Chapter 2
Chapter 2 of 7
linlawlessHermione reads a press report and has some difficult conversations while waiting for a response to a request.
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The next morning, Hermione paced as she waited to hear back from Headmistress McGonagall. After a near-sleepless night, spent alternately crying about Ron's perfidy and looking through most of her books to discover what she could about Veelas, she had finally concluded she needed access to more books than she had. She could have got them at the Ministry library, she supposed; as an Unspeakable, she had access.
But she wasn't yet ready to face the rumours and innuendo that were inevitable when a war hero left his war heroine fiancée mere days before their wedding. It was possible but unlikely, she thought, that the news hadn't got out yet at least it wasn't in yesterday's Prophet. She wasn't so naïve to think it wouldn't be there today, though.
Even as she had the thought, the Owl Post arrived. After giving the bird the usual payment and a treat, she took a deep breath and steeled herself to see what the headlines might say.
War Hero Dumps Fiancée for Veela Witch!
By Rita Skeeter
Damn. She should have known that insect wouldn't miss this chance to humiliate her. Taking another deep breath, she read on.
Ronald Weasley, one of the heroes of the recent Voldemort War and best friend of Harry Potter, was spotted yesterday at Gretna Green in the company of Gabrielle Delacour, a quarter-Veela who is the younger sister of Mr Weasley's sister-in-law, Fleur Delacour-Weasley. Readers may recall that Mr Weasley was to have been married this Saturday at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry to the Muggle-born witch, Hermione Granger.
Further investigation revealed that a bonding ceremony was performed at three p.m. yesterday for Mr Weasley and the former Miss Delacour (see photos on page six). It thus appears safe to conclude that what had been billed as the 'Wedding of the Decade' has been cancelled. Attempts by this writer to reach Ms Granger were unsuccessful apparently, she was already on her scheduled month-long leave from her job with the Ministry of Magic as of three days ago but sources say she's believed to be out of the country nursing her broken heart and hiding from the humiliation of being left at the altar.
Attempts to reach Ms Granger? Hermione knew perfectly well Skeeter hadn't made any attempt to reach her she certainly would have noticed if she'd ignored communications from her long-time nemesis. On the plus side, though, she was too annoyed by the article to cry about it.
What if the headmistress said no? Maybe she really should consider a trip abroad as an alternative ...
Hermione was about to turn to page six, even though she didn't really want to see pictures of Ron with Gabrielle, when a knock sounded at her door.
Great, the press is already descending on me, she thought, until she heard an unwelcome voice calling her name. "'Ermione? Are you all right? I need to talk to you!"
Hermione was tempted to pretend not to be home, but she was too curious for her own good. What could Fleur possibly want with her?
There probably isn't a better source of first-hand information about Veelas... The stray thought had Hermione getting up to answer the door.
"You must understand how very sorry my family is for Gabrielle's actions, 'Ermione!"
Hermione was getting tired of this conversation already. This was the third apology she'd had in the ten minutes since she had let Fleur in. "It's not your fault, Fleur. It's not your job to apologise on her behalf."
"But she should have known better! She was raised to be more considerate of other people's feelings than that. You were engaged to be married! She should have respected that!"
"Perhaps she should, but she didn't. And Ron didn't, either and he was the one who promised me..." Hermione didn't know how to finish without crying, which she certainly wasn't about to do in front of Fleur. Abruptly, she changed the subject. "Fleur, can I ask you something?"
"Certainement, 'Ermione."
"What can you tell me about Veelas? Veela men, specifically."
Fleur frowned. "What do you want to know?"
"Anything, I suppose. Everything," she amended when Fleur remained silent.
After a long moment, Fleur asked, "Why do you want to know?"
"Because apparently the people who developed the Hogwarts curriculum didn't think to include it. They forgot, as usual, that Muggle-borns don't just know this stuff from birth like purebloods and even half-bloods do."
"There's not much to tell," Fleur said. "The men all have dark hair, just as the women are all fair. Other than that, they're just... people, like any others."
"But..." Hermione allowed her voice to trail off there really was no tactful way to ask whether the men were all ugly, or whether they really got better looking if you loved them. "Are there any books about Veela history you could recommend? I assume the culture has rich traditions of its own, distinct from either Muggle or Wizard culture?"
