...Half-Dozen (of an Epilogue)
Chapter 7 of 7
dracontiaI know, I know--there's more to say about these characters. It's just that this story isn't the place for it. If I get the time, I promise, there's more where this came from.
Reviewed...Half-Dozen (of an Epilogue)
Disclaimer: Oh, come on. I may dress up as Draco Malfoy on certain select, appropriate, occasions, but I am not delusional...I know they're not mine and I know better than to ask for pay to write this.
The last term was over; the Seventh Year students, no longer students, were running about the grounds, shouting and carrying on and generally reveling in their freedom in ways that made them resemble First Years. One of them...then another...ran away from the celebration rather than toward it, away from the families waiting to congratulate their grown children and collect them from school for the final time.
A familiar bit of tapestry, a familiar corridor. By now, Scorpius knew all the places to look for Rose. It helped, he was fairly certain, that she wanted to be found by him.
"Mum's going to kill me," Rose wailed. Scorpius winced. Her distress was much more impressive at eighteen than it had been at eleven.
"She'll come around," Scorpius soothed. "It'll be hard not to, with your dad over the moon and all."
"She won't even want to look at me," Rose mourned.
"Well, that's better than homicide, right?" Rose shot him an angry look made more dire by her reddened eyes. "I'm not doing this right," Scorpius fretted. "Look... I'm really happy right now. I'm first string, and my best Beater ever is going to be watching my back. But, I could be even happier... that is... Um... The least I can do..." He shuffled his feet, then dropped to one knee so hard on the stone floor that he winced. "Ow. Sorry. Rose, would you...What I meant to say is, a few years ago...around seven, or eight, I guess... I said you could stay with me, if you wanted to." He cleared his throat and reached into his pocket... only this time, instead of a handkerchief, he brought out a tiny box. "Now, um... I'm asking again."
Rose's mouth hung open rather comically for a few seconds. "Is that...?"
Scorpius hurriedly opened it lest there be any misunderstanding and almost dropped the tiny ring. "It's not very big...I had to borrow against my first paycheck, but I can get you a bett..." His words were cut off by a hug...more of a flying tackle, really.
"You'd think I'd be used to it by now," he gasped. Sometime while he was trying to recover his breath from the glomp and accompanying kiss, Rose had apparently got the ring on her finger.
"Are you kidding," she murmured, all trace of earlier upset gone. "This ring is never leaving my finger. Not even during a game." Her eyes widened and she suddenly grasped the front of his robe. "Oh... what will Dad say? He's only just got used to the idea of...well...us."
"He'll come around," Scorpius said. Rose was enough like her mother that she'd take it amiss to know Scorpius had asked permission to propose, in proper traditional fashion. It would not do at all to mention that not only had Scorpius received permission, he'd received no fewer than three letters in as many weeks from the Weasley father in question...embellished with many colorful turns of expression but whose gist was that Scorpius had better assemble sufficient stones to hand over one attached to an engagement ring for Rose.
An unearthly WHOOP sounded through the corridor, and a near-dangerous blast of fireworks interrupted Rose's attempt to reward Scorpius' apparent bravado with another kiss. "CHAMPAGNE TIME!" Al shouted.
"Albus Severus Potter! You are still a bloody, clumsy, interrupting troll!" Rose yelled.
Rose wouldn't be Rose if she couldn't change moods on a sickle to berate Al... any more than Al would be himself without being able to interrupt a tender moment, Scorpius thought with fond exasperation.
"Yeah, yeah, second verse, same as the first," Al waved it off. "Come on, you two have a lifetime to snog and such. Right now, you've an engagement party to attend, without the old folks to rain on your parade and with a couple dozen of your closest friends and classmates. Here, let me get you started." Al handily conjured a trio of champagne flutes from thin air and began pouring from the bottle he had with him...a rather decent bottle, if Grandmother's lessons in choosing festive drinks amounted to anything. "A toast--to my best mate marrying my best cousin!"
Scorpius took a sip and decided that champagne was rotten stuff, regardless of what it cost. Rose seemed happy with it though, so he took another sip and schooled his grimace into a smile. Al also wouldn't be Al if he wasn't throwing around money and status symbols... Scorpius reflected, with considerably more exasperation.
"Look, I already borrowed from you to get the ring. I don't want you to put yourself out anymore," Scorpius said quite firmly.
