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Learning Curve
Melenka69 Reviews | 6.74/10 (69 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
Hermione makes a terrible mistake and turns to Professor Snape for help.
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Writer of various fiction, prone to putter in the garden, recovering costumer, dedicated wonk.
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Sequel, please! This has so many possible endings! :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am notorious for open-endings to my stories, precisely because I encourage imagining the next "what if?" scenario. I am glad you enjoyed the story. :)
Here by way of One_bad_man, and I must say that I'm enjoying this fun tail tale very much! Poor Hermione the witch! Being manhandled thus! *giggles*
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
I apologize for the delay in responding. I missed the email showing I had a review. I am glad you found the story and enjoyed it! I have a few more stories here, but this was my one shot at comedy.
I read this in one go, last night. The thought of Hermione accidentally getting stuck as a Scottish Wildcat, lol. Then to have to find Severus and try to get his help. Shakes head. I laughed from beginning to end as well as sighed at particular cute parts. I do hope this has a sequel. The sene where Hermione as the cat, Fluff, (LOL) sniffs the soap and thinks of buying that brand as it is pure Snape. Well I recently made some Severus scented soap. So that bit tickled my funny bone.
Again Thanks for writing.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Thank you so much! I am really glad you liked the story and very much appreciate you taking the time to review. I apologize for not responding sooner. I'm thrilled that you found it funny. I tend to write serious and dark fiction more often, so I wasn't sure I could do humor. Again, thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it.
what a delicious story; imaginative, witty. Cat-Hermione is wonderful and Severus is as you say a bad, bad man....would you mind telling me the name you write books under? I'd enjoy reading your novels!
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it. Alas, my novels are not yet published, though I continue to try. When I do, they will be under Rebecca Kovar. I also write dark fiction (read: light horror) which is mostly posted here: Push Comes to ShoveAgain, thank you so much for reading and commenting. Sorry it took so long to respond!
I wonder how he will react to a human hermione?
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Ah, that's the rub! This was a high-stakes game she was playing.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Ah, that's the rub! This was a high-stakes game she was playing.
Oh dear, he's determined to think the worst!
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
That is his normal reaction, after all.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
That is his normal reaction, after all.
This could be the start of a beautiful friendship... provided she doesn't hack up a furball!
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Ah, but there are much worse things to do to upset him. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Ah, but there are much worse things to do to upset him. :)
Nothing creepy about this at all.
Can't blame her though!
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
No indeed! Carpe diem!
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
No indeed! Carpe diem!
LOL She just learned that everything comes with a price. I love his final message to her, though it won't be final since she will be drawn back to him once school is over, I have no doubt.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am glad you liked the story and the potential for what might come after. ;)
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am glad you liked the story and the potential for what might come after. ;)
I love his reaction to finding out what she's done. I can so see him having a huge laugh at her folly, seeing the know-it-all brought down a peg or two.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
I had to give him that moment, so richly deserved. And she absolutely needed it, too. Sometimes, being clever is her downfall.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
I had to give him that moment, so richly deserved. And she absolutely needed it, too. Sometimes, being clever is her downfall.
Oh, Severus, you were almost there, almost showed some compassion. Sadly he doesn't realize she can't turn back. I wonder how long it will take him to realize it's a magical accident? Hopefully not long.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Severus is not prone to compassion, and his long history of being made the butt of jokes still stings his pride. He isn't the sort to trust the motives of most people, and even less so a member of the golden trio...
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Severus is not prone to compassion, and his long history of being made the butt of jokes still stings his pride. He isn't the sort to trust the motives of most people, and even less so a member of the golden trio...
She just keeps digging that hole deeper, doesn't she? Can't wait to see the big reveal.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
One of the reasons Hermione is so good at finding her way out of tough spots is that she is spectacularly good at finder her way into them. Sure, you can blame Ron and Harry for her book antics, but she's the one who threw in with them, so I see it as a character trait.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
One of the reasons Hermione is so good at finding her way out of tough spots is that she is spectacularly good at finder her way into them. Sure, you can blame Ron and Harry for her book antics, but she's the one who threw in with them, so I see it as a character trait.
Oh, my. This has so much potential for both sides to die of mortification. LOL
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
What's a story without a little potential for extreme embarrassment? ;)
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
What's a story without a little potential for extreme embarrassment? ;)
Yes, she did choose well since he was able to help her. Your once and future Master, huh? I like that the end wraps things up, but is still ambiguous. This was a fun read!
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate your enthusiasm and am happy I could entertain you for a wee bit.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate your enthusiasm and am happy I could entertain you for a wee bit.
Well, at least he's being helpful, if not terribly nice. Lets hope he can work something out.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Nice is something that no one with any knowledge of Severus would ever say about him. He has many fine qualities under his snarly exterior, but nice is not among them.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Nice is something that no one with any knowledge of Severus would ever say about him. He has many fine qualities under his snarly exterior, but nice is not among them.
