The Butterfly Freed
A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green
Chapter 4 of 4
peskipiksiSequel to 'A Scandal in Bulgaria'. When the infamous photographs of her and Krum go missing, Hermione herself must turn to Snape for help.
EXTRACT FROM THE DIARY OF LUCIUS MALFOY
It was on a wild, tempestuous evening, when the wind screamed and rattled against the windows, that my old friend Severus Snape, to my amazement, knocked at the door of the Manor, threw himself down into my best armchair before the fire and laughed heartily.
'What a splendid night it is!' he exclaimed.
I stared at him in bewilderment. 'You like this weather?'
'It suits my purpose, Lucius. I mean to break into the Ministry tonight.'
'For Heaven's sake!' I expostulated. 'Whatever for?'
He stretched his long legs out in front of the fire, and clasped his hands behind his head. 'You remember the Daily Prophet article a few days ago about the termination of Oliver Wood's engagement? He stated he had been sent his fiancée's letters anonymously. I have every reason to believe the blackmailer works at the Ministry and is hiding more such correspondence from unfortunate women in his office.'
It was my turn to laugh heartily now. 'Think, Severus! How could he possibly keep that hidden?'
My friend was unperturbed by my mockery. 'He is an Unspeakable, Lucius, and as such virtually untouchable. The worst man in London. He works in the most secretive department of the Ministry. It is the perfect place to hide the tools of his vile trade; it has the highest security. I have tried all other avenues of admission without success. That is why I shall require your help tonight: you got into the Department of Mysteries five years ago; you can gain me access tonight.'
'Think what you are doing,' I cried.
'You will admit that the cause is morally justifiable?'
'Yes. Technically criminal.'
'No more than casting the Dark Mark, an action in which you were prepared to aid me.'
'I didn't actually cast the Mark!' I protested. 'I only spoke the words.'
Snape merely regarded me with his fathomless black eyes.
'Think!' I said desperately. 'If you're caught an honoured career ending in failure and public disgrace.'
He waved a hand dismissively. 'What are failure and disgrace against the peace of mind of a young woman? THE woman, Lucius!'
I sighed. Hermione Granger-Weasley was back in the country, then.
Snape regarded me sternly. 'Miss Parvati Patil was The Prophet's star reporter, engaged to one of the Wizarding world's premier sportsmen. She is now ruined, disgraced, writing for The Quibbler. I don't know what The Quibbler pays, Lucius, but it will not be enough for her to survive. In a year's time, she will be on the streets. I will not allow him to ruin anyone else!'
I turned it over in my mind. 'Well, I don't like it; but I suppose it must be,' said I. 'When do we start?'
*
The passwords and counter charms had changed, of course, from my last break-in five years ago, but I am still a frequent visitor to the Ministry, (very old family, donations to excellent causes) and hear things others do not. It took a little time, but soon there was that shimmer in the air which occurs when wards are breached, I closed the door behind us, and we had become felons in the eyes of the law. In the black-silk face masks Severus had insisted we wear, I was uncomfortably reminded of my Death Eater days a thing which seems to occur regularly when assisting my old friend in one of these escapades. At least all Death Eaters had remarkable powers, carefully cultivated, of seeing in the dark.
We met no one in the corridors, and I supposed that the wards were considered enough, and watch wizards not necessary here. To my amazement, however, Malvetis's door was neither locked nor bolted! I touched Snape on the arm and he turned his masked face in that direction.
'I don't like it,' he whispered. 'Anyhow, we have no time to lose.'
Malvetis's private safe was in a small ante-room to his office, little more than a cupboard. We stole in and shut the thankfully windowless door behind us. I lit my wand to give our night-vision a rest.
Snape darted to the safe and, under his breath, muttered 'Alohamora!' At the lack of answering click from the lock, I became alarmed, but Severus re-aimed his wand with the calm, scientific accuracy of a surgeon who performs a delicate operation. For half an hour he worked with concentrated energy, murmuring ever more complex spells, and sighing with satisfaction when they yielded the desired results. Finally I heard a click, the door swung open, and inside I had a glimpse of a number of paper packets, each tied, sealed and inscribed.
I picked up the nearest letter, glanced at it, then turned to Snape in amazement. 'Look at this, Severus!' I exclaimed. 'We thought he wanted Krum to pay his terms, but it appears there is more to this than money.' I handed him a sheet of parchment addressed to Rodulphus Lestrange, and beginning "My dearest cousin". 'It seems our master blackmailer was a cousin of Bellatrix Lestrange, and his true motive was to revenge himself for Bellatrix's death by publicly humiliating the Weasley family.'
