Chapter 9
Chapter 9 of 16
phoenixSeverus Snape, Deputy Headmaster, is beholden to no man with the Dark Lord finally vanquished and Dumbledore gone. He is free to choose the course that his life takes, to make friends, to finally know what it means to lead a normal life. How does he adapt to being able to experience this normality. Sequel to "Wounded" (the link is in the story). Rating is for later chapters.
Chapter 9
Aurelia couldn't take her eyes off of the tray of food. A part of her mind knew it was there to distract her, that he was only playing games with her, but that part of her mind was not in control at the moment. "I can't give you that. Please, let me have something to eat," she pleaded.
He picked up a piece of cheese, which she desperately wanted. "You do realize that nothing in this world is free. We each have something that the other wants. I can compensate you quite nicely for your work."
Reaching up and grabbing his hand, she pulled it closer so she could eat the cheese. "I don't need your money."
Leaning closer to feed her another strawberry, he whispered, "Not all rewards are monetary." He caressed her arm. "The Malfoy name will once again be returned to prominence. Aligning oneself with a powerful wizard has often been found to be...very rewarding."
She wasn't sure what he was getting at, but she was at least able to enjoy a few precious bites of food.
He watched her, continuing to caress her, testing her reaction. After she finished chewing, he brushed the edge of her jaw. "You enjoyed that, didn't you?" He held the tray out for her to select something else.
She picked up another strawberry, cautiously watching him. He let her eat a few more bites of food before he set the tray behind him on the bed, the various delicacies still in plain sight. The rumble in her stomach prevented her from concentrating on anything other than the food sitting just out of reach. She didn't notice that his hand was on her thigh.
He licked his lips in anticipation and slid a little closer to her. "Would you like more?"
Assuming he was discussing food, she replied, "Yes, please."
He leaned forward and captured her mouth in a demanding kiss.
Aurelia immediately tried to jerk back, but he had wrapped his arms around her. When she finally broke free from the kiss, she shouted, "No!"
"You would do well to rethink that sentiment. I do not tolerate disobedience."
"I'm not your servant." Fear suddenly threatened to overwhelm her. She knew that he was stronger than she was, that he could easily overpower her.
He pushed her against the bed, pinning her arms so that she could not strike him. "You said that you wanted more. I am only giving you what you asked for."
She had wanted more, but this certainly wasn't what she had meant. "Not this," she sobbed.
Malfoy shifted his grip so that he captured both of her hands in one of his. He slid his free hand under her skirt and caressed her thigh. She tried to fight against him, but one of his knees was wedged between hers. The tears came unbidden.
Abruptly, he removed his hand and gave her a look of disdain. Grabbing her jaw with his hand, he said, "I will not tolerate this sort of behavior. It is childish and unattractive. You will obey me if you wish to eat." He kissed her hungrily, shifting his hand to squeeze her breast before releasing her. He then waved away the tray, and rose to his feet. "Should you change your mind, you have only to call my name."
After he left, she curled up and sobbed uncontrollably. Those few pieces of food had not been enough to sate her hunger; instead, they had only made it worse. After the tears finally stopped, she began to wonder if it would really be so bad to help him. Regardless of what she might do for him here and now, he would still have no way of entering Britain without quickly being captured
Forcing herself to think clearly, she knew that she could never help him. He was a Death Eater, and it would be a crime for her to aid him. Besides, no matter what happened, he needed her alive. She wondered why he hadn't used the Imperius Curse on her. That would be the easiest way for him to get what he wanted.
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Severus decided that his best course of action would be not to speak first, but to let Adrian drive the conversation. They sat in a less than comfortable silence for what must have been a minute or two, although it felt like an eternity to him.
"You know that I have no problem granting personal time on weekends. You need only ask. While Charlie has been so ill, I know that you have been doing your best for him, working nearly round the clock. You richly deserve, and probably need, a break. And as he is finally stable, I would have no problem granting you some time off."
