Chapter 6
Chapter 6 of 6
phoenixDraco cheated on Hermione, and Lucius invoked an arcane wizard law that left her life in shambles. Can she reconcile what Lucius has done and reaccept him as her lover? Or will she run forever from the intrigue and deceit that comes with being a Malfoy? Episode Two of the Glory Trilogy. "To Regain Glory" is Episode One.
ReviewedChapter 6
They remained at the reception for only about a half hour longer before Lucius made their excuses to their host.
"Lucius, must you leave so soon?" Minister Whiting asked.
"I'm afraid I must, Trent. I would never dream of sending my wife home alone, and she has had quite enough excitement for the night," Lucius replied smoothly.
"Ah, yes, of course. How thoughtless of me. I do hope the two of you have had a pleasant evening," he said as kissed the back of Hermione's hand.
"You were quite the gracious host this evening," Hermione replied.
"It was a pleasure having you here," Whiting replied before releasing her hand and shaking Lucius's. "I hope to see you soon."
"As do I. Good evening, Minister," Lucius said politely before leading Hermione out the door. Once outside, he Apparated the two of them home and proceeded to dance a small waltz with her in the foyer. "You were divine tonight, darling. I daresay everyone was quite smitten with you."
"Oh, really? You noticed?" she asked playfully. More often than not, his eyes had been on her all evening.
"Of course I did. I notice everything." He leaned down and gave her a passionate kiss. "You worried yourself for nothing. All of the gossip I heard was favourable...to us, that is. Now, as splendid as that gown is, I would really prefer to see you in nothing at all."
She giggled and shoved him playfully. "Lucius."
"If you do not wish to walk upstairs, I shall just have to Apparate you there." He wrapped his arms around her and nibbled at her neck.
"Well, my feet are a little sore..." She didn't get a chance to finish as he carried out his threat. He then began carefully unbuttoning her gown. "Would you hurry?" she asked impatiently.
"Not tonight, darling. This frock was quite expensive."
"And you think I'll need it again? Wouldn't it look odd if I wore the same dress to the next reception?"
He pulled her hair back and nipped at her ear. "Not in the immediate future, but I had rather hoped you might have an open mind about having more children." He slowly lowered the dress to the floor and waited for her to step out of it.
Turning to face him, she asked, "You want more children?"
He gently caressed her stomach. "I have always wanted a large family, but it was never possible."
She was working on unfastening his robes. "I think we can talk about that."
Lucius knew that his plan was almost complete. She was nearly his. From the way she had looked at him during the reception, this should be all she needed to be convinced that she was better off with him.
She was lovely. She might think her growing girth made her unattractive, but he found it strangely erotic. In a little more than a month, she would give birth to his child. That thought aroused him even more. Standing behind her, he pulled her tight and rubbed his hips against her, letting her feel his arousal. At the same time, he caressed her stomach, her breasts. He had to feel her. This time it was definitely no dream, and there was no need to rush; they had all evening. She quivered at his touch. "I love you," he whispered into her ear.
"Oh, Lucius," she whispered and leaned back against him. "Do you really?"
"I would have let you go if I didn't." Deciding the time for small talk was over, he led her to the bed.
She shoved him onto the bed. "I need you," she growled.
Lucius was slightly taken aback by this brazen attitude, but he was not going to complain. Situating himself behind her, his hands danced across her skin, touching her in all the places that aroused her. He delighted in feeling her squirm and hear her moans.
"Lucius, please, I've waited so long," she pleaded.
Reaching between her legs, he teased her briefly, enjoying the slick feel. Unable to ignore his needs anymore, he carefully thrust into her. She pushed against him, encouraging him to continue. He tried to move slowly, but she grabbed his hip and urged him to move more quickly. Knowing that he wouldn't last long if he did, he whispered, "Hermione."
"Take me," she growled.
