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Potions Under Duress Unintended Consequences
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Unintended Consequences

Wolfpack89

18 Reviews   |   18 Ratings, 0 Likes, 18 Favorites )

Humor Romance Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 5,913 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus is lonely. Hermione is confused. What happens when a student's spell goes astray?

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8/10

madpip

Sweet and sexy

10/10

breastlady

Delightful story! I love magic! It could have been a case of serendipty or fate, but for Severus and Hermione's sake I'm so happy she was in the wrong place at the right time. 
(However, even though it had a happy ending that little twat deserves to be hexed with something humiliating for casting that spell as a lesson to him and any other students who think to cast a love spell at anyone else. It could have turned out to be awful. I hope he harbors no smugness believing he brought those two together.)

9/10

Bettina

Had it not been for David Hopkins, those two would have danced around each other for years. They should probably thank him, but the only thank they could imagine would be a set of prime lessons in Charms or Potions. Would he appreciate it? Many thanks for such a nice story!

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

Thank you so much for the review.  It is greatly appreciated.

10/10

missblue

Awwww! Now they can be happy! Hooray!

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

I love a happy Hermione and Severus.  Especially Severus ;)Thanks for the review!

0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

Cute story! I wonder if the kid who shot the hex ever put two and two together? Lol

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

Hmmmm.  My guess would be that he wouldn't put it together right away, because kids that age are so self-absorbed.  Maybe after graduation Professor Granger would fill him in as a thank you!

10/10

breastlady

Yes. I quite agree. That is the proper epilogue for the HP series. As if Hermione could be content with Ronald Weasley. And, as if Severus Snape wouldn't have previously contemplated the possibility of being attacked by Voldemort's familiar and made preparation for the event. The only logical possible explanation would have been if she had told us that he had a death wish and allowed himself to die on purpose. Otherwise it was completely unSnape-like. She says she had always planned the ending she chose, but I had thought she might have just been having pregnancy hormones making her mentally and emotionally unstable which gave her the desire to kill off as many of the characters she could get away with without having Voldemort actually winning the war. 

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

Yes, I never understood why she killed off so many characters in a children's book series (not that many adults weren't hooked too).  I would also have thought it would be a good lesson on redemption for Snape to live.... Ah, well.  Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

0/10

Phyllidia

Awwww how sweet.  Loved it! It made me smile (and giggle a bit too).

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

Thanks so much.  It made me giggle a little too ;)

10/10

braye27

This is such an adorable story!  After all is said and done, I think we should all thank that idiot boy Hopkins for doing such a poor job of aiming his hex.Well done!Beth

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

Thank you so much for the review.  Glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

sunny33

Cheers for wayward hexes! :)

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

And Cheers for reviews!  Thank you.

10/10

MsTree

Very cute! I think you should write more SSHG stories. You definitely have a calling. ^_^

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

Thank you so much for the review.  It makes it all worthwhile to know that someone out there actually liked it! ;)

8/10

ladyljd

What a delightful tale.  I'm still smiling stupidly as I write this.  I loved it!

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

Thank you so much for the review.  I smiled stupidly as I wrote it, too! ;)

0/10

amr

I wish this had been the epilogue, too!  (Except I doubt Rowling's publishers would have let her get away with "tits up" and all the tented trousers.)  Very nice indeed.  You should write more stories.

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

Lol!  No I don't think she would have included those phrases either, but it's nice to dream!  Thanks for the lovely review.

8/10

sydney73588

Great story, especially for a first attempt. Hope you will keep writing.

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

Thanks so much for the encouragement!

0/10

tenoh27

Adorabl and sweet, thank you!

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

Thank you very much.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

articcat621

Awh!! I absolutely love this! It certainly made me smile. For your first attempt at fanfiction, this was fabulous! xx

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

Thank you so much!  I'm glad it made you smile :)

10/10

snapesbeatrice

Aw, I enjoyed this story. Well done!

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

Thank you so much!

0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

Cute story! I wonder if the kid who shot the hex ever put two and two together? Lol

10/10

Sampdoria

Smashing story, I loved it:-))

Response from Wolfpack89 (Author of Unintended Consequences)

So glad you loved it!  Thanks for the review!

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