Time Is Tricky
Chapter 2 of 5
themistresssnapeEven though the Battle of Hogwarts is won, Hermione feels that everything has been lost. Can she make things right? Or is she meddling with a fixed point in time that cannot be changed? Rating for later chapters.
ReviewedChapter 1: Time Is Tricky
Hermione and Ron made their way down the sloping lawn toward the stone stairs that lead toward the boats. It wasn’t more than a few hundred yards, but Hermione felt as if it took forever. A feeling of dread and overwhelming pain settled under her ribs the closer they got toward their destination. Ron went ahead of her, his wand out at the ready just in case they came upon a Death Eater that hadn’t been rounded up yet. Hermione clutched her hand around the Time Turner, feeling the little hourglass press into her palm.
Not long now. I promise we’ll fix it, she thought desperately. A flash of onyx eyes and a worried frown burst into her mind. She gulped down her fear and tried to summon up her Gryffindor courage. The pounding in her ears made her want to vomit.
She stumbled down the stone stairs toward the boathouse, biting back the nausea that tried to claw its way up her throat. Ron’s violently red hair flashed in and out of view in front of her as he hurtled around a curve in the stairs before coming back to assure her it was safe. She tried to feel relief that he was with her, but Hermione found it hard to focus on anything at the moment. Her mind turned over and over about the things that she needed to do in order to set the whole thing right.
When Ron reappeared the final time, she looked at him with dismay in her eyes. She could tell by his expression that she looked terrible. The way he reached out to her, the twitch in his jaw tipping her off that he wanted to take her into his arms, told her enough. Deep inside, Hermione felt lost and afraid. She wanted to be able to curl up in the familiarity of Ron and their friendship. She wished, just for a moment, that she could forget. That she could bury the hurt that was burning through her veins and go on.
But she couldn’t. It wasn’t fair to Ron. And it wasn’t fair to Severus.
Ron cleared his throat and looked away for a long moment. Then he tucked his wand up his sleeve and reached out for her hand. He clasped her fingers tight in his own, giving her a reassuring squeeze. Hermione looked up and felt just a little of the trepidation ebb out of her.
“There’s a place just around from the boathouse that we can hide in. I don’t think any of the Death Eaters would have found it earlier.”
Hermione nodded firmly, clutching the Time Turner against her chest. She felt her heart beating beneath her fingers, her blood pumping through her body in time with the pounding of her heart. “Go ahead. Show me.”
Ron pulled her along behind him, along the stone quay where the first years’ boats were moored. Hagrid’s great boat was stored in the boathouse, the only real place they could hide to make sure that the Death Eaters wouldn’t find them when they appeared hours before the end of the battle. From the boathouse, they could get across the courtyard to the Shrieking Shack without being spotted. Then they could be there to save Severus before Nagini’s venom took its toll.
Ron tapped his wand on the lock of the boathouse and muttered a spell to spring the door loose. Hermione danced on her toes behind him, holding tightly to the Time Turner as if it were her only lifeline. It was as if she could hear the seconds ticking away from her, knowing that if Harry or any of the others caught them they would never make it back. No matter how much Severus had helped them, she knew that Harry would never let her risk herself to save him.
With a click, the lock sprung open. Hermione pushed past Ron and looked around hurriedly. Once she convinced herself that no one else was there, she waved Ron over. “Hurry! Stand close.”
Ron stepped in to Hermione as close as he dared. Harrumphing, she snatched his wrist and tugged him close enough that she could wrap the chain of the Time Turner around his neck too. She whispered to herself, trying to figure out how far back they needed to go in order to save Severus. Her fingers trembled.
“Two hours. That should be enough.”
“Are you sure, ‘Mione?” Ron’s voice trembled just a little with worry. He’d never traveled through time before.
“Has to be.” Hermione put her fingertips to the tiny hourglass and took a deep breath. Just as she was about to twist the Time Turner, they heard a voice outside the door of the boathouse. It sounded very much like Harry.
“Quick, ‘Mione!”
With trembling fingers, Hermione gave the Time Turner a twist. A burning, tugging sensation wrapped around them. Ron felt the chain digging into his neck, the force of time swirling around them dragging him close to Hermione. It was like traveling by Floo and Portkey and Apparating all at the same time.
The world around them blurred as time slipped backward. Just as they should have been slowing down, settling into the flow of time two hours prior, something happened. The Time Turner shuddered around their necks, the world around them giving a violent shake and jerk. Hermione watched as the Time Turner began spinning faster and faster. She tried to wrap her hand around it, tried to curse it into stopping and throwing them out into the correct timeline.