Needing little encouragement, he could feel his release coming. Judging from the noises Hermione was making, so was hers. As she climaxed, she cried out his name and brought about his release. He held her tightly, pleased that this time it was not a dream. "How do you feel?"
"Wonderful," she sighed.
Propping himself on his arm, he admired her body. Unlike some other pregnant women, she was gaining weight in all the right places, making her figure more voluptuous than it had ever been. When she noticed what he was doing, she tried to cover herself, but he stopped her. "I want to admire you."
"Admire me? I feel like a hippopotamus."
Leaning over, he kissed her belly. "I assure you, you in no way resemble any sort of animal. You are the most beautiful woman I have ever seen."
"Liar." She laughed and tried to push him away.
Carefully moving over her, he lay so that he was facing her. "It is the truth. I am irresistibly attracted to you." He saw a tear roll down her cheek. Brushing it away, he asked, "What's wrong?"
"I've been so foolish."
He smiled warmly at her. "You weren't the fool, I was. I should have told you what I was planning. I knew how you felt about me, and I thought it would be enough. Will you forgive me?" Yes, she was putty in his hands. Her emotions were charged, and he could use them to his advantage.
"There is nothing to forgive." She shifted so she could give him a kiss. After a few moments, she asked, "How do we explain this to my parents? This is one wizarding law they wouldn't understand."
"You know your parents better than I, so I will defer to your judgement. But you must tell them quickly." He placed his hand on her belly.
Placing her hand on top of his, she replied, "I know, but not right now." Rolling over, she spooned against him, gaining comfort from his embrace.
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As Hermione was lying in bed, with Lucius's arm wrapped around her, she felt happy. Suddenly, she realized that there had been photographers at the reception last night. Surely, a picture of her and Lucius would be published in the morning paper. She pulled away and began looking for her clothes.
"Hermione?" asked a very confused and half-awake Lucius.
"I have to get back to Harry's." She went through the wardrobe looking for the clothes she had arrived in.
"For what reason?"
"I didn't tell them I was going to be with you," she admitted sheepishly. "I told them I was going to my parents' house. If I don't go back, he'll be worried."
"Wouldn't they assume you spent the night there?"
"Up until they read the paper, yes."
"Are you trying to keep us a secret?" he asked playfully.
"You know how touchy Harry gets. I just need to tell him in my own way."
He rose from bed and summoned a house-elf to get her clothes. "Should I expect you for breakfast?"
Considering his question while she dressed, she finally replied, "I think perhaps lunch might be better." After kissing him, she said, "I'll try to get back as soon as possible." She held him tightly, not really wanting to leave, but knowing she had to. "I love you," she softly and gave him one last kiss before leaving.
Standing outside Harry and Ginny's house in Godric's Hollow, she knew that to get any closer would alert Harry. Perhaps he would be sleeping too deeply to wake. After all, he had no reason to suspect she had been any place other than her parent's house.
After walking up the path, she quietly unlocked the door and slipped into the darkened house. She lit the tip of her wand and headed upstairs to her room.
As she passed Harry's room, she heard him mutter, "Hermione?"
"Sorry I'm back so late. I lost track of time." He didn't say anything else, so she quickly changed for bed to get a few more hours of sleep before the inevitable discovery.
When she heard the children wake, she knew that Harry and Ginny would not be far behind. Deciding that she would do as she always did, she headed downstairs to get breakfast started while Ginny and Harry got the children dressed.
Jimmy was quite noisy as he came downstairs and was telling Ginny what he wanted for breakfast.
"You will eat what you are given," Ginny told him, for not the first time. She saw Hermione cooking eggs. "Did you get any rest last night? I know you came in late."
"I'm fine. Don't worry about me. I'll have breakfast ready in a minute." Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Harry pay the owl for the Daily Prophet. She knew that he wasn't really the type to read the paper too closely, especially the society page, and she hoped that today would be no different. She wanted to be able to bring up her leaving when she was ready.
They all settled down to breakfast and Hermione ate nervously as she watched Harry reading the paper.
