Chapter Four
The Secret Life of Severus Snape
Chapter 5 of 8
OzRatbag2When Eileen Snape listened to the hushed warnings of her sister, Kathleen, little did she realise that her decisions regarding her son's education would affect not only him but also her only grandchild.
ReviewedChapter Four
"Oi, Snivelly? Stupid bloody tosspot. Look at me when I'm talking to you, you ugly greasy poofter."
A shadow fell over the book he was cradling on his lap, and David had to clench the book tightly in a vain effort not to react to his tormenters presence.
David ground his teeth doing his best not to react to Black's taunts. It seemed a shame to avoid such a lovely warm spring day down near the lake, and it made a pleasant change from studying in the filtered light of the Library.
"What are you, fucking deaf, Snape? I was talking to you and it's not really on for you to ignore me. Isn't that right, James?"
"He's just a rude little shit, Sirius. Whadd'ya think we can do to make him listen to us?"
No idea, Prongs, but I reckon he's scared of us. After all, he'll never amount to anything, not that he was worth a tinker's fart beforehand. I think he's playing hard to get. What do you think, James? I think Snivelly is just gagging for it. Isn't that right, Snivellus? You're just a cowardly faggot."
David tossed his book aside and was on his feet with his wand pointing directly at Sirius's heart almost as soon as Black had stopped talking. Always one to play to a crowd, Sirius grinned maliciously and turned to address the students who'd gathered like moths to a flame at the hint of a duel or something more physical. David looked over the milling boys behind Potter and Black, noting with a grim satisfaction that several of his own housemates were standing around with shark-like grins in anticipation of hexing anyone, including David with whom they had 'issues' to resolve. As much as there would have been satisfaction in hexing Black in the back, as he had done many times to David, it wouldn't do to have so many witnesses to report him to the Headmaster.
"James, Stop it! I mean it. Stop picking on Sev." Lily came running up from the lake with several of her friends in tow just to add to the humiliation that David felt at being cornered and bullied by so many of his peers.
"Aw, Lily, we were just having a friendly chat, asking about some home work, weren't we, Prongs?"
"Certainly, and when I asked a simple question he pulled his wand on me, didn't he, James?" Sirius turned and looked for further support from the milling crowd around him. Lily turned her gaze behind her and saw lots of nods and mumbled words backing up Sirius' version of events.
David spat noisily at Black's feet, catching the edge of his left boot. Looking briefly at his feet, Sirius turned quickly and hexed David before he could even think of what spell to use to follow up his opening salvo.
"No! Sirius. Put him down right now!"
"No, I don't think I will, Lily. He spat at me, you saw it, and I think Snivelly could do with a bit of humility. He should understand just how hated he is and how much he scares the other students. I'm doing everyone a service here, Lils. Now leave off and let me get on with it."
Sirius shook off Lily's hands from his arm, turned around and was witness to David trying to prevent everyone seeing his underpants. The cold anger his mother had always tried to warn him about was growing as Sirius laughed and pointed out to the assembled students just how much of a loser Snape was.
"Couldn't even afford to use powder in the wash, though I suppose it's one up on wearing frilly knickers. Or, do you save those for special occasions, Snape?"
As David tried to protect what little dignity he could, he wondered to himself if the Unforgivables were invented by some poor sod tormented by the likes of the Gryffindor Marauders. As soon as he could concentrate to reverse a spell of his own invention, he'd show them all, even Lily who thought nothing of passing on one of the spells he'd invented. Lily had promised him that she'd never talk about them, yet she obviously had told someone. None of them cared, not even the teachers, who more often than not punished David when it was as a result of being goaded by the Gryffindor golden boys.
Blind hatred consumed David, further hindering his attempts to reverse the hex and beat the living shit out of Black. It'd be worth the long stay in the school Infirmary just to loosen as many of the pricks teeth as he could. The laughter of the other students fuelled that hatred even more, and the final humiliation was to hear Lily giggling before she tried to stop, mostly unsuccessfully.
"Sirius, put him down, please. You've had your fun, but enough is enough."
"No, Lils, he's had this coming for years. Not so easy to get out of it when you're not lurking in the shadows, is it, Snivellus? Maybe now you'll realise just how much you should be wary of me, you fucking faggot."
