Chapter 2
Chapter 2 of 8
phoenixSeverus and Hermione work together to develop an antidote by a vicious poison administered by Death Eaters during the waning days of the war.
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Snape perused the notes as he considered his situation. He had temporarily traded one prison for another, though he had to admit this one was more pleasant. He had his own room, with a real bed and bath, clean clothes and presumably decent food. At the end of this project, he would win his freedom, though he wasn't sure what that meant. He was sure the wizarding world still reviled him for his role in Dumbledore's death the foolish old man hadn't even left a record of the plan, sentencing him to a fate worse than death and his vault had been confiscated for reparations. That left him with nothing and no job prospects.
It suddenly occurred to him that while the document assured his freedom, there was one thing it did not ensure. As he finished his review of the notes, he closed the books and turned to face Hermione. "I have several theories, but there is one more thing I require."
"You aren't in a position to bargain," she replied sternly as she crossed her arms over her chest.
"But you see, I am. I may be the only one who can brew an antidote. I want assurances my wand will be returned to me," he stated bluntly.
"You have been given your freedom."
He crossed his arms, signaling his unwillingness to budge. "But what is freedom to a wizard without a wand? My price for my cooperation is my wand when this is over. With that, I will have my status as a full wizard reinstated. Without it, I will be every bit as much a prisoner as I was at Azkaban." While he knew about the Muggle world and probably could have lived within it, that was not what he wanted, that was not who he was.
"Fine. Start work and I'll owl the Minister," she relented.
He knew that starting work without the assurances was a risk, but one he had to take. Some of the steps to the antidotes he had in mind were time consuming. Getting the Minister's approval might take hours, hours that might make the difference between life and death for the patients he was trying to save. Hours that could make the difference between freedom and life in Azkaban for him.
When Hermione left the lab, he inventoried the ingredients in the laboratory and made a list of the ones he would need that were not stocked. Some were exotic and some were controlled, but he had no doubt that Hermione would have no trouble procuring them. He still found it odd that she, of all people, had been placed in charge of this project, but thinking back to the student she had been at Hogwarts, he had to acknowledge her brilliance, no matter how deeply that acknowledgement bit. After all, she had saved Longbottom's potion on more than one occasion, and only someone with a deeply intuitive grasp of potions could have done that.
She returned and began to hover again as he prepared the various bases he thought might be useful. He tried not to get annoyed by her behavior because he knew that she did not trust him. As he considered this, he had a stroke of brilliance. If he could get her to trust him, to be an advocate for him, it might prove useful. After all, she was like a daughter to the Minister and a sister to St. Harry Potter. But he couldn't be too obvious about it because she would become suspicious if he changed his personality too much.
"I should hear back from the Minister in a few hours," she replied matter of factly when he looked up from his work.
"Thank you." Handing her the list, he said, "These are some supplies that I require. I know that some of them may be difficult to obtain..." He let his voice trail off.
She took the list and read through it quickly. "I can get them. Just a reminder, this place is warded. You can't get out."
"That is not my intention. I have agreed to work on the antidote, and that is what I will do. Whatever you may think of me, I am a man of my word." Foolish old man, he said bitterly to himself as he thought of his promise to Dumbledore. It was because he was a man of his word that Dumbledore was dead. He had been willing to forfeit his life so that Dumbledore would have lived, but the old headmaster had insisted that Severus's life was more valuable. And what had keeping his word gotten him? A life sentence to Azkaban Prison, that's what.
She eyed him skeptically before departing.
While she was gone, he finished the bases and began outlining theories for several different potions. Normally he would have demanded to see the patients, but he knew that access to them would be limited. At least Hermione's notes had been extremely detailed and comprehensive. He wasn't sure exactly who had brewed this potion, but he was incredibly relieved it was not one of his own creation. He was sure that fact would make returning his wand more palatable to the Minister. He had a few theories about who might have brewed the poison. Unfortunately, none of those he suspected were alive, so it was likely to remain a mystery.
After almost four hours, Hermione returned. In that time Severus had gotten the potions to states where he needed the ingredients he had sent her to get. He had then explored his new prison. There were two bedrooms he supposed the second was for her and a reasonably well stocked kitchen along with a main room that served as both the living and dining areas. He made a sandwich while waiting for her, not wanting to get involved in cooking a meal since he had no idea how much time he had before her return.
"That's everything," she said as she set several bags down on the table.
Leaning over, he casually rifled through them for a few moments. "You've done an excellent job." He picked up the bags and took them to the laboratory. Unsurprisingly, she followed him. "If you wouldn't mind, I could use some assistance."
"You?" she asked skeptically.
"As you said, time is of the essence, and as I do not know the exact composition of the poison, I have a number of possible antidotes to prepare. I have written instructions for several of them in case you would be willing to assist."
She stood rooted to the spot, dumfounded.
"Miss Granger?" he asked cautiously.
Finally recovered from the shock, she replied, "Of course. Where would you like me to start?"
He pointed at the right side of the workbench. "You may begin with that one. I believe the instructions are quite clear, but if you have any questions, please do not hesitate to ask. We cannot afford to make mistakes."