Harry dropped his fork to the plate and dropped the paper. "Hermione!"
"What is it?" asked Ginny.
At the same time, Hermione said, "I can explain."
"It better be a damn good explanation," Harry said.
"Harry!" admonished Ginny. "Not in front of the kids." As she looked at Harry, she glimpsed the picture and then stared closer at it, and then she looked at Hermione. "Is that really you and Malfoy?"
Hermione could see that it was a picture of the two of them dancing at the reception. Harry and Ginny were both reading the accompanying article. She wanted to explain, but thought it would be best to let them finish reading first. "Harry, please, I can explain." she said when she realized that he was at the end of the article.
"What did he do to you?" Harry demanded of her.
"Harry, please, calm down and let me speak," she replied sternly. "He didn't do anything to me. I willingly went with him last night. Stop!" she said as she saw him preparing to interrupt. "I went with him because according to the law, he is my husband. You know how important appearances are to the wizarding world." And the fact I will be an outcast if I don't go back to him, she added silently. Of course, that was really a moot point since she did want to go back to him. He said he loved her, and even if he didn't, he treated her with a great deal more respect than Draco had. Besides, she could use the Malfoy name to her advantage, and Lucius's backing had much more sway than Draco's ever had.
"You look like you were having a good time," he said while he pointed at the picture.
"For more than a year I lived at his manor. We developed a good friendship." A very good friendship, she added as she wondered how much to tell him. "Despite what you may think, we do have a lot in common, and you've seen that he isn't the same man he was during Voldemort's return."
"That's what everyone thought the first time," Harry said sarcastically.
Ginny placed her hand on Harry's. She knew Hermione's secret, but would not reveal it without her consent. "So you wanted to spend time with him?"
"I know it sounds strange, but I really do miss him. We used to take tea together, go on long walks, have intelligent discussions. He's really quite intelligent," Hermione said wistfully.
Ginny asked cautiously, "How do you feel about him?"
Hermione sighed and looked between her two friends. They weren't ready to hear her honest answer. "I'm going to be moving back to the manor."
Harry leapt to his feet and slammed his fists against the table, causing Sarah to cry and Jimmy bury his face in Ginny's side. "I forbid it!"
"It's my life and I'll do what I please. I want my child to know his father!" she replied abruptly. Once the words were out, she realized she couldn't take them back.
Harry paled. "His father? You mean...?"
Hermione rubbed her stomach protectively. "This is Lucius' child, and I love him. I'm glad that Draco was caught, and that I'm now Mrs. Lucius Malfoy. He understands me and loves me." She started calming down, realizing that getting too worked up would not be good for the baby. "He's been trying to convince me to come home since I left. It's just taken me this long to realize that's where I belong. But you can't tell anyone else that he's the father. If word were to get out..." She knew that if word of the affair between her and Lucius ever got out, they would both be discredited.
"Wait a minute? You and Lucius? But he disowned Draco for doing the same thing."
"Because he wanted to be with me, and that was the perfect opportunity. He's always thought that Draco was weak and he blamed Narcissa." Realizing that her friends now possessed potentially dangerous knowledge, she added, "No one can know. If word gets out... Well, I probably would never be able to show my face in the wizarding world again."
Ginny gently pulled Jimmy away from her so that she could give Hermione a reassuring hug. "Of course we won't tell anyone." She shot Harry a look that said he would obey that promise.
Harry and Hermione stared at each other for close to a minute.
"Harry, you can't tell anyone," she said quietly.
"How could you?" asked Harry. When she didn't answer, he got up and walked out the door.
"I hoped that he would take it better," Hermione said.
"He just needs some time." Ginny looked back down at the picture. "It looks like you had a good time last night."
Hermione smiled. "I did. He dances divinely and is so kind and gentle." She sighed as she recalled what a wonderful night it had been. "I should start packing my things."
Ginny sighed. "I'll miss having Pipsy around."
"I'll talk to Lucius. I don't see why we couldn't spare her."
