New Chapter for One Day
One Day
whitesilence5 Reviews | 7.4/10 (5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
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whitesilence
Member Since 2005 | 15 Stories | Favorited by 4 | 22 Reviews Written | 26 Review Responses
Is marinating herself in Nine Inch Nails...
I often post both working and finished versions of poems on my livejournal. So see it first and dial in at: http://silentpheonix.livejournal.com
Reviews for One Day
A poem of hope for the future: One day they will be together and they will caress each other's graceful, enlightened parts.
I hope all of Hermione's parts are stil connected when Snape caresses them. This poem is beautifuol, but a little scary.
what a perfect poem
I enjoyed this. Parts of it made me wonder if he would indeed "take" those things from her, and when I read your note at the end, I patted myself on the back. Hehe! Lovely as always. Thank you.
Response from whitesilence (Author of One Day)
I couldn't quite bring myself to let him.
You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoy my poetry.
I love your poetry. I saw this pop up on the board and I suspended paying bills just for the sweet respite I knew this would give me. Thank you. It was beautiful.
Response from whitesilence (Author of One Day)
Wow, I'm honored that you would suspend paying bills just to read my poetry. :-D Thank you for your compliments! I hope I can continue to live up to your expectations.