New Chapter for Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV
Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV
Fervesco157 Reviews | 6.77/10 (157 Ratings, 0 Likes, 150 Favorites )
HG/SS/RL/NT. Let the games continue...
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Reviews for Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV
The End - the best two words... ever. *Sigh*
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
:D They are indeed! Though quickly followed by chocolate and coffee ;)
Perfect ending to an awesome series :D Thank you for writing it!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
THanks for reviewing!!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
Nice ending, not to floral or overly sweet. Good old fashioned smut!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Thank you!
My head is dizzy! Wonderful touching touching chap I really am light headed!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Thanks!!
Thank you. I have loved this series from the start, and I loved how you ended it. Thanks for an incredible trip :)
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Thank you for the lovely review! I'm so glad you've enjoyed the journey :D
It's the soppy romantic in me at the moment, but I adored that. Really really did. Well done you! And a fic finished is better than a fic abandoned no matter how long it takes.Congratulations! Still loving it.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
!!!!! *squee* so glad to hear from you hun!! Frankly I can't believe I'm still writing Missions LOL! And yes, it is oh so satisfying to hit that 'fic complete' button! *smooch* Hope you're doing well, hun!
Such a sensual, steamy chapter that was beautifully written. He loves her........................my heart soared!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Awww, thank you!
What an ending!!! Will there be any more in this series??? I hope there is, I cannot imagine Hermiones reaction to that, let alone what will happen if Sirius and Remus find out too....
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Thanks! I may write another Mission in the future, but for now I've got plenty I need to get done.
*squee* Thank you for finishing this for all of us, Ferv! That was great!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
*hugs* Thanks Maddy!!
Such a sweet note to end this tale! Thanks.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Thank you!
Lovely. Perfect. I've been eagerly awaiting this moment for four Missions! And you've done it so nicely.Your stories are always worth waiting for, as excruciating as the wait may be...As a mom, I know that the Missions cannot be your priority but you did once say, "*Ferv sees herself writing MISSION 387 whilst reclining in her rocking chair at the ripe old age of 97*" and while we, your readers, will hold up to our end of the bargain: reading, reviewing, and sending figurative cookies and chocolate (ONLY because legally you can't accept payment, otherwise we'd be sending the literal kind) I'm sure you want to make that long ago statement true. We will always be here drooling and begging for more. So might there be another Mission? Maybe, Mission: Put Hermione In The Pudding Club...There is nothing, NOTHING saying you have to stay away from plot in the Mission series. Anything Fervilicious will be acceptable to your fans. I promise.I think I've asked enough now. Sorry for the long post but this Mission, while satisfying the true HG/SS shipper in me, has also left me yearning for more. And if it's worth doing, then it's worth overdoing so...what the hell!PLEASEGIVEUSMOREWEWANTMORETAKEALLTHETIMEYOUNEEDBUTCOMEBACKWITHMORE!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Awww, thanks
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
! Yes, time for writing at the moment is very limited, what with my two little monsters (I mean children!) and I'm back at work, however, you are right, this doesn't necessarily mean the end of Mission entirely, but I have a few other things I'd like to write first!Thanks you!
:) what a wonderful ending! I think it fits well. Nicely done!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Thank you!
Finally.Finally, he gets her alone. No other guys to compete with, share her with, squabble with.Severus has always been the one to keep his distance, making her call him "sir." Sirius is the one who is up for anything with anyone, Remus is the one who is tender but not smitten, and Severus is the one who only has eyes for her, but is too afraid of being vulnerable to let it show.I often wondered if he regretted introducing her to sex in the context of multiple partners -- how was only one man going to compare with that level of intense stimulation? But I think you have made it clear throughout your stories that he doesn't feel confident that she would agree to being only with him. So he settles for sharing ... until this night. It makes you wonder if he had been confident enough to ask her to his home when he met her in the alley, would she have gone? But he won't risk rejection, so he gets her to agree by bargaining with what he thinks she wants. But doesn't it seem that what she really wants is him?I like the way you write this chapter -- as if they are just now beginning their relationship. This is not the BDSM Severus she is used to. This man is a different man. A man who shares his private domain, his name, and his heart. He truly isn't the same guy who was playing poker those few months ago. He has gone from being a disdainful intimacy-phobe to longing for intimacy and specifically intimacy with her. He is always seeking reassurance, that he is necessary, that he is the one she wants and not just one of the three-ring circus she got indoctrinated into. He has had to face his fear of rejection in order to get what he wants, and luckily he does.I like the way you write Hermione's arc. She goes from innocent, but determined to turned on, but frustrated to welcome, but boy-toy to a little weary of the shallowness and finally to cherished. I can't imagine her waking the next morning and wanting to hook back up with Sirius and Remus. She seems to be longing for something more substantial and she found it.For a PWP, your series has a lot of plot and characters that aren't paper-thin. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Wow! What a well thought out review! Thank you! Yes, Severus certainly seems to have built up his confidence over the series, faced his fears and confronted them head on. Hermione (while I admit is a little OOC) does seem to have tired a little of the loveless smut, and is (in my mind at least!) ready to settle down with Severus.Thank you so much for your wonderful thoughts!
what that's it. it's a good ending but come on. are you writing any more?
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
I haven't got plans for any more right now, I've got a pile of other things I want to write. That's not to say there won't be another mission, just not in the near future.
Oh, God, oh, God, oh, God! What a perfect ending! Tks for this!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Yay! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
Hot, but that ending was just something else. I can't wait for the sequel! No pressure
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Awww, thank you! *blushes*
I, unlike Barbiedoll, am not above pathetic begging:pleeeeeease give us a part V!now that you've fluffed this up (in a most satisfying way, I assure you), I find I really do need more. I'm so very glad things turned out this way for those two. Makes me all warm and fuzzy, you know? Now all we need is a little domestic bliss, perhaps some more quick and dirty, definitely more slow and sensual, and then maybe, MAYBE, I will be able to bear parting with this series. Maybe.With love and appreciation,Sue
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Awww...thanks! I may well write a part V sometime, but for now this is it - I have so many other things that need writing! Thanks so much!
Bravo!! Best smut out there :-) I hope we get a part V soon.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Thank you so much!
BRAVA!!!Flinging roses at your feet.Crying, "Author, author!"Fabulously worth the wait.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
*bows* Thank you, thank you!
Lots and lots of smut, then such a sweet ending. Thank you for writing this.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Thank you so much!
OMG! What an end to Part IV! Please please please let there be a Part V...Sorry to be so pathetic and beg like that. I hope you take that as a compliment because I love this series and that was begging for a "To Be Continued."
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Awww, thank you! At least stage I have no plans for a Mission V, but that doesn't mean it will never happen :D I have plenty of other things I need to work on first, though
that was so utterly satisfying, mere words can't do it justice. worth the wait. *sighs happily*
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Awwww, thank you!
I am so glad to see you able to finish this, and so sweet too!! Now not to nudge too hard but you see, I have this other story bookmarked that is just waiting for an update too
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Thank you! I do have The Persuit of Knowledge on my to list :D
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Thank you! I do have The Persuit of Knowledge on my to do list :D
Yum! Yum! Yum!What a perfect ending! And so very worth the wait!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it :D
awwwwww. yay!!!!!!!!! so happy!!! i squealed when I saw you updated. and this was so worth the wait. bravo!!!! (claps loudly) awesome job! i absolutely love it! this whole series is amazing! you rock!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Mission Metamorphmagus: Get Hermione Laid IV)
Thank you so much!!!