"You would do that for me?"
Hermione smiled. "Of course I would." She went upstairs and it wasn't long before she was ready to leave. Sending Pipsy ahead, she went to say goodbye to Ginny and the kids, though she knew that in the days to come, she would spend quite a bit of time here. She knew that Ginny would always be her true friend.
When she returned to the manor, she could hear Harry yelling at Lucius in the study.
"If you ever hurt her, mistreat her, or cheat on her, I will kill you!"
She peered around the doorframe and saw that Lucius was unperturbed by Harry's outburst.
"I assure you that I have no intention of harming her. I have strived to protect her and ensure her happiness. Surely, she has told you that," he replied condescendingly.
"And how do I know that you don't have her under some sort of spell. I know how you are. You're...Slytherin!"
Lucius chuckled softly. "You say that as though it's something bad. I have done nothing untoward to influence her decision. Is it so hard for you to believe that we could be in love? Would you deny her the happiness that she has longed for?"
"And I'm supposed to trust you? I'm sure you had nothing to do with her marrying Draco. He was a good actor. He convinced her they were in love and look what happened. I'm not going to let it happen again."
Hermione decided she couldn't stand listening to this anymore. "Harry! What do you think you're doing here?"
He briefly glanced at her before looking suspiciously at Malfoy. "I'm looking out for you."
She crossed the room to embrace Lucius, who had stood up as she entered the room. He kissed her tenderly, not caring that Harry was watching his every move.
"I don't need you looking out for me. I'm an adult, and I can look out for myself. I've made this decision, and I'm happy with it. And I assure you, Lucius has not coerced me or used any sort of potion on me." She still didn't know the exact nature of the lotion he had given her, but she was reasonably certain it had no mind-altering properties. As she settled on the sofa, Lucius placed his arm protectively around her, and it felt very right.
Harry had a look of utter disbelief on his face. After trying several times to say something, he finally recovered his voice. "I want what's best for you. If you think this is best right now..." He trailed off when he couldn't think of anything else to say.
"I do. And I appreciate you looking out for me, but I don't need it right now. You and Ginny are welcome to visit whenever you wish."
Harry looked at Malfoy, trying to read the older man's face. "We'll do that."
"We would be delighted to have you spend the weekend here at your convenience," Lucius replied sincerely.
This seemed to be all that Harry could take. "I'll see you later, Hermione." He gave Malfoy one last glare before departing.
Once Harry was gone, Hermione gave Lucius the best hug that she could. "I'm glad you didn't start fighting with him."
He kissed the top of her head. "I knew it would serve no purpose. Why don't you get some rest and then we can work on the nursery this afternoon?"
She thought that was a wonderful idea. And she was glad that Lucius had not objected to her giving Harry and Ginny an open invitation. She knew that Harry's suspicious nature would cause him to accept the offer, and she knew that, in time, Harry would come to realize that Lucius was nothing like Draco, and that the two of them really did belong together. She could do things as Mrs. Lucius Malfoy that she would never have otherwise been unable to do. When she woke that afternoon, she would start her new life.
~The End~
A/N: Thank you very much to those that have read and reviewed. I hope that you have enjoyed this story. Also, I would like to thank nota for her help in beta reading this story.
As for the final instalment of the trilogy, "Fallen from Glory", I have a couple of other projects that are begging for attention before I get to that one. I do have projects nearing completion, which is a plus. I'm still going to estimate a couple of months before I start posting it since I will want to get most of the story written before I start posting.
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45 Reviews | 7.62/10 Average
Excellent!
I'm actually curious of the potion that Lucius used. It just links them together, so she'd receive erotic dreams of him, right? I really hope that it didn't influence her besides the erotic dreams to make her want him... Does Hermione ever find out about the bottle of lotion and where more can be purchased? Does Lucius ever tell Hermione in the future about the lotion and its properties (maybe not now, but when they're all old and elderly)?