"Borrowed... this isn't family jewelry?" Rose clutched at her ring, her expression conflicted. She was still sensitive about their respective family histories. Scorpius decided that he ought to have listened to Cousin Molly's advice about proposing and write it all out beforehand, lest there be any misunderstandings. It was quite amazing, really, that he'd managed to surprise Rose with his proposal; the entire Weasley family seemed to know about it within a week of Scorpius buying the ring. Al attributed this to the fact that it was meant to be a huge secret.
"It's not like that, Rose. Grandmother's betrothal ring is a baroque pearl, and she said it would never survive a game of Quidditch. She's having it re-set into a brooch you can wear at the wedding. This is a ruby...practically indestructible. Besides, you can't have a pearl rose-cut." Her smile returned, and Scorpius breathed a sigh of relief. "Father and Mum are perfectly happy that we should use the family wedding rings for the ceremony." Scorpius still wished the wedding rings weren't available. It didn't matter that Father and Mum seemed content, and Mum was still at the Manor more often than not. Scorpius would always feel that Healer Pye...he couldn't think of him as Gus any more...had taken Mum away.
As usual, Al broke up his clouded thoughts before they had time to gather rain. "No worries, brother...I'd make a gift of it if you and Rose would let me, and the party's a group effort."
"There you go, 'brothering' again," Rose said. "You do realize that Scorpius is actually going to be a full-on, genuine cousin as soon as we're married, don't you? Are you the only one who gets to promote people to 'family'?" She sounded more amused than annoyed, though. Scorpius didn't understand Al's latest eccentricity, himself; he supposed it had something to do with American slang that James had brought home from his trip abroad, since that's when Al had first adopted it.
Al breezed on as if Rose hadn't spoken. "James is letting us use Grimmauld for the party, we passed the hat in the Common Room for the champagne, and Fred made up the difference. I didn't ask whether it was out of his own pockets or Uncle George's."
Al was wise not to ask too many questions where Cousin Fred's money was concerned. Apprenticing as Dragon Tamer with Uncle Charlie...it was far easier to think of everyone in the terms Al or Rose used, there were far too many Mr. Weasleys to distinguish between, otherwise...had certainly worked out all of Fred's aggression issues. It hadn't done anything to improve his taste in friends. Scorpius vividly remembered the resulting awkwardness when Uncle Ron was forced to arrest a certain fugitive dealer in flying carpets who'd been Fred's guest last Christmas. Grandmum Molly had pitched a fit more impressive than Uncle George's fireworks, and Scorpius still couldn't tell if it was because Fred had brought a wanted felon into her home or because Uncle Ron had only taken him as far as the front walk to arrest him.
"You were a lot surer that I was," Scorpius marveled. He really shouldn't be surprised at it, after all these years, but he still was. Al bloody well knew everything.
"You don't give yourself enough credit, brother." Al punctuated it with a grin and a clap on the back.
"Training dragons with Uncle Charlie certainly sorted him out," Rose said. Clearly, she was deliberately ignoring Al's eccentricities. "Still, he ought to have finished school before taking it up as a profession. Speaking of professions... Dangerous Creature Hunting? Really, Al?"
"Fred definitely looks better on a dragon than they ever looked on him," Al joked. They flinched collectively at the memory of some of the awful dragonhide outfits Fred used to wear. "And I'm only working for Aunt Luna temporarily." Only Scorpius knew that Al planned to become a Hit Wizard once he reached the minimum mandatory age of twenty-one. Scorpius still regarded this as one of Al's most questionable ideas...somewhere well worse than lunch consisting entirely of candy, though still a bit of an improvement on 'borrowing' a hippogriff. He had an inkling why Al wanted to do it, but honestly, there were easier ways to gain practical experience if one wished to become a Defense Against Dark Arts professor...
"Even so," Rose said. Disapproving of Fred was a difficult habit for Rose to break. It didn't help that, while Fred was quite tolerable these days, one still had to be very, very, careful where one sat when he was about. "Scorpius might have gone professional at the start of this Quidditch season, but he had the sense to stay on and get his NEWTs."
"You haven't told her, have you?" Al grinned...and very sensibly, ran like hell, laughing all the way. Scorpius may have been quicker to the Snitch, but no one could evade a hex, jinx, or curse like Al. It all but broke Mr. Potter's heart that he wasn't entering Auror training. He was a natural.