The blood drained from Severus's face as he remembered that he was still supposed to be aiding in the research to neutralize the venom of the beast that had bitten Charlie.
Adrian beamed. "Fortunately, Poppy and Pomona had a breakthrough of sorts. They were finally able to isolate and, they believe, neutralize the venom, and Charlie seems to be recovering quite nicely now. He should be back to normal, or as close to normal as a Weasley ever gets, anyway, in another week or so." Adrian paused a few moments before continuing. "Is there a reason why you decided to take the weekend off without telling me?" His eyes twinkled with amusement.
Severus realized it would be incredibly easy to let Adrian believe that he had spent the weekend with Aurelia. Unfortunately, it would do nothing to aid his search. "Aurelia did not come to dinner on Thursday. Neither was she at home, nor did she send me an owl letting me know that she wouldn't be able to make our...appointment. I became concerned. She has not been home since Wednesday morning. Supposedly, she sent a letter to St. Mungo's requesting a few days off, that she had met old friends who wished to discuss the Lethifold research, but I don't believe that. I was searching for her this weekend."
"And where were you searching?" All the levity suddenly drained from Adrian's voice.
"Western Europe." He tried to determine how best to continue without incriminating himself. "I have reason to believe that one of the former Death Eaters survived, and that he may be interested in her because she knows the cure to the loyalty potion that we were all given before the Final Battle, a potion that nearly killed me." He hoped that was vague enough that Adrian would not suspect he'd had any contact.
"Which Death Eater?" Adrian asked quietly.
"Lucius Malfoy is the only one of the inner circle who survived and evaded capture. I believe it to be him."
"And did you know where to find him?" Adrian asked gravely.
Severus proceeded cautiously. "No. Any of the property he owned outside of Britain has previously been searched. In order for him to have abducted her, he would have needed help, someone who could enter the country and act on his behalf. I know the types of places where that sort of person would most likely be found, and I began questioning people to see if anyone had seen him."
"If you truly believe she has been abducted, you should inform the Ministry."
Severus replied irately, "To what end? She's not in the country, not if Malfoy has her. I am the only one who can find her now."
"You are a senior member of the faculty of Hogwarts. You have responsibilities here," Adrian reminded.
"Responsibilities that another can easily assume for a few days. But I am the only one who can find her." He was losing his temper, and he was finding that he no longer cared. "You have to grant me a week off, at least a few days. It shouldn't take much longer. I know him, and I know how he thinks. I can find him, and thus, her."
After several seconds, Adrian acquiesced, "Very well. You may take time off to search for her... On one condition."
"A condition?" he wondered.
"You are not the only one who has noticed her absence. Remus was supposed to be working with her this weekend. When he found her missing, he informed me that a Death Eater had approached all of you last summer while you were searching for a Lethifold."
"Lupin," Severus growled through gritted teeth. The fact that Lupin had immediately suspected Malfoy bothered him nearly as much as the fact that Lupin had told the headmaster about their trip. "What did he tell you about that?"
"Enough. But that's not relevant. What is relevant is that he, too, suspected a Death Eater. Once we realized that you were missing, presumably on a search for Mrs. McLean, he contacted a friend of his who is an Auror and asked if he could do a little investigation on the side."
Severus could feel a knot forming in his stomach. "Which Auror?" he asked quietly.
"Harry Potter. And he should be here shortly. I sent for him as soon as you returned."
He could feel the color again draining from his face. "Why?"
"That is my condition. I will not have one of my professors engaged in a potentially dangerous activity alone. While you might have preferred Remus's company, I am not willing to grant two of my professors a leave of absence to undertake such a potentially dangerous mission in the middle of the school year."
"You expect me to work with Potter?"
"Severus, this is for your own good." In a kinder voice, he added, "And Aurelia's." There was a knock at the door. "Ah, here he is. Come in," he called, as the door swung open.