I do find it despicable that Draco planned it so Hermione won't get pregnant, especially since he knows how much Hermione wanted a child. Couldn't he have given her a child and kept his mistress anyways? After all, Phaedra married Lucius anyways...
I wonder what the Prophet said about them. I wonder what the statement Lucius put out? It was of the partial truth and that Draco cheated with Phaedra, and got caught, and disowned? Correct or was it something else?
Great story! =)
Great job!! Loved the way you ended it! Wonderful story. ~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thank you. :D Finding the right place to end a story is always difficult. I'm so glad you liked this ending. It's especially hard in a preplanned series.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thank you. :D Finding the right place to end a story is always difficult. I'm so glad you liked this ending. It's especially hard in a preplanned series.
Again, lovely chapter. You do a fabulous job at displaying the numerous emotions in this story. I feel the characters really come alive...corny, I know. Anyway, good job!~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thank you. That is the ultimate praise. I know that showing emotions for characters can be hard because different folks see them differently. I'm so glad these characters seem real to you.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thank you. That is the ultimate praise. I know that showing emotions for characters can be hard because different folks see them differently. I'm so glad these characters seem real to you.
And so Lucius's plan starts to unfold...great chapter! Love the story so far! ~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. :D I really do think he would be the type to really scheme something out. He showed so much of that in the books, and it's nice to use it for something positive.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. :D I really do think he would be the type to really scheme something out. He showed so much of that in the books, and it's nice to use it for something positive.
Interesting development! I love the idea with the lotion! Very creative! Wonderful job (as always). ~Jen
Very nice. I like how you didn't have Hermione accept his apology right away and you did a wonderful job on the emotions of the characters. ~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. I definitely think that Hermione would not just blindly accept whatever he has to tell her. This is a very angsty/emotional piece and I'm glad that it came off well. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. I definitely think that Hermione would not just blindly accept whatever he has to tell her. This is a very angsty/emotional piece and I'm glad that it came off well. :)
Aww...poor Hermione! I feel bad for her, but I also kind of think things are going to work out for the best with her and Lucius. I guess I'll have to read on and see. Great job!~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. I know she has a really rough time of things. Ah, the downfall of getting involved with teh intrigue in the Malfoy family. LOL
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. I know she has a really rough time of things. Ah, the downfall of getting involved with teh intrigue in the Malfoy family. LOL
It was a pretty good story. Hermoine not really questioning the lotion bugs me though.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it despite that omission. I guess the thing to remember is that Hermione was raised Muggle, so she may not 100% think like someone raised in a magical family. and when your entire life has been turned upside down, well, sometimes your brain doesn't work right. That's about the only defense I have for that decision.
Great story… I have really enjoyed it; although, I was waiting for complications to arise due to the link caused by the lotion. I’m glad that it turned out to simply be the device Lucius used to remind her how much she needed and desired him. It was also the catalyst allowing Hermione to bring Ginny and then Harry into her confidence. I felt that she could have justified herself more to Harry when he commented that Lucius disowned Draco for having an affair and all the while she and Lucius were having an affair as well. She should have pointed out that Draco had been denying her affection and love while having an affair for years, which caused Lucius to try to ensure that her emotional needs were met, leading to their inevitable affair. I say inevitable, as Lucius’ declaration to Hermione at the end of the story, in which he confessed that he picked her out for Draco because she was exactly whom he would have chosen for himself to marry, which, by the way, is a gesture of love towards Draco. I loved Harry forbidding her to go to Lucius and then going to threaten Lucius, trying to ensure that she not be taken advantage of again. I do believe that Lucius loves her, despite that he may have used some Slytherin tactics to win her… that is who he is and who she has decided to love… for better or worse! (Please don’t come out with some kind of twist in the next part to this story proving this theory wrong! I really like this Lucius who loves Hermione and wants a large family with her. Thanks!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
I figured Hermione had been through enough, and of course Lucius is very interested in having an heir, so he would be very sure that the lotion would not harm mother or child. :D
As for the more explanation, I decided not to get too in depth in that whole saga. Since they were facts we were aware of, i didn't want to get into too much exposition. As she becomes more comfortable with how things have played out, she'll surely bring them more into her confidence.