David screamed at that point, his humiliation complete when Lily didn't reverse the hex, but thought asking would achieve the same result. Finally concentrating, though David swore he could see spots in front of his eyes, he managed to reverse the spell and landed heavily on the ground at Black's feet.
Coughing and rubbing the left shoulder he'd landed on, David tried to stand, clutching handfuls of dirt and grass to throw in Black's face.
"Oh, and while you're down there, Snape, wipe that slime off my boots. These cost good money and having any part of you on them makes me worry that it'll eat through the leather. No, better yet, lick it off. You'll enjoy it," Sirius said, playing to the crowd which continued to grow.
"Probably the closest you'll ever get to anything that wasn't some wizards cast offs."
Crouching on his haunches, David listened to the laughter all around him, and then with an unfocused shout, he launched himself at Black, bringing him down heavily. As he pushed himself back on his haunches, David made sure he punched his tormenter in the bollocks with both hands.
It was, David decided, remarkably satisfying to hear Black squeal like a girl, all the while clutching his jewels as he rolled around the dusty patch of ground. David smirked, only to find himself face to face with Lily, a look of fury on her face as she poked him in the chest.
"What did you do that for, Sev? Why didn't you just leave while you had the chance? Punching Sirius there, of all places, that was cruel."
To further emphasise her point, Lily had stopped poking David and grabbed hold of his wand arm. David didn't even realise he'd pulled his wand, but Lily kept trying to push his forearm down so that his wand pointed at the ground.
"Enough, Sev. You should leave now, you've done enough."
David looked at Lily incredulously and, perhaps seeing her clearly for the first time, realised nothing he said or did would ever be good enough to snare the heart of Lily Evans.
"I'll leave when I'm good and ready, you filthy Mudblood." David said roughly, shaking Lily's hands from his right forearm.
All the colour drained from Lily's face, and she turned and fled, not even looking back when David tried to clear his throat and call after her.
Turning swiftly towards Black, Potter and the rest of the crowd, David's nose met Potter's fist with an awful wet crunching sound. The crowd of boys and girls closed in on him jeering, many of them slapping the hand of one fist with the other hand, or drawing their wands. Other than Potter, no one managed to pummel David as an authoritative clap and strange mist descended on everyone gathered, cutting through the rising voices gathered around him.
"Episkey!"
"Now, Mr Potter, if you could escort Mr Black to the Infirmary, I will deal with Mr Snape. As for the rest of you, twenty points will be taken from each of you. You should be ashamed of yourselves. Now, away with you!"
Another loud clap and Severus found everyone disappearing as quickly as rats up the proverbial drainpipe. Wiping his bloodied hands on his robes, David faced the Headmaster with his head bent to hide the hot tears threatening to fall, all the while waiting to find out what punishment he would be facing. His mum would never forgive him if he ended up expelled for fighting. Mind you, she'd be understandably irate to hear he'd used 'that' word against another student. In fact, David wasn't sure whom he feared more, Professor Dumbledore or his mum.
"My office I believe, Mr Snape. We have much to discuss, not least why you feel I shouldn't expel you for using that particular word towards another classmate."
Nodding his head, David picked up the book he'd been quietly reading and trailed behind the Headmaster all the way to his office, dreading just what Professor Dumbledore was planning to do to him behind closed doors.
~*~
It seemed to David as though he'd been scrutinised by Professor Dumbledore for a very long time, as the Headmaster sat behind his desk, his fingers steepled as he stared at the miscreant in front of him.
"So, Mr Granger, David, just what should I do with you? I confess I'm at a loss as to whether I shouldn't call on Eileen and let her deal with you instead. I'm not sure she deserves that though."
David's head shot up to hear the Headmaster call him by his real name, but it was the hard stare and look of anger behind his normally sparkling eyes that really chilled David to his core.
David cleared his throat and tried to speak several times, but merely croaked before he put his head in his hands and shook with silent tears.
"Ah, remorse is all very well, David, though how useful it is after the event is debatable. I've watched you all these years hoping you'd eventually find your niche within the school community, but today's spectacle... No, I don't think you'll ever find any true friends here, certainly not if you continue to use such derogatory words when you're angry. You've learnt some nasty habits in that nest of vipers it seems."