"Headmaster," Harry said politely before shooting a scathing look at Severus. "I was able to take some time off without them asking too many questions."
"You will not be undertaking this search as an Auror?" Severus asked.
Harry shook his head. "We don't have any authority to investigate matters outside of Britain, and trying to bring in the Dark Wizard catchers from other countries would be a maddening exercise in bureaucratic tedium. And it would be noticed. What I don't understand is why you didn't turn Malfoy over when you knew where he was? You aren't still working with him, are you?"
Severus glared at Harry. "I would not have spent my weekend traipsing all over the Continent if that were the case."
Adrian interrupted, "That will be quite enough. What happened in the past is in the past. Severus, once you have briefed Harry on where you have already searched, take the time to get your classes in order and get a few hours of rest. The two of you can leave this evening. I assume the establishments you will be searching do not normally attract the most interesting portion of their clientele until later in the day."
"That is correct," Severus replied before conjuring a map. With a flick of his wand, he marked the places he had been with a red 'x' and the places he intended to check now with green ones. "I believe you are smart enough to figure that much out on your own."
As he walked down to his room, the foul mood dissipated, replaced by overwhelming exhaustion. All thoughts of taking some Invigorating Draught, or even a shower, vanished. He collapsed onto the bed and was soon asleep.
When Severus woke, he was momentarily disoriented. Once he realized where he was and what he had to do, he started with a shower. He then proceeded to his office and checked his lesson plans. His lower level classes could follow the standard curriculum. Pomona and Adrian should be able to handle his planned lessons. Deciding he didn't trust anyone else to teach the upper level courses, he penned a quick quiz for the fifth years, and assigned the sixth years a long essay on the properties and uses of the Mandrake root. The seventh years would be given various potions to catalogue.
Before leaving the dungeons to find the headmaster and Potter, he put together a kit with various potions. Searching through the many bottles and vials, he wondered where the Veritaserum was. It might not be ethical, but then again, the people he was likely to be dealing with operated outside the law, both the civil code and the moral one. Besides, he would be in a foreign country, and the Ministry need never know what he had done. All that mattered was Aurelia's safety; he tucked that bottle into his pocket.
Adrian was not in his study, but Potter was waiting there for Severus.
"Are you ready to go?" Harry asked tersely.
"If you are. We shall be starting in Germany, Bavaria to be exact. I assume you have studied the map and have no questions?"
"Not about where we are going." Harry was forced to talk and walk as Severus turned to leave the headmaster's study. "I do have a question about how we are going to find Malfoy."
"You will leave that to me. I am used to dealing with people of that ilk. You are only along to satisfy the headmaster."
"Hold on, this is an Auror matter..."
"Which the Ministry can do nothing about because it is occurring beyond our borders."
Harry said nothing until they were out of the castle. As they were walking towards the gates, he finally asked, "So, this Healer, she's the one you were with at the New Year's Ball, isn't she?" When Snape didn't answer, he continued. "Is she your girlfriend or something?"
"My personal life is not your concern," Severus replied coolly.
"Look, Snape... Professor, she obviously means something to you. I just want to know what."
"Why should it matter?" Severus asked tersely.
"Because I want to know how irrational you are going to be. I know how I would act if someone kidnapped Hermione."
Severus was surprised that there was no scorn in Potter's voice, only sympathy. "She is very... special to me. That is all you need to know," he replied calmly.
Harry wisely elected to say nothing more. Once outside the gates, the two men Apparated to a small Bavarian village.
Severus grabbed Harry's arm. "It would be best if you allowed me to do the talking during the search. In fact, I would prefer if we entered separately."
"We're supposed to be working together," Harry insisted.
"And we will. Just because we are working together does not mean that we need be attached at the hip." He knew that while Potter had calmed down some, the young man was still prone to acting rashly. "It would be best if you watched my back. That would be safer for both of us."
Harry frowned. "I'm that one who's the Auror."
