise could be heard coming from the moving staircase. Dawlish quickly moved away from the desk and looked toward the door with an air of indifference.
Minerva entered first, followed closely by Severus, who looked like he would rather be anywhere else. Argus Filch brought up the rear, shuffling through the door. After a wave of Minerva’s hand, the door shut behind them.
The Headmistress strode past Dawlish and took a seat at her desk.
“Everyone, please take a seat,” she said.
Dawlish instantly sat; Argus chose one of the chairs across the room, while Severus made no move at all.
Minerva shot him a stern glare. Severus simply returned a look of utter boredom.
Hermione knew that Severus was shutting himself down.
“Dawlish, now that we are all here, will you please begin?”
“Of course, Headmistress,” Dawlish replied with a nod.
Turning toward Severus, he said, “Snape, did you or did you not have ill feelings toward Anna Bloom?”
“My feelings weren’t as ill toward her as they are toward you.”
The Minerva standing beside Hermione stifled a chuckle.
“Tell me, what exactly did you do the night of Anna’s murder?”
Severus stiffly recounted that he had been on his rounds and in his chambers until half past one in the morning.
“Where were you after that?” Dawlish demanded.
“I went for a walk. I traveled all the corridors in the castle then went on the grounds. I got back to my chambers at four that morning,” Severus finished.
“Then what did you do?”
Exasperated, Severus said, “I slept until Minerva woke us up with her incessant banging.”
Both Minervas shot Severus another glare. It was now Hermione’s turn to stifle a giggle.
“Did you encounter anyone on your walk?”
“The Bloody Baron was in the dungeon hall when I arrived back in my rooms. Other than him, I met no one alive or dead.”
Unbelieving, Dawlish asked, “And you didn’t meet Anna Bloom at all on your wanderings?”
“As I said, no. I saw her last at about ten o’clock. She was with one of her friends.”
“Oh, yes, we’ve already spoken to George Epps. He had some interesting things to say, I assure you.”
Hermione could see the effort Severus was putting into keeping his body language and face passive.
The Minerva behind the desk looked shocked. “Dawlish, as I told you before, Severus is a senior member of this staff, and I trust him implicitly.”
Dawlish scoffed. “Snape, perhaps a reminder is in order. You are certain you didn’t leave a fourteen-year-old girl severely beaten and raped in one of your dungeon rooms?”
“No,” hissed Severus.
“A little more help might jog your memory. Anna Bloom was found with a concussion, numerous bruises all over her body, boot marks on her sides. Those kicks resulted in four broken ribs and one punctured lung. She had two black eyes, multiple lacerations on her mouth from where her teeth had cut her lips. She had been cut with a sharp knife on both arms. The blood was used to draw patterns on her torso. She looked to have been raped twice: once before she died, and once after. Semen traces were also found around her mouth.”
“That is enough!” Minerva exclaimed. She looked as if she could cry and be sick all at once.
Hermione found herself taking deep breaths to try to calm her roiling stomach. Ernie put a comforting hand on her shoulder. During Dawlish’s appalling description, all the blood had drained from Severus’s face. Argus Filch had a hand over his mouth and was desperately trying not to be sick.
“Well, Snape, was your memory sufficiently jogged?” Dawlish asked after a minute.
“I have no memories to jog, Dawlish. I didn’t do any of those things to that girl. I did not see her after ten o’clock last night!”
“This crime has all the evidence of a Death Eater attack. There only seems to be one of those around here,” Dawlish said nastily.
Minerva stood from behind her desk. “I warn you now, Dawlish, you make one more blatant and uncalled for accusation, and you will never be allowed on these grounds again.”
Severus meanwhile was looking at Dawlish with renewed spirit. “Dawlish, there was another Death Eater here that day. Lucius Malfoy came to call earlier that evening. He never did state what his business was or find me to discuss it.”
“Mr. Malfoy is a generous member of this community,” the Enforcer said in a huff.
“He also happens to be a Death Eater gone free.”
“We’ll look into it.”
Dawlish turned to Argus and began questioning him.
Minerva pulled both of them, Hermione and Ernie, out of the Pensieve.
Once back in the present, Hermione sat down heavily in one of the chairs by the fire. Ernie stood completely still, lost in thought.
Finally, Hermione said, “Things are worse than I thought.”
“Don’t give up hope yet, my dear,” Minerva said kindly.
“Oh, I’m not giving up yet. Severus is innocent. Until I prove that; I won’t give up.”
“Hermione, we need to talk to George Epps. What Dawlish said concerning him has me a little on edge,” Ernie said quietly.
Minerva looked decidedly uncomfortable. “I’m afraid there may be a problem getting a hold of Mr. Epps. His father took him out of school late yesterday evening.”
