Chapter 7
Chapter 8 of 13
MinervaZelko meets old friends and new challenges and learns more about the significance of flannel waistcoats.
Chapter 7
AN: Elinor, Marianne and Margaret are the Misses Dashwood from Jane Austen’s Sense and Sensibility. Elinor is sensible, practical and good at hiding her emotions; Marianne is wild, romantic and wears her heart on her sleeve; and Margaret, at twelve, is planning expeditions and trying to learn fencing. Their neighbour Colonel Brandon is, at first, shunned and dubbed infirm by Marianne because of his age – he is eighteen years older than she – and his habit of wearing flannel waistcoats when the weather calls for it.
17-11-2012
Subject: Age
Dear Zelko,
I do hope your joints are better now. Have fun with your books. I envy you your free time, as our project is nearly finished, and I have virtually no spare moments.
Draco would like to meet you; he is a bit obsessed with learning everything about Headmaster Snape.
I have attached an article I found while doing some research plus my comments, which you might find interesting.
Best wishes,
Hermione
Severus felt guilty. He had missed Draco a lot during the last fourteen years, and Lucius had hinted that his son could have used another father-figure during his twenties when their relationship had been severely strained.
18-11-2012
Re: Subject: Age
Dear Hermione,
I was joking. Do not picture me in a flannel waistcoat. In reality, I am as dashing as they come. Taking the different climate into account, I gather that English joints in their early thirties are as good as Slovenian joints in their fifties.
The author you quoted is a complete moron, in my not so humble opinion, but as I am sure you will not agree with my arguments without some proofs, I’ll send you a research paper from a Master in Armenia that will bring you around to my line of reasoning.
Regards,
Zelko
19-11-2012
Subject: New Potions-line
Dear Zelko,
If you‘re still interested (I know you are!), Draco Malfoy will be visiting his parents in Miramare. His decision was a bit sudden and very inconvenient, as we are nearly finished with our project. I tried to provide him with your name and address, but he was gone before I was able to do so. I do not doubt that you will find him if you wish.
Flannel waistcoats? I am aware that you have read widely, but this reference is unexpected! If you did it on purpose, I will have to change my perception of you yet again. And warn you that I am more of a mixture between Elinor and Margaret and as different from Marianne’s mindset as possible. If you really mean what I think you did, this is the point where I should enquire about your lost loves and possible secret engagements.
On another note, you (and Master Dshendorkian) make a very plausible argument; I bow my head humbly. Yet, I have another bone to throw: Nadja brought along a thesis of one of her Potions buddies that might revolutionise how one has to look at Marmeladinger’s Paradoxon.
Have fun!
Hermione
The attached detailed discussion of a highly controversial topic in modern potions brewing left Severus surprised about Hermione being able to grasp all its intricacies.
He gladly wrote back an answer, consisting of roughly four pages, mainly to distract her from flannel waistcoats and possible engagements, but also to avoid fretting about the inevitable confrontation with Draco.
The Malfoys had not told their son the reason for their urgent summons, and Lucius planned to Apparate him to Severus’ cottage upon his arrival in Miramare.
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The following morning Severus decided to forego coffee for herbal tea during his wait for Draco, turning over arguments in his head, though he knew fully well that they held no sway for an abandoned child.
To distract himself, Severus tried to find out more about flannel waistcoats. By simply googling “Elinor, Marianne, Margaret” and “flannel waistcoats”, he soon discovered that the wearer of said garments was considered one of the great romantic heroes in English literature. He had a vague recollection of Heathcliff and Mr Darcy, but Colonel Brandon had so far eluded him. Severus also watched a YouTube clip of a BBC version of Sense and Sensibility in which Colonel Brandon looked like a fairer-haired and slightly heavier version of himself.
Well, the ball was in his court, it seemed. What should he do about it? He had already acknowledged that he enjoyed exchanging letters with Hermione very much. She had been his pupil nearly fifteen years ago, but that would not be a problem after such a long time, should their relationship become more substantial.
The main obstacle was his deception about his true identity. While she would undoubtedly understand his initial need for subterfuge, she would not look kindly on his courting her as Zelko Princip, even per email.
Yet, he was not prepared to travel to England and meet her. Severus felt that his revelations would be easier if made in person and, therefore, was at an impasse. He decided to act manly and ignore the problem for the moment.
He had to smirk despite himself when an almost elegant pop heralded the arrival of father and son Malfoy. Lucius had to do everything in style.
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Why the name zelko princip?
Response from Minerva (Author of Being Muggle-born)
Princip sounds like Prince (and meens it too, at least according to my internet dictionary) and Zelko was the only Slovenian name starting with an S-sound save for Savo which is too close to Severus (I could not have Hermione suspecting something too early in the story). I have thought of Gavrilo Princip but as the name is common enough I thought to use it anyway.