As Hermione set about the task he had assigned her, she started wondering about Snape. Since he had accepted the pardon, he had not acted like the Snape she recalled. He seemed quite human, unlike the great bat of the dungeon. It was reasonable to expect his stay in Azkaban to have changed him, and he had been every bit as rude as she had expected on her first visit, but the man working beside her? He seemed like someone else all together.
While stirring the cauldron the requisite amount of time, she considered that she had only known Snape as a teacher. The other teachers hadn't seemed to hate him, and she did recall Harry telling her about Dumbledore defending Snape, not to mention Remus had encouraged them to trust Snape. It was possible that Snape outside the classroom was a different person. And he had always been quite polite towards the Slytherins, so it wasn't as though he couldn't be nice.
She ran out of time to consider the complexities of Severus Snape as the potion she was making required all her attention. She lost complete track of time as she moved between the different cauldrons and assisted Snape as he required it. From time to time he would look over her shoulder to check her work and ask if she had any questions. Not once was he rude and out of the corner of her eye, she thought she saw him give her an approving nod.
As she finished the twelfth step of the third potion, he said, "I believe the potions can sit for a few hours. The rest would do us both much good."
She looked at her watch and saw that it was nearly half past three in the morning, and she suddenly felt the weariness of a long day of work wash over her. "Are you sure? I can still work," she said through a stifled yawn.
"Miss Granger, we absolutely cannot afford any mistakes. There is plenty of time to finish the potions even if we take a few hours rest."
"I suppose you're right. Seven o'clock?" She placed her hand over her mouth as she yawned again.
"Eight would be better. And I think we should also eat something before bed to ensure a restful slumber." He placed his hand on the small of her back and guided her out of the laboratory.
As she slid into one of the chairs at the table in the little kitchen, she noticed a letter on the table, addressed to her. Opening it, she saw that Arthur had agreed that Snape would have his wand returned to him if he succeeded. She knew how much this would probably cost him politically, but hopefully, saving all those people would help everyone forget about Snape. "Minister Weasley has agreed you can have your wand back," she said as he placed a sandwich before her and then sat down across from her.
"That is most wise," he replied, feeling a small measure of relief. Now all he had to do was successfully counteract the poison.
After taking a couple of bites, she asked, "Do you really think you can save them?"
"Without knowing the exact composition of the poison or who brewed it, I cannot say for certain. I am doing my best."
"Did You-Know-Who have many other potion brewers?" she asked.
"A few that I knew of. There could be more about whom I did not know. While he trusted me, he trusted no one completely." That was the simple truth. Noticing she had finished eating, he said, "I know that you have many questions, but perhaps those can wait until later. It is most important that we rest. I apologize for leaving the dishes to you."
"What? Oh." She lazily waved her wand and the dishes flew to the sink where they cleaned themselves and then stacked themselves in the cupboard. "I understand. Well, goodnight," she said as they departed to their own rooms. Once in her room, she kicked off her shoes, flopped on her bed and had a moment to wonder why she had wished him goodnight before sleep overtook her.
Severus was awake earlier than planned and was eager to resume his work. While he did not relish the idea of disturbing Hermione from her much needed rest, he knew that she would be upset if went to work without her. Besides, he really did need her assistance. There was just far too much work for him to complete it by himself in time. Entering her room, he quietly moved to her bedside and gently shook her shoulder. "Miss Granger." When she did nothing more than moan softly, he shook a little harder and said a little louder, "Miss Granger."
Her sole reaction was to pull the pillow over her head.
Removing the pillow, he said sharply, "Hermione!"
She sat up abruptly, hitting Severus's forehead with hers. He rubbed the spot, trying to ease the pain.
"Ow! What is it?" she asked crossly, also rubbing her forehead.
"Forgive me for waking you, but it is time to get back to work." He observed her for a few seconds. If he had thought her hair was normally bushy, it was positively wild now. It was slightly flattened on the left said where she had been laying and the back stuck up rather more than usual leaving her looking like a deranged poodle, and he fought hard not to laugh.
"What? Work? Oh! Right, right. I need a few minutes to shower and grab something to eat. Meet you in the lab in fifteen minutes?"
Relieved that her brain seemed to be regaining function, he replied, "I have already seen to my needs and will resume my work." Not long after he left her room, he could hear the shower running. To expedite her arrival in the laboratory, he placed some fruit, cereal, the milk pitcher and a mug of coffee on the table for her. He also considered that this small act of kindness would help improve her opinion of him. He then retired to the lab to continue his potions' brewing.
As Hermione stood under the shower, she tried to clear her mind, knowing that she would need all of her concentration to work on the potions. Brewing one potion at a time was difficult, but working on three simultaneously was nearly impossible. As she washed her hair, she considered Snape. He had been polite, courteous and even complimentary. She wondered what it meant, or what he might be up to.
But what would he gain from being nice to her? Nothing. If he cured the patients, he was assured his freedom and his wand. Was it possible he was capable of being nice when there was nothing to be gained? And he had used her first name. She actually liked the way it sounded.
"Quit thinking about him," she chided. The last thing she needed right now was the distraction that trying to figure out Severus Snape.
After rinsing the last of the soap off her body, she quickly dried and dressed, pulling her hair into a ponytail so that she wouldn't have to deal with it or have it in her way. When she walked through the kitchen, she saw her breakfast laid out on the table and stopped dead in her tracks. Her first thought was that she obviously did not know the real Severus Snape and that perhaps he would be worth getting to know.
