Four the Win
Chapter 4 of 7
dracontiaThere's no such thing as coincidence--especially for wizards.
ReviewedChapter 4: Four the Win
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Al gave Scorpius' wrist another quick squeeze. This time he felt the hilt of Scorpius' wand. "Say, I just thought of something!" Al absolutely radiated excitement. "You said that your wand belonged to your dad... and the card says that his wand defeated Voldemort... so..."
"No way," Rose breathed. "Let's see it again."
Scorpius felt another shiver. This time, though, it was of excitement rather than anxiety. Slowly, he drew the wand again and cradled it in both hands. "I don't know," he whispered. "Wouldn't it be... I don't know, under glass or something, somewhere? Wouldn't your father have kept it?"
"Dad says his wand is the one he always had, from when he got his Hogwarts letter," Al said, shaking his head. "James asked once and Dad told him it wasn't the one that he used in the last battle and to leave off asking about it. He doesn't keep any others at home and he and Uncle Ron complain about the spares they have at the office being second-rate." The words tumbled out of his mouth faster and faster as he went.
"Besides, who keeps a mess of wands around?" Rose asked. She seemed to have caught a bit of Al's excitement. "This has to be it!"
Al held his own wand close to Scorpius'. "My wand was old stock. Mr. Frost at Ollivander and Frost's said it was one of Ollivander's classics. Look at how alike the hilts are," he said.
Once again Al made Scorpius want to believe. "There is something about them... They might be of an age," he admitted.
Rose held hers out beside them to compare. "Mine is a new one, a Frost model. You can see how it has a different sort of hilt, and the polish is a different because they have different resins in the mix nowadays. This one must be it!" Her eyes shone with the secret. They seemed even bluer up close. Scorpius found himself fascinated by the jewel-like shade, which shifted in seconds from enthusiastic to thoughtful. "Still... better keep this between us, though...unless you want people queued up around the school asking for a peep at it," she said.
Keeping quiet seemed like an excellent idea to Scorpius. It further occurred to him that someone might decide that his wand did indeed belong under glass somewhere, and he was already quite attached to it.
"Can I keep it mum that my name is Potter, so they won't queue up to have a peep at me?" Al asked dryly.
"James says they got over it... after a term or two," Rose teased.
"Yeah, but he doesn't look as much like Dad as I do," Al said.
"If they pile up too deep shall I just whip this out and get their attention?" Scorpius ventured to make his second joke of the day, punctuating it with a wave of his wand that left a little trail of white sparks.
Their laughter was cut short by a sharp, "What's this, then?"
Scorpius looked up to find James and Louis filling the doorway with Lysander and Lorcan peering in over their shoulders. His first, incongruous, thought was that James looked nothing whatsoever like Mr. Potter. The hard expression in his brown eyes was quite unlike the equivalent on the Chocolate Frog Card, and his hair was decidedly red and rather curly. He looked more like Louis' brother than Al's.
"We are keeping ourselves amused in your absence," Rose said. The lofty tone was back, with added primness that couldn't mean anything but reproach.
"Who invited him?" James pointed his thumb rudely at Scorpius.
Scorpius felt a wave of sick worse than his nervousness on the train platform. Just as quickly, he almost laughed out loud when Rosie, Al, Lysander, and Lorcan all said in unison...with varying degrees of exasperation or matter-of-factness, "YOU did!"
At the sight of James' scowl, Scorpius felt a bit of mischief. "Yes, thank you," he said, every bit as primly as Rose.
Speaking of whom... "His name is Scorpius, by the way," Rose said disapprovingly. Stilted greetings were exchanged, and the older boys couldn't quite seem to decide whether or not to shake hands, so Scorpius didn't try. Then it grew rather quiet and terribly awkward.
Louis snorted and flopped into the seat. "Teach you to play the joker," he said to James. "Are we staying, or are you going to deliver the sandwiches and we'll be off again?"
"Do you have any sandwiches left?" Lorcan asked. Scorpius was only guessing as to which twin had spoken, but it did seem that Lorcan usually made the first remark.
"No need." Al waved off James' offer of the thoroughly squashed lunch sack (which contained perhaps half a sandwich, by Scorpius' estimate.) "We handled things all on our own...the three of us."
"Three pounds of cauldron cakes washed down with pumpkin juice, I'll warrant," Louis said. "Don't come crying to us in the dorms tonight when you get a bellyache."
"For your information, we shared out my peanutbutter and Scorpius' quice, and had no more than a reasonable number of cauldron cakes," Rose said.
"Yes, and you needn't assume we'll be in a dorm anywhere near yours, either," Al added.
Scorpius thought that you might have heard a pin drop on the carpet in the instant, but perhaps that was merely by contrast with the subsequent explosion.
"Don't joke like that!" Louis nearly yelled, aghast.