"I... I didn't mean to, sir. She laughed at me with the others and then blamed me for hanging around instead of leaving once I'd managed to reverse the spell. I need to go and apologise to her before you send me home."
Looking at the Headmaster earnestly, David continued speaking, almost trying to rationalise why he'd called Lily something he'd heard the other Slytherins' use under their breath towards any and all of the Muggle-born students.
"Why did she laugh? If she hadn't laughed like the others..." David trailed off, shaking his head slowly as he ran his hands through his hair tugging at the roots as if to clear his head.
"I've made a complete cock up of things, haven't I, sir? I'll go and pack my bags and leave. I've got friends at home and maybe Mum and Dad will send me to the local comprehensive. I've been studying the coursework in case, in case it all became too much."
David shut up, fully aware that he was rambling and becoming more and more panicked at the thought of having to explain just what he'd done to his mum. Dad might not understand a lot of it, but he'd express his disappointment as only his dad could.
"No, I think not, Mr Snape," Dumbledore said emphasising David's more commonly known name in the Wizarding world. "I think you'll just have to cope with the part of your schooling left as your mother hoped you would. She expended a lot of effort to get you safe, and to throw it all away now seems premature wouldn't you say?"
"You're not expelling me?" David couldn't hide the incredulous tone in his question.
"No, I'm not, but I have a task that only you can accomplish. You have a unique perspective on your housemates, and I find myself in need of those skills, if you're willing?"
"Anything, sir. I'll do anything to help you, but what could I do that someone like you couldn't?"
"I need someone to report on the goings on within the school, but most especially Slytherin House. There is a darkness descending on our world, Mr Snape, and I find myself at a loss of how to stay on top of certain activities. I need someone I can trust to report directly to me. After all, if this group of thugs takes control of our world, then your parents are targets. You don't want that, do you, David?"
"No, sir, but what can I do?"
"Well, you've conveniently ostracised yourself even further from your classmates. It seems you've made yourself a non-entity to a degree, a caricature of everything people fear, though I do recognise that Mr Black was the main catalyst as he appears to have been ever since your first year. That doesn't excuse your actions, but it does give you the perfect cover for what I need."
"But what happens if I get caught listening? They'll, they have no boundaries. What happens then, sir?"
"I have some tricks I can teach you to help you, David, but if you get caught, then you are, unfortunately on your own to a degree. The only person who will know of your actions will be me, and my successor if such is needed. No, I am asking you to risk your life for every single day, but then I was under the impression that you'd been doing this more or less since you climbed onboard the train in your first year. Perhaps I am mistaken."
"And if I choose not to do this, sir?"
"Well, then I would pack your bags, Mr Granger. I suspect that after I talk to Eileen, you will be back in Harrogate before morning."
David gaped at the corner that the Headmaster had deftly steered him into, all the while recognising that he could say no and face his mothers wrath, or say yes and perhaps find a way to rub everyone's nose into it once the task was done successfully.
Looking at Professor Dumbledore with a piercing look, David straightened up and nodded his head once decisively.
"A wise decision, David, a wise decision indeed."
~*~
Author Notes: This was written for Sunny33 for the recent 2012-13 SSHG Exchange, but could not be completed in time to post as my gift. The first part is complete, and the second in the process of being written. If you're looking for hawt sexxors, then this isn't the story for you. There is some swearing, along with the judicious use and misuse of canon.
Many thanks to the fabulous team of Scattered Logic and Magically25 who have helped me get the story to the stage it is at currently. Without their input, I doubt this would be half as good. I am truly very, very lucky to have had their continuing help. Any remaining mistakes (yes, my comma fetish) are mine alone.
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Secret Life of Severus Snape
28 Reviews | 5.0/10 Average
omg. i could kill dumbledore. What a twat!
Interesting idea. Looking forward to reading more :)
It is going to be a very long seven years, for Severus/David.
My heart is breaking, for both Severus and Hermione.
