Incendio
Chapter 5 of 21
baylor713Witches and wizards have always carried the burden of their allegiances to the dark or to the light. The choice to follow one or the other dictates a person's character. Attica Flamel pays fealty to neither. When grief morphs into an irrepressible need for vengeance, Attica will stop at nothing until the debts are paid.
Attica presumed that for most, nostalgia summoned a pleasurable sensation. Maybe it was like a mindless, balmy escape into more welcoming times. But Attica did not feel that consuming warmth when she remembered her family. Rather, her nostalgia transported her back to the moments surrounding her loss. It was with bitterness that she used the singular, because she could not remember the first loss that had shaken her once-happy life. Her parents, Armand and Isolde Flamel, had died in the wake of the first Wizarding War when Attica had been only a baby. They, too, had fallen victims of Voldemort, who had plans for the Stone. They had shown bravery that none should have expected of them. When the Death Eaters threatened to take them to the lair of the Dark Lord if they did not hand over the Stone, they didn't balk. And when they were in the presence of Voldemort himself, her parents still had not wavered. They had gone bravely to their deaths and had not betrayed the rest of the Wizarding World in their selfish desires to live. Merlin forbid they disappoint Dumbledore, who would later repay their sacrifice by abandoning their only daughter for a scrap of parchment.
They died young and without the privilege of getting to raise their own daughter, but because of their valor, Voldemort had not been able to take a firm hold on life through the Stone that he had no right to anyway. This was a blessing in more ways than one, because there was more to the Stone's power than just keeping a person alive or healing mortal injuries. Obviously, Nicolas and Perenelle had lived centuries beyond even a magical life span, but so few people had met the Flamels that it was not common knowledge that the consistent use of the Elixir derived from the Stone also prevented its users from aging. Nicolas's hair remained a dark chestnut in color and her grandmother's dark eyes had never lost their spark, nor had her hair grayed from its originally lustrous black.
Attica possessed a rare bit of knowledge about the Stone: it gave strength to the person who consumed it. Not physically, of course. Nothing visible would change about the person. But the Elixir of Life shaped already impressive magic into something even more resilient. As a child, her grandfather had impressed upon her the terrifying nature of the Elixir.
And so, Attica assumed that people thought she should have been happy. They probably expected her to be thrilled, even, that the Potter boy had recovered the Stone in their first year. But he had meddled in affairs that he needn't have. What, other than a youthful show of arrogance, had made Potter interfere in her life? Because of him and Dumbledore's impressively blind protection of one child, she was orphaned a second time. "He nearly killed Harry Potter, again, to get it," Dumbledore had said. Why did Potter get a protector so loyal that he was willing to sacrifice the happiness of so many for him while she lost the people she loved most? Where was the justice in that?
Where an all-consuming grief used to occupy a large hole in her chest, she now only felt a defiant urge to watch Harry Potter crumble in front of her. The dam of her grief had burst in her fourth year and morphed into something she considered to be more constructive. She had donned the emerald-stoppered vial containing the Elixir around her neck and less than a week later, the fiery and all consuming desire to witness Potter's destruction had overwhelmed her. She now had the protection of her grandfather's Elixir always near at hand, and it was this assurance that allowed something sinister to surface. She wanted him to feel as hopeless as she had the night when Dumbledore had hesitated aiding in her protection before his exasperated spell had set fire to the only home she had ever known. And she would be the one who made Harry feel the way she had that night if she had to kill Voldemort himself to see the debt paid.
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Attica squeezed the emerald tighter in her fist in a fruitless attempt to drown out the grown-up voices coming from the hall. She stared resolutely at the shadows on the wall cast by the candles and wondered despairingly why the Headmaster wouldn't just go away and let McGonagall handle the Flamels' affairs.
"How sure are you, Severus?" Attica heard Headmaster Dumbledore say in a serious tone.
Professor Snape responded in a tight voice. "When I left, they had already decided that the best course would be to attack tonight. They don't want to waste any time."
"Ah," the Headmaster sighed. "Then we must find the instructions to the Stone quickly."
"We do not have that luxury, Albus. They could arrive at any moment. Get the girl and go," said the Potions Master. He didn't raise his voice, but Attica recognized the impatience. He had often taken a similar tone with her first year Potions class.
"The instructions are too valuable to leave behind. They cannot fall into the wrong hands."
"They are invaluable, yes. But that will be of little consequence to you if the Death Eaters arrive before all of you can escape."