Their ears filled with the sound of shattering glass as the Time Turner began to crack. In one instant, the little hourglass splintered into a thousand little shards. The sand splattered out around them, the whip of time rushing past sucking it away and into the space between the seconds. Hermione shouted into the void, the great swish of time carrying the sound past Ron’s ears.
And suddenly, without warning, they slammed into the floor of the boathouse. The Time Turner’s stream dropped them out with a crushing finality. Hermione landed hard on her arm and felt the bones snap and shatter all the way up to her elbow. She let out a violent scream that echoed around the boathouse.
“No!”
Ron dragged himself to his feet and wiped away the blood from his neck and face. “Hermione! What happened? Are you okay?”
Tears swept down her face. Tears of pain and frustration and a feeling of loss that she never could have predicted she would feel. There was no fear of where in time they had fallen out. As long as they were at Hogwarts, they were safe. But she knew now that there was no hope in saving Severus. Whenever they had fallen out, they would never get to him now.
Suddenly, the door of the boathouse opened. Ron looked up, wand at the ready, to see a pair of boys step into the room. One of them wore glasses and had untidy black hair. The other had a smug grin, his shirt tail hanging over his belt and his robes flapping open. They looked from Ron to Hermione and back again.
“What the bloody hell happened here?” asked Sirius Black.
Notes From The Mistress: I hope you're intrigued! Please review, it means a lot to me!
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Latest 25 Reviews for Second Time's A Charm
30 Reviews | 7.93/10 Average
great start to your story, I'm already wanting to know what happened in the woods with Hermione that makes her so determined to save Snape as well as the others. Curious also if she can alter Malfoy's opinions of muggleborn people as well. please update soon!
More updates soon please! :-)
A fantastic and original start - thank you! I am looking forward to this very much.
Well worth the wait , Sirius had best keep his head down, if Hermione gets her hands on him he will wish he was in the seventh circle of hell, instead of at her tender mercy.
Thank you so much for the update, you really made my day when I got the notice about the update. I have said before that I love this story, and this chapter enforces that even more:-)) As much as I want this to be a Hermione/Severus story, I do find, at least at the moment, that I want for Lucius to find some happiness too. He might do something to change that at some point, but at the moment I do care for Lucius too. I am really looking forward for the next update.
I'm so sorry that Severus had to put up with Sirius' vicious attack, but I'm glad that both Hermione and Ron have had ample proof that Sirius is a psycopath if not outright insane.
And Severus knows her name, and that she and that red-head boy know about things that they supposedly had no way of knowing.
This story keeps getting better and better!
Beth
Smashing! This looks like it's going to be a great yarn, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Nice to see that this fandom is still kicking, too. I have to admit to a fondness for time turner fics, and having Ron along on the jaunt is a new take on an old staple. Thing is, originality isn't even that important if the writing is good, and your writing is stellar. Thanks for this!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
Oh, thank you so much! I got my start writing Harry Potter fanfic, and it just felt right to come back to where it all began. I'm so glad this place is still here! And I'm so glad you enjoyed so far! ~The Mistress
I love time turner fics! It's nice to see one with Ron being snapped back in time with her. It's a first to see her in a new time with a friend.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
Yes. I thought this was a chance for Hermione and Ron to grow as friends, because I refuse to believe that they ended up together romantically. As far as I'm concerned, it didn't happen. ~The Mistress
Poor Lucius, he is going to have his hands full.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
Oh, you have no idea. ~The Mistress
OMG! I hope there will be another way for Hermione and Ron to save Severus... and perhaps Sirius, James, and Lily. There are so many different roads this story can take, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens to everyone involved.Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
I know! There's a lot of possibility with this storyline, and I'm not entirely sure how it's going to go for EVERYONE yet. But I have an inkling for most of them. I hope you enjoy the other chapters just as much! I'm hoping to have another up in a few days! ~The Mistress
I am intrigued with this beginning, and want to know what happens next.Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
Ahhhhh! I'm so glad you're interested! I hope you like the rest! ~The Mistress
Excellent!!! More, please!!??
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
Up and coming, I promise! ~The Mistress
This is a really promising start! I can't wait to see where you are taking it.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
Ah, thank you! I can't wait to see where it's going either! ~The Mistress
I like the beginning. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
Thank you! I'm really glad to have gotten my muse back, and this one is coming quick! I hope you enjoy it! ~The Mistress
Intriguing start - looking forward to more!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
Thank you! I'm working on it! ~The Mistress
Yippy! Me too! Me too! But I don't just hope, I know you can write the stories we like again. This is a scarey great start. So many things could go wrong, but Hermione saving Severus is the thing that keeps us coming back for more.