"Is this about earlier? C'mon, I said I was sorry," James whined.
"Did you?" Lysander asked. Scorpius was really only pretending he could guess which one it was, but it was better than calling each of them Lysander-or-Lorcan every time one spoke, even if only in his mind.
"This has nothing to do with it, and I'm not joking." Al stuck his chin out, looking quite defiant. "I don't know what house I'll be in. I can't guess what the Hat will say; maybe I'll just ask it to let me follow my best mate here." He slung his arm over Scorpius' shoulder. Scorpius really wasn't accustomed to quite so much physical contact, nor with anyone being quite so proprietary. Still, the idea of being someone's best mate!
"Al? What... what's got into you?" James sounded uncertain. He peered at Al with concern and at Scorpius with suspicion.
"I thought you'd heard, big brother," Al said. "I can manage all right with my friends, just like you do with yours. Go along and have fun if you like, and we'll do the same...here on the train, and in whatever house we're sorted into."
"That would be Gryffindor if you know what's good for you," came a new voice. Scorpius turned to find himself facing a sneering boy who seemed...he could think of no better description for it...various shades of rust-color all over, from his curled hair to the skin on his hands. He wore some of the most extraordinary clothing Scorpius had ever seen, including a red dragonhide jacket and matching boots over blue Muggle trousers that somehow seemed substantially more expensive than Scorpius' own hand-me-downs. A taller boy stood behind him, idly punching one fist into the palm of his hand. Scorpius could see why the boy who'd spoken might want a bodyguard. Anyone that short, who spoke that rudely, probably stood a fair chance of being thrashed.
"I'll decide what's good for me without any input from you," Al said.
"Watch how you speak to family," the newcomer said.
"Pot, cauldron, Freddy," Louis remarked with a snort.
"I'd think you would understand best, the only loyal one out of your lot," Freddy shot back.
Louis pretended to ignore Fred. James was not so quiescent. "Quit talking rubbish," James said. "Loyalty is how you treat family...not whether you're in the same House as they are. Go buy a gobstopper, you could use it."
Scorpius happened to think almost that same thing at that moment, and gave a little cough to hide his laugh. The sound had the unfortunate effect of getting Fred's attention.
"What's this?" Scorpius narrowed his eyes at the other boy. Between the tone and the words, he'd no intention of introducing himself.
"Honestly," Rose said. It was more of a huff, really. "Fred Wealsey, can't you introduce yourself like a civilized wizard? What about your friend back there?" She peered at the boy behind Fred rather severely, as if silently chastising him for taking up the entire corridor. Neither his size nor the fist fazed her in the slightest. "You have no reason to be so rude to Scorpius; as Al indicated, and I'm sure you would have heard did you pay attention to anything but yourself, he and Al are friends."
"Bet you a sickle Gerry doesn't talk," James whispered to Louis. "I've never heard a word in the two years he's been hanging about with Fred."
Scorpius rather wished Rose would have refrained from helping.
"Scorpius... that's an outdated name if I ever heard one. Let me guess: he's a Malfoy. The definition of outdated. And apparently, skint. Oh, how the mighty have fallen. Can't put enough knuts together for new kit?" Fred plucked at the sleeve of Scorpius' muggle robe disdainfully. Scorpius yanked his arm away. He felt his lips twisting with disgust and anger. "Guess Malfoys must be the poorest wizards there are...too little color and too few children and they still can't cover 'em properly. Shall we show you how to use the loo, seeing as you can't have a pot to piss in?"
"I take it you were the specific Weasley I was warned about," Scorpius said, and scarcely knew where the words came from. All of a sudden he felt glib and defiant.
"Probably because he should come with a warning label," Rose said. She narrowed her eyes at her cousin and Scorpius realized that the look she'd given him earlier was only a faint shadow of cold and disapproving.
"Oi, leave it be, Fred," Louis said. He was clearly uncomfortable with the situation but hoping to diffuse it. "What's a different house among family, or even friends?"
"Everything if that house is Slytherin." Fred said. He made it sound like a word Rudy would say. "We don't consort with the enemy!" Gerry smacked his fist particularly hard. Apparently he didn't speak; he merely provided punctuation.
"What does that mean?" Lorcan asked, wrinkling his nose. It was the most expression Scorpius had seen him make since their acquaintance had commenced.
"It means we thrash them at Quidditch," Louis said with a grin. "But that makes them the same as all the other Houses." Lysander rolled his eyes at that.
"It's more than that and you know it. They need to be kept in line."
"Go away, Freddy, and quit sampling experimental stuff from your dad's lab," James said dismissively. He drew his wand and began flipping stray crumbs into the air and incinerating them, with the air of someone who is so bored with the conversation he had to resort to such measures.
