New Chapter for When All Hope is Lost ...
When All Hope is Lost ...
notsosaintly18 Reviews | 4.83/10 (18 Ratings, 0 Likes, 32 Favorites )
How does the trio deal with the frustrations of searching for the last Horcrux? (Warning: ménage-à-trois)
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Very enjoyable. Everyone needs a little cheese in their smut, right? LOL. Very hot. There is just something to be said about 2 men driving you beyond the heights of passion.
MMMMM but doesn't cheese make everything better??? ^.~ I thoroughly enjoyed it! Author's Response: Sometimes, yes, it really does. Thanks for reading!
cheesy, but sweet. <3
I enjoyed this--an interesting way to give a body hope
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
A bit o' trio fun is always fun to write.
Yeah, a girl needs two teenage boys, given their, ah, attention span.
With best friends like that who needs a boyfriend. I like this ideal, when one guy is tired the other takes over, brillant.Tamara
I'm pretty sure this is the most adorAble threesome I have ever read! It's so cute but hot at the same time!
Good story. And that's saying a lot as I don't like Harry/Hermione at all. ;)
But I have to ask you: What's wrong with threesomes that there's a warning about this fic being a Menage-a-Trois? Maybe warning is too strong a word for it...
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
I don't think there's anything wrong with menage-a-trois, but some people like the standard, one-one-one missionary style... *snicker* You're right! What's wrong with it?!
Thanks for reading even though there was a bit of Harry/Hermione. Trio threesomes are just so much more fun than HG/RW or HG/HP.
OMG! I saw that Pook said about Harry getting the bunny first.... I wouldn't want it any other way. Muahahaha...Holds up Harry sign. Harry! Harry! Oh, hmm... it's Jerry, isn't it? Just drop the Je sound and add an Ha.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
I'd give Harry firsties too. Ron can get sloppy seconds. (Ewwwwwww... sorry.)southern_witch_69's response: Uhhuh... blah... brought thick, creamy stuff *vomit* to mind LOL
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
Ugh. *Obliviate*
I am in awe of your writing. The sheer power of the imagery and the broad yet simple vocabulary are perfect. The characterizations are spot on, too, well at least considering the nature of the story.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
At least considering the nature of the story. LOL! Yeah, I really doubt they would ever find themselves between the sheets together. Though, stranger things have happened. Thanks,
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
!
Great job, even more so that it was such a spontaneous challenge!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
Thanks. I'm really glad you liked it!
As I've told you before I really do enjoy all your stories. This was a lovely little ménage-à-trois story! Well done!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
Thank you,
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
. I'm happy you enjoyed my Tuesday night bit o' fluff.
Response from nightqueen (Reviewer)
I enjoy any bit of fluff you can send my way! Your stories alwyas make a bad day much better.
My goodness, woman! I swear, only you could possible have gooten me to read trio fics! But when they are this steamy, what other choice do I have? Loved it! :)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
So this makes two that you've read? *grin* I thought you'd love the romantic declaration of love in it at any rate. ;)
Response from PlaidPooka (Reviewer)
Yes, this makes exactly two! :D I did love the emotion, but I have one question. Why do you always let Harry have the bunny first? *giggle* :)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
Oh, I don't know. I do, though, don't I? Maybe Ron can wait longer. Maybe I feel Harry has been shafted (lol) most of his life and he deserves firsties. Mainly, though, my thinking here was: I sort of saw Hermione as relatively inexperienced and in my mind's eye the two boys are proportioned as I wrote them. It would be much easier having Harry go first. Preparation for Ron. *snicker*
Response from PlaidPooka (Reviewer)
Now THAT reason I hadn't even considered, and it makes perfect sense! However, I think that next time Ron deserves firsties as a prize for his patience! :D
Great piece, a very enjoyable read.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
I hope I do better on the other challenge I'm working on (SexGod!Severus) This one started out as a short e-mailer to the yahoo group. I intended to encourage others to add a few paragraphs, but I couldn't stop writing. It could be better, but I think it's okay for a 'quickie'.
Response from MagicAlly (Reviewer)
And you know how we all love a quickie !
It is very good! Thanks so much for posting. Muahahaha... I love some trio loving! Teehee
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
Ah, not my finest work. If I wanted to take more time with it, I'd have spruced it up a bit. That one line in there you pointed out over on PP? I put it in there purposefully just to give people the giggles.
All hail Queen of Smut...
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
*snicker* Ah, does that mean I get to have a really hot, muscular court jester?
Response from my little secret (Reviewer)
Hell, I think we should all of one of those, regardless. And he would wear nothing but a jeweled thong and one of those funky hats with the bells on the ends...
that was great... maybe there will be a sequel where they have to perform in order to get rid of a horcrux...
thanks for a new story..
now you need a threesome smiley..
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
A threesome smiley would be too distracting... I'd never get any work done. This is about as close as I'm going to get. I'll just imagine myself in the middle.
wow. i am just curious though why do Harry and Ron undress the same way and the same pace? all of the threesomes i have read have them all doing that.Still great sotry
Response from notsosaintly (Author of When All Hope is Lost ...)
It's a strip tease, and it is (I guess generally considered) extremely sexy to have it sort of like a coordinated "dance" of sorts when more than one person is participating in the strip tease.
Response from slytherensangel26 (Reviewer)
yeah...your right now that you put it that way