If part of his punishment is making her purr, where do I sign up? It is going to be awkward for both parties, I suspect, when he changes her back. Off to find out ...
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
LOL! I really enjoyed writing this scene. I'm glad you liked it, too. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
LOL! I really enjoyed writing this scene. I'm glad you liked it, too. :)
I am enjoying how quickly he is accepting this cat into his life. And how Hermione is equal parts horrified and curious at seeing him naked and sleeping in his bed. This is going to be good, but in what manner I am yet unsure.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Since he's so often lonely, I thought he might (however grudginly) be open to letting a cat into his life. That little bit of trust and affection is more than he usually allows people to see, which puts Hermione in a particulary tricky situation.
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Since he's so often lonely, I thought he might (however grudginly) be open to letting a cat into his life. That little bit of trust and affection is more than he usually allows people to see, which puts Hermione in a particulary tricky situation.
Oh,goodness, what a predicament. In most stories, she wants him to make her purr, lol. How will she communicate to him without dying of mortification first?
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
I was so amazingly grateful for a prompt that let me subvert some of the tropes of this pairing. I'm glad you enjoyed the result!
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
I was so amazingly grateful for a prompt that let me subvert some of the tropes of this pairing. I'm glad you enjoyed the result!
I like! Is this the end, or will the story continue?
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
I'm glad you liked my story! Alas, this is all there is. While I enjoyed writing this immensely, I rarely write fan fiction these days, being more focused upon novels and very short, very dark o-fic. I do have other stories still up on TPP and you may enjoy Just A Little Bit (unless you have a great hatred of Sirirus Black - though I will say that mine is a bit different than what we find in the books).
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
I'm glad you liked my story! Alas, this is all there is. While I enjoyed writing this immensely, I rarely write fan fiction these days, being more focused upon novels and very short, very dark o-fic. I do have other stories still up on TPP and you may enjoy Just A Little Bit (unless you have a great hatred of Sirirus Black - though I will say that mine is a bit different than what we find in the books).
I'm here via the SSHG Quiz on Animagi - and am so glad your story was included there! This is a wonderful sort of pre-romance, with just enough of a promise for the future without crossing that teacher/student power line. The portrayal of Hermione/Fluff is brilliant! I think you've captured her so very well. I especially loved those parts when she was trying (and failing) to deny her feline instincts. All in all, reading this fic was a wonderful way to spend my Sunday afternoon. Thanks! :D
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
So sorry for the delay in responding. I must have missed the email! I am very glad you enjoyed the story. I had great fun writing it, especially as I'm not used to writing comedy. Thank you so much for reading it all those months ago. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
So sorry for the delay in responding. I must have missed the email! I am very glad you enjoyed the story. I had great fun writing it, especially as I'm not used to writing comedy. Thank you so much for reading it all those months ago. :)
Still love it. Thanks, Melenka, for such a delightful story. :D
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
I am so, so glad! It was a great prompt, and I was a bit scared about trying comedy, but I had such fun writing it. So, thank YOU for coming up with such a great idea!
Collared? Master?All signs point to YES!!!
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Severus is a bad, bad man. But he is also a patient one. Hence, no students, and not until she arrives at his door of her own accord. Glad you enjoyed that little bit. :)
What a clever (and very thoughtful) wizard Severus is! His "gift" to her is for her to choose her own future, and yet the wording of at the end of his note conveys his wish that she will choose to come back to him.This is a wonderful, heartwarming story, and I'm certain that Sunny was thrilled to receive it as her gift.Beth
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Thank you! I really enjoyed writing it, and was thrilled to get Sunny's prompt. It gave me the chance to try something a great deal lighter than my normal style. I am glad you liked my open ending. I always enjoy it when the end of the story feels like a beginning, too.
Well, you've really left the door open there! However, I think with the collar, it can definitely be said that Severus won this round. I have enjoyed this chapter and this story overall, and I hope that one day you get the inspiration to write a sequel, because I'm sure that would be an amazing battle of wits lol. I also enjoyed the illustration at the top of the chapter. Great job
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed the story. I suspect a sequel would involve things most definitely *not* rated K. ;)
He called her "Hermione." Woo hoo!I love the way you've described her antics and her attempts to "tell" him how she has ended up in this state. You've written her every nuanced gesture with the certain knowledge of cat behavior. Hermione as Crookshankes. Too funny.Severus' seems to be enjoying himself despite his initial grumpiness after discovering Fluff's true identity. I'm glad he has worked out that she had come to him for help and not to spy. I'm looking forward to finding out what he notices in the book that our Hermione had failed to read... the flowery poetry in the margin, perhaps? The devil is always in the details.Beth
Response from Melenka (Author of Learning Curve)
Ha! So clever. Poetry can be very important...I had a very good instructor for cat behavior. He was big and mean and dignified even when he wasn't, and he had perfected the cat glare. He owned me entirely. :)I think Severus sees opportunity in all things, and does not hesitate to use it to his advantage.