Chapter 2
Chapter 2 of 6
phoenixDraco cheated on Hermione, and Lucius invoked an arcane wizard law that left her life in shambles. Can she reconcile what Lucius has done and reaccept him as her lover? Or will she run forever from the intrigue and deceit that comes with being a Malfoy? Episode Two of the Glory Trilogy. "To Regain Glory" is Episode One.
ReviewedChapter 2
The manor was quiet. Phaedra and Draco had been given one hour to leave. In a particularly generous gesture, perhaps it wasn't generous, but a way to expedite their departure, Lucius had given them the use of one house-elf. He grinned as he sipped his wine. Draco didn't know it, but at midnight, the elf would return to the manor. The last house-elf that had been in the service of the Blacks was now dead. The thought of Draco and Phaedra having to do domestic chores made him chuckle.
Realization that the manor was empty dampened his mirth. The possibility that Hermione would leave had never crossed his mind. After all, during their episodes of wild sex, there had been times when she had indicated that she wished she were married to him instead of Draco. That was what made her behaviour so perplexing. She should have rejoiced in the fact that her wish had become a reality. His plan had been to spend the night having mad, passionate sex with her. Instead, he was alone and getting drunk.
He finished his glass of wine and glanced at the clock when it began to chime. Ten o'clock and Hermione had still not returned. He assumed that it was unlikely she would return tonight. Naturally, she was upset by the afternoon's revelations.
Rising from his chair, he began to pace, considering his options. Clearly, he needed her to return. She was carrying the Malfoy heir. The question was, where had she gone? It was quite likely that she had gone to talk with Ginny Potter. Given Harry Potter's volatile nature, he thought it unlikely that she would have stayed at the Potters. That meant that she was probably at her parents' house. He would have to visit her tomorrow, try to talk some sense into her.
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Lucius knocked on the Granger door. Alan Granger answered the door. "Good afternoon, Alan. I was wondering if Hermione is here?"
"Why do you want to know?"
Lucius assumed from the cautious tone that Alan knew something had happened, but not the entire story. "I know what Draco did, and I can imagine how much it must have upset her to learn about his indiscretions. I was hoping to speak with her, to let her know that I don't hold her responsible, that I find his behaviour reprehensible, and that she is still a welcome member of the family." He hoped this statement was sufficiently vague and would appeal to Alan's parental instincts.
"She isn't feeling well and isn't up to having visitors."
Lucius flashed his most charming smile. "Come now, Alan. I know that she isn't feeling well because of what happened. I know she must be very upset and confused about the events. I think that what I have to tell her will ease her mind."
"Please, come in," Alan said as he opened the door.
Lucius could see that Paula had been standing just out of sight behind the door. He was not surprised. Crossing the room, he took her hands in his. "Paula, I am so sorry that Draco has caused this much difficulty. The pain that he has caused Hermione..."
"I know that it wasn't your fault," she reassured.
"I must bear some responsibility since he was raised in my household. He has paid for his mistake. I am sure that you don't want to hear the details. Hermione left the manor so suddenly that I didn't have the opportunity to reassure her that I don't hold her at fault. I know that she isn't feeling well, but it is rather important that I speak with her." He hoped that they would believe he was acting as a concerned parent.
"I suppose a few minutes wouldn't hurt. Why don't I take you upstairs?" offered Paula.
"Thank you," he replied smoothly, pleased to see that he could still charm people at will. Of course, Muggles were always easier to deceive. He followed Paula upstairs.
"End of the hall on the left," she said.
"I shouldn't be long," he said, placing a reassuring hand on her shoulder before heading down the hall. He knocked on the door. "Hermione?"
"Go away! I don't have anything to say to you," she shouted.
He tried to open the door, but found it locked. Thankfully, he was excellent with unlocking spells. "Darling, please don't say that," he said as he entered her room. Once in the room, he cast a Silencing Charm.
"What part of go away don't you understand?" she asked bitterly.