"Yes, but I know more about those we are trying to find." And he was the one with the potion to ensure people were being honest with him. The less Potter knew about that, the better.
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After two days, Severus and Harry had searched Germany, Poland and all of the Balkans with nothing to show for their trouble.
"Severus, what if they aren't even in Europe? He could have taken her anywhere." The two of them had reached an uneasy truce and had agreed that using each other's first names would be less obtrusive.
"Not likely. He has never had any ties outside of Europe."
"Well, we're almost out of Europe," Harry said dryly as they entered a rather seedy establishment in Norway. "Are we anywhere near Durmstrang?" he wondered out loud.
"Not really," replied Severus as he charmed the mud off of his boots. "Wait in the corner." He watched Harry take the booth toward the back of the room. He went up to the bar and ordered a glass of akevitt. He didn't particularly care for the beverage, but it tended to make the locals more open if he imbibed the native spirits.
Standing at the corner of the bar, he could get a decent view of most of the establishment. He slowly sipped his drink, taking in the atmosphere, trying to decide whom to approach first. After ten minutes, he thought he spotted his marks. A pair of large, blonde gentlemen had been talking animatedly about the latest flying reindeer race, but suddenly switched to hushed whispers when the name of a town that Severus didn't catch was mentioned.
He ordered three more glasses of akevitt and, after lacing two of them with a drop of Veritaserum, took them over to the table being careful to keep track of which drink was unadulterated. "Good evening, gentlemen." He placed the glasses on the table, careful of which drink he kept for himself. "I'm looking for a friend who is renting a house in this area. Unfortunately, the owl that was carrying his letter to me dropped it in water, and the exact location was smudged." Since the men did not tell him to go away, he took one of the empty seats and slid the remaining drinks across the table.
"Who is this friend you are looking for?" the smaller of the two men asked.
"He is fair, about your size, and he likes to keep to himself. If I know him, he brought his house-elf with him to do all the work." Severus gave them a small chuckle, letting them know he wasn't the type who even had a house-elf.
"Does your friend have a name?"
Severus watched as the two men sipped their drinks. It would only be a matter of time. "He prefers not to use his true name, in order to maintain a low profile. He's a very private man." Noticing that they weren't entirely trusting of him yet, he continued, "I would have sent an owl asking for the address a second time, but he gets irritated by mistakes like that, and I'd rather he not take it out on my owl. Those birds are bloody expensive, you know. If you don't know where he is, is there another village in the area I could check?"
The two men shared a glance with each other, and than said something in Norwegian. When they were done, the smaller man said, "We have many visitors in this part of the country. Understandably, many are fair."
He tried not to smile triumphantly. He knew they were trying to get more information out of him. With only one drop of Veritaserum, he would have to ask them fairly specific questions, but he couldn't be too obvious in case others were watching. "Of course, but surely you don't get too many Englishmen."
"We get a few."
He was beginning to wish that he had added two drops. "This one is a business associate of mine." Taking a sip from his drink, he waited for them to reply. When they didn't, he continued, "We worked together during recent events in Britain. I come bearing news from home for him as I know he has been away for some time. Surely, you would know of him if he is in the area." His patience had run out. Gripping his wand tightly beneath the table, he leaned closer and whispered, "I know that you are working for Lucius Malfoy. Where is he?"
The two men looked as though they were struggling to keep the information to themselves. "There is a house three miles north of town, set back from the road. It is well protected, though."
"Thank you and have a good evening." He threw a couple of Galleons on the table before departing. While he didn't check, he knew that Harry would be joining him outside shortly. A part of him just wanted to leave immediately and not involve Harry, but he knew this was one instance where having backup would quite possibly be necessary.
"Did you get the information?" Harry asked once they were away from the building.
"I did. There is a house three miles north of here."
"Let's go," Harry replied eagerly.
"We can't just show up there without a plan. It is quite likely that I can easily get us past whatever wards he will have erected. He might expect me, but I doubt that he would expect me to have an accomplice."