My friend's face had turned stark white. 'And if it ruined the Ministry's new prodigy, that was all to the good,' he growled. 'He knew Hermione would never be able to pay.'
My first feeling of fear had passed away, and I thrilled now with a keener zest than I had ever enjoyed as a Death Eater. The high object of our mission, the consciousness that it was unselfish and chivalrous, the villainous character of our opponent, all added to the sporting interest of our adventure. Far from feeling guilty, I rejoiced and exulted in our dangers.
Until, that is, I heard movement in the outer office. It was evident we had entirely miscalculated. Malvetis had been working in some farther wing of the Department. I pressed my eye to the keyhole of our little sanctuary. He was leaning far back in the red leather chair, his legs outstretched. There was no promise of a speedy departure in his comfortable attitude.
Several times I observed that Malvetis looked at his watch. The idea, however, that he might have an appointment at so strange an hour never occurred to me until there came a gentle tap at the door. Malvetis rose and opened it.
'Well,' said he, curtly, 'you are nearly half an hour late.'
So this was the explanation of the unlocked door and of the nocturnal vigil of Malvetis. In front of him there stood a tall, slim, dark woman, a veil over her face.
'Well,' said Malvetis, 'you've made me lose a good night's rest, my dear. You couldn't come at any other time eh?'
The woman shook her head.
'Well, if you couldn't you couldn't. You say you have letters which compromise Rita Skeeter. Well, my dear, I should be interested to see those, most interested Merlin's beard, is it you?'
The woman without a word had raised her veil but as she had her back to us, all I could make out was a sheet of shining dark hair falling down her back like silk.
'It is I,' she said the woman whose life you have ruined. Well, Claude Malvetis, what do you have to say?'
It was clear to me that Malvetis would try to brazen the encounter out. After his initial astonishment, he hitched his frozen smile back into place, only he was a coward, and he could not keep his lips from twitching. He laughed, but fear vibrated in his voice.
'You were so very obstinate,' said he. 'Every man has his business, and what was I to do? I put the price well within your means well, your fiancé's means. You would not pay.'
From the woman's movements, I surmised she had drawn her wand.
'You will ruin no more lives as you have ruined mine. You will wring no more hearts as you have wrung mine,' she said.
There was no more warning than that.
'Avada Kedavra!' the woman cried.
Malvetis fell forward upon the table, then rolled upon the floor.
The woman looked at him intently and left the office, crushing his spectacles underfoot as she did so.
I turned to Snape, horrified by what I had just witnessed, but his whole attention was focused on the contents of the safe. At first, he examined each bundle before Vanishing it, but the longer he worked, the more his agitation increased. It was clear he was searching for something very particular, something which was not forthcoming. My friend was now glancing cursorily at each packet before flinging it aside in irritation. I endeavoured to assist him by using Evanesco on the discarded papers.
At last he had emptied the safe of incriminating material, but it was evident he had not found that for which he had come here tonight, and he turned on me such a look of despair as I have never before seen on my friend's face. I believe he would have proceeded to turn Malvetis's entire office upside-down, but I was anxious to be gone and took his hand, fairly pulling him out of the room.
In the corridor outside, however, Snape stooped and plucked from the floor a woman's trinket: a hair-clip in the shape of a butterfly. 'Miss Patil,' he said softly, 'you are free.'
Then we slipped out of the Ministry and were safe.
He has since told me he remembered her being reprimanded by Minerva McGonagall for wearing it during the Triwizard Tournament, and that that was how he identified her. Apart from that one mistake, she had done well. She had Vanished her footprints, worn gloves, and even managed to eliminate any traces of magic in the air which could have identified her wand. No-one will ever be able to link her to Malvetis's death. Even so, I will encrypt this diary with spells of my own devising to protect the identity of one whose courage freed the world from a poisonous thing.
********
The next morning, Snape woke with a pounding head, as though he'd drunk a bottle of Firewhisky in one sitting. Fragments of the night before floated into his mind he and Lucius breaking into the Ministry, Parvati Patil, Malvetis dead. Severus was surprised to find that he didn't care. All those times when he had been a party to murder in the name of Voldemort, he had had to pretend not to care, whilst all the time feeling sick to his stomach. This time, however, justice had overtaken a villain.
But Hermione. How was he going to face her? He'd failed her. Everything that happened last night had been about retrieving the photographs, and he did not have them.
And if he were honest, it wasn't just about the photographs. It was about that kiss. He was going to have to go to her today and admit his failure, and he didn't know how he was going to face her knowing he had kissed her on her office floor yesterday. Even though she had no idea it was he who had done it.