She ate her breakfast quickly and cleaned up the dishes. When she walked into the laboratory, he was hunched over one of the cauldrons. She began organizing her work area while keeping an eye on him to see when he finished the step of his potion. When he finished, she said, "Thank you for breakfast."
"I thought it best so that you could get to work as soon as possible," he replied simply.
She chided herself for thinking it had been something more. Snape was practical and that's all the gesture was. Without preamble, she immersed herself in her potions, knowing that they had to finish them by the end of the day.
Severus was quite impressed at her skills. She had always been quite good about following directions, and it seemed that had not changed. And she hadn't been at all annoying. Of course, she was working by herself, not trying to pull Potter and Weasley along with her. He still didn't see what she had seen in those two for them to form such a close friendship. He was well aware that the boys were likely drawn to her intellect and her willingness to help them. Oh, yes, he had known that she helped them it had been quite clear in their essays.
Was she really that starved for attention and friendship that she would give away her most important asset? A part of him wondered what had happened to the other two members of the Golden Trio, and if they were still riding her coattails. He hoped not. She deserved better than either of them. She deserved a fellow intellectual, someone like him.
Quit it, you lecherous old man. You're old enough to be her father, and she'd never be interested in someone like you, he chided. He must be having those thoughts because she was the first remotely pretty and nice woman he had seen since being sent to Azkaban.
The potion he was working on required time to stabilize, and while he waited, he watched her out of the corner of his eye. She was rather good looking. Womanhood suited her quite nicely. Her hair was a little wild and unruly, but who was he to judge someone on the state of their hair?
He forced his attention back to his work. Thinking about her would not solve problems, only create them, and if he didn't finish these potions, it would be a moot point because he would be on his way back to Azkaban.
One by one he finished his potions. Noticing she was still working, he asked, "Hermione, is there anything I can do to assist you?"
She looked him, dumbfounded, for several seconds. "You called me Hermione."
"That is your name, is it not? And you are no longer my student. If it offends I you, I shall call you Miss Granger."
"No. I'm not offended," she said, slightly embarrassed. "It's fine if you call me Hermione. I just wasn't expecting it." He arched an eyebrow at her and she continued. "Oh, help." She fumbled with the pieces of parchment on the workbench. "Here. This one needs the last two steps. I'm almost done with the others."
He waited a beat, and then suggested, "You may call me Severus if you wish. In fact, I would prefer that, I believe."
He moved to the cauldron and noticed that she had all the ingredients organized and measured next to the cauldron. He had never really paid that much attention to how she brewed potions and was impressed with her organization.
"Thank you, Severus," she said, his name slightly unfamiliar on her tongue.
"Not at all," he replied politely, knowing it would serve to gain her trust. "May I enquire what the next step is, after the potions are complete?"
She stopped and looked up from her work. "I intended on taking them to St. Mungo's where they would be administered to the patients."
"May I accompany you? There may be subtle modifications that need to be made to whichever potion we determine is the correct one. And there is a certain order in which they need to be administered or it could be fatal. If I am able to be there, it would save time, which may be of the essence."
She looked uncomfortable as she determined how to answer him. "I'm not sure that would be a good idea. You being seen at St. Mungo's... We've managed to keep your release until now. It would be... Well... The wizarding world doesn't trust you," she finished bluntly.
"Perhaps a sealed Floo connection to the ward where the patients are quarantined? No one would need know that I am there, save the patients themselves. And their caregivers, of course."
She considered his suggestion for several seconds before saying, "I suppose that would work. I'll send an owl once I've finished."
She completed her potions and left to send the owl. Before she could return to the laboratory, he joined her in the kitchen. "Everything is ready for transport."
"Then we're just waiting on the Minister," she replied and looked down at her hands folded before her on the table.
To break the uncomfortable silence, she asked, "What will you do?" When he didn't immediately answer, she added, "I mean, assuming this works, you'll be free. What will you do?"
He leaned back in the chair. "I have not had time to give it much thought. I know that it is unlikely I will be welcome here in Britain since Albus did not see fit to leave a record of our agreement at least not one that anyone has found."
"You really it was on his orders?" she asked, leaning forward slightly with her head titled slightly.
Her reaction hardly surprised him, but she seemed genuinely interested. "Indeed it was. But as I am sure you have discovered, he does not always give people all the information he had on a subject. He was a most exasperating man to deal with," he said as he poured out the tea she had brewed.
She twisted the cup in her hand. "Yes, we did learn that." She thought back to his strange gifts and the utter lack of information he had given Harry about where to find the Horcruxes, or his own past. "It is possible he did leave that information somewhere. I mean he can't have wanted you to suffer, be locked for life in Azkaban. He testified on your behalf last time."
"Unfortunately, that is not something I had time to pursue. While Headmaster at Hogwarts, I was closely watched by my fellow Death Eaters. Searching for something that would exonerate me would have drawn the wrong sort of attention. I had hoped he had left something with Minerva or one of the other members of the Order." He truly had been disappointed that a man who had so carefully planned so many things over the years would have abandoned him. After all that he had done for Dumbledore, he had thought a memory, a sealed letter, something would have been left behind.
