The Sensual World
TeddyRadiator14 Reviews | 6.43/10 (14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 11 Favorites )
Two years after Voldemort's defeat, Severus Snape is placed in the care of Hermione Granger. When their personalities clash, who will Dominate, and who will submit?
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Just a small town girl who loves HG/SS fanfiction. You can always find me at LiveJournal: http://teddyradiator.livejournal.com/ where I 'live' on the net. 
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Good lord. That was amazing!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Thank you!!
This is a happy ending for all involved. What a fabulous invention is Topical Paradise (plus the name made me giggle). Not only will they make good use of it, they are going to make a ton of money and be able to share such an awesome thing with the rest of the Wizarding world. Working in the product testing department is too bad of a gig either. And his manual ... I suppose all things considered they are responsible for the baby boom. :)I like that they traded places, and while they had a great time, it felt wrong. It assures you that they are in the proper roles where they belong, and that they are happy to be there, but also comfotable enough to try new things. Not that I have any doubt that they try new things, lol.I love the annual Harry-Ginny-Severus-Hermione orgasm-a-thon. What a great tradition! Definitely a pensieve memory worth replaying. ;)Severus and Hermione have come a long way since the beginning of this tale, and they end up so very happy. While there are some steamy moments, their new life is the best part of this story.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Thank you so much for your always wonderful comments. I am always thrilled to receive a review from you, and I am so happy you have enjoyed the story, and that I have accomplished what I wanted to do, judging by what you have said. My Muse drove the entire time I wrote this, and I just took dictation. He really wanted me to give Sempra the best of myself, and I hope I did. I certainly had a lot of fun writing it. Thank you for always lifting up an author like me and giving me encouragement and kindness. It is appreciated more than I can say.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Thank you so much for your always wonderful comments. I am always thrilled to receive a review from you, and I am so happy you have enjoyed the story, and that I have accomplished what I wanted to do, judging by what you have said. My Muse drove the entire time I wrote this, and I just took dictation. He really wanted me to give Sempra the best of myself, and I hope I did. I certainly had a lot of fun writing it. Thank you for always lifting up an author like me and giving me encouragement and kindness. It is appreciated more than I can say.
I have been so busy over the last six months or so, that I have been reading on my phone on the run, and consequently have not reviewed like I should. I will never make it back to find everything I missed, but in going back through to read your stuff I have not yet read, I noticed that the end of this story was seriously lacking in reviews, and that is unacceptable. It leaves you wondering if no one is reading it, or if they are but thought it sucked too much to comment, or whatever. So I am here to right that wrong.This chapter made me cringe a bit, because with Ginny in the mix, it felt a bit uncomfortable. It was meant to be therapeutic for Severus, and I think in the end it probably was. It is just hard for me to imagine him allowing that. Having said that, I understand that it isn't about him agreeing to particular situations, but about him agreeing to commit to Hermione and her wishes, and therefore, the scene is believable.I do love how far they have come since the beginning of the story. Clearly, they are good for one another.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Thank you so much for your lovely comments. The section with Ginny was a bit gritty, I will admit, and I wanted to show how far Severus had come in his trust. To me, Severus is a born submissive - and while I love to place him in the role of the Dominant (a la Father Figure), I truly think of him as a natural submissive. Given time, and trust, and gentle but firm handling, I think he would be a happy, fulfilled sub with confidence and self-esteem. And I do see Hermione as being very Dominant; yes, I think they would be very good for one another as well in that type of relationship dynamic.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Thank you so much for your lovely comments. The section with Ginny was a bit gritty, I will admit, and I wanted to show how far Severus had come in his trust. To me, Severus is a born submissive - and while I love to place him in the role of the Dominant (a la Father Figure), I truly think of him as a natural submissive. Given time, and trust, and gentle but firm handling, I think he would be a happy, fulfilled sub with confidence and self-esteem. And I do see Hermione as being very Dominant; yes, I think they would be very good for one another as well in that type of relationship dynamic.
This is sensuous, imaginative, truly magical and hot!
I hope we get to read what Snape writes in his journal.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Thank you!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Thank you!
Intrigued does not even begin to explain what I thought of this first chapter. This was amazing.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Very intriguing!
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
Holy crap, this story is HOT!!! Can't wait to read more!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Thank you! I will be posting regularly over the next couple of days. I'm really glad you are enjoying it!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Thank you! I will be posting regularly over the next couple of days. I'm really glad you are enjoying it!
I love this version of Ginny! And, thank goodness for her, too. I think this sort of thing requires advice, and who better to give it than a trusted and knowledgable friend. I think Hermione handled things well where Snape is concerned. I only have one question: where would a muggle buy wizarding toys? ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
At the Wizarding Toys-R-Us??? lol
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
At the Wizarding Toys-R-Us??? lol
I am glad they are starting to get somewhere at the end of the chapter, even if they don't know where they are going. Their daily discord is making me uneasy in an undefinable sort of way. I believe Hermione had gotten in over her head. :)
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Sometimes the roughest roads give us the most memorable rides...