He glanced around the room before taking a seat on her desk chair. "A great deal where you are concerned. I care about your well-being. I was quite upset when you didn't return last night."
Eyeing him disdainfully, she replied, "You saw me pack, you heard what I said, and you knew I wasn't coming back." She rolled over on her bed, turning her back on him, hoping that would encourage him to leave.
He rose from the chair and sat behind her on the bed. "Darling, come now. I know that you were in shock when you heard the announcement." After a short pause, he continued, "It was perhaps a bit thoughtless of me not to consult you..."
Unable to believe that was the excuse he was giving, she shifted to sit and face him. "Thoughtless? That's the best word you can come up with? What you did was barbaric. After everything you have told me, how could you treat me like a commodity?"
He reached out to brush her cheek. "Darling, you are not a commodity. You know that is not how I see you. I was trying to spare you pain when I made my decision. I know this is what you want."
She shoved his hand away. "How could you know what I want? When have you ever asked me what I want?" It was only now that she realized how little control she had had over what was happening in her life. Now was the time to change that.
He sighed. "Darling..."
"Quit calling me that! I'm not your 'darling'." Why couldn't he take the hint and just go away?
Any hint of a smile faded from his expression. "As you wish. I care about you, and I know that you care about me. Would it be so bad being married to me?"
She didn't understand how he could be so oblivious to her needs, especially after all the long conversations they had had together. "You didn't ask me! You used me. All you see in me is a womb to create an heir, isn't it?"
He sounded aghast. "How can you ask that? After everything we have had, do you truly believe that?" He reached out to caress her arm. "You are much more than that. You are a friend, a lover. Do you truly want to throw away everything that we had together?"
Tears started flowing down her cheeks. "You should have asked me." That would have made all the difference. How could he have claimed to respect her and then do something so disrespectful?
He pulled her closer. "I realize that now. My decision that Draco should be the one to tell you was perhaps not the proper one."
For a moment, she considered accepting his apology, but then she realized he was spinning a web of words and pulled away from him. "Just...go away. You don't understand me at all."
He started losing his patience. "I understand a great many things. What are your plans for the future if you don't return to the manor?"
"What do you mean?" she asked suspiciously.
"I just want to make sure you think your decision through before you do something rash." When she didn't respond, he continued. "You see, I know that you are a very independent woman, I know that living with your parents is not your first choice. As you are independent, I somehow doubt you would accept my support. Where does that leave you? It is very unlikely that anyone would hire you in your current condition. That means that you would be living off your parents' welfare. And after the child is born? Then what?"
"What do you mean?" she asked nervously.
"Both of your parents work. I presume that you would seek employment of your own. It's clear that this would not be the environment the Malfoy heir should be raised in..."
"Get out, you monster!" She couldn't believe what he was implying.
Trying to hide his frustration, he said, "Hermione..."
She interrupted, "I am not letting you take my child."
"A child you don't even want," he retorted, letting her anger feed his.
"I said that I wasn't sure, not that I didn't want this child. We'll manage without you," she said defensively.
"When you realize that I am right and that you have no choice, I will be at home." Hurrying out of the room, he nearly slammed the door.
She knew it was only a matter of time before her mother knocked on the door, and she did her best to compose herself.
"Hermione, dear? Are you all right?" asked Paula through the cracked door.
"I'm fine, Mum. Come on in." She knew that hiding from her mother would only make it worse.
"Did you want to talk about it?"
"Not really." There was no way that her mother could ever understand.
"He wasn't trying to convince you to forgive Draco, was he?" Paula asked suspiciously.
Hermione couldn't suppress the nervous laugh. "No, he most definitely wasn't." Deciding to tell her mother a little more of the truth, she continued, "He has disowned Draco and assured me that I won't have to see him anymore."
Paula was shocked. "He disowned his son?"
"It was pretty bad, Mum. There would have been very bad publicity if he didn't. I really don't want to talk about it."
Paula wrapped her arm around her daughter. "I'm sorry. Why don't we go out and get some fresh air? I know a nice quiet place we can stop for tea."