Al held up his hand in a 'halt' gesture, not that it seemed necessary. Fred was clearly ignoring James, as James seemed determined to likewise do. "You need to explain that, Fred," he said. His eyes were narrowed at Fred, and there was something commanding about his manner that Scorpius wouldn't have guessed at from their earlier hijinks. It certainly seemed to draw out Fred.
"You should know better than anyone, baby cousin, who was on the wrong side...and who will be again, unless we see to it they know their place. You might even make a name for yourself, once you join us. We don't forget who we are...and don't let them forget, either."
"You don't know who I am," Al said. His tone chilled the room. "Maybe you didn't hear my dad when he said the bravest man he ever knew was a Slytherin. You know what? I'm beginning to think I'll look good in green. Goes with my eyes. I might even throw my name around. How long d'you think it would be before I have more bodyguards than you do? You and what army are gonna push me around...or my house? Who's this 'Us' you're talking about, anyway?"
"I don't think I ought to tell you," Fred said, "and I guess what you don't know, you can't tattle."
"Want to bet against a penseive memory?" Al answered. "My dad might be interested in knowing about someone who's part of a gang organized to harass other students. I'm sure he'll find out who the other members are quickly enough." His voice was tight with anger and his eyes burned with it, but his face was still, almost cold. Scorpius was impressed... and inspired.
"You might not want to bet against the wand that defeated the most evil wizard in an age, either." Scorpius marveled at how he managed to keep his voice steady when his stomach was churning. Still, there was something...some curious reserve of pride, or trust in Al, or maybe just a spirit of sheer bluffing...that kept him upright, his eyes slitted disdainfully at the older boy, unwilling to back down. It was a strange, but he couldn't help liking it just a bit. Power, a faint voice whispered in his head. Scorpius thought it might come in handy. He drew the wand slowly, looking at it rather than Fred as if he couldn't be bothered. "Oh, did I forget to mention it? See, I don't think of it, really... it's only my wand. It just happens to be the same one that defeated Voldemort." He couldn't help smiling at the slender, well-polished stick. It was another connection to his best mate, however roundabout.
"That's not possible," Fred said, his voice sounding a little too uncertain to be dismissive.
"Ask any Chocolate Frog Card," Al said. He was grinning, but it was a cold expression, a shark's grin. "Or my dad, he'd be happy to set you straight."
Unexpectedly, Rose's voice piped up beside Al and Scorpius. The boys somehow managed to keep from betraying their surprise. "And just so you know...where they go, I go. And I'm not the least bit afraid to write to Grandmum."
"You wouldn't. You can't No one is supposed to disturb Grandmum, it's not good for her heart," Fred argued, but he frankly sounded a little scared. Even Gerry looked around as if seeking the source of Fred's alarm.
"You'll just have to make sure it doesn't come to that, won't you?" James said. He seemed to have stepped in firmly on their side, houses notwithstanding. "I'm sure that Dad can see to it she's sitting down if it does."
"I won't forget this, James," Fred hissed. But he was already backing away.
"I'm counting on it," James said grimly. He shut the compartment door...and leaned on it. Everyone seemed to release a pent-up breath at the same moment.
"Blimey, Rose," Louis said weakly. "You played the Grandmum card against Fred."
"'Bout time someone did," James said. "I'm voting for Gryffindor for you lot."
"Not while Fred is there. I won't." Scorpius folded his arms. He had never felt so obstinate in his life, and suddenly he didn't care who knew it.
"Seconded, mate," Al said, mirroring Scorpius' posture.
"Rosie?" James turned inquiring eyes on Rose. Louis was too busy trying to collect his jaw from the floor.
Rose abused the carpet with the toe of her shoe again. "Look at it this way, James...Gryffindor is always chock-full of good Quidditch players. I might not make the team until Sixth Year, if then, with all that competition," she argued. "What I need is to find a House where I can stand out sooner, because I...I'm going professional!" she finished hotly, giving up on that equivocating toe with a decisive stomp. "So... no Gryffindor for me, either." She folded her arms now as well.
Scorpius relaxed from his own defensive posture. "She does it better than we do," he observed to Al.
"Did any of you stop to think where you'll be if not Gryffindor?"
Louis was completely nonplussed when Lysander and Lorcan both broke out in hearty laughter. Eventually Rose, Al, and Scorpius joined in.
"What d'you think we've been talking about the whole train ride?" Al finally said when they'd recovered somewhat.
James sighed. "You know I was only fooling, earlier," he said to Al, almost pleadingly. "And if it comes to it, there's no way I'm siding with Fred over you. Bloody hell! If you're not in Gryffindor, and you make another house team... we'll play against each other!" James was aghast. Louis looked quite grave, and even Lorcan and Lysander seemed at a loss for once.
Al, too, seemed taken aback by the thought. "I know, James. But... Quidditch is Quidditch, and family is family."
"What about him?" James pointed his chin at Scorpius. Scorpius felt his earlier bravado falter.
