Someone just recced this, and I"m so glad they did. What a sexy piece! I admire you for using all those various prompts in a one-shot and doing it well. 

Yes, yes, yes!  Happy happy day.  Severus Snape is here to stay. Now the fun of keeping the relationship under wraps until the end of the year. It is so much more fun when you know you are being a dirty girl who lets her Professor fuck her even though it's against the rules. How naughty can they be? How many places in the school can they engage in carnal activities without getting caught? The library, the hallway alcoves, his office, his classroom, during class.  The list could go on and I'd like to read about their exhibitionist proclivities. Great story. You left it open for more chapters.

Oh dear, oh wow, oh dear. My brain has gone all fuzzy and I'm quite a bit less coherent than usual. Wow!

(In English: This was a very lovely one-shot, I am glad you wrote it.)

This was quite enjoyable. :)

For me, this story turned on the last sentence: "Some things were too sacred to exploit."  I thought the rest of the story was HOT, and with the last sentence you added the depth of communication that sex creates.  Thank you.  I think this story is beautiful.

Hot and hilarious! Thank you.

I'm glad your friend passed her test . That was fun!

Oh gods I couldn't stop giggling. I love it. I have so much of you writing and I am glad that you are so entertaining. Thank you.

Ah, my dear Subversa!  This is so much better than I remembered!  I want my own Potions Master, just like this one. *pouts*  I love the last bit with Malfoy.  Sigh.  You even take PWP to a whole 'nother level, dearest.

WOW! I think I need a cold shower after that one! I don't know if that's the "style" I would have used to get his attention, but it sure made for a great read!!   And as wonderful as the sex is (whew there I go again) I almost love the fact that Draco saw them and wouldn't use it against them the best. One more piece of red, hot sexy goodness to fall from your fingertips.  LOVE IT!!  You SO rock!

I think i've read this before.  always good to read stories again.  never know what might have been missed..

did you write a sequel to this? 

HOT!!! oh and i went to that site...i like how it says "also not a cod fish" underneith it.

Wow... wow.... can I say that again? Wow.... I am still amazed, sitting here, after finishing this, about how completely intimate and lucious and original this raw expression of desire and overwhealming love is expressed. I absolutely love how Snape stayed completely in control and snide the entire time... ("Run litlte girl, run") Oh my God, can it get any better than that? I am bleary eyed imagining how erotic that would be to hear that while splayed over a bed in some ancient dungeon... I also love how Hermione let her feelings for him override any insecurities which allowed him to be "himself" without her getting any silly hurt feelings... and how yet she melted him with her complete honesty.I loved this, thank you for sharing.

Hunnybunch is a very naughty girl. The control I had to use to stop myself from scrolling down to find the codpiece was immense. Restrain myself, I did, and phew…

Lovely story.  Is it a one shot?  I didn't see if it was complete.  It works great as a one shot though.Thanks for sharing.

Fun story, and I really liked the idea of Draco being touched by the moment.  I love codpieces, they are a lot of fun.  My husband has one similar to the one in the link we made for Twelth Night some years ago - it's reversible, with the softest black leather on one side and wolf fur on the other.  My biggest problem was I found both sides very strokable, which nearly caused a big problem for my husband as I unconciously kept reaching for it

Wow! That was excitingly beutiful.

*fanning self rapidly, gulping ice cold water*

 Brilliant!

...and you let my boy see!

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for posting. Yum!

Yeah. Codpieces are great.

Nice job. You did a very good job at displaying their emotions (frustrations) in this story. Great writing...keep it up.~Jen

Loved it!!  I read the conditions at the beginning and thought - how on earth will you fit all that in.  i did laugh at the codpiece, and I loved this line: " "Run, little girl," he snarled. "Run now." "  The right amount of hotness, humour and depth added by the last line.  Thankyou!

I love your ending line. "Some things were too sacred to exploit." That was a very nice touch.

Overall, seriously hot. Love the set up, and the chocolate frosting was a very nice touch. LOL.

Enjoyable smut.

She passed, and we all get a gift. Thank you  

This is one of the funniest and most erotic stories I've ever read!  Where did you come up with this?  I have laughed so hard and for so long that my face hurts!!!!!You are too good!Laughingly,BethPS-  1000 Points for sheer brilliance.