Brava! I have been completely charmed by reading this story and Hallelujah. I'm kind of glad I read Hallelujah first, because it put me in the mood to emotionally enjoy Being Muggle-born. Thank you for sharing this story which was obviously a labor of love. Your gift for telling a story has given me a truly awesome afternoon of SSHG goodness!Hugs, Beth
Response from Minerva (Author of Being Muggle-born)
Thank you very much for your reviews. I am working on a few stories right now and two are in queue.
Oh, that meeting went beautifully! It was everything I could have hoped for!
Beth
I loved Severus' reference to the Mayan calendar. When he and Hermione finally meet I wonder if they'll recognize each other right away?
Beth
A cross between Mr Darcy and Colonel Brandon... That sounds about right. *sigh*
I can't wait to see how their meeting goes.
Beth
Well done, Hermione! She is being very proactive without being pushy. Her email had just the right tone to nudge a man without making him feel panicky. And she signed it with "Fond regards."
This is getting SOOOO good. Be still my heart.
Beth
Severus also watched a YouTube clip of a BBC version of Sense and Sensibility in which Colonel Brandon looked like a fairer-haired and slightly heavier version of himself.
I adore his observation here. Well done, you! And I hope the reunion with Draco will go well.
Beth
I love that Severus finally showed his therapist some of his returning magic. Zelko Princip was a clever persona to have created. And now I want to know what Hermione wrote in her second email.
Beth
OH! I am SO glad Severus finished that bottle of wine!!!
Beth
This has got me hook, line, and sinker. I just finished reading Hallelujah and had to come check out this story!
Beth
...a stall selling local headscarves caught his eye. They were made of wool, black with floral motifs in muted colours. On a whim he bought one.
I wonder if he is aware of some subconscious thought that led him to buy a headscarf? Could that thought be named Hermione?
Great story!!!
Beth
And Hermione Granger is definitely Severus' intellectual equal. I'm loving the direction his thoughts are taking.
Beth
I would love to have been a fly on the garden wall when Lucius saw a strange man deeply hugging his wife! Will he even recognize Severus without him speaking?
Beth
Aww, what a cute ending! And Hermione is right, you don't get uninterrupted time once kids come, so make it like bunnies while you can! Lol. Very cute story though, I really liked it. Thanks for sharing it with us all. :)
Response from Minerva (Author of Being Muggle-born)
Thank you!
Yes! Whether he knows it yet or not, Severus is getting closer and closer to Hermione and the Malfoys. *iz grinning*
Beth
Yay! This outcome is far better than any I could have imagined, AND it's perfectly natural. It's no wonder that S is a bit... unsettled at just you right it all seems.Beautiful as always, Minerva. Thank you so much for Being Wonderful at this!
Response from TeaOli (Reviewer)
Oops! The second part of that comment makes little sense.I'd meant to write: It's no wonder that S is a bit... unsettled at just how right it all seems.
Response from TeaOli (Reviewer)
Oops! The second part of that comment makes little sense.I'd meant to write: It's no wonder that S is a bit... unsettled at just how right it all seems.
Bah! I thought they were actually meeting this chapter. Pooey. Well, I eagerly await the next chapter, with the meeting of the two I hope! I still think she suspects something. :)
I continue to enjoy this story a lot. (A transgender Bellatrix--now that's a scary thought.) But I find it moves really slowly. Or perhaps that's just because I'm looking forward so much to their meeting?
Stretching it out, stretching it out! The anticipation is enough for me to begin to feel anxious/nervous. This chapter did a good job helping the reader feel what the story's subjects feel. Thanks.
When they do meet, she will look back and see all the subtle hints, that he has been dropping. The question is, when that happens will she be angry with him, or herself, we just have to wait and see.
I loved her Bella comment as well. Can't wait to see how that meeting goes. Will she hit him with a thousand questions or be stunned silent?
Response from Minerva (Author of Being Muggle-born)
Neither. And much worse ...
Response from Minerva (Author of Being Muggle-born)
Neither. And much worse ...
He could gve her hints... ;)
Response from Minerva (Author of Being Muggle-born)
Where would be the fun in that? (For us, that is)
Response from Minerva (Author of Being Muggle-born)
Where would be the fun in that? (For us, that is)
More, more, more please! And soon? Pretty please with lemon drops on top? This is getting more and more exciting. I'm really looking forward to the meeting and subsequent hexing.
I, too, am nervous about the reveal. But also can't wait to see it.
The suspence is killing me, please end my torment asap. I did like this chapter it showed how well they can comunicate with each other. PLEASE PLEASE UP DATE SOON.
Response from Minerva (Author of Being Muggle-born)
Everything is either in queue or in administrative hold.
Response from Minerva (Author of Being Muggle-born)
Everything is either in queue or in administrative hold.