"He's as good as," Al said. "We share the same birthday. We've both got old Ollivander wands, and no, that was no joke that his is THAT wand," Al said. "That has to mean something."
Lysander and Lorcan fixed him with their bulgy eyes until Scorpius felt like something under Mum's micro-ocular. Louis eyed Scorpius wand until he quite wished he'd never taken it out of his sleeve.
"He's got a point," Rose said. "There's no such thing as coincidence, James. Maybe for Muggles, but not for us. Good way to keep that quiet, incidentally," she added.
That has belated occurred to Scorpius as well, but he'd begun to get the idea that he might need leverage more than anonymity.
"Hm." James looked at Scorpius. It was a thoughtful sort of expression, but he refused to say anything beyond that noncommittal sound.
"Forget Houses for a moment, and relations. Every Pureblood on this rock is a billionth cousin or some such through the Black family, anyway," Louis waved off centuries of genealogy with a careless gesture. "This shit with Fred is real," he said gravely. "What are we supposed to do about it? It's not just him and his thuggish mates. He'll start a war with the contents of Uncle George's store."
"We've got an arsenal of our own if it comes to that," Lysander said. He and Lorcan exuded a sort of quiet confidence.
"Teddy would know what to do," James said. A peculiar little dent formed beside his mouth, and Scorpius guessed that he was biting the inside of his cheek.
"Well, Teddy's not here," Rose said. It was less exasperated than it might have been.
"War is not the answer," Al said. The authoritative voice was back. "I think Rose has the right of it. I know we're not supposed to upset her, but we need Grandmum involved. If this goes too far, people could get hurt...and that includes Fred's sorry self."
"Better you write it than me, little cousin," James said, throwing up his hands in Rose's general direction.
"Yes, but... I think, begging everyone's pardon... you'd have to sign it. I mean, you're in the same house as Fred. If we're all in a different house than you are..." Scorpius trailed off, not sure how to quite explain what he meant.
"Not the worst idea I've heard all day," Louis remarked. He snorted in Scorpius' general direction. "I might have to tell Nicky to make room for you in Ravenclaw." His tone was almost friendly.
"Are we looking at the future firm of Egghead, Egghead, and Swot?" James shifted mercurially back to teasing and draped a heavy arm over both Al and Scorpius, drawing them into a rough sideways hug. Rose dodged his other arm, protesting all the while.
Weasleys and Potters, Scorpius deduced, were very tactile creatures. All this hugging would take some getting used to; Father (and much more so, Grandmother) seemed to leave hugs for special occasions...something to be taken out perhaps once daily, like the dinner place settings. It was getting easier, though, especially since they all had hints of the same Muggle cleaning potions smell. That scent was rapidly becoming a reassuring rather than a strange one.
"Brains are welcome in Hufflepuff, too, you know," Lysander said. His tone was mild, but Scorpius thought he detected a hint of defensiveness.
"Not quite so much in Gryffindor, though," Lorcan whispered. He leaned in between Al and Scorpius, so Scorpius assumed it was addressed to both of them. "Interferes with rushing in where angels fear to tread."
"I suppose," Scorpius said, thinking aloud, "if it's unpopular to be in Slytherin and very popular to be in Gryffindor, then you would actually have to be braver to be a Slytherin."
"That... makes a weird sort of sense," Rose said. She shook her head and managed to include both Al and Scorpius in the gesture. "You two are a pair."
"I guess we'll find out soon enough," James said, switching back to seriousness. "That's the whistle for the Hogs Gap bridge. We need to be dressed before the train stops."
Louis, Lysander, and Lorcan headed back to their own compartments. All was quiet but for trunks thumping and robes rustling for the next several minutes. Once they were all in school robes, with daylight almost gone, the mood in the compartment grew entirely serious.
Scorpius checked the cuffs of his student robe. He'd practiced putting it on in front of the mirror a dozen times, and he could probably put it on in his sleep. Al was considerably less practiced, as evidenced by Rose having to help him untangle his head from one of his own sleeves. He felt James' hand fall heavily on his shoulder and looked up, startled.
"Rose is right about coincidence, you know," James said. He may not have looked much like Mr. Potter, but there as a certain hint of grave kindness in his eyes that Scorpius found familiar. "I'd rather claim you than Fred any day." Al got free of his robe just as the train groaned to a stop, and James pulled away. Apparently he wasn't willing to concede that much in front of his brother.
Scorpius managed a weak smile. "Faint praise," he choked out. James laughed, all traces of gravity gone in an instant, and charged down the corridor with his irritated owl bouncing behind him in its cage.
"Time to follow the bouncing maniac," Rose said. Her complaining was back, though it didn't quite mask the aura of nerves and excitement about her. Or maybe Scorpius was projecting. Al shot him a nervous grin and followed Rose, and Scorpius hastened after.
