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Potions Under Duress Choose Something Like A Star
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Choose Something Like A Star

1: Prologue

2: Part the First

3: Part the Second

4: Part the Third

5: Part the Fourth

6: Part The Fifth

7: Part The Sixth

8: Part the Seventh

9: Part the Eighth

10: Part the Ninth

11: Grand Finale

Choose Something Like A Star

TeddyRadiator

123 Reviews   |   123 Ratings, 0 Likes, 19 Favorites )

Drama Romance Friendship Potions Under Duress 44,150 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Rose Weasley Severus Snape

At Christmas, what do you give to the wizard who has...nothing?

I am very proud to note this was a TPP Featured Story, December 2012

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: Part the First

Chapter 3: Part the Second

Chapter 4: Part the Third

Chapter 5: Part the Fourth

Chapter 6: Part The Fifth

Chapter 7: Part The Sixth

Chapter 8: Part the Seventh

Chapter 9: Part the Eighth

Chapter 10: Part the Ninth

Chapter 11: Grand Finale


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TeddyRadiator

Member Since 2010  |  32 Stories  |  Favorited by 519  |  63 Reviews Written  |  2,566 Review Responses

Just a small town girl who loves HG/SS fanfiction. You can always find me at LiveJournal: http://teddyradiator.livejournal.com/ where I 'live' on the net. 


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Reviews for Choose Something Like A Star

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10/10

reader76

....Picks up jaw from ground.......Okay, now I can comment.   Very powerful chapters from start to finish.  The description of his reaction to the wand was beautiful, and the tiger was fantasic.   Severus' acknowledgement of Harry as Harry rather than as James' son might have actually been my favorite part.  And the lemony goodness....well, I'm just glad to see that a good time was had by all. 

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

mikimoto

I love the tiger.  I love how it is big and imperious and not taking crap from anyone -- the very opposite to how Severus was at the beginning of this story.  I imagine that when his magic returned, the force of it set off car alarms for several blocks in every direction.  I love the way that Harry just dumps on him everything he has ever dreamed of -- the pardon, the medal, the wand, the freedom -- as if it is just so much stuff he has in his pocket to distribute.  No ceremony, just "Here!  Take it!"  And when you think about it, it really is just so much stuff.  The value is in the relationships.  They loved him enough to fight for him.  After so many years of Severus fighting for others, someone is finally fighting for him (and winning).  That is the best of the presents.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you so much! I love the remark about all the car alarms going off - you know that's exactly what would have happened!! Yes, this was the best present, and you're right - the 'stuff' wasn't nearly as important as what they represented.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you so much! I love the remark about all the car alarms going off - you know that's exactly what would have happened!! Yes, this was the best present, and you're right - the 'stuff' wasn't nearly as important as what they represented.

10/10

HBAR

*melts into a giant gooey puddle* ... Perfection.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

I love it when that happens! Thank you!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

I love it when that happens! Thank you!

10/10

sunny33

*fans self*. whew.  Do I have to do the vacuuming now? 

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Only if you have to! ;)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Only if you have to! ;)

10/10

reader76

Well, that was well handled indeed.  And I appreciate that they were forced to have an adult conversation about things rather than just leaping into bed.  Though hopefully not to much longer on that (waggles eyebrows)....Seriously, though.  This is a lovely story, and I continue to be impressed. 

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you! I'm really glad you're enjoying it! Hopefully they'll get on with it soon...

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you! I'm really glad you're enjoying it! Hopefully they'll get on with it soon...

10/10

June W

I love the parallels you've drawn for them!  The way they both put Lily/Ron on pedestals after their deaths, and how they needed someone to speak the truth to them.  Drat that Dumbledore for manipulating Severus by keeping Lily on a pedestal.So glad Hermione pursued Severus to talk about things right away, and that he answered her honestly instead of covering up.  Thanks for the music, too!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you for you lovely comments! Yes, Dumbledore, as you can probably tell, is NOT one of my favourite characters.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you for you lovely comments! Yes, Dumbledore, as you can probably tell, is NOT one of my favourite characters.

10/10

sunny33

Good old Harry.  And he'll be completely oblivious... maybe. ;)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Yes, well, you know Harry...