“Do not. Lie. To me.” What a great line to use here. 8^)It breaks my heart for Hermione to be feeling so badly physically and emotionally. Ron is doing his best to be there for her, but I believe it's causing him heartache because he remembered when "she'd looked at him that way… once."I wonder how Lucius will fit into what is going on with Severus... seems like he doesn't quite know what to make of his friend and the girls he is drawn to.Thanks for a wonderful chapter!Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Lucius is... complicated. Usually, I write Lucius as he comes off in the books. Vain, shallow, and evil. But I began to wonder if there wasn't more to him than that. And this version of Lucius kind of came about from that line of thinking. ~The Mistress
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
Before reading the nex chapter, I reread this one and picked up on something that I didn't notice when I first read it:There was darkness, the smell of pine and wet leaves. A ripple of wind and the snap of snow and ice. Something silver flickered through the trees ahead of her, followed by a silent black shadow. Her heart lifted, pounding against her ribs. She caught the scent of what Amortentia smelled like to her… freshly mown grass, new parchment, spearmint toothpaste, and the potions classroom. The scent wafted off a deep black cloak.In and of itself, that passage could have referred to just about any of a thousand times Hermione had seen Professor Snape storming about Hogwarts or the grounds...but then I read this:The memory wavered and disappeared. Hermione let out a wail and tried to reach for the retreating thoughts. Ron, sitting on the bed across from her, felt his heart twist with sadness for Hermione. She had buried herself in the bed, hiding her face in the pillows and sobbing with silent cries. Something had happened in those months while Harry and Hermione had gone through the Forest of Dean without him. Something that had changed Hermione in a way that he could never understand or explain. And Severus Snape was right in the thick of it in some way that Ron could never quite pin down. Brilliant!!! The penny dropped, and I understood just how important this little detail is! I'm so glad I decided to refresh my memory before going onto the next chapter.Beth
Love it! I eagerly await the next update. I don't think I've ever read a timeturner story quite like it. Looks like trouble will be up ahead if Lucius gets involved.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
New chapter is up as we speak! I hope you enjoy! ~The Mistress
Oh Severus! It must be double painful to be seventeen if you have his disposition ...
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
You have no idea of painful when it comes to Severus... ~The Mistress
Thank you so much for the update. You almost make me feel sorry for Lucius, and that aint supposed to happen, is it? He loves Severus, doesn't he? Otherwise, a great chapter:-))
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
Oh just wait until you get into the next chapter. Oh, dear, oh dear! ~The Mistress
There are so many avenues for plots and subplots to carry these characters to any number of places:•I can see Sirius eventually getting on James' last nerve.•James finding himself a little bit drawn to Hermione. •Where would that leave Lily?•If James is attracted to Hermione, would Sirius try to move in on Lily?•Would Snape find that Lily was still partial to him instead of James?•Would Ron meet his parents when they were students at Hogwarts?This is a very interesting story with an apparently endless number of complications for our characters to have to work their way through. I'm looking forward to your next update!Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
New chapter is up, darling! The plot has thickened somewhat, and not necessarily in a good way! And thank you again for all the ways that you think about this story. It's amazing to see someone actually thinking about my story like this. ~The Mistress
Interesting indeed, can't wait to find out what kind of relationship Severus and Hermione have in the present.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
Ah, yes! It'm hoping to have the next chapter finished and ready to post tonight. ~The Mistress
I am completely hooked. Your Sirius deserves a good telling off, and punishment, hopefully Hermione will be able to help with that. I liked that James wasn't that big of a prat, and while Ron most often aint' my favorite, it is unusual for him to with Hermione to the past, and if you only keep all romance far away from him and Hermione, I will be happy to see how Ron handle this. Ron the friend I like, Ron the potential/wannabe lover, give me allergic reactions that can make me stop reading any story:-)) Am I right to assume that there was a connection between Hermione and Severus before the battle? I am really looking forward to read more.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
I can promise you that much. No Ron/Hermione around here! And as for the last question... you'll have to wait and see! Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress
OH SHIT!!! what are they going to do now, they can do all sorts of damage. They could prevent James and Lily from getting together, and no Harry.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
Oh yes, those two can cause a lot of damage! ~The Mistress
I like it please keep going!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Second Time's A Charm)
Ah! Thank you so much! I'm working on the next chapter now, but it may be a few days... busy busy busy at work! But thank you so much for reading! ~The Mistress