Harry, I love his protective big brother side. It is so much fun to play with and I did find a perfect way to use it. :)
And yes, Lucius does love her; he just has a very odd way of showing it. This is a very foreign emotion to him, growing up in a society where blood is everything and that you marry the right girl to all of the sudden realizing that it really isn't and living through that societal shift. :)
I think I said it before, but I hope to start work on the final installment soon. :D And thank you again for the wonderful review.
Lucius is gauging his responses well... when will Hermione give in to him?I am enjoying this series, it is definitely something a bit different, as I primarily read Hermione/Severus; however, I must say that I am enjoying Lucius!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Ah, Lucius, I had to try so hard not to make this his story. LOL I find him so much fun to write for as I have a very Slytherin mind.
And I'm glad you enjoy this despite it not being your favored pairing. I think it's nice to try something new now and then. :D
You have done a great job... Hermione reacted just as I expected her to.I wonder what she'll do and I wonder if Draco's new wife will stay with him now that he isn't receiving his inheritence etc.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Hermione's reaction was one of the best parts of writing this story. I can only imagine how it would feel to get stuck in that sort of web and I'm thankful I'm not. LOL
As for Draco, he gets the last installment of the trilogy. :)
Yippee another happy LM/HG fic... I love this couple but then I have a thing for Slytherin bad boys.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thank you very much. I have a soft spot for the pairing, so I will be doing my best to ensure they have a happy ending in anything I put them together in. :D... It's allways good to meet someone else who can't resist those naughty Slytherins.
A wonderful end to this installment of the series. I enjoy your portrayal of everyone. You make Lucius seem human, while still keeping his devious side open. I am looking forward to the story!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks, Jenny. I really did enjoy Lucius here and it would have been so easy for me to delve into his mind. In fact, my first draft really did and I had to force myself to focus more on Hermione. That made it a more fun story for me. And I hope to get to the last one sooner rather than later. :)
Hey there! Sorry I didn't review before, but I read this and thought I'd let you know it was wonderful.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
No worries on the not reviewing. I'm glad that you thought the story was wonderful. It was a lot of fun for me to write.
Thanks for the reconciliation and for giving Harry the chance to start working out his demons. In this universe, anyway, I think Lucius/Hermione deserves a chance. Thanks for the great story! I'll keep an eye out for Draco's POV.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thank you very much. I kind of felt sorry for Harry. He's been hating Lucius for years, and he finally had a really good reason to hate the man and had it yanked out from under him. I just love the Lucius/Hermione pairing, so I will strive to give them a happy ending, but I have muses that you just can't reckon with sometimes.
Ah, that Lucius is a good actor! Well, I hope Hermione is always happy with her choice, and maybe she'll have at least one Gryffindor child. A Malfoy in Gryffindor! Well, I'll be waiting patiently for "Fallen from Glory" where Draco and his stepmum/wife have something wicked fall on them. Thanks for this story!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Oh, June, a Malfoy in Gryffindor I love that idea. I wonder what he would do if that happened. As of now, Hermione thinks that she made the right choice. We'll see how that goes.
You mean I have to be mean to Draco and Phaedra? I think I can do that.
Response from June W (Reviewer)
ahem.... "Fallen from Glory"? It doesn't have to be very long - just enough to kill Draco and Phaedra!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
The stars have aligned and I did actually write the final installment of the fic. As to whether or not I was mean to them, well, you'll have to see. My beta is working on it and I hope to have it back soon. I have waffled between letting Draco find some sort of happiness or being miserable.
Hee hee hee! A very Slytherin thing to do indeed! I loved this chapter! That lotion was a stroke of genius! I love how Lucius got Severus involved! Great job!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. I really do enjoy trying to come up with really good Slytherin schemes. It makes writing for the Slytherins so much fun. And of course I had to involve Severus. He makes at least a token appearance in just about everything I write.