Author's Notes: All comments are welcome and appreciated. A great round of applause for my beta, Zen Lady!
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Latest 25 Reviews for Faithful Death
37 Reviews | 6.16/10 Average
Excellent retelling of perverted justice and vigilante murder.
Missy/LovesRickman
I looked up the story of Leo Frank when I started reading this story and as soon as I did, I knew your story was going to break my heart! And it did. I still haven't read the second ending. Somehow, I cannot. And if I was Hermione, I don't think I could even bear to see Harry let alone consider him a friend by that point...
It is so much easier to forgive a dead man than a live one and if Snape had survived DH, I can still see this happening. And now, I really need to go read something fluffy...
How odd that a stock photo of Leo Frank looks a lot like young Tom Riddle!
Good ending.
Thank you again for the alt ending, I usually scroll through tha chapter summaries and thought it was just going to be a random student dying. (That sounded really bad, didn't it? I meant a PRETEND one:}
Did you not state at the beginning of this story that the Dementors had been banished? Is there a woman named Dementor in the prison?
Thank you for the alternate ending. Most authors do not do that. I do. I was going to positively send you a Howler!
o dear...i like the second ending sooooo much more... the first one had me crying and wondering how she didnt kill harry...i would NEVER forgive him...but thats just me!
anyways, kudos to you for this wonderful story ssspllleeeee~ SSL
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you for reading this story and letting me know what you thought. Hermione is too humane to kill another person, even if they did something terrible. To her, being ignored is an even worse punishment than anything else.
A sad tale but worthy of telling.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you very much. I am glad you feel that way.
I read the original ending on SH. This was much better and didnt bring tears to my eyes. Phenominal story this, well done; again.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you so much! I'm glad to know you stuck through the whole thing.
yep. I definetly like ending B better. lol.
tragic, but nicely done.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thanks for letting me know. Your feedback is appreciated.
i love both versions of the ending, but being a sentimental fool, i have to prefer the one where he doesn't die! terrific story!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you so much! I always looked forward to reading your reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
I know I already reviewed you know where, but couldn't resist commenting again.As I said, I like the original ending more. And after re-reading I am even more positive of my opinion. It is more poignant and really strikes a chord in my social conscience. I like that is a story with a true moral, much like "A Man For All Seasons". While Severus is not exactly Thomas More, he is a man with convictions. And that these convictions should see him condemned and reviled is but a symptom of our corrupted version of justice.While the romantic in me is overjoyed with the possibility of Severus and Hermione finding happiness, I can't quite quiet my more pragmatic side.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you for both reviews. I am very glad that you like this story enough to even reread at least part of it. These events hit terribly close to our present society's outlook.
I definitely prefer this ending! Thanks for sharing.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thanks for letting me know.
At least there is hope!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Yes, there is. Thanks for the note.
I like Hermione's honesty with her husband and how skilled she is at avoiding misunderstanding. That shows what a strong connection she has with him, and that is very reassuring.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you. I like hearing what people think of my take on the characters.
hermione's letter to harry was great! and i like this kinder version of minerva.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you! I dearly hoped that her letter wasn't too harsh, so I'm glad that you liked what I did with that. We've seen this side of Minerva occasionally in the books, but I think since Hermione isn't a student any longer that this is how she would act toward her friends. Glad you liked it. :)
great update! i don't know which is worse-harry's letter or skeeter's article.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you. To me, Harry's letter is worse because he is supposed to be a friend to Hermione. Though, both things are bad.
poor snape! and poor hermione. please let him out of Azkaban soon!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you for the review. Unfortunately, it will be a while before Snape gets out of Azkaban...
the suspense grows... very nice chapter!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you! This is my first longer fic, so the feedback helps.
wow, this is like Law and Order: Hogwarts Unit. it was helpful to have a description of what happened to Anna, but ew. the killer has to be someone especially sick. can't wait to see how it unfolds.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Lol! I like the description. And, yes, the person who did this really is sick. I'm glad you're enjoying this.
Having finally caught up with the first two chapters, I can see how Argus got tied in with things. (That'll teach me to start reading on the third chapter, eh?)
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Hehe. Glad you now have all of the back story.
I like how you quickly begin with an "update" on things that have happened since we've read last. Lucius... gonna keep mah eye on him. :)
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Lucius is sneaky. Not someone I would trust for very long.
I've greatly enjoyed this chapter. I guess it's because I finally got to "see" what happened to the girl. Good work. Imagery is great.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you very much. I was kind of worried what people would say at the brutality.
Poor Filch. Teehee. How'd he get mixed up in that? (Guess it's some great Squib/Ex-DE conspiracy, eh?) Good chapter.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you, and you've answered your own question.