The air was chill on the Hogsmeade platform. The chaos was more complete than at Platform 9 3/4, since it was all children and luggage, cats and owls, directed only by taller students with badges. There wasn't a grownup in sight...
Scorpius stopped short, in his thoughts and in fact. Standing at the edge of the platform was a grownup. A mountain of a man, almost literally. His robes spread wide and roughly brown around his great boats of feet, and bits of foliage caught in them like shrubs on the lower slopes. His vast beard and hair flowed gray and white, making the topmost part of him into a dingy late-spring mountain peak. He waved a great, rough, red, snow-shovel hand and called, "Firs' years! Firs' years this way!" With the other hand he piled First Years' luggage on a cart with no visible means of propulsion, much like the ones the older students were entering.
"He looks too big to be allowed," Scorpius said, edging subtly closer to Al.
Al, however, showed no signs of hesitation. "Hi, Hagrid!" he yelled. Hagrid scooped Al's trunk as if it was a balled-up parchment.
"Hoy, is that Al? An' Rosie! Who's yer friend?"
"Shouldn't that be 'Mr. Hagrid,' or something?" Scorpius asked, feeling no less alarmed than before. Al dragged him right to the feet of the giant, for a giant he surely must be. At the very least, a half-giant.
"This is my best mate in the whole world, Scorpius Malfoy," Al said happily, oblivious to Scorpius' consternation. "He's coming with us to tea on Friday, that's all right, isn't it?"
"Oh," Hagrid looked confused and concerned behind his heap of a beard. "Er... I reckon it's all right."
Scorpius swallowed heavily. "Pleased to meet you, Mr. Hagrid," he quavered. Just then, Agate interrupted with a flurry of wings and unhappy sounds. Al tried to shuffle his other bag to reach around and soothe her.
"Don't worry, I have her, Al," Scorpius said. He petted Agate's neck through the bars of the cage. She gently nibbled his finger and Scorpius wondered if he should feel guilty for falling in love with his best friend's owl.
"Eh, she likes you," Hagrid said. He sounded surprised, but his puzzled expression had a pleased rather than a worried look to it now. It made him look a bit more Father-Christmas-like rather than wild-man-like, and Scorpius relaxed fractionally. "Right, time fer all that later! Get in the boat, children! Ye'll not want to be late fer supper!" Far more gently than he'd treated the trunks, he nestled Agate's cage on the baggage wagon amongst the other owls. The cats curled up in their own favored places amid the trunks and bags, sniffing noses with each other and occasionally hissing someone away from their declared spot.
All this to-do had left them the last first years on the platform. Scorpius fell into the end of the queue behind Rose and Al, and they shuffled their way to the boat dock.
Suddenly, Scorpius was blinded by an explosion of light and sound. In the same instant, he was struck painfully in the back and found himself hurtling toward the water. Equally suddenly, he found himself hitting something resembling a brick wall except...it had thumbs.
"Scorpius! You okay, mate?" Al's voice penetrated the ringing in his ears.
"Bloody rotten Fred! Scorpius could've been killed!" Rose was practically shrieking. It finally registered with Scorpius that he was in Hagrid's hand. "Don't make excuses, Hagrid, you know it was him. No one else has access to Uncle George's big fireworks."
"If it was, Professor Longbottom'll get to the bottom of it," Hagrid's rumbling voice came through. Almost as an afterthought, he gently tipped Scorpius safely back on the dock.
"Great catch, Hagrid. Are you sure you weren't a Seeker in school?" Al asked.
"Th-thank you, Mr. Hagrid," Scorpius gasped. He was as out of breath from hitting that massive paddle of a hand as he was from the explosion. He tried to be polite as he pushed Rose, with her fussing, aside. What difference does it make, how many fingers she's holding up?
"A Seeker, hah! They didn't make a broom big enough." Hagrid snorted at Al. He appeared to think about it, then patted Scorpius' head awkwardly. "Weren't no trouble. You don't weigh more'n a Snidget," Hagrid rumbled. "No need to 'Mr.' me t'death, neither." He bundled Scorpius, Al, and the rest of the first years into the boat.
"Scorpius! Scorpius!" Al yanked on Scorpius' sleeve. As Aunt Andromeda would have said, he was 'all a-twitter.'
"What?" Scorpius blinked at his friend. He didn't quite see what was so wonderful about being nearly pitched into the lake by a near-fatal joke from Fred.
"Your wicked cool nickname!"
"Nickname?"
"Snidget," Al said, grinning from ear to ear. "Hagrid's kinda brilliant, isn't he?"
Snidget. Scorpius turned it over in his mind. The fastest thing in the air. Slowly, he smiled a bit himself. He thought he might need to add a little something to his letter home.
P.S. Mr. Hagrid's kind of brilliant
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58 Reviews | 5.95/10 Average
Very fitting jump to the engagement between Rose and Scorpius . That two will go far once their sporting careers have ended.
