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An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor
notsosaintly25 Reviews | 7.0/10 (25 Ratings, 0 Likes, 55 Favorites )
Rewritten: Pansy is the prey this fine afternoon; a mere plaything for father and son.
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Founder of The Petulant Poetess. Editor and full-time mother.
Reviews for An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor
Give me a moment to catch my breath. As an older man, that's one heck of a fantasy to be able to live out. To read it from Pansy's POV, well...she's a hot-to-trot tramp that I'd....
This story flowed without effort - hot as hot should be (you can't go wrong when it's being told from the tart's perspective). I can't wait to read the follow-up and see where this vixen of an author takes us.
Oh dear GOD that was hot. I think my screen has scorch marks on it. Brilliant use of Pansy's inner dialogue, and oh! the genius of Lucius Malfoy. Yumyum.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
Now this, I think, plays to Lucius' kink.
Holy moses! *fans self*
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
*lol* Glad you enjoyed!
Lucius having his way with a not unwilling Pansy and sex toys! What could be better? Nothing!
I loved this! Not only is this really, really hot, but Pansy's thoughts are so funny. You write Lucius really well and he's so irresistible when he's written well. ::sigh::
What is this little tart doing with my husband? I shall hae to seek revenge for this - right after I leave Severus's bed of course.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
Hmm... Lucius or Severus, Severus or Lucius. What the heck, have 'em both!
Very interesting. Who can't use a good piece of inspiring smut! Will definitely have to check out your other stories. I have read some of your stuff on other sites, glad I wandered in here.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
I'm glad you wandered over too. I'm looking forward what you think of my other stories as well. Thanks!
I just love this story and your portrayal of Lucius, so in control. I would love a sequal from his POV. Fantastic!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
Actually, I was going to update this next. I never thought about doing it from Lucius's POV. I think I may just do that ... I was a little stuck on what to do, but this gives me a bunch of ideas.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
LOL. I just saw my A/N when I opened the file and saw that I had indeed mentioned doing the next from Lucius' POV. hehe. Well, my memory is shoddy at best lately. Thank you for reminding me what I said, and it was because of your review that I was spurred to open the document this afternoon.
great story
Wow! This was incredibly hot and very enjoyable to read, especially as I find Lucius so much more yum! than Draco. I do hope you'll write a sequel.
Well! Can't say I wasn't warned! ;)
Niiiiiiiice. More? (I'd say please, but one never begs in front of a Malfoy, unless one wants to be considered a toy. I'm more of the owner type than the toy type...) ~Lotm
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
Ah. I should have known you'd like that one. I think I'm more of the toy type, hence the writing of Pansy in first person.
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
Heehee, no wonder we get along so well!
Oh, and I wanted to thank you for however you set up these 'email of response to your review' notifications. When i click on the url here at PP, it takes me straight to the actual chapter that was reviewed and responded to! Over at SH (shhh!), they don't do that. You have to try and remember which chapter you reviewed.
Good job, and keep up the good work!
Squee, ~Lotm
GASSSP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..................WOW omg....ill half ta get back to yoyu okayexits room.....profusly blushing.....fanning self.......thank you
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
Thanks!
ooooh this makes me want to fuck Lucius! She's lucky
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
Isn't she? I wholeheartedly agree!
lucky bitch! off to read the sequel.
*fans self* If this is what goes on at Malfoy Manor, I must floo there at once. This was very nicely done, there are so few good Lucius/Pansy fics and they are one of my favorite pairings. Loved it!
Whoa, erotic and yet slightly amusing.... thank you.
Oh I loved the part about Ron and Pansy spinning the bottle; I have always thought they would make a good couple. You write Pansy so like I see her. As cute as Draco is, I prefer the older Malfoy much more. Why have a boy when you can have a man. Lucius and Severus would know what to do with a witch, where with Draco you have to tell him what's what. I wouldn't want to teach, just pleased. Yummy story as always.Tamara
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
Yup, you are definitely a Lucius/Severus girl just like me. A man (*cough* two men?) are better than a boy any day.
=O Oh... my... God... THAT WAS HOT! lol!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
*evil laughter* Oh, you liked it did you? I wish I was Pansy.
Abawa....
Whew. I think I am going to invest in a clamp and see what sorts of fun can be had with it ;) I get the feeling that the having to wait would be worth said wait in the end.
Definately something about that and a bit of double teaming, too.
I was over at the old Restricted Section. I forgot about this place, found it by accident again and found that at some point I had signed up! My details were waiting for me when I came back.
~*Heir*~
I have a distinct weakness for two men on one woman. It's so hot. And the Malfoy men are just... *sigh*Elura
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
Agreed agreed agreed. Definitely.
Oh, This is sooooooo good !!!!!!Thank You ! LOL Ann.
This was totally hot and ... can't speak anymore. *fans self, then faints,*Much later,
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
scrapes out:sequel please... then another, and another...
Wowza... hehe... I like this Lucius though. :) What a nice little party! teehee
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
Sorta makes you wish you were Pansy, hey? Mmmmm.... yup. Oops. Did I have any yukky stuff in there? Sorry!! Forgot to warn you if I did, but honestly, I don't really remember.southern_witch_69's response: There were naughty bits, yes. hahaha... It's okay. I'm not prude!SW today. Although, I did want to tell him to shove his clit clamp up his own arse.>>>Dominatrix SW appears<<<I shall never submit to a man... or woman. lol
Response from notsosaintly (Author of An Afternoon at Malfoy Manor)
See... that's why we fit so well together (lol). I am totally turned on by being dominated by someone else. I don't want to be the one with the whip; I want to be handcuffed and ... oh, you've seen the pic usagitsu did for me so long ago? Of Snape being dominated? It's here: http://www.thepetulantpoetess.com/viewstory.php?sid=5&i=1
By the way, I totally forgot about the clamp. Damn. Perhaps I should re-read this chapter and get some more ideas in this crazy head of mine.
southern_witch_69's response: Teehee... Naughty girl. I shall have to send Severus to you for an evening of domination. :) Good pic!