Still, it didn't stop Scorpius from chasing after him, firing appropriately annoying hexes, none of which landed. He turned to find that Rose had kept right up with him.
"Told me what? Scorpius?" she asked, panting slightly.
Better she find out now, in case she wants to give back the ring, Scorpius thought. "I... I was going to take the offer from the Magpies. They were offering a ton more money than the Canons... a signing bonus, even. I figured that I could even manage a few NEWTs if I studied on my own between games. A couple of other teams made offers nearly as good. I mean, there are still repairs Father can't afford yet, and we've always hoped to buy back some of the land we had to sell. I could have. They offered that much. But you see... they weren't willing to take on my favorite Beater as well." Scorpius took both her hands in his. It was still a marvel to him that those small, neat hands could wield a Beater's bat to such wicked effect. "The Cannons were the only team who liked us both, and the team owner would rather we started next season than leave school early. Said it would set that example for his niece, who's a third year."
Rose stared for what seemed an eternity. "Let me get this straight," she said very slowly. Scorpius braced himself for a dashing of all his dreams, with a homily on his intellectual deficiencies besides. "You gave up enough money to pay all your family's debts and the chance to play on one of the premier teams in the league... to play for the Cannons, with me... and you weren't even sure I would say 'yes?'" He voice rose higher and higher.
"Well, I did make sure you weren't really keen on the Harpies' offer before I turned the rest down flat," he said meekly.
As many times as he and Rose had kissed... from the first sweet, awkward, nose-bumping occasion at their first formal ball to the time Scorpius actually grasped, for the first time, the practical definition of snogging... Scorpius now understood that they hadn't REALLY kissed until just this moment. There was no magic like this anywhere in the curriculum, certainly. He was floating somewhere amid bright clouds and wondering if Rose would be willing to skip the engagement party and go somewhere with decidedly more privacy than Grimmauld Place when her voice brought him back to earth.
"Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy," Rose whispered, punctuating each of his names with another kiss, "I am going to love you until the day I die. And I am never going to be convinced that you should not have been in Hufflepuff."
A thread of humor sneaked its way through Scorpius' euphoria. He beamed at her, not interested in relinquishing his grin any time soon. "Funny you should say that..."
FIN
Note: Yes, the word 'Houses' in the title refers to both family and Sorting. I can't resist that sort of thing. Also, the title probably represents the nadir of my chapter-titling career.
I have a few days off sickroom duties, so I'm attempting to put them to good use. Next stop: answering reviews. Actually, next stop is catching up on the laundry and paying bills, but I think I can slip in a few review responses. Thank you all for the kind wishes! :)
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58 Reviews | 5.95/10 Average
Very fitting jump to the engagement between Rose and Scorpius . That two will go far once their sporting careers have ended.
I like how Al is still a mischief-maker with his friends.
Thanks for writing and I do hope you write more regarding this trio during their school and later years.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you! I scribble a little in my notebooks when I have a chance. Someday I may even get it into the computer.
Lovely drabble chapter. Scorpius likes his sleep then? lol
Hope your family medical emergency has been resolved - happily that is.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you most kindly! I'm afraid the emergency is now a chronic condition--which means I'm on caretaking duty about half the week and playing catch-up the rest. Catching up on review responses is one of the more pleasant things.
Oh the sorting - what fun!
Well think if Rose is sending her parents a letter then she better expect a howler from her dad. Her Mum I think will be much more diplomatic. after all Hermione did respect Snape and recognised his work as a spy for the order.
Snape speaking out from behind a green curtained portrait was spectacularly amusing and the thought of the image keeling over at the hearing Rose and Als names. priceless.
Loved this chapter for many reasons but especially for the painting of Snape.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Rose's parents, much like her precocious self, may yet prove full of surprises. After all, Ron was only joking (though he had no idea that he needed to be!) Snape is still irked at me for making his identity so apparent, but once he sees how well Scorpius, Rose, and Al contribute to the honor of the House, heill forgive me. Eventually. <--Snape has actually got over it, but is still keeping up appearances a while longer.Thank you for all the kind reviews!
I do not like this Fred or his back up silent guard. What a nasty thing to do to Scorpius on the dock.
