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Storm
The Frustrated Witch3 Reviews | 6.67/10 (3 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
One night, the storm came and ended my pain.
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The Frustrated Witch
Member Since 2005 | 9 Stories | Favorited by 1 | 0 Reviews Written | 5 Review Responses
I am an ordinary college student. Too ordinary that I am bordering the extraordinary.
I am a Communication Arts student in DLSU-D. I'm not intelligent enough to cope up with Algebra but not dumb enough to think that Ban Ki-moon is a member of the Jedi Council and had a major participation in the Galactic Civil War. I guess that puts me somewhere in the middle.
I have a permanent case of fashion-blind syndrome which, according to some people, is a lot worse than having three other personalities.
I have an uncanny fascination towards the rain.
I don't and wouldn't like to put a limit to the power of my imagination. (Well, in my mind, my imagination is pretty powerful.) When I come up with something, I always jot it down in my Little Black Book of Ideas. Regardless of any particular situation.
Writing is one of the four things that I will always want and continue to do. Even if my competency on the area is questionable.
Singing is the next thing. Reading comes after that.
And the last one...
I love caring for others. I don’t really know why. I just do.
Reviews for Storm
This is terrific. I am still learning a lot about poetry. When I saw what you had done by creating a scheme with the lines themselves instead of the meter and rhyme, I was quite impressed. Every time I look I find something else I missed the first time. Excellent.
Response from The Frustrated Witch (Author of Storm)
Thank you very much madame.
This style of poetry is called a "pantoum." Incidentally, this is my favorite style when it comes to writing poems. I find it fascinating and more creative than the usual styles.
I am also still learning a lot about poetries. I am just a sixteen year old amateur with an abnormal imagination.
I'm really glad you liked it! ^_^
Wow that was intense. Bravo. Tamara
That was a very different style of writing than I've seen before. Using the 2nd and 4th lines of the prior lyric for the 1st and 3rd of the next. Intriguing. Also, a very emotional piece.
Elura