New Chapter for Just Business
Just Business
museymuse50 Reviews | 0 Likes, 2 Favorites
Hermione Granger's business is failing, badly. When Severus Snape turns up and offers her a chance to save it, she can't believe her luck; but working with Snape brings a whole new set of problems. Written for voxangelus in the SSHG Exchange 2012.
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Hello. I just wanted to say what a wonderful writer you are. I hope you will continue with this story. i'm off now to look your bio up. Have a nice weekend. :)
I liked the brisk pace of the letters. I think their face-to-face encounter could be shaped a bit more for intensity,.. but nevermind.
I'm suspending my disbelief that HG can be so dense. I'm still not convinced but perhaps I can give her the benefit of the doubt that she was distracted with other things.
I loved the "Original Prompt" :D and i guess you must have too, otherwise you wouldn't have started this fan-fic!
I love the exchange of letters in the chapter. Well done!
The letters are truely fun, they both seem to exprees themselves so much better in the written word. Two peas in a pod, it seems.
So I'm thinking the puzzle is that she fancies Snape. Crooks obviously approves.
Enjoyable chapter. Thanks for sharing.
Forgiveness and naked ladies. What a fun-filled chapter.
Oh my. Well, at least she got to air her grievances.
Snort...giggle..floppy...teehee
Enjoyable chapter. Thanks for sharing.
Great start with a suitably snarky Snape.
Epistolary commentary can be so much fun to write, can't it? ^_^
I really enjoy letter stories. :)
I am thoroughly enjoying the way this story is unfolding. Keep up the good work!
Glad to see George has lost none of his sprit. I think Severus has been shocked into seeing sense at last, and now that the air has been cleared they can get on with business.
Aww, she's finally able to get over her guilt of leaving him in the shack. It was nice that he was so honest with her in that regards. And I bet he takes Granger out when he's alone and pets her and secretly cherishes having a little pet lol.
Poor Snape and evil George! Very much looking forward to the next chapter!
I do believe Just Business is turning into a friendship and I hope more in later chapters. the chapter was great laughter sorrow and forgivness, what more could you ask for.
Oh dear that could of gone better but how hilarious. :)
The mouse thing had me grining but the floppy had me falling about. LMAO
I love your first chapter.
C'est très drôle ! Very funny ! Thanks
Loved the update, it was smashing:-))
Great to see the update! I don't blame Hermione at all for throwing her hands up in the air and storming off. I really enjoy the characterisation of the boys and the Weasleys too. Looking forward to more...