I think this little brave trio are going to cause Hogwarts Teachers lots of trouble. Also their parents if they are sorted into houses they do not approve. But it will be fun watching and learning what they get up to next.
Another fine chapter.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Fred has many issues of his own which the adults will have to address in 'Recovery Continues.' All hope is not lost for making a solid citizen of him.These three could very well manage what an army of Death Eaters failed to do. Hopefully Hogwarts has a good insurance policy!
What a lot of information is revealled in this chapter.
The children seem to not be aware of much information regarding the last war and how their familys faught .
I felt for Scorpius when the card of his father came up for scrutiny. The poor boy and then thinking he had to leave and lose the new friends he thought he had just found.
The sharing of the lunches and treats from the trolly was very endearing and showed how they each wanted to help the other.
I could imagine the scene of the three sets of shoes toe to toe in a little triad or in the shape of a three pronged wheel.
I love al. He just loves to give hugs without any compunction to think. Scorpius seems to be likening them and the little half squeeze Rose gave him too at the end. Oh so sweet.
I hold my hands up in the air. I cannot believe I am really enjoing this fic. I usually go straight to the more sensual stories surrounding Snape with any pairing but this trio of little Wizards has captured my attention.
Off to read more and I shall endeavour to review when I can.
Thanks for writing this endearing story - well it is for now at least lol.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
I'm glad you so enjoyed them! I find that I quite love writing the misadventures of the younger set, as much if not more than the madcap comedies that were my original specialty.
Memories of the first meeting between Ron, Hermione and Harry seem to be mirrored in this chapter.
I do like how Al appears to take a likening to Scorpius first then Rose, who seems to be more reserved.
The way Scorpius keeps telling himself off or reminding himself not to stutter makes me wonder why he is afflicted this and whom has been berating him to stop it. The poor wee lad.
I also noticed the reference to Scorpius mother wishing to become a wolf hope this was not too much of a shock for him to take this all in.
Really enjoying your story.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
A certain amount of parallelism was indeed intended in this chapter. As for Scorpius' speech impediment, his anxiety mainly resjults from him picking up on the worries of the adults around him: after all, unless a magical child is some sort of prodigy at non-verbal spellcasting, a stutter may leave him or her essentially a Squib. Fortunately, Scorpius is well on track to having the friends and the resilience to deal with any situation. Thanks very much for reviewing!
I looked at the synopses to this story and thought - perhaps not my cup of tea. but decided to read the first couple of chapters. I have come back to review the first chapter.
I do like the way you have portraid Scorpious and how it appears his family have fallen on hard times. The little wooden carved owl in his inside pocket is a sweet little addition.
I am enjoying this story very much to my surprise. This is due to your writing and fantastic story telling that has ensnared me.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
I have to warn you--if I have a reputation in the fandom for anything other than comedy, it's for getting people to enjoy subjects/pairings/premises that they 'don't normally do.' Thank you kindly for reviewing, and I hope to provide continual pleasant surprises! :)
Lovely ending indeed. It's so nice to see how the three of them have grown up but are still so recognisable themselves. I do wonder though what the Slytherin aspects of Scorpius are because he still seems pretty much 'what you see is what you get". But it might be his natural feeling for decorum and tradition that still works well with the House.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you! As for Scorpius... well, as the Hat said, he has an interesting ambition. Becoming his Best Self for the good of others is quite possibly the loftiest ambition Slytherin has ever seen. I always thought that old Slughorn was probably closest to what the average Slytherin is like: a networker extraordinaire with rather old-fashioned attitudes who doesn't let prejudices (even if he secretly harbors a few) prevent him from cultivating relationships with people who can get him what he wants. In Slughorn's case, he was a harmless opportunist angling for bragging rights and creature comforts.In Scorpius' case, he also happens to be a shrewd judge of character who can tell a good boss from an indifferent one--and really, more than anything else, he wanted Rose.(Of course, there is also the tiny detail that Scorpius is quite literally a highly dramatic walking, talking, living secret, in case an element of subtlety is an essential Slytherin trait! )
love ending.. great job!
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you very much!
lovely. I really do like where your world has gone. Don't quit - RL is hard sometimes, but feel free to continue to play with these kids
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thanks very much! I'll be chipping away at the side stories as possible--there's a bit of a RL update on dracfic (my livejournal) for all those who offered their good wishes.