Severus was in love he had never admitted it, but that was why he had kept her photograph, why he had never able to refer to her by name at least to Lucius Malfoy. He was afraid that if he said her name, his feelings would show in his voice. Occlumency wouldn't have been the least help he couldn't stop thinking about her. She had proved herself his intellectual equal last year, and during the past few days... well, he meant what he had said: she'd touched his heart.
His eye fell on the novel he had been attempting to read last night: The Sign of Four. Sherlock Holmes was of the opinion that 'It is of the first importance not to allow your judgement to be biased by personal qualities. A client is to me a mere unit, a factor in a problem. Love is an emotional thing, and whatever is emotional is opposed to that true cold reason which I place above all things.'
In that case, Severus was glad had failed if the alternative was never to love. Even if it was selfish of him. Even if she could never be his. Even if she hated him for failing her.
There was a knock on the door. As if his thoughts had conjured her up, Hermione stood on the threshold, veiled as she had been that first evening, but considerably calmer.
Before he could frame an apology, she brushed past him, sat on the edge of an armchair, lifted her veil and picked up his copy of The Daily Prophet from the side table. The front page was dominated by a photograph of Malvetis wearing his usual fixed smile, and the headline 'Murder at the Ministry'.
'The whole place is in uproar, you know,' she told him. 'They can't work out who did it no traces at all, apparently.' She shot a significant look at Snape, which he returned impassively.
She held his gaze. 'You didn't find the photographs, did you?'
Mutely, he shook his head, still unable to speak.
Hermione looked down at her hands, then said in a steady voice, 'He'd already sent them. They arrived this morning. Ron's divorcing me.'
Snape took a breath. This was the moment to apologise: he had to say something, even if whatever he said was inadequate. But before he could get a word out, she spoke again.
'I wanted to thank you for everything you've done for me.'
Snape looked up at her incredulously. How could she be taking this so calmly? 'Everything I've done?' he cried. 'I did nothing! I failed you!'
'No. You made everything much easier to bear.' Suddenly, astonishingly, Hermione collapsed back into the chair, giggling helplessly. 'We Plumb the Depths. Honestly!'
Snape sprang to his feet. 'You knew?'
She sat up straight again and, with an effort, stopped laughing. 'Brett Escott would never have said computers are more trouble than they're worth! He's a bit of a techno geek on the side, apparently. Always trying to get magic and machinery to work together. Plus, you left my office once an hour as regular as clockwork. I knew you were taking Polyjuice Potion. And your accent slipped. At certain times.' She sounded almost arch.
He couldn't take it in. 'You knew all the time, and yet you... all those times in your office... ' He flushed. 'Yesterday...'
'Oh, Severus.' Hermione rose from her chair and placed her hand on his chest. 'You've touched my heart.'
Looking down at her small, white hand, then up at her hopeful face, Severus made his decision. Dr Watson had described his friend and colleague as 'a mind without a heart'. Sherlock Holmes seemed quite happy to sacrifice love for the sake of his career, but Severus was not, nor did he have any desire to be, a consulting detective. He had taken this case on for the woman he loved, and now, however inexplicable he found it, she was offering her love in return.
Pulling her into his arms, Severus smiled at hearing his own words quoted back at him. Two could play at that game. 'Give me a kiss,' he demanded. 'Now that I know how.'
THE END
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24 Reviews | 9.54/10 Average
A vile monster killed, by the women he wronged , it doesn't get better than that, until Severus gets THE women.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Between them I hope they can stop the new You-Know- Who before he gets started. The kiss was sweet, I hope she recognises him soon.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Severus has a plan, and Hermione has a secret!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Severus has a plan, and Hermione has a secret!
Malvetis is in for a big surprise before he gets much older.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh yes! A big bad surprise.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh yes! A big bad surprise.
I am so glad there is a sequel to" Scandal in Bulgaria ". I love Sherl Severus Holmes, and now he's back.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks! Took me ages to find a suitable story to use as a sequel!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks! Took me ages to find a suitable story to use as a sequel!
Yay! He gets the girl. Very wonderfully done and I like that one of his victims was the one to do Malvetis in.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Holmes, of course succeeded in destroying the letters. Snape had to fail so he could get the girl! It was Doyle's wonderful idea to have the victim take revenge, one which I was very happy to use. Thanks for all your lovely reviews :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Holmes, of course succeeded in destroying the letters. Snape had to fail so he could get the girl! It was Doyle's wonderful idea to have the victim take revenge, one which I was very happy to use. Thanks for all your lovely reviews :)
Oh Severus, so naughty and poor Brett when he gets back to work
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
I think, for the first time ever, he might be having fun!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
I think, for the first time ever, he might be having fun!