How very kind of Dumbeldor to teach David how to split his personality, so he can be a useful tool for him.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Yes, he's the consumate manipulator. After all, who would willingly send a child to a home to grow up knowing he was regarded as something akin to excrement, and thereby forge a tool he can use...later.JKR may have wanted the last laugh against a teacher she hated, but her treatment of Harry is remarkably similar to David/Severus' - eerily so.
It's really interesting to see how he's managing his personas and it's equally disturbing as well. This dichotomy is going to be important in the course of things, yes? I love the meta of this whole concept.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you so much! :)It will be important and it's been one of the hardest things to do - separate the personas and then deliberately weave them together. How I've actually tried to do it will be more clear once the first few chapters of the second part post. This could have been a prompt that sponsored a one-shot, but why do anything easily?
That putrid sack of crud, what "thugs" Potter and Black are the thugs, and they get off scott free .
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
~dances with joy~ I do like it when readers get a strong emotional response from my chapters, because it's exactly what I was after! :)I've always hated Sirius with a passion because he is the typical bully, self assured and able to pick the outsider quickly and efficiently. That JKR used him as a window for Harry as a close friend of his parents leaves a particularly sour taste.Dumbledore turns a blind eye to the bullying because it suits his purposes to do so. After all, who better to spy than the youth who is completely ostracised and almost invisible? Mind you, David will have the last laugh. ;)
Love the twist. I don't think I've ever hated Dumbledore more and that's saying something. You should be so very, very proud.
In my heart, I wish David had told him to go stuff it and left him to create a new pawn, but then we wouldn't have this wonderful setup for whatever else you have in store, so I will persevere.
I've always felt that Lily could and should have done much more in that scene, if she was any type of real friend. I certainly would have.
Response from arynwy (Reviewer)
I've always felt that Harry was much better friend material than his mother and I totally agree with you as to why she made the choice she did. It was a frightening time and she wasn't a social outcast like Sev, Hermione and to a lesser degree, Harry himself.
I also understand that Harry was in a position to take the risks because he had nothing to lose except his own life, which he didn't put a high value on due to his upbringing. Lily did what was easiest and most logical - what all of her peers were doing.
This is why I've always felt that Harry's group was stronger than that of the Marauders and that his generation could be the one to break the cycle of war and prejudice. Lily never would have reached out to Draco. Harry could and did.
The parallels between Harry and Sev's lives always manages to fascinate me. I tend to imagine James and Lily sitting there, forced to watch Harry live a version of Severus's and her childhood combined, seeing how he makes the difficult, but correct choices over and over again as a form of penance.
I've written a book here... going away now and looking forward to your next update. I wish you happy writing as always!
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you so much! :DIt took ages to write this chapter, just as one of the chapters in the second part is still giving me grief, but I'm so pleased it works. It really sets up the second part and gives the window to what Harry saw in the pensieve during his Occlumency lessons with Snape.Yep, I really wish he had too, but then I wouldn't have a story. ;)She could have and should have, but I tend to think Lily understood the dynamics of the world she'd been thrust into as an 11 year old. Realistically, would she have risked losing her status in Gryffindor for someone she knew had earned the ire of Sirius, James, and to a lesser extent, Remus and Pettigrew?Honestly, I don't think so, as wrong as that is. It's only when Lily snares James that her place is secure in the magical world, though for only a brief moment.She's painted as a heroine, when in reality she seems (to me from my judicious misuse of canon) far more fickle with her friendships.
My heart is just breaking for David.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you, and things will get better for him. :)
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you, and things will get better for him. :)
Loving the contrast from his school days to his holiday times. Talk about messing with his brain! :)
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Always! :) I'm a cruel author the way I torture the characters, no matte their guise. :p
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Always! :) I'm a cruel author the way I torture the characters, no matte their guise. :p
Peter is right, of course. Eileen is a fool to trust that devious old tyrant Albus Dumbledore. Safest place in Britain my eye!
