The Game Is Afoot
A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green
Chapter 2 of 4
peskipiksiSequel to 'A Scandal in Bulgaria'. When the infamous photographs of her and Krum go missing, Hermione herself must turn to Snape for help.
The next day, Severus was to be found lurking outside the tradesmen’s entrance to the Ministry, spying on the Magical Maintenance staff. Workmen went everywhere and talked to everyone, and so it was a member of this Department who would have to sacrifice a chunk of his hair to Snape’s Polyjuice Potion, and suffer a few Stunning Spells.
After a tense few minutes of waiting, two men in navy blue overalls came into view, the younger one, whose name badge read ‘Escott’, complaining vociferously.
‘In for a week an’ ‘alf, I am. It’s raining in Mrs Weasley’s office. Says she’s tried Finite – doesn’t work.’
His colleague laughed. ‘Taken over Yaxley’s office, hasn’t she? They never did get that sorted. Cheer up, mate, at least she won’t turn you into a toad like he used to old Cattermole! Blimey, you were lucky you weren’t with us then, Brett, mate. Hated Muggle-borns, old Yaxley did.’
‘Aye, but t’lass isn’t herself, anyone can see that. Weasley’s going round t’Auror Office with a face like thunder, an’ all. Probably thump me if ‘e finds me in ‘er office! An’ no one else has been able to fix it, ‘ave they? Goin’ to take me all week, I reckon.’
Severus breathed a sigh of relief. There was his man. Brett Escott was about Hermione’s age, so she’d be more likely to talk to him, he was new, so no one would be surprised if he was curious about his new place of work, and, most usefully of all, he was a Yorkshireman. Polyjuice Potion would give Severus his subject’s vocal chords and voice, but wouldn’t change his own cultured tones. Severus would have to do that himself, and, thanks to his otherwise useless father, a Yorkshire accent was something he could imitate.
Poor Escott was going to have a hell of a headache from all the Stunning Spells he would have to undergo this week.
*
‘Mrs Weasley. Still raining in ‘ere, is it?’
‘Oh, thank Merlin, at last. Come in Mr…’ she glanced at his name badge, ‘Escott.’
Severus stepped into the office, hauling the ladder behind him. ‘Nay, lass; call me Brett. Mr Escott makes me sound like my old dad. ‘e’d laugh if ‘e could see me now, I tell you. ‘e were a plumber, an’ all. “We Plumb the Depths” – that were ‘is firm’s motto. Reckon ‘e thought it sounded clever.’
Despite her constant worry, Hermione laughed and perched on the edge of her desk. ‘Well, I’m very glad you’re here, Brett. It’s been a nightmare in here.’
Severus smiled to himself. He’d made her laugh. If ‘Escott’ could make a friend of Hermione, his, Snape’s, task would be a lot easier. ‘Tried Finite then?’
‘Yes, but it only works for about half an hour at a time. I have to keep using Impervius on all my reports. It’s like trying to use Mum and Dad’s old computer – you have to keep saving stuff before it crashes!’
Severus laughed shortly. ‘Computers! Magic for Muggles. I’m glad they don’t work ‘ere – more trouble than they’re worth, they are.’
Hermione looked at him quizzically for a second, then laughed too. ‘I think my mum would agree with you, Brett!’
Snape set the stepladder in the middle of the room. ‘Righty-o then, lass; let’s see what we can do.’
He had been wondering why Miss Granger, one of the cleverest witches he had ever taught, had been unable to deal with the problem herself, but after two hours he was all but ready to admit defeat. (Two hours with a trip to the loo for a swig of Polyjuice – fortunately, the incessant rain meant frequent bathroom trips were not questioned.) Escott was right: it was going to take all week. It looked like a complex bit of magic he was going to have to diagnose and unravel a bit at a time. Which was good, of course. It would have been no use to his investigation if he’d been able to fix the problem within twenty minutes.
He’d tried every charm he knew; Finite, Impervius, Protego, even Impedimenta and Arresto Momentum in the vain hope they might slow the ferocity of the downpour. Eventually, a combination of the Imperturbable Charm and the Room Sealing Spell Severus used on his own office at Hogwarts created a barrier around the room which, while not stopping the rain, would at least keep Hermione from drowning while he attended to more urgent matters.
‘Right you are, lass; I think that’s about all I can do for t’moment,’ he informed her, climbing down from the stepladder a little stiffly. ‘Onwards and upwards; well, downwards – got to go and deal with a problem in t’Department of Mysteries.’
Hermione started slightly.
‘You all right, lass?’ Severus asked, knowing full well she wasn’t.