"We could search Hogwarts. That would be the logical place he would have left something like that," she said eagerly.
He laughed weakly. "Even pardoned, do you honestly believe they would let me anywhere near the school? It was my last residence. I'm sure they would fear that I have dark artifacts stored there and would want to retrieve them and continue the Dark Lord's work."
She frowned at his use of 'Dark Lord'. "Well, I could go search. No one would question me going to Hogwarts."
"No, they probably wouldn't, but they would question you wanting to search the school," he replied pointedly.
She thought a moment. "I could say I'm going there to talk to Dumbledore's portrait. Perhaps his portrait could provide some answers," she said hopefully.
"Minerva asked it and got no reply on the subject." At least that was what she had told the Wizengamot, and he had no reason not to believe her. She had been shocked and disappointed to hear that he had killed Albus. Surely she would have wanted an explanation. After all, they had been friends while he taught there.
Hermione sat contemplatively for a few moments. "No response? So he didn't answer Professor McGonagall's question?"
"He spoke very little while I occupied that office. And Minerva was not officially the Headmistress so he was under no obligation to speak with her." It still annoyed him that he had been played the pawn, even during his tenure as headmaster.
"But he was under obligation to speak to you and didn't."
"The portraits are only under obligation to assist the current Headmaster with regards to the school. Even if she had been Headmistress, he would have been under no obligation to answer a question pertaining to my innocence."
"I can't believe he would do that to you," she said, aghast.
"If half of what Rita Skeeter said is true, there is much that all of us did not know about him. For more than fifteen years I was a pawn to him. Once my usefulness was at an end..." He let his voice trail off, letting her come to the same conclusion he had.
"Well, I'm going to talk to him when this is over," she determinedly.
He chuckled derisively. "Good luck."
An owl flying in the window interrupted their conversation. Hermione took the letter it offered. After reading it, she said, "Let me go ahead and ensure no one is in the ward. Follow after five minutes."
Severus forced himself to sit patiently while he waited for the five minutes to elapse. He then moved to the fireplace, threw the Floo powder into it and said "Unknown Poisons Ward, St. Mungo's" as he stepped into the green flames.
When he arrived, he brushed the soot off his shoulders before noticing one of the Healers and Hermione standing there waiting on him, holding the potion's case.
"Where should we begin?" asked the Healer without bothering to introduce himself.
Glancing around the full ward, he said, "It would be best to start with the patient who is strongest. Some of these potions will be more taxing than others."
The Healer led him to the bedside of a young woman. "She was the last victim."
The Healer took a couple of steps back, but still watched intently as Severus examined the patient briefly before deciding which potion to administer first.
Hermione watched him silently, willing him to succeed. Not only did she want these who were the final victims of the war to recover, but she wanted it for Severus. She couldn't say why, but she had an uncanny feeling that he was telling the truth about why he killed Dumbledore. While it was possible she could prove his innocence while he was in Azkaban, she had a feeling that it would take both of them working together to find the proof.
She crossed her arms and chewed nervously on her fingernails. The first potion yielded no reaction. After the second the woman started twitching, she watched as Severus pulled a small phial out of the bag and administered it to her. The patient immediately calmed. Hermione wanted to ask him how it was going, but the look of concentration on his face told her that she should not interrupt him.
He pulled out the third potion and, using the supplies he had brought with him, made some modifications to it before giving it to the woman.
She held her breath because she recognized it as one she had worked on. She desperately hoped she hadn't made any errors even though her work had always been perfect before.
After a few seconds the woman gasped, inhaling deeply, and Hermione closed her eyes, fearing the worst.
Severus said softly, "Hermione."
She opened her eyes and looked over at him. The patient was looking around, trying to determine where she was. The Healer moved to her bedside as Severus stepped away.
"How do you feel?" the Healer asked gently.
"Wh-where...?" the woman asked weakly.
"You're in St. Mungo's." The Healer waved his wand over the woman to cast a diagnostic spell. He smiled warmly as she grasped the woman's hand. "You're going to be fine."
Relief rushed through Hermione to know that she had brewed the potion perfectly. She looked behind her and saw that Severus was already starting to treat the other patients in the ward.
She followed the attending Healer in Severus's wake, reassuring the patients as they regained consciousness. It didn't take long for him to finish administering the antidote, and Severus did his best to blend into the background of the room. She moved to stand before him. "That was wonderful. Thank you."
"I am no longer needed here. I should leave before more medical personnel come back to the ward to assist with patient care," he said quietly, trying to remain in the shadows.
Her elation waned slightly. "Oh, yes, of course. This is a Floo direct connection. Just say 'safe house'." He was gone before she could say anything else.
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Well, I'm hoping you are still working on this story, and haven't given it up. I quite like it. And who says you have to follow JKR's story now? Just write what you were always going to, and the rest can go hang. Mark it as A.U. If you have to; we'll still read it. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Don't worry, this won't be abandoned. :) It's actually almost complete. I have a couple of more chapters almost ready to post. I've just had one of those pesky attacks of RL - you know things like cooking, cleaning, taking care of children. LOL I also don't want to spam the board by updating both of my stories at the same time. Thanks for reviewing and glad to see you are enjoying the story.