I like how Al is still a mischief-maker with his friends.
Thanks for writing and I do hope you write more regarding this trio during their school and later years.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you! I scribble a little in my notebooks when I have a chance. Someday I may even get it into the computer.
Lovely drabble chapter. Scorpius likes his sleep then? lol
Hope your family medical emergency has been resolved - happily that is.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you most kindly! I'm afraid the emergency is now a chronic condition--which means I'm on caretaking duty about half the week and playing catch-up the rest. Catching up on review responses is one of the more pleasant things.
Oh the sorting - what fun!
Well think if Rose is sending her parents a letter then she better expect a howler from her dad. Her Mum I think will be much more diplomatic. after all Hermione did respect Snape and recognised his work as a spy for the order.
Snape speaking out from behind a green curtained portrait was spectacularly amusing and the thought of the image keeling over at the hearing Rose and Als names. priceless.
Loved this chapter for many reasons but especially for the painting of Snape.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Rose's parents, much like her precocious self, may yet prove full of surprises. After all, Ron was only joking (though he had no idea that he needed to be!) Snape is still irked at me for making his identity so apparent, but once he sees how well Scorpius, Rose, and Al contribute to the honor of the House, heill forgive me. Eventually. <--Snape has actually got over it, but is still keeping up appearances a while longer.Thank you for all the kind reviews!
I do not like this Fred or his back up silent guard. What a nasty thing to do to Scorpius on the dock.
I think this little brave trio are going to cause Hogwarts Teachers lots of trouble. Also their parents if they are sorted into houses they do not approve. But it will be fun watching and learning what they get up to next.
Another fine chapter.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Fred has many issues of his own which the adults will have to address in 'Recovery Continues.' All hope is not lost for making a solid citizen of him.These three could very well manage what an army of Death Eaters failed to do. Hopefully Hogwarts has a good insurance policy!
What a lot of information is revealled in this chapter.
The children seem to not be aware of much information regarding the last war and how their familys faught .
I felt for Scorpius when the card of his father came up for scrutiny. The poor boy and then thinking he had to leave and lose the new friends he thought he had just found.
The sharing of the lunches and treats from the trolly was very endearing and showed how they each wanted to help the other.
I could imagine the scene of the three sets of shoes toe to toe in a little triad or in the shape of a three pronged wheel.
I love al. He just loves to give hugs without any compunction to think. Scorpius seems to be likening them and the little half squeeze Rose gave him too at the end. Oh so sweet.
I hold my hands up in the air. I cannot believe I am really enjoing this fic. I usually go straight to the more sensual stories surrounding Snape with any pairing but this trio of little Wizards has captured my attention.
Off to read more and I shall endeavour to review when I can.
Thanks for writing this endearing story - well it is for now at least lol.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
I'm glad you so enjoyed them! I find that I quite love writing the misadventures of the younger set, as much if not more than the madcap comedies that were my original specialty.
Memories of the first meeting between Ron, Hermione and Harry seem to be mirrored in this chapter.
I do like how Al appears to take a likening to Scorpius first then Rose, who seems to be more reserved.
The way Scorpius keeps telling himself off or reminding himself not to stutter makes me wonder why he is afflicted this and whom has been berating him to stop it. The poor wee lad.
I also noticed the reference to Scorpius mother wishing to become a wolf hope this was not too much of a shock for him to take this all in.
Really enjoying your story.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
A certain amount of parallelism was indeed intended in this chapter. As for Scorpius' speech impediment, his anxiety mainly resjults from him picking up on the worries of the adults around him: after all, unless a magical child is some sort of prodigy at non-verbal spellcasting, a stutter may leave him or her essentially a Squib. Fortunately, Scorpius is well on track to having the friends and the resilience to deal with any situation. Thanks very much for reviewing!
I looked at the synopses to this story and thought - perhaps not my cup of tea. but decided to read the first couple of chapters. I have come back to review the first chapter.
I do like the way you have portraid Scorpious and how it appears his family have fallen on hard times. The little wooden carved owl in his inside pocket is a sweet little addition.