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you, and you're right, Eileen has placed her trust in someone with an agenda. :)I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you, and you're right, Eileen has placed her trust in someone with an agenda. :)I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Very interesting. And I love that his dad is a Granger, of I'm sure those Grangers. Poor Severus having to deal with all this at the age of eleven. I'm inclined to agree with Peter.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you! I was looking for a different slant to Severus' backstory, and the bunnies deliveredd. To deal with this at such a young age, when he's too young to understand just what his mother is asking, is pretty dark and dastedly, but I really do love the character of Peter Granger. he appeared almost fully formed. :)I think it Peter had a smidgeon of magical blood, David would have had a far more different childhood, but then I wouldn't have had a story. ;p
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you! I was looking for a different slant to Severus' backstory, and the bunnies delivered. To deal with this at such a young age, when he's too young to understand just what his mother is asking, is pretty dark and dastardly, but I really do love the character of Peter Granger. he appeared almost fully formed. :)I think it Peter had a smidgeon of magical blood, David would have had a far more different childhood, but then I wouldn't have had a story. ;p
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you! I was looking for a different slant to Severus' backstory, and the bunnies deliveredd. To deal with this at such a young age, when he's too young to understand just what his mother is asking, is pretty dark and dastedly, but I really do love the character of Peter Granger. he appeared almost fully formed. :)I think it Peter had a smidgeon of magical blood, David would have had a far more different childhood, but then I wouldn't have had a story. ;p
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you! I was looking for a different slant to Severus' backstory, and the bunnies delivered. To deal with this at such a young age, when he's too young to understand just what his mother is asking, is pretty dark and dastardly, but I really do love the character of Peter Granger. he appeared almost fully formed. :)I think it Peter had a smidgeon of magical blood, David would have had a far more different childhood, but then I wouldn't have had a story. ;p
This is a very interesting and intruguing start. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you, and I hope the story continues to intrigue you! :)
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you, and I hope the story continues to intrigue you! :)
You can't just throw a Granger in there with no explanation!!! Something tells me David doesn't have such a nice time of it at Hogwarts...
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
I know, cruel of me isn't it? ;)I think your hunch may be quite accurate, but there is a silver lining in all of this. It just won't be apparent for a while. :)
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
I know, cruel of me isn't it? ;)I think your hunch may be quite accurate, but there is a silver lining in all of this. It just won't be apparent for a while. :)
Okay, you've got me hooked. Now what is going on?
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you! :) Music to my ears to hear I've hooked you from the prologue. May you continue to stay hooked.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you! :) Music to my ears to hear I've hooked you from the prologue. May you continue to stay hooked.
This story get more and more interesting. I'm really looking forward to the rest of the plot.And the writing is superb too!And the people! I like how Eileen is pictured as more complex and with no possibility of leaving her bad husband because she has shamed her family. It makes good sense.Looking very much forward to the next chapter.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! :) I wanted to show Eileen as more complex than a battered wife. She's an individual who has her own journey, even though what she has done to D/S is questionable. No one, not even Severus is black and white.The next chapters are in the queue.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! :) I wanted to show Eileen as more complex than a battered wife. She's an individual who has her own journey, even though what she has done to D/S is questionable. No one, not even Severus is black and white.The next chapters are in the queue.
Ohhh, Dumbledore promised, that's alright then what could possibly go wrong.
Granger! any relation to a future know it all, there must be, this is getting interesting.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
I know, a kindly old man with not a manipulative bone in his body. :pMaybe... :D
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
I know, a kindly old man with not a manipulative bone in his body. :pMaybe... :D
Why do I have the sneaking suspicion that Jane Jones becomes Hermione's mum?
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
I think your sneaking suspicion might be right on the money. :)
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
I think your sneaking suspicion might be right on the money. :)
mmmm Interesting premise, never seen this one before should be quite a ride.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you! :) I believe I can safely guarantee that this going to be something very different and I owe it all to Sunnythirty3's prompt. Without it, I would never have had the bunnies doing somersaults. ;)
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you! :) I believe I can safely guarantee that this going to be something very different and I owe it all to Sunnythirty3's prompt. Without it, I would never have had the bunnies doing somersaults. ;)
Interesting beginning, looking forward to more.May I assume since it is posted in Potions Under Duress that Sev and Hermione will be an 'item', so to speak?
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Hmm, yes, they'll be an 'item' but not quite in the way I think you're suspecting. The clues are all in the summary, and though it may not be regarded as SSHG in a romantic sense, it's location in Potions Under Duress is for a very good reason. :)/cryptic clues
Response from snapes_witch (Reviewer)
Oh dear, I hope my suspicions are wrong . . .
