good reading thank you

Well I so have fallen in love with this story and have to see an update soon! This story is great, and this last scene, poor Hermione. But Snapewas giving in, why did he have to be stubborn? Awesome!Hope to see something soon!

Hermione keeps forgetting to factor in the strange happening on the first night... silly wench. LOL

Poor, Severus. What´s happening to him? And are Hermione going to get her way with him? Very good story.

I'm voting on Snape being somehow responsible for the strange goings-on.  Is it a spell?  Some form of Imperius?  Some time-released/delayed curse Voldemort hit him with?  Yes, I know you won't give it away, but you know how I love speculating.  Another entertaining and intriguing installment.  Congratualtions on graduating and good luck being out in the "real world."  Looking forward to more.

Oooh!! Keep the Drama coming!

Great story!  Please update soon.  It's great that Severus has no idea what he's doing.

good start can't wait for an update

another great chapter.

fav part of chapter - “You, Miss Granger, will serve detention with me every night until I am satisfied, which may take a long time! If I were you I would clear my schedule for the next ten years!”

So his he going for personal satisfaction now??  

waiting for more. hopefully soon. p 

great beginning

I hope it's going to be less than a week before you update. I'm not sure I can wait that long.

...Now you have me intrigued as to who or what visited her the previous night...*pokepoke*  So where's the rest of it, huh??~Lotm

While I still think her sudden "love" is happening way too fast, I really like the way the chapter ends.

I agree with Raira's opinion of Hermione's reaction -- it seems... a little too sudden for her to go from "respect" to enjoyment if she's never had any kind of fantasy before this.  I'd expect her to be a lot more conflicted than she is -- not that she's not conflicted, I'd just expect *more* conflict, right after...

Oh such cuteness! When they were talking about the baby and his features I laughed, and then I sighed as the couple were all cutesy in bed. Loved it and can't wait to see what you write next!

Very nice!

For your first ever fan fic this one was really good, though I have to admit you were playing a good cannon Snape all the way till the last two chapters there.. I can never really wrapp myself around an OOC Snape, but that is quite alright. Again, you did lovely for your first go.. I wouldn't have believed it was, if you hadn't mentioned it...Julianna

soooo *kawaii* very cute, romantic and shippy.  Happy new year!! 

Hey there CyanaWhite,

Just thought i'd leave you a little note to say thanks for the story. I truly enjoyed it, and Severus seemed rather believable to me, after all he would have to yeild a little to fall in love in the first place!

Thanks again!

Nicola x  

Very cute. And the little devils called husband do have their ways of ending our anger toward them don't they. God love them for it..............Jet

Thank you for the story and the happy ending!? ?I enjoyed it very much.? Since your first fanfic is always going to have a special place in your heart, I'd like to make sure you know that some of us eagerly checked the site every day to see if a new chapter of it was up.? I'll be sure to look for your next story, too!? Thanks for sharing!