"What is this?" A new voice joined in. "Death Eaters, here? Albus, the girl..." McGonagall's panicked voice trailed off, followed by the unmistakable sound of china shattering on the floor. She had been in the kitchen preparing tea and must have returned in time to hear the tail end of the hushed conversation.
"Yes, Death Eaters," Snape hissed. "Minerva, please fetch a few of the girl's belongings." Brisk steps on the oak stairway told Attica that the Transfiguration professor had wordlessly heeded his request. "You are leaving with the girl, Albus."
"I just need a little more time. It can only be in so many places in this house..." Dumbledore was beginning to sound frantic.
"Dumbledore!" Snape cut in and Attica jumped. It was the first time she had heard the head of Slytherin House raise his voice. Then, his speech resumed its deadly soft quality: "If you will not get that child out of this house, then I will." Attica had been holding her breath during the whole conversation, not daring to imagine how everything would turn out. Suddenly, Professor Snape called to her. "Miss Flamel? Please come into the hall."
The Headmaster and the professor were both exuding a palpable tension that pervaded the grand foyer. Snape's shoulders were set in a straight line, while Dumbledore stood by the stairs, clutching the wooden orb at the end of the bannister. His knuckles were white, and Attica paused in the doorway. She eyed the pale face of the Potions Master where he stood, imperious, before the older man.
"Albus, I'm taking her to the rendezvous point we discussed. Tell Minerva to meet us there with the girl's things."
"Severus..."
"No. You and Minerva could stand an attack. The Death Eaters wouldn't touch me without the Dark Lord's explicit orders to do so. But this child would not come out of the struggle unscathed. I will not stand for it. You would not hesitate if this were Harry." Irritation colored Snape's features, and his lip curled with disgust as he placed emphasis on the name. Dumbledore looked stricken by the Potions Master's words.
Snape grabbed her wrist and pulled her out of the house, tugging Attica to the field on the other side of the road. When Attica finally looked back, Dumbledore and McGonagall both stood in the front yard.
"Incendio," she heard Dumbledore roar into the quiet night.
Attica looked up at Snape uncomprehendingly and no tears fell then. She was too shocked to cry. And a part of her was still afraid of the emotionless professor, but as he regarded the child in front of him, Attica swore that something in his face softened briefly. Then, he wordlessly picked her up and began to fly. As they rose above the small village, Attica could not rip her gaze from the flames and continued to stare at the destruction over the black shoulder of her protector.
"Do not look back," she heard him murmur softly. It was the softness in his voice that consoled her only slightly, and she was able to tear her eyes from her burning home in the distance. Attica buried her face in the black wool of her unshakable Potions Master's cloak. She vaguely noted that he smelled of cardamom.
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So much progress has been made since Attica wrote her goodbye letter to Neville, and much more needs to be made before all is said and done, I think. I happy that Neville will not give up on her and will be with her from now on.
Now I find myself wondering what Severus is doing and whether he has found peace.
Thank you for this very intricate and well plotted tale.
Beth
sad that attica been wearing a horcrux all this years.. that her thought were evil in nature.. hope they can destroyed it.. great narrative of her thought, imagines..
the evil emerald is like controling attica.. onward to find what severus on this new dilemma..
weird that attica's drak mark is darker, but not severus! onward to see if answered will be shown...
why didn't the curse work! what going to happen to attica, now? happy that voldie was killed.
She not afraid of Bellatrix! Now, she apart of the inner circle of voldmort's followers! She feel what voldmort's emotion, wonder has she share with severus or albus.. love learning the background of attica..
maybe attica is spy like severus..
onward to see what next...
Lovely chapter, with this turn of, or rather, arrival of and realization that his act of kindness has reverberated and affected her on levels unknown during all this time.... Hmm... the depth and profoundness of Severus' effect on her and in her life seems to have been underestimated and still to be fully revealed--although, a part of me is a bit wary about how such an intertwined horcrux could be destroyed without destroying the vessel *biting nails* Baylor, I know you could take this tale one way or another, so... Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
'The force that had convinced her that it was necessary to kill an innocent person was dark and savage and absolutely evil, but it had been bred in her own heart.'.. so powerful and provocative and profound are her torturous thoughts she is continuously being berated by--both she and Severus have had their paths guided by forces beyond their control and carried along on the currents of events... but this truth that is controlling and guiding her? Whose truth will it be, hers or alone, or shared with another? Lovely, lovely work!
Love this memory of the past, a rare glimpse and insight into a shared exchange between Attica and Severus that she is able to have her own connection with unhindered or untainted by Voldemort. There is a profound connection and understanding between Severus and Attica that is captured, and which seems to accentuate both's emotional wounds and hesitancy and delicateness--lovely, lovely work!