She recovered herself and went to help him fold up the ladder. ‘Oh… yes. It’s just…’ She laid a hand on his arm, and Severus felt the heat of her touch through his overalls. ‘Be careful of the new Unspeakable, won’t you? Malvetis. I… well, there’s something about him.’ Hermione looked up into his eyes and gave a small smile. ‘Just be careful.’
*
The only other person in the lift was a small, stout man in expensive black robes that looked to be cashmere and probably cost more than Escott’s entire salary. He had a perpetual frozen smile, and keen grey eyes, which gleamed brightly from behind broad, golden-rimmed glasses. There was something of Horace Slughorn’s benevolence in his appearance, but the hard glitter in those grey eyes was disconcerting, and a more calculatingly insincere smile Severus hoped never to see.
The small, stout man got out on the ninth floor, and as he realised Severus was following him, turned to stare at him. ‘Can I help you, young man?’ he enquired. His voice was as smooth and suave as his countenance.
‘I was told you had a problem with your windows, Mr, er…’ Snape shuffled his feet, suddenly feeling Escott’s nineteen years. He was out of practice when it came to spying.
‘Malvetis. No, as far as I’m aware, our windows are fine. Thank you and goodbye…’ he peered at Severus’s name-badge through his gold-rimmed specs, ‘… Escott.’
So this was Hermione’s Nemesis. Severus could see why she had confessed to being ‘unsettled’ by Malvetis’s gaze. Well, having struck lucky first time, he wasn’t about to leave without information. ‘Um… should I maybe just come in an’ check ‘em for you?’
‘Oh, no.’ Malvetis’s smile was still fixed firmly in place, but the glitter in those penetrating eyes intensified. ‘No, this Department has the highest levels of security, you see, and I couldn’t give you all the passwords and counter-spells just so you can ‘check’ whether I’m telling the truth.’ His insufferable smile was more complacent than ever. ‘Besides,’ he purred, ‘I should hate to put you to any trouble.’ Malvetis waved his hand imperiously at Snape, dismissing him.
As he turned to go, resolved to come back another time, Snape felt Malvetis whisper in his ear: ‘And tell them to send a real wizard next time there’s a problem. I don’t want a Mudblood contaminating my office.’
Severus spun round, shock and anger robbing him of the power of speech.
Malvetis sneered. ’Tell anyone,’ he hissed, ’and there will be retribution.’
He stalked away, leaving Snape rooted to the spot with shock. His every instinct was telling him to go straight to Kingsley Shacklebolt with the news there was a budding Death Eater in the ranks, but he would have to keep quiet. Whatever Malvetis had, or would manage to dig up, on Escott, Snape was sure the boy wouldn’t be able to pay the terms. But he’d come face to face with the enemy. He knew, at last, who he was dealing with.
‘The game is afoot, Malvetis,’ he said softly. ‘The game is afoot.’
*
A/N: The blackmailer’s name comes from ‘Mammon’, the demon of avarice, ‘mal’: bad, and ‘Vetis’, the demon of corruption. And, of course, the fact that it sounds like Milverton doesn’t hurt either!
Many thanks to bleddyn for advice on Yorkshire accents.
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Latest 25 Reviews for A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green
24 Reviews | 9.54/10 Average
A vile monster killed, by the women he wronged , it doesn't get better than that, until Severus gets THE women.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Between them I hope they can stop the new You-Know- Who before he gets started. The kiss was sweet, I hope she recognises him soon.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Severus has a plan, and Hermione has a secret!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Severus has a plan, and Hermione has a secret!
Malvetis is in for a big surprise before he gets much older.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh yes! A big bad surprise.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh yes! A big bad surprise.
I am so glad there is a sequel to" Scandal in Bulgaria ". I love Sherl Severus Holmes, and now he's back.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks! Took me ages to find a suitable story to use as a sequel!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks! Took me ages to find a suitable story to use as a sequel!
Yay! He gets the girl. Very wonderfully done and I like that one of his victims was the one to do Malvetis in.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Holmes, of course succeeded in destroying the letters. Snape had to fail so he could get the girl! It was Doyle's wonderful idea to have the victim take revenge, one which I was very happy to use. Thanks for all your lovely reviews :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Holmes, of course succeeded in destroying the letters. Snape had to fail so he could get the girl! It was Doyle's wonderful idea to have the victim take revenge, one which I was very happy to use. Thanks for all your lovely reviews :)
Oh Severus, so naughty and poor Brett when he gets back to work
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
I think, for the first time ever, he might be having fun!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
I think, for the first time ever, he might be having fun!