"Then that works to our advantage. Why don't you seek him out first? I can wait out in the hallway; he'll never guess that you've left a second line of defense there. That way, if he gets by you somehow, I'll be there to stop him. And if you need a hand with him, you would only need to shout out for help."
Severus arched an eyebrow. "How do I know that you wouldn't let him do away with me, and then step in to capture him yourself?"
Harry replied seriously, "Severus, we've been on this search for days now. I think we've both learned a lot about each other. I have your back. Don't worry."
Staring deep into the young man's eyes, Severus realized this was the first time that he could not detect malice. With great difficulty, he said words he never thought he would utter. "Thank you, Harry. Now, we should do this before anyone warns Malfoy."
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Aurelia woke with a start. She heard a noise and froze where she lay in her bed. She wasn't sure if it was Malfoy paying her another visit or if Severus had finally found her. She knew that he had to be looking for her, but with each day that passed, she began to lose hope, falling deeper under Malfoy's spell.
The door swung open and she saw a dark figure silhouetted in the door. Pulling the blanket up to her chin, she stared fearfully at the figure.
It stepped into the light and spoke, "Aurelia, I've come to take you home."
She couldn't resist laughing softly in relief. "Oh, Severus," she exclaimed happily. Rising from the bed, she crossed the room to the dark figure, only to have it fade away. "No!" she screamed.
Opening her eyes, she realized it had all been just another dream. Again, Severus had not come for her.
Checking the clock on the mantle, she saw that it was late evening, or at least that was what the clock said. Since there was no window in the room, she found it difficult to keep track of time and wasn't sure that the clock was reliable. Lucius was liable to come visit at any time of the day. He hadn't made any more advances, but she could see the look in his eyes. And she could not ignore the fact that his conversation continually made references to the rewards and pleasures that would be hers if only she would do what must be done and help him. It had been nearly a week already. Surely Severus would arrive soon.
She jumped when the door opened. Malfoy entered, followed by a house-elf carrying a tea tray.
"Good afternoon, my dear. You are looking quite tired. I hope that you have been getting enough rest."
She tried to hold onto her hatred for her captor, but she was finding it increasingly more difficult. "You mean you don't know?" she snapped.
"Manners, my dear. We have discussed this before. Good manners are rewarded and bad manners are punished. And I know that you have impeccable manners, so there really is no need to be rude."
She was about to deliver a stinging retort to him, but she knew he would punish her by withholding some of the precious little food he gave her. "I'm sorry," she replied meekly, hoping he would believe the sincerity of her words.
"That's much better," he replied as he poured tea. "You really are making this more difficult than it has to be. It would be so simple for you to assist me, and then I could tell you the full truth. I would think that the fact I cannot discuss it would be proof enough of my sincerity. If it were not the truth, I would be able to tell you the lies."
That made sense to her. If he hadn't been coerced into cooperating with You-Know-Who, he could have told her that he had been. Instead, he had danced around the subject of his loyalty, choosing to concentrate on how much better off wizarding Britain would be with him. It all seemed so plausible. And he would still have to answer to the Ministry, as he was so fond of telling her.
The only thing that bothered her was the confidence with which he seemed to believe that his name would be cleared. If it were not for that fact, she would have been more inclined to trust him.
"Is something bothering you, my dear?" he asked gently.
"Other than the fact that I am still here?"
"I really have made your stay as pleasant as possible. If you wish to go home, you need only brew the cure for me. It's so very simple. It's painless." He reached across the table and took hold of her hand. "And it can be incredibly rewarding. You need only name your price." Picking up her hand, he kissed it. "Say yes and I can have the house-elf prepare a magnificent meal for the two of us."
His words were so easy to believe. There was no harm in helping him; after all, he wanted to help the wizarding world. She was just suffering needlessly, and the thought of a fabulous meal was irresistible. His tender touches clouded her judgment. He wanted her, needed her... She should just say yes.