She liked the idea of getting out of her room. She could still smell Lucius' cologne and wanted nothing more than to get him out of her mind. She still couldn't believe he was threatening to take away her child.
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When Hermione returned to her room that night, she was startled to see a house-elf. "What are you doing here?"
"Master sent Pipsy to serve Mrs. Malfoy," the elf replied and held out an envelope.
She took the letter from the elf and slowly opened it.
Dearest Hermione,
I know we didn't part on the most amiable of terms today. I'm dreadfully sorry that I lost my patience with you. I was concerned when you didn't return home last night, and it was wrong of me to lash out at you.
I would have come to apologize in person, but I believed that you would refuse to see me.
To ensure that you are taken care of, I have sent Pipsy. She will assist you in whatever way necessary. Additionally, I am prepared to send you the nursery furniture if you decide to remain at your parents' house.
I do hope you believe that I am sorry. I never wanted to do anything to drive you away. The manor is quite empty with you gone. Your absence is most noticeable at night. The thought of having you in my bed, for the entire night, where I could bestow my affection upon you is quite appealing. The feel of your warm body against mine is something I long for. I had hoped that you felt the same.
If there is anything else I can do for you, do not hesitate to ask.
Yours truly,
Lucius
Momentarily, she considered crumpling the letter. Instead, she placed it on the bedside table thoughtfully.
"From Master," Pipsy said as she held out a small pouch.
Hermione took the pouch and opened. Inside were some galleons and several hundred pounds. She closed the pouch and thrust it back at the elf. "You can return that to Mr. Malfoy and tell him that I have no need of your service or his money."
The elf started quivering. "Pipsy can't do that. She was told that under no circumstances was she to allow Mrs. Malfoy to refuse."
Hermione didn't want the elf to start hurting herself. "All right, all right. It's just that this house is no place for a house-elf. My parents wouldn't understand. Can you take a letter back to Mr. Malfoy?" She hoped that she could get Lucius to be practical and take the elf back.
"Oh, yes. Pipsy can do that."
Once Pipsy was gone, she contemplated her predicament. She knew that her child would likely be magical. Remembering how different she had been from the other children, how she had found solace in her books, and how hard it had been for her to make friends at Hogwarts, she knew that she couldn't do that to her child.
She would stay with her parents long enough for Harry to calm down. She knew that he and Ginny would welcome her for as long as she needed a place to stay. As much as she hated to do it, she thought that she might be able to use her friendship with Harry to regain some respect in the wizarding community. It was very Slytherin, but he was the one person with more clout than Lucius.
And she was sure that Harry would not mind. She probably wouldn't even have to ask him for any help. After everything they had been through, they would do whatever they could to help the other.
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After an attack of real life, I have finally been able to put the finishing touches on this chapter. I may have a few minor changes to later chapters, but nothing that should cause too long a delay. I do hope to have subsequent chapters up a bit quicker. I'd like to thank nota for being a wonderful beta and giving me someone to bounce ideas off of. She catches me when I try to get too sneaky. I'd also like to thank Sinaz for her help with the first few chapters of this story.
A/N: After an attack of real life, I have finally been able to put the finishing touches on this chapter. I may have a few minor changes to later chapters, but nothing that should cause too long a delay. I do hope to have subsequent chapters up a bit quicker. I'd like to thank nota for being a wonderful beta and giving me someone to bounce ideas off of. She catches me when I try to get too sneaky. I'd also like to thank Sinaz for her help with the first few chapters of this story.
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45 Reviews | 7.62/10 Average
Excellent!
I'm actually curious of the potion that Lucius used. It just links them together, so she'd receive erotic dreams of him, right? I really hope that it didn't influence her besides the erotic dreams to make her want him... Does Hermione ever find out about the bottle of lotion and where more can be purchased? Does Lucius ever tell Hermione in the future about the lotion and its properties (maybe not now, but when they're all old and elderly)?
