Dearest Becky, I so wish I had read this story when you could read my review. I am so sorry this story won't be finished. You will be missed for the joy you provided those of us who lose our selves in these stories to find surcease from the sorrows of real life. I pray for your family that they will find comfort in the fact that you will never be forgotten as long as your stories are here. Rest in peace, dearest. 

Excellent beginning! What an interesting position Hermione finds herself in!  I'm jealous already.  Well done :)

Interesting start.  Curious to see what develops.  Sounds like Hermione has a few stories to tell.

I love this first chapter, and the flashbacks are wonderfully written.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

Beth