I am enjoying this story very much to my surprise. This is due to your writing and fantastic story telling that has ensnared me.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
I have to warn you--if I have a reputation in the fandom for anything other than comedy, it's for getting people to enjoy subjects/pairings/premises that they 'don't normally do.' Thank you kindly for reviewing, and I hope to provide continual pleasant surprises! :)
Lovely ending indeed. It's so nice to see how the three of them have grown up but are still so recognisable themselves. I do wonder though what the Slytherin aspects of Scorpius are because he still seems pretty much 'what you see is what you get". But it might be his natural feeling for decorum and tradition that still works well with the House.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you! As for Scorpius... well, as the Hat said, he has an interesting ambition. Becoming his Best Self for the good of others is quite possibly the loftiest ambition Slytherin has ever seen. I always thought that old Slughorn was probably closest to what the average Slytherin is like: a networker extraordinaire with rather old-fashioned attitudes who doesn't let prejudices (even if he secretly harbors a few) prevent him from cultivating relationships with people who can get him what he wants. In Slughorn's case, he was a harmless opportunist angling for bragging rights and creature comforts.In Scorpius' case, he also happens to be a shrewd judge of character who can tell a good boss from an indifferent one--and really, more than anything else, he wanted Rose.(Of course, there is also the tiny detail that Scorpius is quite literally a highly dramatic walking, talking, living secret, in case an element of subtlety is an essential Slytherin trait! )
love ending.. great job!
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you very much!
lovely. I really do like where your world has gone. Don't quit - RL is hard sometimes, but feel free to continue to play with these kids
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thanks very much! I'll be chipping away at the side stories as possible--there's a bit of a RL update on dracfic (my livejournal) for all those who offered their good wishes.
Sorry for not reviewing earlier but I do hope your family circumstances have improved since you left that message for us. And do take your time, RL and especially family is more important than ff. And if there is anyting I can do apart from sending you good vibes, please let me know.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
No need to apologize! It's a special effort to take the time to leave any sort of review, and I always appreciate it. In addition to the now-posted epilogue, there's a bit of a RL update on dracfic (my livejournal) for all those who offered their good wishes. Thank you most kindly.
sorry about the family medical emergency. will keep your family in my thoughts and prayers. nellie.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you kindly! In addition to the story epilogue posted here, there's a bit of a RL update on dracfic (my livejournal) for all those who offered their good wishes.
i love this story so much, it's the second time i'm reading. alas, i'm not able to write like you and do a fuller story. i think if jkr is done with the characters, you should be able to spin them off,.... just like little women had little men etc. i love your portrayal of the next gen!
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you kindly! As for spinning off characters, I think I would rather write something altogether original; but I'm glad to know that my writing exercises are entertaining in the meantime.
Wait, wait.... did they tell Scorpius his mum is trying to become a wolf Animagus instead of telling him she is a werewolf? That's really a lie born out of love and protection and I am oddly touched by this.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
It almost seems like it would be safe to tell him, doesn't it; after all, the new Wolfsbane is so easy and effective, lycanthropy is becoming the smallpox of the wizarding world--a scourge that is well on its way to being vaccinated out of existence. And yet, no one can think of a good way to explain when she became infected... so the gentle lie stands. It was nice to see someone pick up on that bit.
Like all other reviewers I really hope you will continue. There is so much more I want to know: how their parents react to their sorting, how the rest of the school reacts, how their friendship develops, if they will visit each other over the Christmas hols and how, much later, Scorpius will hear that Al is his half brother. But that might be something for a sequel of Harry and Draco's story.
Response from orlando switch (Reviewer)
And something else, is there any chance we will get to see more of that letter that Scorpius has written to his parents and Narcissa? You capture his voice so well, it's such a joy to read. And I hope we will see the response from his parents too.Don't get me wrong, all the children are spot on, but somehow, Scorpius has some special place in my heart. I thought about it yesterday and I really think he has some traits of Harry that shine through his formal upbringing. His spontanious invitation of Rose to live with him was something Harry would do (and we have seen him doing it with Grimmault place in several fanfiction stories) and the careful way he phrases it in his letter to his parents is definitely his upbringing.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you very kindly! I'm sorry, but there will be only one more tiny drabble and an epilogue to this story; the tiny bit is going up tonight. I do have a couple of one-shot side stories with the children and/or the adults in their lives, and at least bits of Scorpius' letter might make an appearance somewhere. I can't give any time frame for when it will all see daylight, since life will not permit me much writing time for the foreseeable future. Once again, thank you for the encouragement. Hopefully I will be able to revisit all of this someday.
Response from orlando switch (Reviewer)
O and I forgot to add, Scorpius is such a dear. I really hope Daco will inform Harry about Scorpius letter so that he can inform Hermione that Rose is really worried that her sorting in Slytherin won't be accepted by Ron.
Oh dear, I hope there'll be more chapters than only an epilogue! I've just fallen in love with this three little characters and I'd like very much to read more about them. Especially Scorpius is really cute: She oughtn’t cost much to keep. She doesn’t seem to eat much and she already has her wand and all her books. I promise you will all like her, especially you, Mum. She is very smart and responsible.What kind of reaction will his parents have? It's perhaps good that his grandfather is a peacock... Can peacocks faint, I wonder?
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Can peacocks faint, I wonder?We might just find out... While I really must close this story with the epilogue (almost... done... writing...) I have at least one or two more small snapshots which will hopefully find their way into the archive as one-shots in the near future. Thank you for reviewing!