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Yes, well, you know Harry...

10/10

Bel

This is such a lovely story!!! Well paced and well written. The progression of the story-line is sensible and unhurried. It's truly been a long time since I've read a fanfic that I have enjoyed as much.I have also read your other stories and have enjoyed them as well. You lay down a solid foundation for your plots and weave them a balance of softly muted drama - the sadness and joy are in perfect harmony. I don't recall reading anything of yours that is overly angsty - for which I'm grateful!Your Severus and Hermione are very belieavable - what a relief!Thank you for sharing your creativity - I look forward to watching for more from you!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments - they mean the world to me. I believe in a little tension within a story, but I don't like to read angst for angst sake, and I'm glad to know I'm not alone. Severus was a difficult individual, that's true - and there are some great fics which show him as being very high maintenance but even so, quite lovable (Seven Preposterous Things by Bloodcult of Freud is a masterclass in this type of Severus Snape), but in this case, I felt he would be a changed man - quieter, resigned, tired.I wanted a chance for Hermione to get to know the real Severus, and this could only happen when he allowed the real Severus to emerge after years of anger and bitterness had the chance to be sloughed away by circumstances.Thank you again for your incredible review.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments - they mean the world to me. I believe in a little tension within a story, but I don't like to read angst for angst sake, and I'm glad to know I'm not alone. Severus was a difficult individual, that's true - and there are some great fics which show him as being very high maintenance but even so, quite lovable (Seven Preposterous Things by Bloodcult of Freud is a masterclass in this type of Severus Snape), but in this case, I felt he would be a changed man - quieter, resigned, tired.I wanted a chance for Hermione to get to know the real Severus, and this could only happen when he allowed the real Severus to emerge after years of anger and bitterness had the chance to be sloughed away by circumstances.Thank you again for your incredible review.

0/10

cmwinters

Oh yay!  Unfinished story!  Something to look forward to!LOVELYU Christmas!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you!

0/10

cmwinters

I LOVE the Christmas Eve Sofa Concert!  What a wonderful thing for Hermione to do with her daughter!  And the silver tongue comment...rawr!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you! Yes, he is a silver-tongued devil, isn't he??

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you! Yes, he is a silver-tongued devil, isn't he??

0/10

KingPig

Lol, damnit Harry!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Typical Harry...

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Typical Harry...

10/10

HBAR

I love the way Hermione handles Severus.  It isn't demanding, or condescending, or ... whatever.  It's like she just knows the right things to say and in the appropriate manner as to not scare him off, or make him feel like they are not on a level playing field.  And he responds to her so well, it is just meant to be.  Plus in the span of a few hours they have had all of the big discussions without them feeling like big discussions.  They've discussed what they want for the future, their past relationships, their bedroom expectations.  Nothing left to do but make Rose a big sister , lol.  Do chapters come faster if I chant?  Ted-dy, Ted-dy Ted-dy!  I can do puppy dog eyes if that's more your style.  I'm flexible . :)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

LOL I appreciate your willingness to be flexible! I promise to upload some more very soon - promise!!!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

LOL I appreciate your willingness to be flexible! I promise to upload some more very soon - promise!!!

10/10

Bettina

The wonderful "random story" button brought me here, and I have enjoyed your story so very much. You've knitted DH in very nicely as far as you could, and also Severus, while clearly OOC compared to his old self, is changed in understandable ways.  too bad Minerva has aged so quickly. She'd be a good second support for Severus!I'm quite disappointed in Harry, though. Is he at least pulling some strings in the background? Hermione didn't choose the first song very wisely, I have to say. Startign with something innocent could have saved the evening.As it went, you leave us with the most evil cliffhanger imaginable. How evil is that?! Please continue soon.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Im' really glad you found my story and are enjoying it. It is complete and will be posting regularly, I promise! I think a lot of your questions will be answered very soon.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Im' really glad you found my story and are enjoying it. It is complete and will be posting regularly, I promise! I think a lot of your questions will be answered very soon.

