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Hogwarts Castle For the Greater Good
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For the Greater Good

1: The New Minister

2: When the Wicked Rise to Power

3: Conspiracy Theories

4: The Darkening Sky

5: A Breach of Trust

6: Fraternising with the Enemy

7: Defence and Attack

8: In the Midst of Life...

9: Atonement

10: A Man of Integrity

For the Greater Good

peskipiksi

55 Reviews   |   55 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

Drama Angst Alternate Universe Action/Adventure Hogwarts Castle 18,492 Words 10 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Draco Malfoy Ernie Macmillan Hannah Abbott Harry Potter Hermione Granger Severus Snape Sibyll Trelawney Blaise Zabini Gregory Goyle Original Character Minerva McGonagall Winky Horace Slughorn Ronald Weasley Seamus Finnigan Justin Finch-Fletchley Kingsley Shacklebolt

Snape and Malfoy make a difficult decision when Dumbledore is made Minister for Magic.

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Chapters (10)

Chapter 1: The New Minister

Chapter 2: When the Wicked Rise to Power

Chapter 3: Conspiracy Theories

Chapter 4: The Darkening Sky

Chapter 5: A Breach of Trust

Chapter 6: Fraternising with the Enemy

Chapter 7: Defence and Attack

Chapter 8: In the Midst of Life...

Chapter 9: Atonement

Chapter 10: A Man of Integrity


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10/10

mick42

I knew Harry had come to ,bury Dumbledor, not to praise him.

 Thank you very well done , not everyone can take on Shakespeare, and get away with it.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Thank you! It took a lot of study and work - I think the library staff thought I was studying it at college, I took out so many study guides!

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Thank you! It took a lot of study and work - I think the library staff thought I was studying it at college, I took out so many study guides!

10/10

mick42

That was the lesson, that Tom Riddle never learned. There are worse things than dying.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Oh, thank you - you understand why he had to kill himself.  On other sites, people who had worked out where this was heading tried to get me to change the casting! :)

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Oh, thank you - you understand why he had to kill himself.  On other sites, people who had worked out where this was heading tried to get me to change the casting! :)

10/10

mick42

Now Severus has truly lost everything, and all for Malfoys greed.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

He regrets ever getting involved in this.  I did feel very mean, killing off Alina!

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

He regrets ever getting involved in this.  I did feel very mean, killing off Alina!

10/10

mick42

No Ron, the battle has just started.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Indeed.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Indeed.

0/10

mick42

No Ron, the battle has just started.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Indeed.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Indeed.

10/10

mick42

So everything is hidden, in plain sight. I hope Harry doesn't get any innocent blood on his hands.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

He's got a cunning plan - I'm just not sure he's up to carrying it out!

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

He's got a cunning plan - I'm just not sure he's up to carrying it out!

10/10

mick42

It had to end this way, I know that, but I hate to see Severus used again.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

I know, I'm sorry :( Blame the original playwright if you've worked out who he is, and the prompt writer who gave me the casting.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

I know, I'm sorry :( Blame the original playwright if you've worked out who he is, and the prompt writer who gave me the casting.

10/10

mick42

Oh no, Severus is caught in another web of intrigue not of his making. T'was ever thus.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

In another of my stories I had Sev saying 'The truth is I am just a cat's-paw: "Oh, we've got yet another unpleasant job; let's force Severus to do it"!'  I like that sentence. Poor Snape!

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

In another of my stories I had Sev saying 'The truth is I am just a cat's-paw: "Oh, we've got yet another unpleasant job; let's force Severus to do it"!'  I like that sentence. Poor Snape!

10/10

mick42

Things are moving at a frantic pace, in order to keep Severus off balance I think.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

They also only have 24 hours before Dumbledore is invested.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

They also only have 24 hours before Dumbledore is invested.

10/10

mick42

Ok Sev, hold your broom, take some calming potion, and think. Many a good man has broken a leg, jumping to conclusions.   