Response from TheCopperDragon2004 (Reviewer)
Yay can't wait! So many of my beloved stories ate being abandoned, I'm glad this one isn't!
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
I know what you mean. I did the review-a-thon and saw so many stories that looked interesting from the descriptions, but had not been updated in 6 months or more so I reluctantly passed, even though I was sure I would enjoy the story.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Don't worry, this won't be abandoned. :) It's actually almost complete. I have a couple of more chapters almost ready to post. I've just had one of those pesky attacks of RL - you know things like cooking, cleaning, taking care of children. LOL I also don't want to spam the board by updating both of my stories at the same time. Thanks for reviewing and glad to see you are enjoying the story.
Response from TheCopperDragon2004 (Reviewer)
Yay can't wait! So many of my beloved stories ate being abandoned, I'm glad this one isn't!
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
I know what you mean. I did the review-a-thon and saw so many stories that looked interesting from the descriptions, but had not been updated in 6 months or more so I reluctantly passed, even though I was sure I would enjoy the story.
Well, I'm hoping you are still working on this story, and haven't given it up. I quite like it. And who says you have to follow JKR's story now? Just write what you were always going to, and the rest can go hang. Mark it as A.U. If you have to; we'll still read it. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Thank you for your review. I haven't given up on it, I just have summer vacation and visiting relatives in the house, so it's been chaotic to say the least. The next chapter should be up soon. I generally don't have problems with AU (heck, most of what I've written has been AU), but I was writing this when DH came out and the muses were gutted by what happened to Severus and refused to cooperate for years. They finally got over it. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Thank you for your review. I haven't given up on it, I just have summer vacation and visiting relatives in the house, so it's been chaotic to say the least. The next chapter should be up soon. I generally don't have problems with AU (heck, most of what I've written has been AU), but I was writing this when DH came out and the muses were gutted by what happened to Severus and refused to cooperate for years. They finally got over it. :)
Gah, hell of a cliffie!it's probably just as well Dumbledore is already dead, because no doubt Severus would be inclined (after he's cleared) to repeat the task for all the missteps and wandering path he's leading the pair of them on.I tend to agree with Hermione, that it's all moving at too fast a pace, but then love is not something that runs to a definable schedule. ;)
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
<eg> Cliffies are always such fun - from the writing point. I know how frustrating they can be for the reading point.I have to agree with you that given all he's been through, Severus is probably going to start feeling a bit less guilty about the role he played in Dumbledore's demise. And poor Hermione is in a bit of a land of confusion. She didn't even want to work with Severus and now she finds she not only can get along with him, but might have some feelings for him. Pretty scary for her.Thanks for the review, and the resolve for the cliffie should be up soon.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
<eg> Cliffies are always such fun - from the writing point. I know how frustrating they can be for the reading point.I have to agree with you that given all he's been through, Severus is probably going to start feeling a bit less guilty about the role he played in Dumbledore's demise. And poor Hermione is in a bit of a land of confusion. She didn't even want to work with Severus and now she finds she not only can get along with him, but might have some feelings for him. Pretty scary for her.Thanks for the review, and the resolve for the cliffie should be up soon.
I can't help thinking that Dumbledore wanted Severus back in the castle, so used the idea of a 'keepings box' as incentive,knowing full well that it would take both of them to open it.The revelations into the psyche of Severus are interesting, and it's layering of his life that is making Hermione more and more cognisant of how large a role he had in saving their skins. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Dumbledore is so annoyingly cryptic. I don't know that he planned for the two of them to get together, but he certainly is annoyingly pleased about it, isn't he?Hermione is definitely getting her eyes opened to the real Severus, though she is more open minded than the boys and always defended him - knowing the Dumbledore had a reason for placing so much trust in Snape. I think she's actually a bit relieved that despite everything Dumbledore put her and her friends through, that she was correct in standing by Severus. And she is gaining a new appreciation of what he did to keep them alive, even if all of it from the books isn't relevant to this story, he did still help out immensely.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Dumbledore is so annoyingly cryptic. I don't know that he planned for the two of them to get together, but he certainly is annoyingly pleased about it, isn't he?Hermione is definitely getting her eyes opened to the real Severus, though she is more open minded than the boys and always defended him - knowing the Dumbledore had a reason for placing so much trust in Snape. I think she's actually a bit relieved that despite everything Dumbledore put her and her friends through, that she was correct in standing by Severus. And she is gaining a new appreciation of what he did to keep them alive, even if all of it from the books isn't relevant to this story, he did still help out immensely.
Curiouser and curiouser. Manipulative old coot that he is, I doubt it's been too often that Dumbledore has ever had a dressing down from anyone.To give the information readily means there are things at play than neither Severus or Hermione realise.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Yeah, the old codger really had it coming. I don't know if she would have had the gumption to do it to his person, but she definitely reached the breaking point here, didn't she? Not that anyone can blame her.And yes, he would never make it that simple, would he?
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Yeah, the old codger really had it coming. I don't know if she would have had the gumption to do it to his person, but she definitely reached the breaking point here, didn't she? Not that anyone can blame her.And yes, he would never make it that simple, would he?