The narrative is so full of concise, poignant and powerful moments and realizations, such as (one of many) 'Feeling like she was someone other than the person she had been all her life, someone dark.' I just love experiencing both Attica's and Severus' revelations and inner-thoughts--the heaviniess, horror, sympathy and empathy is so very moving... Lovely, powerful work--looking forward to more and more!
There are four entities in that study, and only one of them deserves to die— and he entombed himself in the emerald. I hope Vlodemort is experiencing many times the agony that Attica, McGonegall, and Severus have felt over all the years that the Dark Lord has been terrorizing the world.
I very much hope that the remaining three of them will be left alive and well!! Pretty please?
Thank you for this wonderful chapter. I'm looking forward to the next update.
Beth
My heart is breaking for Attica. I'm glad that Severus was able to talk to long enough for her to recall some happy memories–he had drowned out the whisperings of Voldemort.
I hope Minerva arrives with Gryffindor's sword soon!
Beth
Plausible and well-written. Particularly without a beta. Any more? Unpredictable and fresh.
Great chappie! ;)) nice opening shot!
I think Severus and Attica have a long, hard slog ahead of them as they try to make things right– individually and together. I hope he will try to discover more of her memories. It would be a very uncomfortable thing for Attica, and I can envision her trying to stop him simply because of the lasting effects that harboring Voldemort's Horcrux for so many years has caused, but I'm afraid she will fall back into trying to do the Dark Lord's will instead of what her own unaffected heart would choose to do.
Hopefully Minerva will be able to quickly arrange for the destruction of this remnant of Voldemort's soul. And hopefully it is the last remnant.
I can't wait for your next update.
Beth
Brilliant chapter in revealing the state of things and poor Attica's dilemma... Love Severus control and Attica's struggle. Looking forward to more of this intriguing, original tale!
I enjoyed reading about Attica's memories of her first class with the Potions Master. Her bravery to stand her ground with him in class made me smile right along with the Professor.
The extracting fluid had begun as a pearly ivory liquid but had changed to a pale red by the end of the third week. Perhaps the the fact that they got a convoluted, murky brown color by treating that last test tube with sap from the juniper bush doesn't mean that they hadn't learned anything from the test. Although Attica was disappointed that it hadn't turned red like the ruby or blue like the sapphire she had written on her list of possible components, maybe the emerald stopper had reacted with the liquid. If you mix red and green in the right ratios you can create various shades of brown. Perhaps ruby is one of the components, after all. And with amber being another ingredient, that could have further influenced the formation of a muddy color tending toward brown.
Did she neglect to roll up her sleeves because she didn't want him to see that her Dark Mark was turning darker? He did comment that she seemed quite attached to the vial– I wonder what Severus was thinking when she replied only that she needed it as she left the room.
Hummmm... lots of clues here, but I'm not quite sure what is what and how they fit together. Thanks for a wonderful chapter!
Beth
There is something so poignant, and yet, harrowing about Attica's grandmother's rhymes--it stikingly contrasts her childhood innocence with the dire reality of what has happened to her when older...
Loved her first day in Snape's class and that his lips turned upward--HA! So Severus is aware of how she must have the vial with her at all times... Looking forward to more!
It's a truly horrid realization that her Dark Mark has only darkened... One can feel her level of distress as she compares Severus' mark to hers. Brilliant writing, brilliant story! Looking forward to more!
Bloody hell! The emerald is another one of Voldemort's Horcruxes, isn't it? If that is so, then in trying to recreate the Stone, they may actually be bringing the Dark Lord back...
I did NOT see this coming. Well done, baylor!
Beth
Reading this chapter gave me the shivers and made me sad at the same time. I don't know if the voice Attica hears is really Voldemort's or just a cruel figment of her imagination, but I'm hoping like the dickens that it is Severus who has broken the wards. Please let it be him!
Beth
OMG! I'm glad Attica's curse didn't kill Harry, but I'm not sure why. What's going to happen to her now? Please let Neville or Severus or McGonagall find her before something horrible happens to her.
I hope the next chapter updates soon!!!
Beth
I was glad to see Attica show her emotions when Neville stepped forward to stand up to Voldemort. When the Sorting Hat settled over his eyes and she just caught the look of utter fear on his face, it gave me hope for her that she allowed the tears to fall.
If she were to try to kill Voldy now, he wouldn't really die, would he? Nagini is a horcrux, too. I guess she doesn't know that yet.
Good chapter!
Beth