Oh poor Hermione getting Yaxley's old office and can't wait to earn more about Malvetis
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Yeah, you'd really think they'd have got that sorted by now, LOL.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Yeah, you'd really think they'd have got that sorted by now, LOL.
It's off to a good start. I love this crossing of fandoms in this way and am glad to see there is a sequel. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Glad you love reading them 'cos I love writing them :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Glad you love reading them 'cos I love writing them :)
Another champion chapter. I prefer a milky brew to builders tea.& a couple of hobnobs to dunk in t'tea. I hope that 'Malvetis' gets a right good thumping!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh, just you wait for Chpter 4!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh, just you wait for Chpter 4!
I'm surprised she didn't notice he dropped his accent when she fell into him! ^_^
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
I think she was too winded and embarrassed. Or else too intent on snogging him!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
I think she was too winded and embarrassed. Or else too intent on snogging him!
By 'Eck! that were champion! great chapter. more soon asap~thank you. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Ta, lass! Chapter 3 is nearly done, and the final chapter is already finished. I just have to watch 'The Master Blackmailer' one more time. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Ta, lass! Chapter 3 is nearly done, and the final chapter is already finished. I just have to watch 'The Master Blackmailer' one more time. :)
So, is this to be Severus' Moriarty? Sounds like it. ^_^
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
This revolting character is Severus' Charles Augustus Milverton, but yes, the effect is much the same :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
This revolting character is Severus' Charles Augustus Milverton, but yes, the effect is much the same :)
Oh goody, Severus Holmes!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
He does fit the character beautifully, doesn't he? Chapter 2 is nearly finished. Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
He does fit the character beautifully, doesn't he? Chapter 2 is nearly finished. Thanks for reviewing :)
This is quite a coincidence. *grin* I just finished reading your one-shot, "A Scandal in Bulgaria', as a featured story on another archive. Then I find this. *lol* Hope to see more shortly. I really like Severus as Sherlock Holmes. He even has the nose for it. ^_^
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks! I have been casting around for a sequel for ages - then I saw 'The Master Blackmailer', and it was perfect. Chapter 2 is nearly ready.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks! I have been casting around for a sequel for ages - then I saw 'The Master Blackmailer', and it was perfect. Chapter 2 is nearly ready.
*snigger* Very cute and nicely ended. Thanks for sharing!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
And thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
And thanks for reviewing. :)
Nice turn. All's not so well in paradise - and Severus may just be able to get his wish...if he waits long enough.Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Yes, Hermione's marriage has been rocky since they got back from Australia, so... I'm glad you're liking it!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Yes, Hermione's marriage has been rocky since they got back from Australia, so... I'm glad you're liking it!
Oooh, what a nasty little piece of work they've got on their hands! Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
I hope he's just as horrible as ACD's Charles Augustus Milverton!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
I hope he's just as horrible as ACD's Charles Augustus Milverton!
He he he. Back to his old tricks.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh, yes! He can't just do nothing when 'The Woman' is begging for his help. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh, yes! He can't just do nothing when 'The Woman' is begging for his help. :)
awww what a lovely ending :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks :) I couldn't let him succeed in destroying the evidence as Holmes did, and lose Hermione!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks :) I couldn't let him succeed in destroying the evidence as Holmes did, and lose Hermione!
awww what a lovely ending :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thank you very much. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thank you very much. :)
Squee! Does that make Lucius Dr. Watson? And Patil was brillllliant!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Yes, Lucius is back as Watson, just as in 'A Scandal in Bulgaria'. And Parvati wasn't going to take the abuse, just as the un-named heroine in Doyle's 'Charles Augustus Milverton' didn't.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Yes, Lucius is back as Watson, just as in 'A Scandal in Bulgaria'. And Parvati wasn't going to take the abuse, just as the un-named heroine in Doyle's 'Charles Augustus Milverton' didn't.
So cute! I loved both of these. You really captured the ACD feel and old movies. Thanks!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks. I read the stories over and over again, and am a little bit obsessed with Jeremy Brett's films and TV episodes!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks. I read the stories over and over again, and am a little bit obsessed with Jeremy Brett's films and TV episodes!
*snerk* No, he may have the nose of Sherlock Holmes and the intellect, but he's no Sherlock Holmes! Great story! Loved Lucius' diary entries. ^_^
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh yes, Lucius and his diary had to make another appearance. Can't have Holmes without Watson! So glad you liked it.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh yes, Lucius and his diary had to make another appearance. Can't have Holmes without Watson! So glad you liked it.
Great story! loved it. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks! I'm glad. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks! I'm glad. :)