10/10

wyndnfyr

D:  Just when I thought things were really starting to go well!  I just hope he doesn't think that things are or can be too good to be true.  Man up, Severus!  You've got two adoring women that are counting on you!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Bless him - you know how he gets! Thankfully, so does Hermione...

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Bless him - you know how he gets! Thankfully, so does Hermione...

0/10

KingPig

First: 'He smirked slightly. “I asked what I could give her as a reward for doing well, and that was her choice.” He quirked a brow. “I actually meant for her to choose either chocolate or butterbeer, but as I didn’t make the parameters specific enough, I’m afraid she caught me on the technicality.”' I love this line, it's so natural and perfect! Second, don't bollocks this up, Sev!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Oh, you know how he gets! I'm sure Hermione will set him straight...

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Oh, you know how he gets! I'm sure Hermione will set him straight...

0/10

pansycat

That's an evil cliffie :)>Neat story though....

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you!

10/10

June W

ACK!!!!  All was going so swimmingly well, for Christmas and then this CLIFFHANGER!!!  Please update again soon.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

I will! Promise.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

I will! Promise.

10/10

June W

ACK!!!!!  Drat that Obliviate, but glad she has the memory again thanks to the Pensieve. Minerva dying.... oh, no!!!!Thoughtfless Harry... I suppose he had a lot to think about, plus he'd just lost Ron that night. Plus he was a teenaged boy who just didn't think about ohters. Sigh.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Well, Harry was trying to save the world, and it was cold out, and... ;)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Well, Harry was trying to save the world, and it was cold out, and... ;)

10/10

June W

Yay for firing the big guns! Yay for speaking bluntly and getting him to stay! BTW, will you mention the other wizards who are now wearing the suppressor cuff?  Seems to me they might have committed suicide or been killed by now.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Yay! I'm not sure who else is now wearing the cuff...The Ministry wouldn't divulge that information to me during my research on the story ;)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Yay! I'm not sure who else is now wearing the cuff...The Ministry wouldn't divulge that information to me during my research on the story ;)

10/10

mikimoto

I love, love, love, love this story.  And I know what is coming so I am patiently waiting for everyone to get their Christmas presents.  Thanks for sharing.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you so much! It's wonderful to know you love the story so much - it really means a lot to me.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you so much! It's wonderful to know you love the story so much - it really means a lot to me.

10/10

BellatrixLives

Oh, dear... I am loving this story and am very eager for the next chapter!!  Also, while I love Severus and Hermione's relationship, I love the relationship between Severus and Rose even more :)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you! I am really tickled with your comment about loving the relationship between Severus and Rose - I really wanted it to come through, and I'm glad you saw it.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you! I am really tickled with your comment about loving the relationship between Severus and Rose - I really wanted it to come through, and I'm glad you saw it.

10/10

BellatrixLives

hehe :) clever little witch, letting Severus win

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Well, when your mother is the brightest witch of her age and your gran is Molly Weasley...

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Well, when your mother is the brightest witch of her age and your gran is Molly Weasley...

10/10

BellatrixLives

'the pink ones, which he never allowed himself in the presence of others.'  LOL typical Severus!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Bless him! A good friend of mine loved the pink petit fours, but he wouldn't eat them unless he was alone! ;)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Bless him! A good friend of mine loved the pink petit fours, but he wouldn't eat them unless he was alone! ;)

10/10

BellatrixLives

Poor Severus :(  thank goodness for Rose having her mother's kind heart (and then some)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Rose is based on a young girl I have the privilege to know -she is full of love and compassion, much like her mother, and I am thrilled to be friends with both of them.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Rose is based on a young girl I have the privilege to know -she is full of love and compassion, much like her mother, and I am thrilled to be friends with both of them.

10/10

BellatrixLives

Oh my goodness... I just started reading this and wow!  I wasn't even halfway through the prologue when I was reminded of way you are on my favorite author list.  You had me in tears when Hermione gave birth and I am SO SO eager to keep reading, but I just had to pause to leave a review.  Great job!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you so much! I am delighted you enjoyed the prologue, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy the rest of the story.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Choose Something Like A Star)

Thank you so much! I am delighted you enjoyed the prologue, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy the rest of the story.

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