Assuming Minerva is Headmistress, I see we still have two Gryffs running the school. Nothing against Longbottom, but they couldn't find a Ravenclaw or a Hufflepuff? Why don't they just change the name to 'Gryffindor School of Witchcraft and Wizardry'? All of which, by the way, is very much in line with the state of the wizarding world we saw in the Dreaded Epilogue, the starting point of your story. Good job.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
I'm still debating whether Professor McGonagall remained Headmistress (only seen temporarily occupying that station in canon) or whether she would have retired by the time of the epilogue, like Professor Sprout. My instincts are to pick a leader from a different house for purposes of balance, but my instinct for balance plainly does not correspond with the source material. I've toyed with the idea of Professor Vector (female, as per out-of-book canon) being in the top spot. Her House is unknown, but I always imagined it to be Ravenclaw, as Arithmancy strikes me as one of the most academic of magical disciplines. Thank you kindly for reviewing!
No! Keep going - I'm loving this! Besides, i want to see Ron having kittens over Rosie!Love the story. Keep writitng.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
I'm afraid this one will probably have to wrap up with the epilogue--but there are a couple more little episodes that may yet see the light of day as one-shots, and who knows what plot bunnies may pop up even later? Thank you, as always, for reviewing!
This was a pretty good read - I've enjoyed all chapters of your story very much! I'm somewhat confused about Fred's very aggressive attitude, however. It has to be a result of bad influence from his parents, especially from his father, I suppose (who's his mother, by the way?). Or should his length play a role in this?Whatever, I'm looking forward to the Sorting Ceremony now!
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
The adults in the family are looking into a solution (and the cause) of Fred's issues in another work that isn't quite ready for prime time yet. Thanks for reviewing!
I really love where you're taking your story. Keep up the good work!!!
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you! I'll scramble about in the old brain box to see if there's any more good work to be had.
awww.... is the story finished? this story is so brilliantly fleshed out.
Response from jadecadence (Reviewer)
i hope you'll choose slytherin for them!
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thanks for reviewing! There is a bit more, just working out a few more details. As for the children, they'll have to choose for themselves! (that's how you can tell if you've written a character right--they run off with the story without consulting you...)
Okay, these kids, how you are writing them, are absolutley adorable. Scor is quick with his hands - a real Seeker in the making, if he can get a decent broom. James is a great big brother to Al, his caring is so evident. Freddy is a brek-jerk and needs a swift kick in teh pants and Molly/Grandma shoudl be told of his hostility/bully attitude. The one I stll have in my heart is your Scorpius. I did like Hagrid's reaction. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
As to Scorpius getting a decent broom--Al started scheming how to accomplish THAT before Scorpius even considered trying out (possibly before they made it across the lake). I swear, P.T. Barnum had nothing on that kid... As to Fred, the grownups in his life have rather failed him up until now, but there's a family conference happening in another file on my hard drive that intends to turn him around.Dear Hagrid; he may not be quite professor material, but if you're looking for the benefit of the doubt, he's one of the first places to look.
Every tme you posta chapter I end up rereading "In Your Debt" and falling in love with it all over again. What a great story! (What great stories!?) I eagerly and rather impatiently await the next chapter. Thank youQ
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you most kindly. I'm working on a wrap-up to this one right now (though Ron had a few things to say and has sidetracked me into writing something from his perspective. I do hope no one else has their two knuts to throw in, or I'll be pulling some very late nights!)
Rose compared to Miss Piggy - Oh that's hilarious! I'm really loving Scorp. Scor. There that's a nickname. lol Al is adorable. I admit that I was as baffled and confused by all the dialogue in the beginning and swimming (likehe was) trying to sort it all out, who was saying what, and who was whom to who, and then it was only the three of them. When Scor thought 'I'm not even at school yet nad I have two friends,' I almsot cheered!
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I shall go over the opening dialogue again, perhaps there's some way to sort it out better. It's a challenge to avoid giving Scorpius knowledge which he would have no way of obtaning, just to make it easier to write!
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
GODS NO!!! NO Don't Change a THIng!! NO!!! It was what made it so memorable, you could feel his confusionand were stumbling along with him, and you could then feel what he does. DON't Change It! No! NONONONONONONONONONONONONO!It works, really it does. that was in no way a complaint. It's actually brilliant and as I said, you follow along and feel his confusion and wonder, and it's all like - I connceted with him. Leave it alone!I really am enjoying this story and very much look forward to more.
I am really loving your Scorpius, he's absolutely an adorable boy, and so lonely that it tugs at my heart.
Response from dracontia (Author of A Credit to Their Houses)
Thank you! I hadn't planned to elaborate on this universe, but Scorpius asked so nicely, I hadn't the heart to refuse him.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Yeah! More... I'll ahve to go ask him to plead agian nicely! I really want more of this. I really am enjoying it very much.