I do find it despicable that Draco planned it so Hermione won't get pregnant, especially since he knows how much Hermione wanted a child. Couldn't he have given her a child and kept his mistress anyways? After all, Phaedra married Lucius anyways...
I wonder what the Prophet said about them. I wonder what the statement Lucius put out? It was of the partial truth and that Draco cheated with Phaedra, and got caught, and disowned? Correct or was it something else?
Great story! =)
Great job!! Loved the way you ended it! Wonderful story. ~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thank you. :D Finding the right place to end a story is always difficult. I'm so glad you liked this ending. It's especially hard in a preplanned series.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thank you. :D Finding the right place to end a story is always difficult. I'm so glad you liked this ending. It's especially hard in a preplanned series.
Again, lovely chapter. You do a fabulous job at displaying the numerous emotions in this story. I feel the characters really come alive...corny, I know. Anyway, good job!~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thank you. That is the ultimate praise. I know that showing emotions for characters can be hard because different folks see them differently. I'm so glad these characters seem real to you.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thank you. That is the ultimate praise. I know that showing emotions for characters can be hard because different folks see them differently. I'm so glad these characters seem real to you.
And so Lucius's plan starts to unfold...great chapter! Love the story so far! ~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. :D I really do think he would be the type to really scheme something out. He showed so much of that in the books, and it's nice to use it for something positive.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. :D I really do think he would be the type to really scheme something out. He showed so much of that in the books, and it's nice to use it for something positive.
Interesting development! I love the idea with the lotion! Very creative! Wonderful job (as always). ~Jen
Very nice. I like how you didn't have Hermione accept his apology right away and you did a wonderful job on the emotions of the characters. ~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. I definitely think that Hermione would not just blindly accept whatever he has to tell her. This is a very angsty/emotional piece and I'm glad that it came off well. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. I definitely think that Hermione would not just blindly accept whatever he has to tell her. This is a very angsty/emotional piece and I'm glad that it came off well. :)
Aww...poor Hermione! I feel bad for her, but I also kind of think things are going to work out for the best with her and Lucius. I guess I'll have to read on and see. Great job!~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. I know she has a really rough time of things. Ah, the downfall of getting involved with teh intrigue in the Malfoy family. LOL
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. I know she has a really rough time of things. Ah, the downfall of getting involved with teh intrigue in the Malfoy family. LOL
It was a pretty good story. Hermoine not really questioning the lotion bugs me though.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it despite that omission. I guess the thing to remember is that Hermione was raised Muggle, so she may not 100% think like someone raised in a magical family. and when your entire life has been turned upside down, well, sometimes your brain doesn't work right. That's about the only defense I have for that decision.
Great story… I have really enjoyed it; although, I was waiting for complications to arise due to the link caused by the lotion. I’m glad that it turned out to simply be the device Lucius used to remind her how much she needed and desired him. It was also the catalyst allowing Hermione to bring Ginny and then Harry into her confidence. I felt that she could have justified herself more to Harry when he commented that Lucius disowned Draco for having an affair and all the while she and Lucius were having an affair as well. She should have pointed out that Draco had been denying her affection and love while having an affair for years, which caused Lucius to try to ensure that her emotional needs were met, leading to their inevitable affair. I say inevitable, as Lucius’ declaration to Hermione at the end of the story, in which he confessed that he picked her out for Draco because she was exactly whom he would have chosen for himself to marry, which, by the way, is a gesture of love towards Draco. I loved Harry forbidding her to go to Lucius and then going to threaten Lucius, trying to ensure that she not be taken advantage of again. I do believe that Lucius loves her, despite that he may have used some Slytherin tactics to win her… that is who he is and who she has decided to love… for better or worse! (Please don’t come out with some kind of twist in the next part to this story proving this theory wrong! I really like this Lucius who loves Hermione and wants a large family with her. Thanks!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
I figured Hermione had been through enough, and of course Lucius is very interested in having an heir, so he would be very sure that the lotion would not harm mother or child. :D
As for the more explanation, I decided not to get too in depth in that whole saga. Since they were facts we were aware of, i didn't want to get into too much exposition. As she becomes more comfortable with how things have played out, she'll surely bring them more into her confidence.