Sorry for not reviewing earlier but I do hope your family circumstances have improved since you left that message for us. And do take your time, RL and especially family is more important than ff. And if there is anyting I can do apart from sending you good vibes, please let me know.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
No need to apologize! It's a special effort to take the time to leave any sort of review, and I always appreciate it. In addition to the now-posted epilogue, there's a bit of a RL update on dracfic (my livejournal) for all those who offered their good wishes. Thank you most kindly.
sorry about the family medical emergency. will keep your family in my thoughts and prayers. nellie.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you kindly! In addition to the story epilogue posted here, there's a bit of a RL update on dracfic (my livejournal) for all those who offered their good wishes.
i love this story so much, it's the second time i'm reading. alas, i'm not able to write like you and do a fuller story. i think if jkr is done with the characters, you should be able to spin them off,.... just like little women had little men etc. i love your portrayal of the next gen!
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you kindly! As for spinning off characters, I think I would rather write something altogether original; but I'm glad to know that my writing exercises are entertaining in the meantime.
Wait, wait.... did they tell Scorpius his mum is trying to become a wolf Animagus instead of telling him she is a werewolf? That's really a lie born out of love and protection and I am oddly touched by this.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
It almost seems like it would be safe to tell him, doesn't it; after all, the new Wolfsbane is so easy and effective, lycanthropy is becoming the smallpox of the wizarding world--a scourge that is well on its way to being vaccinated out of existence. And yet, no one can think of a good way to explain when she became infected... so the gentle lie stands. It was nice to see someone pick up on that bit.
Like all other reviewers I really hope you will continue. There is so much more I want to know: how their parents react to their sorting, how the rest of the school reacts, how their friendship develops, if they will visit each other over the Christmas hols and how, much later, Scorpius will hear that Al is his half brother. But that might be something for a sequel of Harry and Draco's story.
Response from orlando switch (Reviewer)
And something else, is there any chance we will get to see more of that letter that Scorpius has written to his parents and Narcissa? You capture his voice so well, it's such a joy to read. And I hope we will see the response from his parents too.Don't get me wrong, all the children are spot on, but somehow, Scorpius has some special place in my heart. I thought about it yesterday and I really think he has some traits of Harry that shine through his formal upbringing. His spontanious invitation of Rose to live with him was something Harry would do (and we have seen him doing it with Grimmault place in several fanfiction stories) and the careful way he phrases it in his letter to his parents is definitely his upbringing.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you very kindly! I'm sorry, but there will be only one more tiny drabble and an epilogue to this story; the tiny bit is going up tonight. I do have a couple of one-shot side stories with the children and/or the adults in their lives, and at least bits of Scorpius' letter might make an appearance somewhere. I can't give any time frame for when it will all see daylight, since life will not permit me much writing time for the foreseeable future. Once again, thank you for the encouragement. Hopefully I will be able to revisit all of this someday.
Response from orlando switch (Reviewer)
O and I forgot to add, Scorpius is such a dear. I really hope Daco will inform Harry about Scorpius letter so that he can inform Hermione that Rose is really worried that her sorting in Slytherin won't be accepted by Ron.
Oh dear, I hope there'll be more chapters than only an epilogue! I've just fallen in love with this three little characters and I'd like very much to read more about them. Especially Scorpius is really cute: She oughtn’t cost much to keep. She doesn’t seem to eat much and she already has her wand and all her books. I promise you will all like her, especially you, Mum. She is very smart and responsible.What kind of reaction will his parents have? It's perhaps good that his grandfather is a peacock... Can peacocks faint, I wonder?
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Can peacocks faint, I wonder?We might just find out... While I really must close this story with the epilogue (almost... done... writing...) I have at least one or two more small snapshots which will hopefully find their way into the archive as one-shots in the near future. Thank you for reviewing!
Assuming Minerva is Headmistress, I see we still have two Gryffs running the school. Nothing against Longbottom, but they couldn't find a Ravenclaw or a Hufflepuff? Why don't they just change the name to 'Gryffindor School of Witchcraft and Wizardry'? All of which, by the way, is very much in line with the state of the wizarding world we saw in the Dreaded Epilogue, the starting point of your story. Good job.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
I'm still debating whether Professor McGonagall remained Headmistress (only seen temporarily occupying that station in canon) or whether she would have retired by the time of the epilogue, like Professor Sprout. My instincts are to pick a leader from a different house for purposes of balance, but my instinct for balance plainly does not correspond with the source material. I've toyed with the idea of Professor Vector (female, as per out-of-book canon) being in the top spot. Her House is unknown, but I always imagined it to be Ravenclaw, as Arithmancy strikes me as one of the most academic of magical disciplines. Thank you kindly for reviewing!