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Hmm, yes, they'll be an 'item' but not quite in the way I think you're suspecting. The clues are all in the summary, and though it may not be regarded as SSHG in a romantic sense, it's location in Potions Under Duress is for a very good reason. :)/cryptic clues
Response from snapes_witch (Reviewer)
Oh dear, I hope my suspicions are wrong . . .
Yay! *more happy dances* So pleased to see this posted here. :D
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
~hugs~I will never be able to thank you enough for the absolute gift of a prompt that fostered this story. I just hope that when I write 'The End,' you'll end up with a gift that no one in their right mind ~twitch~ would ever think of doing. :D
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
~hugs~I will never be able to thank you enough for the absolute gift of a prompt that fostered this story. I just hope that when I write 'The End,' you'll end up with a gift that no one in their right mind ~twitch~ would ever think of doing. :D
So, Severus, selectively Obliviated, renamed and relocated away from the Evanses. Hmm. I'll bite.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Umm, no, not really (sort of) but it's a good guess. :) The story is long, involved and should be clearer when the first chapter posts. I hope it entertains as I unravel canon bit by bit.
Response from arynwy (Reviewer)
Now, you've really got me sitting here wanting more.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you for such a fabulous compliment! :) Once the story is fully finished, I believe I can safely say that I think it will be the best thing I've ever written.The whole story is plotted out, the first part and part of the second part complete...and now I just need to nail the bunnies to the desk and finish it off. :p
Response from arynwy (Reviewer)
::pushes box of #3 nails along with my most comfortable hammer through the screen::
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
LOL - Hold that thought and I'm sure you'll enjoy the chapter in the second part which is making me laugh even louder. :D As for the bunnies, they appear to be co-operating currently.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Umm, no, not really (sort of) but it's a good guess. :) The story is long, involved and should be clearer when the first chapter posts. I hope it entertains as I unravel canon bit by bit.
Response from arynwy (Reviewer)
Now, you've really got me sitting here wanting more.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you for such a fabulous compliment! :) Once the story is fully finished, I believe I can safely say that I think it will be the best thing I've ever written.The whole story is plotted out, the first part and part of the second part complete...and now I just need to nail the bunnies to the desk and finish it off. :p
Response from arynwy (Reviewer)
::pushes box of #3 nails along with my most comfortable hammer through the screen::
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
LOL - Hold that thought and I'm sure you'll enjoy the chapter in the second part which is making me laugh even louder. :D As for the bunnies, they appear to be co-operating currently.
Interesting start. I'm looking forward to see where this is heading.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you and though it will be slightly different to my usual stories, I hope people enjoy what the bunnies dropped off thanks to Sunnythirty3's delicious prompt. :)
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you and though it will be slightly different to my usual stories, I hope people enjoy what the bunnies dropped off thanks to Sunnythirty3's delicious prompt. :)
About time you joined the land of the living again! *grin* Good start. Let's see some more. SOON!
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you! :)Another chapter is in the queue and I'll add a further chapter to the queue this afternoon after I've had some sleep. I do nights, so it's off to the cot for me.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
Thank you! :)Another chapter is in the queue and I'll add a further chapter to the queue this afternoon after I've had some sleep. I do nights, so it's off to the cot for me.
Poor David, he is a round peg in square hole. I get the horrible feeling that manipulating old twit,{ AKA Dumbledor } has had a hand in this.
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
He is, and I wanted to show that no matter who he has to be a Hogwarts, his future is determined by that fiction. As for Dumbledore, I don't think he had a prior thought that he could 'use and abuse' David, but when the opportunity was presented to him, he grabbed it with both hands. I trust Dumbledore about as much as I trust Sirius - not that much. :)
Response from OzRatbag2 (Author of The Secret Life of Severus Snape)
He is, and I wanted to show that no matter who he has to be a Hogwarts, his future is determined by that fiction. As for Dumbledore, I don't think he had a prior thought that he could 'use and abuse' David, but when the opportunity was presented to him, he grabbed it with both hands. I trust Dumbledore about as much as I trust Sirius - not that much. :)