Harry, I love his protective big brother side. It is so much fun to play with and I did find a perfect way to use it. :)
And yes, Lucius does love her; he just has a very odd way of showing it. This is a very foreign emotion to him, growing up in a society where blood is everything and that you marry the right girl to all of the sudden realizing that it really isn't and living through that societal shift. :)
I think I said it before, but I hope to start work on the final installment soon. :D And thank you again for the wonderful review.
Lucius is gauging his responses well... when will Hermione give in to him?I am enjoying this series, it is definitely something a bit different, as I primarily read Hermione/Severus; however, I must say that I am enjoying Lucius!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Ah, Lucius, I had to try so hard not to make this his story. LOL I find him so much fun to write for as I have a very Slytherin mind.
And I'm glad you enjoy this despite it not being your favored pairing. I think it's nice to try something new now and then. :D
You have done a great job... Hermione reacted just as I expected her to.I wonder what she'll do and I wonder if Draco's new wife will stay with him now that he isn't receiving his inheritence etc.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Hermione's reaction was one of the best parts of writing this story. I can only imagine how it would feel to get stuck in that sort of web and I'm thankful I'm not. LOL
As for Draco, he gets the last installment of the trilogy. :)
Yippee another happy LM/HG fic... I love this couple but then I have a thing for Slytherin bad boys.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thank you very much. I have a soft spot for the pairing, so I will be doing my best to ensure they have a happy ending in anything I put them together in. :D... It's allways good to meet someone else who can't resist those naughty Slytherins.
A wonderful end to this installment of the series. I enjoy your portrayal of everyone. You make Lucius seem human, while still keeping his devious side open. I am looking forward to the story!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks, Jenny. I really did enjoy Lucius here and it would have been so easy for me to delve into his mind. In fact, my first draft really did and I had to force myself to focus more on Hermione. That made it a more fun story for me. And I hope to get to the last one sooner rather than later. :)
Hey there! Sorry I didn't review before, but I read this and thought I'd let you know it was wonderful.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
No worries on the not reviewing. I'm glad that you thought the story was wonderful. It was a lot of fun for me to write.
Thanks for the reconciliation and for giving Harry the chance to start working out his demons. In this universe, anyway, I think Lucius/Hermione deserves a chance. Thanks for the great story! I'll keep an eye out for Draco's POV.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thank you very much. I kind of felt sorry for Harry. He's been hating Lucius for years, and he finally had a really good reason to hate the man and had it yanked out from under him. I just love the Lucius/Hermione pairing, so I will strive to give them a happy ending, but I have muses that you just can't reckon with sometimes.
Ah, that Lucius is a good actor! Well, I hope Hermione is always happy with her choice, and maybe she'll have at least one Gryffindor child. A Malfoy in Gryffindor! Well, I'll be waiting patiently for "Fallen from Glory" where Draco and his stepmum/wife have something wicked fall on them. Thanks for this story!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Oh, June, a Malfoy in Gryffindor I love that idea. I wonder what he would do if that happened. As of now, Hermione thinks that she made the right choice. We'll see how that goes.
You mean I have to be mean to Draco and Phaedra? I think I can do that.
Response from June W (Reviewer)
ahem.... "Fallen from Glory"? It doesn't have to be very long - just enough to kill Draco and Phaedra!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
The stars have aligned and I did actually write the final installment of the fic. As to whether or not I was mean to them, well, you'll have to see. My beta is working on it and I hope to have it back soon. I have waffled between letting Draco find some sort of happiness or being miserable.
Hee hee hee! A very Slytherin thing to do indeed! I loved this chapter! That lotion was a stroke of genius! I love how Lucius got Severus involved! Great job!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks. I really do enjoy trying to come up with really good Slytherin schemes. It makes writing for the Slytherins so much fun. And of course I had to involve Severus. He makes at least a token appearance in just about everything I write.