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Sometimes the roughest roads give us the most memorable rides...
Oh, dear. I am nervously excited about where this might go. The whole dynamic of Snape being given to someone as their "slave" by legal means is a recipe for disaster, but add in to the mix the elements that you have here, and it makes things even more volatile. Not that I think that is a bad thing ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
It is a bit of a strange premise, but when I was writing this it was originally for Sempraseverus' birthday, and it sort of took on a life of its own that I hadn't planned - which is pretty much how everything I've ever written happens. Stgulik is the organised one of the partnership. She's the one who outlines and has a good roadmap of what to expect. I just close my eyes and hold my nose and jump in. Sometimes I have a very nasty surprise waiting for me when I land! ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
It is a bit of a strange premise, but when I was writing this it was originally for Sempraseverus' birthday, and it sort of took on a life of its own that I hadn't planned - which is pretty much how everything I've ever written happens. Stgulik is the organised one of the partnership. She's the one who outlines and has a good roadmap of what to expect. I just close my eyes and hold my nose and jump in. Sometimes I have a very nasty surprise waiting for me when I land! ;)
Snape and sprouts...I wonder did he have wind! great chapter.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Probably! Thanks
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Probably! Thanks
Please say there'll be more!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
There will be more! LOL I will post it today!
Response from KingPig (Reviewer)
Lol, last night I couldn't wait -- I found all the rest of the chapters at Ashwinder and read them immediately! I love it!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
There will be more! LOL I will post it today!
Response from KingPig (Reviewer)
Lol, last night I couldn't wait -- I found all the rest of the chapters at Ashwinder and read them immediately! I love it!!!
I agree, it seems somewhat our of character for Snape. I can think along the lines of "Snape had to be in control his whole life and relishes to relinquish control for once" in the sense of blindfolding him, tying him up, spanking him, making him beg on his knees etc. A complete submissive Snape who even lets himself be undressed and spanked before an audience. I wouldn't go that far. Still... I loved every second of it. I'm such a sucker for SubSev, no matter how realistic. There are so few stories that follow that line. In most cases Hermione is the submissive, not the other way round. So I absolutely devoured your story. It was well written and extremely hot. I wished you would write more of it (SubSev) since you are so good at picturing the mental part of submitting as well, the need to let go, the trust and don't describe the partnership as a simple "do as I say".Okay, I'll finish my monologue now with saying again how much I enjoyed your story.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Well, as someone with experience in the lifestyle and as a sub specifically, there is that moment when you completely let go, and the trust you have in your Dominant is stronger than any complex you have within. With everything we know of Severus Snape (and as much as I love him as a very fiery Dom), I see him as completely submissive. Wtih the right Dominant, who cared for him and placed his needs above everything else, he would be a breathtaking sub. I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Well, as someone with experience in the lifestyle and as a sub specifically, there is that moment when you completely let go, and the trust you have in your Dominant is stronger than any complex you have within. With everything we know of Severus Snape (and as much as I love him as a very fiery Dom), I see him as completely submissive. Wtih the right Dominant, who cared for him and placed his needs above everything else, he would be a breathtaking sub. I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
Teddy, this story really speaks to me. The vunerablity that Serverus shows and his growth are so beautiful! In five chapters you are able to tell a story of growth and change for the to of them. Not only are SS and HG well developed,Ginny in the short time she is introduced and the tale concludes is developed so well I can see her smoking and drinking that coffee as though I am sitting opposite her. This story hits very close to home for me,I tend to be sub. but with Dom leanings...if you know what I mean!! Have I told you that you are incredibly talented? Well if you have missed me writing that I will type it again,You are An AMAZING writer!! I love your work and the passion you write with!! Though I love all of your stories, this is my favorite by far. Though I do love Norton!! Hugs~deeThank you for taking the time out of your real life to entertain me the humble reader.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Thank YOU for taking the time out of your life to write me such encouraging and supportive comments. I love to write; it is so much a part of me now that if I don't write something every day, I feel I have wasted my day.I'm so glad you enjoy this story. It is fun to write Severus as Dominant, but to be honest, I think he is a textbook sub. I myself am a "Little girl" sub, who has a Daddy Dom who spoils me quite rotten.But I can switch when the need arises ;)Thank you so much for your kind words.
Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)
I agree he is textbook sub. but I see him fitting very well in the switch catagory also...Dom or sub. I would take him in a boot leg minute!! You are a lucky little girl,my search continues..for my own Daddy!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Sensual World)
Thank YOU for taking the time out of your life to write me such encouraging and supportive comments. I love to write; it is so much a part of me now that if I don't write something every day, I feel I have wasted my day.I'm so glad you enjoy this story. It is fun to write Severus as Dominant, but to be honest, I think he is a textbook sub. I myself am a "Little girl" sub, who has a Daddy Dom who spoils me quite rotten.But I can switch when the need arises ;)Thank you so much for your kind words.
Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)
I agree he is textbook sub. but I see him fitting very well in the switch catagory also...Dom or sub. I would take him in a boot leg minute!! You are a lucky little girl,my search continues..for my own Daddy!!!