Great story
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks, I'm having lots of fun playing with characters in this one. Standby for some heavy angst. Well, maybe not heavy any more. But there is still some. :)
I nearly missed the update, but am glad that I found it. I find that I am frustrated with Hermione. He admitted that he cared for her, and she didn't seem to even notice. Lucy-Love could at least pretend to be a bit more affectionate towards her, aside from wanting her body. Silly man. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for updating.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
The problem is, they both want things there way, and right now, she's nursing her little grudge, and he's quite miffed. Being a smart man, I think he'll figure out he screwed up big time. Question is, can she overcome her hormones? LOL
Glad you enjoyed the update. I'm working on the next chapter.
How can Hermione resist the charms of Lucius?! I know I could not and besides she is having his baby and we know he is a much better prospect than his useless son. I do like how he has been disowned. Ah how many times I have wished for that when I have stumbled across some game or another with an abomination for Draco. What can I say other than it is the Slytherin in me?! As always I really did enjoy the latest instalment of the story and would like to thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. Great chapter and looking forward to the third. Well done once more. KC
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
I loved the disowning, too. I tried to think of the most horrible thing Lucius could do to Draco and that was it. It was fun having petulant brat Draco to play with.
As for Hermione resisting Lucius, well, she's hormonal right now. I think once Lucius realizes that, he'll try to convince her rather than bully her, which he found isn't working.
I do hope to have the third up sometime this week. We'll see how it goes. I have some minor rewriting I need to do. I really need to figure out how I'm going to end the whole thing. LOL
No, Hermione! Not Harry!! Groan... So Lucius didn't remind her that she sometimes said that she wished she were married to him instead of Draco. I do hope she thinks things through; this child is going to one day want to know who his/her father is. Thanks for updating!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
LOL Yeah, going to Harry probably isn't the smartest thing to do, but he's the one contact she has to the Wizarding world that will be kind to her... As for Lucius not reminding her, well, he's a bit distressed, too. And he joins you in hoping that Hermione will calm down and think rationally.
I was so pleased to see you had started the second instalment. Poor Lucius, my heart went out to him and to Hermione really. Draco is such a weed in this, his step mother and he deserve each other. I just pity their child with those two as parents. I wonder how she will take her new husband no longer having the Malfoy name? Badly I hope. I loved it, adored it and can’t wait for chapter two! Thank you for writing and posting chapter one-it is wonderful. ~KC
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks, KC. Yup, poor Lucius and Hermione are on opposite sides of a gulf created by a misunderstanding. Rest assured, he wants to bridge that gap, it's just a matter of figuring out how. LOL
As for Draco and Phaedra, you will learn more about them in the next installment.
Hopefully more will be coming in the next few days.
Heh, this reminds me so much of when I was pregnant with my little ones. I am a very emotionally volatile person anyway, but oh, boy! Pregnancy brought out my more... difficult side at times. Great start to this installment! You rock, as always!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Yup, poor Hermione is in for a rough ride. We've had evidence that she is fairly emotionally volatile, too (the troll in the bathroom, blowing up at Ron, etc), so that's going to play into her behavior. Hopefully she can be made to see reason and that Lucius has the patience to realize she's very hormonal. Glad you enjoyed the first part. :)
I've been looking forward to this story ever since I stumbled onto the first one! I think it'll be fun to hear the story from PregnantHermione's perspective--she'll be somewhat nutty and I'm sure it'll be entertaining. Poor girl. It must tough to be in love with a Malfoy. :-) Great job!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks, wildkitty. I'm glad to hear that you have been looking forward to the sequel. I had hoped that it wouldn't take quite this long, but what can you do? I do agree that Hermione's perspective will be quite interesting because she is pregnant. Yes, getting involved with Malfoys is always complex.