Great story
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks, I'm having lots of fun playing with characters in this one. Standby for some heavy angst. Well, maybe not heavy any more. But there is still some. :)
I nearly missed the update, but am glad that I found it. I find that I am frustrated with Hermione. He admitted that he cared for her, and she didn't seem to even notice. Lucy-Love could at least pretend to be a bit more affectionate towards her, aside from wanting her body. Silly man. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for updating.
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
The problem is, they both want things there way, and right now, she's nursing her little grudge, and he's quite miffed. Being a smart man, I think he'll figure out he screwed up big time. Question is, can she overcome her hormones? LOL
Glad you enjoyed the update. I'm working on the next chapter.
How can Hermione resist the charms of Lucius?! I know I could not and besides she is having his baby and we know he is a much better prospect than his useless son. I do like how he has been disowned. Ah how many times I have wished for that when I have stumbled across some game or another with an abomination for Draco. What can I say other than it is the Slytherin in me?! As always I really did enjoy the latest instalment of the story and would like to thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. Great chapter and looking forward to the third. Well done once more. KC
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
I loved the disowning, too. I tried to think of the most horrible thing Lucius could do to Draco and that was it. It was fun having petulant brat Draco to play with.
As for Hermione resisting Lucius, well, she's hormonal right now. I think once Lucius realizes that, he'll try to convince her rather than bully her, which he found isn't working.
I do hope to have the third up sometime this week. We'll see how it goes. I have some minor rewriting I need to do. I really need to figure out how I'm going to end the whole thing. LOL
No, Hermione! Not Harry!! Groan... So Lucius didn't remind her that she sometimes said that she wished she were married to him instead of Draco. I do hope she thinks things through; this child is going to one day want to know who his/her father is. Thanks for updating!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
LOL Yeah, going to Harry probably isn't the smartest thing to do, but he's the one contact she has to the Wizarding world that will be kind to her... As for Lucius not reminding her, well, he's a bit distressed, too. And he joins you in hoping that Hermione will calm down and think rationally.
I was so pleased to see you had started the second instalment. Poor Lucius, my heart went out to him and to Hermione really. Draco is such a weed in this, his step mother and he deserve each other. I just pity their child with those two as parents. I wonder how she will take her new husband no longer having the Malfoy name? Badly I hope. I loved it, adored it and can’t wait for chapter two! Thank you for writing and posting chapter one-it is wonderful. ~KC
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks, KC. Yup, poor Lucius and Hermione are on opposite sides of a gulf created by a misunderstanding. Rest assured, he wants to bridge that gap, it's just a matter of figuring out how. LOL
As for Draco and Phaedra, you will learn more about them in the next installment.
Hopefully more will be coming in the next few days.
Heh, this reminds me so much of when I was pregnant with my little ones. I am a very emotionally volatile person anyway, but oh, boy! Pregnancy brought out my more... difficult side at times. Great start to this installment! You rock, as always!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Yup, poor Hermione is in for a rough ride. We've had evidence that she is fairly emotionally volatile, too (the troll in the bathroom, blowing up at Ron, etc), so that's going to play into her behavior. Hopefully she can be made to see reason and that Lucius has the patience to realize she's very hormonal. Glad you enjoyed the first part. :)
I've been looking forward to this story ever since I stumbled onto the first one! I think it'll be fun to hear the story from PregnantHermione's perspective--she'll be somewhat nutty and I'm sure it'll be entertaining. Poor girl. It must tough to be in love with a Malfoy. :-) Great job!
Response from phoenix (Author of The Price of Glory)
Thanks, wildkitty. I'm glad to hear that you have been looking forward to the sequel. I had hoped that it wouldn't take quite this long, but what can you do? I do agree that Hermione's perspective will be quite interesting because she is pregnant. Yes, getting involved with Malfoys is always complex.