A pleasant snape in a position to ask, and receive pretty much anything from the Ministry. it seems a little too easy that the antidote worked so quickly, and I sense that it's going to be a long and windy path (with lots of jagged edges) before Severus truly is exonerated
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
It was nice to see Snape find his backbone again, wasn't it? He knew he had something he could bargain with.And there is a difference between a pardon and being exonerated. The latter clearly having a much more arduous path. Here's to hoping that path leads somewhere, right?
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
It was nice to see Snape find his backbone again, wasn't it? He knew he had something he could bargain with.And there is a difference between a pardon and being exonerated. The latter clearly having a much more arduous path. Here's to hoping that path leads somewhere, right?
This is such an inventive and original start, and it's sucked me in almost straight away. :)The mystery and hard decisions made make me wonder just what could be so toxic, and I can't help wondering if Minerva isn't one of the victims. It would make Severus work that much harder and longer to find a cure I think, given his previous friendship.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked the start. I was trying to find something that would cause the Ministry to decide that perhaps working with Severus is better than leaving him to rot. Of course, given he's working for his freedom, I don't know that it would matter too much who the victims were. Cure them or spend a lifetime in Azkaban - not really much of a choice, is it?
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked the start. I was trying to find something that would cause the Ministry to decide that perhaps working with Severus is better than leaving him to rot. Of course, given he's working for his freedom, I don't know that it would matter too much who the victims were. Cure them or spend a lifetime in Azkaban - not really much of a choice, is it?
Hermione, he cooks. Don't let that one get away! I'm glad he was able to get his feelings out in the open, but that she wasn't afraid to let him know it was too much too soon. Now, I really want them to get some answers!
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
LOL I love the sentiment about him cooking. His eagerness and her reluctance come from their respective ages, but at least he wasn't put off and deciding to pull away from her over it. Of course given he's who he is, he's probably inwardly thrilled that she didn't recoil from his affections. And yes, they need some answers.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
LOL I love the sentiment about him cooking. His eagerness and her reluctance come from their respective ages, but at least he wasn't put off and deciding to pull away from her over it. Of course given he's who he is, he's probably inwardly thrilled that she didn't recoil from his affections. And yes, they need some answers.
I should have known that Dumbledore's answer seemed to clear cut. He never quits, does he?That was quite an intimate secret that Severus shared to his newly acquired friend. Of course, he probably does realize how much he owes her, and he still wants to get in her good graces. I hope they find what they are looking for.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Nope, Dumbledore just has to obfuscate everything. As to him telling Hermione, I think he's finally realizing that there is a give and take to life, that now that he's a free man (well, almost free) he can do what he wants for the first time ever. He wants to learn more about her, so he realizes he has to tell her more about him. He's still trying to figure out why she wants to help him since no one else seems to want to do so. Of course, he was also careless with his remarks and backed himself into a corner where he was forced to answer, but it felt good for him to finally share that with someone who cared about him.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Nope, Dumbledore just has to obfuscate everything. As to him telling Hermione, I think he's finally realizing that there is a give and take to life, that now that he's a free man (well, almost free) he can do what he wants for the first time ever. He wants to learn more about her, so he realizes he has to tell her more about him. He's still trying to figure out why she wants to help him since no one else seems to want to do so. Of course, he was also careless with his remarks and backed himself into a corner where he was forced to answer, but it felt good for him to finally share that with someone who cared about him.
Well, at least Severus wasn't too stubborn, and he is allowing her to help him, even if he just thinks he is humoring her. Now, let's hope they can find this keepings box.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Severus is still a bit beaten down from his time being left to rot in prison and being abandoned by everyone. Of course Hermione while not Dumbledore's number one fan, has to have her Gryffindor belief that there was no way he could have abandoned Severus.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Severus is still a bit beaten down from his time being left to rot in prison and being abandoned by everyone. Of course Hermione while not Dumbledore's number one fan, has to have her Gryffindor belief that there was no way he could have abandoned Severus.
I didn't expect success so quickly. That just means more time for a developing relationship. Well, provided he doesn't get fussy and run off or something. That would be totally unlike him though, wouldn't it? :) I suppose he probably can't really move on until he is officially pardoned, even though it has been promised. Off to find out more ...
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Well he had to succeed quickly since the Ministry left securing his help until just about the last minute. But that's okay, Hermione has found herself and underdog to champion. So it's not like she will be abandoning him. Thanks for your review. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Well he had to succeed quickly since the Ministry left securing his help until just about the last minute. But that's okay, Hermione has found herself and underdog to champion. So it's not like she will be abandoning him. Thanks for your review. :)
Being mean is not in Hermione's nature, and I'm glad she realized it and backed off. I wonder how long it will take them to decide that working together is not so bad? Snape will find an answer; there is too much at stake.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Being mean isn't in her nature. I think she was trying to find that line between authoritatve and mean and having some trouble with it. But she is bright enough to know that some methods don't work with some people. Ahem, Snape. ;) We're all rooting for Severus. I doubt anyone has the knowledge or experience he does, hence Arthur being forced to turn to someone he isn't sure he should trust. Thanks for reviewing and I hope you enjoy the rest of it. New chapters come every 4-7 days if I don't forget. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Being mean isn't in her nature. I think she was trying to find that line between authoritatve and mean and having some trouble with it. But she is bright enough to know that some methods don't work with some people. Ahem, Snape. ;) We're all rooting for Severus. I doubt anyone has the knowledge or experience he does, hence Arthur being forced to turn to someone he isn't sure he should trust. Thanks for reviewing and I hope you enjoy the rest of it. New chapters come every 4-7 days if I don't forget. :)
And being the Potion Master he is, I suspect him to be quite a formidable cook.I like that Hermione allows herself time to be in doubt. Some things should not be rushed.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
I'm sure he is quite a good cook. As everyone has said, following a recipe is a lot like brewing a potion.Hermione would naturally have doubts. Her life has been a whirlwind of adventure that is just now starting to slow down. Of course, his life was stagnating in prison and he's likely got the 'take the bull by the horns' mentality. Quite a dichotomy there, isn't it?