No! Keep going - I'm loving this! Besides, i want to see Ron having kittens over Rosie!Love the story. Keep writitng.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
I'm afraid this one will probably have to wrap up with the epilogue--but there are a couple more little episodes that may yet see the light of day as one-shots, and who knows what plot bunnies may pop up even later? Thank you, as always, for reviewing!
This was a pretty good read - I've enjoyed all chapters of your story very much! I'm somewhat confused about Fred's very aggressive attitude, however. It has to be a result of bad influence from his parents, especially from his father, I suppose (who's his mother, by the way?). Or should his length play a role in this?Whatever, I'm looking forward to the Sorting Ceremony now!
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
The adults in the family are looking into a solution (and the cause) of Fred's issues in another work that isn't quite ready for prime time yet. Thanks for reviewing!
I really love where you're taking your story. Keep up the good work!!!
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you! I'll scramble about in the old brain box to see if there's any more good work to be had.
awww.... is the story finished? this story is so brilliantly fleshed out.
Response from jadecadence (Reviewer)
i hope you'll choose slytherin for them!
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thanks for reviewing! There is a bit more, just working out a few more details. As for the children, they'll have to choose for themselves! (that's how you can tell if you've written a character right--they run off with the story without consulting you...)
Okay, these kids, how you are writing them, are absolutley adorable. Scor is quick with his hands - a real Seeker in the making, if he can get a decent broom. James is a great big brother to Al, his caring is so evident. Freddy is a brek-jerk and needs a swift kick in teh pants and Molly/Grandma shoudl be told of his hostility/bully attitude. The one I stll have in my heart is your Scorpius. I did like Hagrid's reaction. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
As to Scorpius getting a decent broom--Al started scheming how to accomplish THAT before Scorpius even considered trying out (possibly before they made it across the lake). I swear, P.T. Barnum had nothing on that kid... As to Fred, the grownups in his life have rather failed him up until now, but there's a family conference happening in another file on my hard drive that intends to turn him around.Dear Hagrid; he may not be quite professor material, but if you're looking for the benefit of the doubt, he's one of the first places to look.
Every tme you posta chapter I end up rereading "In Your Debt" and falling in love with it all over again. What a great story! (What great stories!?) I eagerly and rather impatiently await the next chapter. Thank youQ
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you most kindly. I'm working on a wrap-up to this one right now (though Ron had a few things to say and has sidetracked me into writing something from his perspective. I do hope no one else has their two knuts to throw in, or I'll be pulling some very late nights!)
Rose compared to Miss Piggy - Oh that's hilarious! I'm really loving Scorp. Scor. There that's a nickname. lol Al is adorable. I admit that I was as baffled and confused by all the dialogue in the beginning and swimming (likehe was) trying to sort it all out, who was saying what, and who was whom to who, and then it was only the three of them. When Scor thought 'I'm not even at school yet nad I have two friends,' I almsot cheered!
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I shall go over the opening dialogue again, perhaps there's some way to sort it out better. It's a challenge to avoid giving Scorpius knowledge which he would have no way of obtaning, just to make it easier to write!
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
GODS NO!!! NO Don't Change a THIng!! NO!!! It was what made it so memorable, you could feel his confusionand were stumbling along with him, and you could then feel what he does. DON't Change It! No! NONONONONONONONONONONONONO!It works, really it does. that was in no way a complaint. It's actually brilliant and as I said, you follow along and feel his confusion and wonder, and it's all like - I connceted with him. Leave it alone!I really am enjoying this story and very much look forward to more.
I am really loving your Scorpius, he's absolutely an adorable boy, and so lonely that it tugs at my heart.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you! I hadn't planned to elaborate on this universe, but Scorpius asked so nicely, I hadn't the heart to refuse him.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Yeah! More... I'll ahve to go ask him to plead agian nicely! I really want more of this. I really am enjoying it very much.