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

ROFL - hold your broom! Must remember that one.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

ROFL - hold your broom! Must remember that one.

10/10

mick42

After the first chapter, I feel that I'm stumbling about in the dark, trying to find my way to safety, but where does safety lie? I have never been a Dumbledor fan, but can one trust a scheming Malfoy, we'll have to wait and see. 

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

I have a horrible feeling Malfoy has done the politician's thing of arguing so hard he believes his own arguement.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

I have a horrible feeling Malfoy has done the politician's thing of arguing so hard he believes his own arguement.

0/10

phoenix

Been years since I've read Ceaser, but from what I recall, very well done. I suppose it's better it's been years since I wasn't exactly sure what was going to happen next.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Thank you very much - for your praise and all your reviews.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Thank you very much - for your praise and all your reviews.

0/10

phoenix

Wow. Most definitely did not expect all the tragedy. I can understand Snape's realization that death is the only escape.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Thank you. I'm glad you understand.  Really.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Thank you. I'm glad you understand.  Really.

0/10

phoenix

Ouch. Definitely a big blow for Severus. And he's kicking himself for only no realizing what Draco was up to. He really should have known better.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

I know; I hated killing off Alina, and in such a nasty way, too!

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

I know; I hated killing off Alina, and in such a nasty way, too!

0/10

phoenix

That's an intersting turn of events. What's next?

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Harry's big plan!

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Harry's big plan!

0/10

phoenix

Well, that was a little surprising. I didn't expect the deed to be so out in the open. I look forward to what comes next.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

The school is so shocked, Snape can do whatever he wants!

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

The school is so shocked, Snape can do whatever he wants!

0/10

phoenix

Wow! That all hapened rather quickly, didn't it? Wonder what the repurcussions will be? Will people think it a natural death or something more?

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Yes, a surprise attack.  Everyone will be shocked, I can tell you that!

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Yes, a surprise attack.  Everyone will be shocked, I can tell you that!

0/10

phoenix

Oh this is getting deeper and deeper. Wonderful job weaving all the deceit together.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Thanks; glad you're enjoying it.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Thanks; glad you're enjoying it.

0/10

phoenix

Well, that's an interesting twist. Perhaps Severus should re-examine his convictions based on Malfoy's desire to off Potter. Though Alina may provide the path for that.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

In my head, Alina is 11 years younger than Severus, so she's even more out of her depth with this than he is.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

In my head, Alina is 11 years younger than Severus, so she's even more out of her depth with this than he is.

0/10

phoenix

This is unfolding nicely. It's so hard to try to judge a man, even one you think you know well. I do fear for what Severus is getting pulled into though. Once again someone is trying to use him as a pawn. Poor man.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

He IS working himself up into a state over something which might be nothing.  Things always look worse in the middle of the night, don't they?

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

He IS working himself up into a state over something which might be nothing.  Things always look worse in the middle of the night, don't they?

0/10

phoenix

Interesting AU. I look forward to where this goes. Draco makes such a good argument, it's easy to follow his logic and fall for his concerns. I look forward to seeing where it goes.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Thanks. I hope you like the rest of it.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Thanks. I hope you like the rest of it.

0/10

AuntieL

Oh. I can't imagine how guilty they must have felt! Well done.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

At least as guilty as they felt in canon, if not more. Thanks :)

0/10

AuntieL

Holy hopping snot -- that did NOT go the way I'd envisioned! Went with more of a whimper than a bang, eh?

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

The honourable way - on his own terms before the Ministry could take him. To the original character honour was everything.

0/10

Fishy

I liked Potter's speach - hate the reason for it, but did appreciate his choice of words.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

Yeah, wish he hadn't had to say it, but it's a darn good speech in the original play!

0/10

Fishy

Oh dear - this is getting more and more morbid... *sighs* Death all over Hogwarts...

Response from peskipiksi (Author of For the Greater Good)

I promise that's the last death - only one more chapter to go now.

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