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
I'm sure he is quite a good cook. As everyone has said, following a recipe is a lot like brewing a potion.Hermione would naturally have doubts. Her life has been a whirlwind of adventure that is just now starting to slow down. Of course, his life was stagnating in prison and he's likely got the 'take the bull by the horns' mentality. Quite a dichotomy there, isn't it?
I'm guessing that when Hermione realises she loves Severus the "keepings box" will open, perhaps they already have it but won't know until it opens, The kiss was very sweet, and unexpected .
I'm sure that Severus is a good cook, being a potions master would help in that line.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Soon the mystery of the keepings box will be revealed. I'm glad you liked the kiss. I think Severus is in this place where his thoughts are something along the lines of 'nothing ventured, nothing gained' and that he knows his time with her is quite finite if something doesn't happen. This is a man who can finally take control of his life.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Soon the mystery of the keepings box will be revealed. I'm glad you liked the kiss. I think Severus is in this place where his thoughts are something along the lines of 'nothing ventured, nothing gained' and that he knows his time with her is quite finite if something doesn't happen. This is a man who can finally take control of his life.
Dumbles and his riddles. Why do I get the feeling that they are making this harder than it really is this time? A keeping box sounds so much like a house-elf term for something. Hermione is so very cute when she's flustered - I get the feeling Severus enjoys seeing her that way when he's responsible for getting her that way.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Yup, Dumbledore has to have his riddles. Can't give a straight answer to anything, even if it keeps an innocent man out of prison. And isn't flustered Hermione fun? Something tells me Severus' has enough personality quirks he could do that for years. :) Thanks for reviewing.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Yup, Dumbledore has to have his riddles. Can't give a straight answer to anything, even if it keeps an innocent man out of prison. And isn't flustered Hermione fun? Something tells me Severus' has enough personality quirks he could do that for years. :) Thanks for reviewing.
That elderly wizard in Magical Probate was getting on my last nerve. If Hermione hadn't decided to talk to Arthur to sort out this folderol, I think I might have cursed the old man myself just to get him out of the way. I keep thinking about what that Keeping Box might be, and we have a few clues to go by:•Severus had said that "It's a magically sealed object that will open when the time is right." •Dumbledore had talked about Faith, and how Harry's faith had allowed him to call Fawkes when he an Ginny were trapped in the Chamber of Secrets. •And Hermione has already demonstrated the quality that was necessary to open the keeping box.Well, I have no idea right now what that "box" might be, but I'll keep reading this story and looking for more clues. You've really set us quite a puzzle to unravel.I'm glad that Severus' kiss didn't put her off. I think they can find the evidence to prove his innocence and get to know each other better at the same time, too. In fact, I don't know how the two of them could find that proof without getting to know more about each other.Thanks for another great chapter!Beth
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Aren't lifelong, institutionalized bureaucrats fun? NOT! I really enjoyed having some fussy old, by the rules wizard for Hermione to have to deal with. Thank goodness she knows the Minister.I'm glad you are enjoying the puzzle of the box. It just wouldn't be right if Dumbledore had left evidence where someone might actually be able to easily find it. So frustrating that he can play these little games even from beyond the grave.That kiss was a nice subtle shift in their relationship, wasn't it? He figures he can finally live his life on his terms and not feel like he has to protect others and she's coming into adulthood and not quite sure what she wants. And he can feel confident that he didn't get outright rejected.Thanks for taking the time to leave such a thoughtful review.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Aren't lifelong, institutionalized bureaucrats fun? NOT! I really enjoyed having some fussy old, by the rules wizard for Hermione to have to deal with. Thank goodness she knows the Minister.I'm glad you are enjoying the puzzle of the box. It just wouldn't be right if Dumbledore had left evidence where someone might actually be able to easily find it. So frustrating that he can play these little games even from beyond the grave.That kiss was a nice subtle shift in their relationship, wasn't it? He figures he can finally live his life on his terms and not feel like he has to protect others and she's coming into adulthood and not quite sure what she wants. And he can feel confident that he didn't get outright rejected.Thanks for taking the time to leave such a thoughtful review.
And, as a Potions master, I'm sure he's an excellent cook at that. ^_^
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
I'm sure that he is. Given his reputation, I'm sure he has plenty of skills that can surprise Hermione.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
I'm sure that he is. Given his reputation, I'm sure he has plenty of skills that can surprise Hermione.