Oh poor Hermione getting Yaxley's old office and can't wait to earn more about Malvetis
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Yeah, you'd really think they'd have got that sorted by now, LOL.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Yeah, you'd really think they'd have got that sorted by now, LOL.
It's off to a good start. I love this crossing of fandoms in this way and am glad to see there is a sequel. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Glad you love reading them 'cos I love writing them :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Glad you love reading them 'cos I love writing them :)
Another champion chapter. I prefer a milky brew to builders tea.& a couple of hobnobs to dunk in t'tea. I hope that 'Malvetis' gets a right good thumping!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh, just you wait for Chpter 4!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh, just you wait for Chpter 4!
I'm surprised she didn't notice he dropped his accent when she fell into him! ^_^
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
I think she was too winded and embarrassed. Or else too intent on snogging him!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
I think she was too winded and embarrassed. Or else too intent on snogging him!
By 'Eck! that were champion! great chapter. more soon asap~thank you. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Ta, lass! Chapter 3 is nearly done, and the final chapter is already finished. I just have to watch 'The Master Blackmailer' one more time. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Ta, lass! Chapter 3 is nearly done, and the final chapter is already finished. I just have to watch 'The Master Blackmailer' one more time. :)
So, is this to be Severus' Moriarty? Sounds like it. ^_^
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
This revolting character is Severus' Charles Augustus Milverton, but yes, the effect is much the same :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
This revolting character is Severus' Charles Augustus Milverton, but yes, the effect is much the same :)
Oh goody, Severus Holmes!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
He does fit the character beautifully, doesn't he? Chapter 2 is nearly finished. Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
He does fit the character beautifully, doesn't he? Chapter 2 is nearly finished. Thanks for reviewing :)
This is quite a coincidence. *grin* I just finished reading your one-shot, "A Scandal in Bulgaria', as a featured story on another archive. Then I find this. *lol* Hope to see more shortly. I really like Severus as Sherlock Holmes. He even has the nose for it. ^_^
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks! I have been casting around for a sequel for ages - then I saw 'The Master Blackmailer', and it was perfect. Chapter 2 is nearly ready.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks! I have been casting around for a sequel for ages - then I saw 'The Master Blackmailer', and it was perfect. Chapter 2 is nearly ready.
*snigger* Very cute and nicely ended. Thanks for sharing!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
And thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
And thanks for reviewing. :)
Nice turn. All's not so well in paradise - and Severus may just be able to get his wish...if he waits long enough.Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Yes, Hermione's marriage has been rocky since they got back from Australia, so... I'm glad you're liking it!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Yes, Hermione's marriage has been rocky since they got back from Australia, so... I'm glad you're liking it!
Oooh, what a nasty little piece of work they've got on their hands! Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
I hope he's just as horrible as ACD's Charles Augustus Milverton!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
I hope he's just as horrible as ACD's Charles Augustus Milverton!
He he he. Back to his old tricks.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh, yes! He can't just do nothing when 'The Woman' is begging for his help. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh, yes! He can't just do nothing when 'The Woman' is begging for his help. :)
awww what a lovely ending :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks :) I couldn't let him succeed in destroying the evidence as Holmes did, and lose Hermione!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks :) I couldn't let him succeed in destroying the evidence as Holmes did, and lose Hermione!
awww what a lovely ending :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thank you very much. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thank you very much. :)
Squee! Does that make Lucius Dr. Watson? And Patil was brillllliant!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Yes, Lucius is back as Watson, just as in 'A Scandal in Bulgaria'. And Parvati wasn't going to take the abuse, just as the un-named heroine in Doyle's 'Charles Augustus Milverton' didn't.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Yes, Lucius is back as Watson, just as in 'A Scandal in Bulgaria'. And Parvati wasn't going to take the abuse, just as the un-named heroine in Doyle's 'Charles Augustus Milverton' didn't.
So cute! I loved both of these. You really captured the ACD feel and old movies. Thanks!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks. I read the stories over and over again, and am a little bit obsessed with Jeremy Brett's films and TV episodes!
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks. I read the stories over and over again, and am a little bit obsessed with Jeremy Brett's films and TV episodes!
*snerk* No, he may have the nose of Sherlock Holmes and the intellect, but he's no Sherlock Holmes! Great story! Loved Lucius' diary entries. ^_^
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh yes, Lucius and his diary had to make another appearance. Can't have Holmes without Watson! So glad you liked it.
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Oh yes, Lucius and his diary had to make another appearance. Can't have Holmes without Watson! So glad you liked it.
Great story! loved it. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks! I'm glad. :)
Response from peskipiksi (Author of A Study of the Woman in Scarlet and Green)
Thanks! I'm glad. :)