Masters and Servants
HogwartsHoney49 Reviews | 49 Ratings, 0 Likes, 16 Favorites )
Several months after Dumbledore's death Harry tracks down Snape to even the score, but what transpires is far from expected, for either of them.
**This story won the Multifaceted Awards Round 6 in 'Desire - Best Slash Fic rated R or NC-17'. Thanks to everyone who voted!**
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HogwartsHoney
Member Since 2006 | 23 Stories | Favorited by 37 | 147 Reviews Written | 358 Review Responses
45 years old and hopelessly intrigued by the Potterverse and all that it contains. Really, I'm too old for this sh*t, but... here I am.
Reviews for Masters and Servants
I think this was the perfect place to end this story. It doesn't matter what happens in the war. As you've said, theirs is over. I enjoyed this.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
That's what I wanted - for the two of them to come to some sort of ... if not resolution, at least a sort of understanding.I'm happy you enjoyed it, and thanks for all your comments ;o)~HH
That was unexpected. I don't know exactly how I thought this was going to play out, but this wasn't it. Love it, though.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
LOL. I just love this review. Completely.
What's different? What's different? Moving on ...
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
I like that you're reviewing each chapter. What could be different....????
Oh boy, there are going to be some fireworks I think. And hope. :)
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
*grins*
Great start! You've got the characters playing this out exactly as they would in canon.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Thanks! Hope you enjoy it
Beautiful!!!I completed enjoyed it.Thank you for share your creativity.Regards.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Thank you so much for your review, and I'm very happy that you enjoyed it. :o)~H
Well, that ws definitely different. I had some difficulty with the constant jumping from one POV to another, but intriguing nonetheless.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Thanks. This was my first attempt at dual POV. Initially I tried to tell it all from Severus' point of view, but I found it to be lacking.... something. I just couldn't tell the whole story and so tried it this way.Thanks for reading and reviewing~HH
wooooooow, thank you xx
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! ;o)~HH
I think this was a good place to end it. They have reached an unspoken accord. Now off to defeat Voldy! congrats on your award for this story by the way
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Ooo, thankee!!! ;o) Writing this actually took a lot out of me emotionally so this is as far as I could really go with it! ;o) I think that their relationship is always going to be coloured just a little bit by their tumultuous history and the stubborn streak that's a mile wide in each of them! ;o) Won't be all sunshine and roses, but I think they'll make it work.Thanks for reading and reviewing each chapter!*hugs*~H
Ahhhh I get it now why Harry was so crazy angry. Let the naked times begin!!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Woo hoo! Yes indeedy.~H
Did Harry just tap into a reserve of magical power? Yikes!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
'Ee's a very powerful wizard! ;o) ~H
Snape just has to toss in the father taunt doesnt he? Just once I would dearly love for Harry to reply "sticks and stones!!!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
LOL. Yeah, well Snape does love to hold on to things and I doubt that Harry would ever be that mature!
I suppose Forge thought it would be a good idea to let Harry have vengance upon Severus? It amuses me that Moody couldnt sniff out Snape but the twins could. Ha! 
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Moody's not as constantly vigilant as he'd like to believe! Those Weasley twins are truly a phenomenon!Thx for yr review.~H
well done , powerfully written!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Thanks so much for reviewing each chapter, and I'm happy you enjoyed the fic.Cheers,~H
Love and hate can be separated by a flimsy line, both aligned with passion and pride.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Ooh! I like that line - it should have been my summary!:)~H
Such anger, such rage, they should be channelling it on Voldie, not each other!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
AGREED! If they could each get their heads out of their own arses..... think of the firepower !
Harry is out for vengeance in a big way! Bet he comes off second best.:)
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Yeah, he tends not to thing things through, that boy.......
Interesting start, what chaos is Harry about to create?
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Thanks. Well, that's Harry, always rushing in. :)~H
Very nicely written! The pacing was wonderful (and quite hot!) ::fans self::
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Oooo. Thanks very much - I'm happy you enjoyed it!~HH
I love the idea that they can somehow heal each other. Beautiful.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Thanks! So do I, and whereas many people will scoff at the age difference in Snarry fics, I find that because they ARE such different people, that it works!
Then again, I'm a hopeless romantic!
I love how well you've portrayed their anger! It's not just a bunch of capslocked screaming; I can actually feel the tension and fury and rage pouring out of them. On to next chatper!!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
:O) I tried really hard with this fic to make it believable. The initial draft of the story was much more violent physically but not emotionally complete. This one made me dig deep, and I think it's better because of it!
Thanks for reading, luv! ~H
incredible. sequel?
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Thanks. I dont like to think "never" in fanfiction, and I had briefly toyed with an idea for a sequel, but so far, nothing has really 'stuck' with me yet. Keep your fingers crossed and maybe a plot bunny will breed! ;o) HH
you should be soo proud. normally i only read one-shots but this was amazing i love it!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Thanks so much! I agree that one-shots are easier in many ways as everything is resolved (usually) at the end. This story is a very special baby of mine,and I'm happy that you enjoyed it. HH
Normally, I hate Snape slash, and I love Harry stories where he's not portrayed as gay, but there was something about this fic that drew me in, and it was worth it. I don't even like Slash, but this was a really good story, and an asset to slash fan fiction. Well done! I loved it! x
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
Woah! Thanks for that review! I'm extremely honoured that you'd read a fic with both slashy Snape and gay Harry! I tried not to make the story about their 'gayness' but more about the emotional and psychological stresses that they'd both been under and how that translated into their relationship with each other. Thanks again!!!
i liked it. so there. all those harsh criticizers beware! hahaha. jk lol. Nice story.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)
OOOoooo thanks! I appreciate you reading and reviewing! ;o) So... were there harsh criticizers??? Really??