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Hogwarts Castle What Now, Severus?
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What Now, Severus?

1: The Prince Defeated

2: Severus Meets Zelda

3: What's A Muggle To Do?

4: Surprised by Magic

5: Second and Third Thoughts

6: Conversation Can be Dangerous

7: Clothes Make the Muggle

What Now, Severus?

Emilie D

10 Reviews   |   10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )

Romance Hogwarts Castle 16,532 Words 7 Chapters WIP
Severus Snape Original Character

Bellatrix does Snape a favor, but he doesn?t realize it right away.

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Chapters (7)

Chapter 1: The Prince Defeated

Chapter 2: Severus Meets Zelda

Chapter 3: What's A Muggle To Do?

Chapter 4: Surprised by Magic

Chapter 5: Second and Third Thoughts

Chapter 6: Conversation Can be Dangerous

Chapter 7: Clothes Make the Muggle


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10/10

togspled

Awww! I love it!!! Severus meets a muggle...and they fall in love!!! <3  More, please?

Response from Emilie D (Author of What Now, Severus?)

Thanks so much for reviewing my story.

0/10

snapes_faerie

I feel so sorry for him but am glad that he is with this nice lady. I think shes a bit giggly for Snape but he might need a laugh what does bellabitch have in store?

Response from Emilie D (Author of What Now, Severus?)

I think he sooooo needs a lot of laughs, and a vacation wouldn't hurt. He's too serious, all that death and Dark Lord stuff. Bella? Who knows? :)

0/10

snapes_faerie

oh so glad that bear didnt get him!

Response from Emilie D (Author of What Now, Severus?)

Me too.

0/10

snapes_faerie

i am afraid he will die!

Response from Emilie D (Author of What Now, Severus?)

Really? Then my job is done. Of course, where would be the fun if he dies now? The storie would be a one shot.

Thanks so much for the review.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I meant to leave a review for this. Sorry! Bella is such a bitch. I hope he finds a way back to kick her ass. LOLI feel so sorry for him. Hope he has better luck.

Response from Emilie D (Author of What Now, Severus?)

Thank you for the review! Writing Bella is soooooo much fun. I could make her act psycho all day long, but it's really not good for me.

He'll have something different. We'll see if it's better. :)

10/10

Mrs Alfred

I've been reading this at FFnet and loving it. :-)

9/10

Bettina

Zelda seems just the type of person Severus needs! As for the reply you gave before: people are never too old to get into such a mix of trust, lust and insecurity. If only the situation is right, everyone can. But yes, Severus will go back because he's got obligations. I hope you let him return -- I prefer happy ends!!!!One small critique: Living in Spinner's End at times, Severus should be more aware of Muggles than how you describe him.

Response from Emilie D (Author of What Now, Severus?)

Wow! A review here! Thank you. I started writing this story ages ago, but it still makes me giggle at times, so I'm glad you're reading it.My thought about Severus and Muggles, if I remember that far back, was that he's chosen to live a wizarding life, and I doubt that he has contact with Muggles in Spinner's End. Also, America is a bit different, I think, for a guy who's living at Hogwarts and hanging out with the Dark Lord.This story, in all it's massivity, is posted at ffdotnet, if you want to read more.

Response from Bettina (Reviewer)

Oh, I see... however:Site closed

As you may have read from our last newspost we decided to close down FantasyFacts.

---Thank you for replying! At least I won't poll the story for updates :-)

Response from Emilie D (Author of What Now, Severus?)

Whoops! I meanr fanfictiondotnet! It's still there, finished and with ridiculous sequels too.

10/10

Bettina

brrr, what a start!

8/10

JoKK2

Ok the only question is really does he have to go back?  Yes I know there is a war on and he is very critical but come on how do you leave a treasure such as Zelda behind? -- sadly (for the time being?) JoAnne

Response from Emilie D (Author of What Now, Severus?)

Well, yeah. I think the intensity between them is partly because they both know he's going back. If they thought they had plenty of time to get to know each other they'd both be far more self-protective. They're both too old to be such an odd mix of trust, lust and insecurity, or maybe not?

Anyway, Snape drags around too much guilt over the past to be able to live with himself if he doesn't go back.

Thanks for the review,

Emilie

8/10

JoKK2

What a wonderfully different view of and for Severus Snape.  I am fully enjoying your story and look forward to more soon.  By the way I just adore Zelda -- good going with that one.  Thanks, JoAnne

Response from Emilie D (Author of What Now, Severus?)

Thanks for reading and especially for reviewing. There will be more...

:)

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