Erised

whitesilence

9 Reviews | 7.78/10 (9 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )

Romance Poetry/Prose Potions Under Duress 253 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Hermione Granger Severus Snape

What is your heart's desire?

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Chapters (1)

Chapter 1: Erised

About whitesilence

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whitesilence

Member Since 2005 | 15 Stories | Favorited by 4 | 22 Reviews Written | 26 Review Responses

Is marinating herself in Nine Inch Nails...

I often post both working and finished versions of poems on my livejournal. So see it first and dial in at: http://silentpheonix.livejournal.com

Author Website

http://burntpheonix.deviantart.com

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Ashwinder, ff.net

Reviews for Erised

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10/10

braye27

I like it almost as much as Endless Waltz. You tell such a lovely story in three verses.

Thank you!
Beth

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Ooooh, gave me the shivers. Found this after reading Endless Waltz, and must admit that it is just as good- or even better!

0/10

FruGal

Lovely poem. And Severus managed to be very Slytherin and very romantic at the same time. He can sneak up behind me anytime.

10/10

MollysSister

Id like to think they were seeing the same thing.

10/10

pickles

that was excellent.

thank you.

Response from whitesilence (Author of Erised)

You're welcome!

10/10

Lyndie578

Lovely poem.

10/10

apisa_b

Jurst one word: Beautiful!

10/10

KMJ

i love it, it is amazing... wow

10/10

themistresssnape

Beautiful! ~

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