Fleur looked uncomfortable. "I'm not sure any of our own works have been translated from the Veelish."
"Oh." Hermione wondered whether her trip to Hogwarts was a waste of time, but quickly decided that if nothing else, it gave her a place to stay for a little while that was safe from the press. "Can you find out?"
"All right, 'Ermione. I will see what I can do." Hermione had the distinct impression that Fleur was only agreeing because she felt bad about Gabrielle and Ron, but Hermione would take it. She needed the distraction.
Fleur left a short time later, and Hermione spent the next few hours trying not to worry about what the headmistress would say to her request to use the library. She spent some of that time using her charm-protected computer to surf the web, looking for information about the Beauty and the Beast legend. She didn't find much that she hadn't already known, unfortunately, though she did pause to watch part of the Disney movie, which had been one of her favourites since she had first seen it the summer after she started at Hogwarts.
At lunchtime, she realised that she had never informed her parents that the wedding was off, so she Apparated to their house in hopes of catching them at home. They might not have heard yet she wasn't sure whether they still maintained a subscription to the Prophet these days or not. She suspected not, or they'd have most likely been beating down her door already, wanting to console her.
Unfortunately, her parents weren't there when she arrived, and when she telephoned their offices, she was told they had taken a holiday to prepare for their daughter's wedding. She decided to leave a note, since she had no idea where to find them. It took several attempts before she got it right she didn't want them to get tearstained parchment or to worry too much how she was handling everything. Just as she was finishing, they arrived home.
Banishing the letter and wishing she had gone with an earlier draft, she returned her father's hug as her mother asked, "Sweetheart, I'm surprised to see you! Don't you have a million last-minute details for the wedding?"
Whereupon Hermione burst into tears yet again.
She arrived back home around teatime despite her parents' repeated entreaties that she should stay with them for a few days. Her mother's fussing and her father's outrage had helped a bit. She smiled wryly as she enlarged the assorted foodstuffs Mum had pressed on her in the apparent belief that a good meal could cure anything that ailed anyone.
Busying herself putting everything under stasis charms and then storing it all in the pantry or fridge, she tried to decide what to do next. If only Professor McGonagall would reply...
Even as she had the thought, an owl tapped at her window. Hoping it was from Hogwarts, she let the bird in and offered it a treat in exchange for the parchment.
Seeing the seal with its familiar crest, she took a deep breath to quell her pounding heart before opening it.
A/N: Thanks so much to all who have reviewed. I hope to catch up on personal responses soon. And ongoing thanks to my alpha/beta/Britpick team. Love you all!
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Latest 25 Reviews for On Veelas, Light and Dark
83 Reviews | 4.65/10 Average
Hee! Something did indeed occur to her - the perfect opportunity for some observational hypothesis testing with a known Veela -Non-Veela pairing. That's exciting! Will Gabrielle's Initial Attractiveness Quotient diminish as Ron gets to know her (image of angry frump wearing old dressing gown and curlers with fag end hanging from mouth while watching endless re-runs of mind-sapping soap operas on telly)? Or will he simply not notice (a possible confounding factor)?
I had to laugh when she realized Ron still thought Gabrielle is perfect. Too funny, you just know Ron will come crawling back then (he always does). Love, love your story.
Gah!!! totally wish this chapter was longer, I was just settling in for a good read and then poof it was over.
Thanks as always though for the update, I really like where you are going with this story.
LOVED Hermione's teasing of Severus in the last chapter, and how their friendship is developping further here. ^_^
Excellent chapter! I'm hoping right about the same time that Hermione finds Severus to be quite lovely, Ron looks over at Gabs and bolts. *evil grin*
Gosh, Severus seemed very upset about her research. I wonder why. Hmmm, I have NO idea <wink wink>Great story!
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
LOL!!!! Thanks! Glad you're still enjoying it. :)
Woot! We got a Snape smile. I suspect there are more to come.
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
One can only hope! :D
Back to Hogwarts it is. Great story!
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
Thank you! So glad you're enjoying it! :)
More more more more! Please!
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
Just posted chapter 7 a bit ago. Thanks for reviewing! :)
your story delights me with each update - kep up the good work!
