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Potions Under Duress Joy Comes In The Mourning
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Joy Comes In The Mourning

1: Original Drabble

2: Director's Cut

Joy Comes In The Mourning

TeddyRadiator

17 Reviews   |   17 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Smut Drabble/100-Word Horror Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 7,002 Words 2 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape

While chasing a criminal in Knockturn Alley, Auror Granger discovers a ten-year-old secret... Chapter two is actually the extended version of the original Drabble, so please feel free to read the Director's cut...

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Chapter 1: Original Drabble

Chapter 2: Director's Cut


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TeddyRadiator

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Just a small town girl who loves HG/SS fanfiction. You can always find me at LiveJournal: http://teddyradiator.livejournal.com/ where I 'live' on the net. 


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Reviews for Joy Comes In The Mourning

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10/10

Sook03

Awesome :-) Good for them!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

0/10

Sook03

Hm. How exciting- I'm looking forward to seeing more. 

0/10

Sook03

Hm. How exciting- I'm looking forward to seeing more. 

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you!

10/10

wyndnfyr

Never read a Vampire!Snape fic.  I rather liked this.  Might be something I should look into.  ...of course this being the first, I will have rather high expectations of them.  :)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

I'm glad you enjoyed it - thank you for a lovely comment! ;)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

I'm glad you enjoyed it - thank you for a lovely comment! ;)

10/10

HBAR

I know I am in the minority when I say that I don't love the whole vampire thing.  Still, you paint such a powerful, sensual, and even content picture of these two that I can't help but feel happy for them.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Well, I don't like that whole Twilight sparkly thing myself. I like my vampires dark and lush (I do absolutely adore the Black Dagger Brotherhood series. That's a vampire series I can REALLY sink my teeth into!) But I had a lot of fun with this one! I'm glad you enjoyed it - it is very gratifying to hear that you went ahead and gave a genre you don't care for a read, and found elements within to enjoy. Thank you so much!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Well, I don't like that whole Twilight sparkly thing myself. I like my vampires dark and lush (I do absolutely adore the Black Dagger Brotherhood series. That's a vampire series I can REALLY sink my teeth into!) But I had a lot of fun with this one! I'm glad you enjoyed it - it is very gratifying to hear that you went ahead and gave a genre you don't care for a read, and found elements within to enjoy. Thank you so much!

0/10

Phyllidia

Powerful.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you!

10/10

cenicienta

So very cool. Both versions. Great writing, "She floated in a place with no space or time... she was a feeling, a scent on the wind, a scrap of litter blowing gently over the ground by a soft, careless breeze… "  that is my favorite.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

debjunk

Wow, very enthralling.  I'm glad it worked out for him. Finally something did. And in the working out, it worked out for Hermione too.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so much!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so much!

0/10

sandlapper

Lush.  The words, the imagery, the blood.  Just lush. 

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

breastlady

I liked it. I read it twice. I was trying to imagine hearing Severus talk baby talk to Hermione but tonight I couldn't get it to work. It think it would not be a bad ending for the story at all. I rather think Hermione would be much happier with Severus like this than as Mrs. Ronnald Weasely for the rest of her life. I could see this happening. I know some people find the vampire thing erotic, but I feel fairly neutral about it. I don't hate it but it doesn't do anything for me. Maybe if I read some of the vampire stories out there that are so popular. However, I'm content with my Severus Snape fetish. Thank you for keeping the the SS/HG world alive. I haven't grown tired of them in a decade. I wish I was as clever as you are and could write my own. Only by now I'd probably just be stealing everybody else' ideas I've read since the first movie came out. I'm glad I can finally picture Hermione as an adult. I always had to put someone else in my mind until the person who plays her got old enough. Keep up the good work. I'm a huge fan TR!!!!!  

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so much for reading.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so much for reading.

0/10

droxy

love the fic- love the art!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Hey!!! Thanks for the comment, sweetie. Always a pleasure seeing you here.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Hey!!! Thanks for the comment, sweetie. Always a pleasure seeing you here.

10/10

mick42

I liked this very much, the imagery was intense,powerful and beliveable. thank you.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you for your lovely comments!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you for your lovely comments!

10/10

Kore

Omg, that was fantastic! I've always been a fan of your writing.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words

10/10

deedeebug95

Loved the Director's Cut!!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you! There is an anthology taking submissions right now - 'undeath and the detective'. I'm really tempted to 'file the numbers off' and submit this one!

Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)

Do it,girl!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you! There is an anthology taking submissions right now - 'undeath and the detective'. I'm really tempted to 'file the numbers off' and submit this one!

Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)

Do it,girl!

10/10

Jinxie

I like the added detail of the 'director's cut' version.  Well done and thanks for sharing!

10/10

Jinxie

Beautiful and powerful.  Thanks for sharing!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so much!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so much!

10/10

christev

Oh, I like both versions! The original drabble is clean and crisp, all sharp edges and no room for fat.But the Director's Cut feels rich and luxurious, and I love all the added narrative it brings. These are wonderfully erotic, with overtones of such beautiful melancholy. I love that both of them were changed forever by the moment in the Shack, and keep coming back to it. I really love this story, and find myself wanting more, at the same time realizing the story is perfect as is. Well done!Oh, and Sempra's art - just gorgeous!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so very much!! You comments leave me feeling like I accomplished what I set out to do in both versions, and that makes me really happy. Mimimanderly also did a delicious version of this, all in black and white as well (they were both doing a drawing phase at the time) but she tipped his fingers in red - it was so effective! I am just thrilled with your comments. Thank you so much!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Joy Comes In The Mourning)

Thank you so very much!! You comments leave me feeling like I accomplished what I set out to do in both versions, and that makes me really happy. Mimimanderly also did a delicious version of this, all in black and white as well (they were both doing a drawing phase at the time) but she tipped his fingers in red - it was so effective! I am just thrilled with your comments. Thank you so much!

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