Now there's a new idea for Severus to warp his mind around, someone that cares about him, and doesn't make him suffer for it.
On to the search for the keepers box.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
It is a new idea for Severus, isn't it? She's be nice to him and really has nothing to gain for herself. She's doing this because it's the right thing to do. Very novel for him.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
It is a new idea for Severus, isn't it? She's be nice to him and really has nothing to gain for herself. She's doing this because it's the right thing to do. Very novel for him.
YES! at last someone willing to stand up to the old bastard esteemed Headmaster, I hope he will at least tell Hermione what this " keepings box " looks like.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
LOL I love everyone's reaction to her lashing out at Dumbledore. Someone had to do it, right? Hopefully she can solve the mystery of the keepings box and help Severus get his life back.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
LOL I love everyone's reaction to her lashing out at Dumbledore. Someone had to do it, right? Hopefully she can solve the mystery of the keepings box and help Severus get his life back.
Hermione doesn't have much reason to trust Severus, and yet she does, she must be listening to her heart. Cant wait to see what the great bearded tit... sorry professor Dumbledor, has to say for himself.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
LOL I love your description of Dumbledore. Severus has said just enough to picque Hermione's curiosity, to help her realize that none of them really knew him. And of course she loves to champion and underdog. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
LOL I love your description of Dumbledore. Severus has said just enough to picque Hermione's curiosity, to help her realize that none of them really knew him. And of course she loves to champion and underdog. :)
Perhaps there is method to Dumbledore's madness. At each stage when they have run into a barrier to finding what they needed, they have worked together to put the pieces in just the right order. As it was with brewing the healing potion, now to find the keeping box they are working together... and at each stage they learn something more about each other... and each time they grow closer and trust more deeply. I can't wait to find out what they find in that stroage room!Beth
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Given it's Dumbledore, I'm sure he thinks there is a method to his madness and always has been. Just not everyone shares his vision of things. And I think he's meddling from beyond the grave, much to everyone's annoyance.
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
LOL! I think you're right about Dumbledore's opinion of his meddling ways. He was always clothing his plans in that "greater good" ploy which, if one happened to find him/herself not among the ones who benefitted, was very annoying, indeed.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Given it's Dumbledore, I'm sure he thinks there is a method to his madness and always has been. Just not everyone shares his vision of things. And I think he's meddling from beyond the grave, much to everyone's annoyance.
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
LOL! I think you're right about Dumbledore's opinion of his meddling ways. He was always clothing his plans in that "greater good" ploy which, if one happened to find him/herself not among the ones who benefitted, was very annoying, indeed.
Y'know, why does Dumbledore have to be so cryptic? There's NO NEED for it. Jerk.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
I think your last word answers your first question. LOL When has that man ever given a straight answer to anything? But at least he gave her some sort of an answer - which is more than Minerva got.
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Yeah.Dumbledore? NOT high on my list of "favourite people". Even IF I DO think Snape and Harry were right to be "Dumbledore's Men". That's less praise of Dumbledore than condemnation of the Dark Lord and the Ministry; the alternative was so much worse...
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
I think your last word answers your first question. LOL When has that man ever given a straight answer to anything? But at least he gave her some sort of an answer - which is more than Minerva got.
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Yeah.Dumbledore? NOT high on my list of "favourite people". Even IF I DO think Snape and Harry were right to be "Dumbledore's Men". That's less praise of Dumbledore than condemnation of the Dark Lord and the Ministry; the alternative was so much worse...
I wonder what Snape makes of Hermiones comment about her being the only one that cares for him. I hope he doesn't balk too much.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Definitely a shock for him to hear to that someone actually cares about him. That's something that probably hasn't happened since Lily. Dumbledore may have acted like it, but I think in hindsight Severus realizes he was merely a tool. Hopefully his new lease on life will allow him to open his eyes and realize he doesn't have to be alone, that no one would be in danger from getting close to him.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
Definitely a shock for him to hear to that someone actually cares about him. That's something that probably hasn't happened since Lily. Dumbledore may have acted like it, but I think in hindsight Severus realizes he was merely a tool. Hopefully his new lease on life will allow him to open his eyes and realize he doesn't have to be alone, that no one would be in danger from getting close to him.
Enjoyable chapter thank you. Wonder if the House Elf could have found the item. But then they would not have the opportunity to cement their friendship.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
The house-elf would have gladly helped, but there is the small matter of not knowing exactly what they are looking for. And as you said, it gets her more opportunity to unravel the enigma of Severus Snape.
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
The house-elf would have gladly helped, but there is the small matter of not knowing exactly what they are looking for. And as you said, it gets her more opportunity to unravel the enigma of Severus Snape.
I bet writing this chapter was something of a catharsis for you. I know I had some major grief with the 'Sainted Dumbledore'. Enjoying!
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
It really did feel good to have someone finally lash out at him. Yes, he was a powerful wizard, but he was by no means perfect and those cracks were showing before Rita's book, but her investigation really put them in perspective. I'm glad you are enjoying this so far and thanks for the review. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Work Release)
It really did feel good to have someone finally lash out at him. Yes, he was a powerful wizard, but he was by no means perfect and those cracks were showing before Rita's book, but her investigation really put them in perspective. I'm glad you are enjoying this so far and thanks for the review. :)