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
Thanks! So glad you're still enjoying it! :)
Hermione does like playing with fire, doesn't she? Still loving this story.
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
She does! Gotta figure life's gotten a little boring for a girl who spent her school years chasing down a megalomaniac... ;)
I knew it, now Hermione knows it too.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
That is a wicked laugh you have there.
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
I've been going to Evil Genius school, didn't you know? ;)
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
You must be a straight O student.
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
Hehehehehe. :)
Methinks the gentleman doth protest to much, the room of requirement will provide more than she has bargained for..
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
Heeeeeee! :) You may be right... ;)
awesome chapter! Can't wait of read more!!
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying! :)
Brilliant update, I loved that Hermione dared to tease Severus there at the end:-))
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
Thank you! Glad you liked it! :)
I knew he was Veela. Any doubts I had were nullified once Hermione unrolled the scroll with the picture on it. I think Hermione really appreciates what Severus is doing for her. He's the only one not coddling her. He's treating her exactly the same as he always did before. I agree with Hermione's assessment that Severus likes her. It's absolutely true that if she only irritates him, then he definitely likes her.
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
Hehehehe. I think you're exactly right about Hermione preferring to be treated just like always. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Hermione’s back-talk to Severus was certainly feeble, though she seemed to think she was scoring zinger after zinger. I’m surprised Snape bothered with such insipidity as long as he did. If the aim was for witty adult banter between equals, it didn’t work for me.
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
The aim was actually *not* witty adult banter. I see both of them as rather immature emotionally, which means they should sound somewhat like teenagers. And I think they do.As an aside, much as I—and most authors I know—appreciate constructive criticism, I would prefer not to receive comments that are only negative. If you can't find even one nice thing to say, why are you reading the story? I already know my writing isn't perfect, and it's hard enough to put it out there without getting reviews that make all my hard work feek wasted. And I would bet I'm not the only writer who feels that way.
Severus' bit of blunt honesty re. no-wedding-day seemed to do more good than all the condolences and tissue boxes in Hogwarts. And Hermione suddenly felt rather good - definitely feeling better ;o) LOL - trying to imagine the look on S's face at the prospect of sitting together and sharing secrets... such a shame he wouldn't turn around.
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
LOL! Half the fun is imagining the expression on his face, don't you think? ;)
I'm not sure if 'cute' is what you were going for, but that was honestly my reaction to the final exchange. It's been an enjoyable story so far; thank you for sharing it.
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
Hehehehe! The early stages of romance should always be cute, don't you think? Glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for the review! :)
Hermione's right... anyone who rates as merely "irritating" in Severus' book is clearly considered far superior to the unwashed masses around them.By the way, I competely agree with Severus that it requires too much energy to hate. That's why I've always considered true hate to be a particularly wasteful emotion. That's so much energy that could be channeled in far more positive and productive ways.
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
Yes, I agree with that as well, Hate really does take a lot of energy to sustain. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Er, oops, The Room of Requirement cannot provide food, and that threw me at first, but then got down to their exchange in the library and loved it! Oh yes, he likes her, and won't tell her. I love how you kept him in character. But If male Veelas are so opposite to female Veelas, - Oh. O_oh, opposites attract. Funny that the anicient tome's picture was so like Severus. You'd think that with all the human DNA involved in their make up that there would be some differences. lol Looking forward to more!
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
Hehehehe ooooooops! Totally forgot that about the R of R. Oh, well, at least the story is AU. ;) The genetics are interesting, but if you figure the Veelas are relatively inbred, they would wind up looking very similar through the generations -- particularly if they're wearing the same facial expression! Anyway, glad you're enjoying the interactions between them. Thanks for the review. :)
Progress (jumps with joy!)! Thank you for a wonderful, witty story with a hitherto unread-of twist.
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! <3 :)
Poor Hermione! The Room of Requirement is her friend - a tea service is a comforting, welcoming touch. Why do I have a mental image of Minerva marching to Severus' door, her temper ramping up with every step? She's starting to look like a vengeful Scottish chieftain... and her tartan is bristling...
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
LOL!!!! That mental image of Minerva is cracking me up! :D
Severus is a bit touchy, isn't he?
Response from linlawless (Author of On Veelas, Light and Dark)
A wee bit... though really, isn't he always?! :D