He pulled her hair back from her neck, and was leaning down to kiss her there when he heard a commotion in the hall. Instantly on alert, he wrapped his arm around her so that he could use her as a shield and then he brandished his wand.
The door flew open and Aurelia could see Severus, wand at the ready. "Severus!"
Malfoy drew her tightly against himself. "Careful, Severus."
"You won't hurt her; you have need of her," Severus said confidently.
"Do I? If you take me back to Britain, I am as good as dead. I believe that you have more reason to want her alive than I do. I would rather live in exile than die. Can you live without her?"
"If you harm her, you will not get out of this house alive."
"We are at a stand-off, Severus. You can't stop me without hurting her. Now, move away from the door."
"Severus," Aurelia pleaded. She needed him to stop Malfoy. He had found her; surely he couldn't just let Malfoy take her away now. Tears were streaming down her cheeks. "Help me."
Severus knew that if he tried to stun Malfoy, there would be no guarantees the spell would not affect them both. Malfoy might be able to either attack him or worse, Aurelia. He was not willing to risk her safety, so he reluctantly moved away from the door. This was a tactic that he had not only anticipated but had even dared to hope for.
Malfoy smiled victoriously as he turned to keep Aurelia between himself and Severus. "That wasn't so hard, was it?"
Severus looked into Aurelia's horrorstricken face. He knew that she felt he was abandoning her, and it cut him more deeply than he had expected. Then suddenly a red flash of light hit Malfoy in the back, and he heard Aurelia scream as she was pulled to the floor by Malfoy's dead weight. Moving quickly to her side, he pulled her into his arms. "Are you hurt?"
She clung desperately to him and sobbed onto his shoulder. "I knew you would come."
Harry had come down the hall and was checking Malfoy. "Is she all right?"
"I think so. Why don't you get him out of here? Before he's questioned, I'll see that he is given the potion that will allow him to testify truthfully."
Harry nodded. "Right." With a wave of his wand, he levitated Malfoy's unconscious form so that he could perform the Side-Along Apparition to take them back to Britain.
After the Auror and his prisoner had left, Severus murmured softly in her ear, in an attempt to calm her. "It's alright now. You're safe. He's gone."
She looked into his eyes and asked cautiously, "You're really here? You really came for me?"
"I always will," he replied before gently kissing her. When he broke the kiss, he helped her to her feet and led her to the bed. He noticed that she was still shaking. "How are you?"
"Much better now that you are here." She touched his cheek, his chest, his arms, as though reassuring herself she was not merely imagining his presence again.
"Once you've calmed down, we'll go home." He couldn't help but notice how drawn and tired she looked.
"Can we leave now? I don't want to be here anymore."
"Anything you want."
She clung to him and whispered, "Stay with me. I don't want to be alone."
"I'm not going anywhere."
A/N: Finally, I have finished this chapter. My most profound thanks go to Zen Lady and nota for their help in digging out all those little inconsistencies and asking me what I was thinking. I have been trying to pare down the number of projects I'm working on so that I can devote more time to this story, but I have very uncooperative muses.
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Great read, I'm not usually too intrested in stories with origional characters, but yours were well developed and rounded. Thank you. :)
I am intrigued, so far so good. Well done!
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Thank you. I'm glad that you have enjoyed it. I always appreciate it when folks tell me they have enjoyed my work, even if it takes me a long time to reply sometimes.
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Thank you. I'm glad that you have enjoyed it. I always appreciate it when folks tell me they have enjoyed my work, even if it takes me a long time to reply sometimes.
blimey that was a twist and a half. will keep reading, great story
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Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Thanks. That was one of my favorite scenes in the whole story. I just really couldn't resist. I think it a lot that so long after I wrote the story I knew exactly what you were talking about. LOL
Yes, the girls behaved just as I thought they would, Helen was pleased as punch and Julia was a typical difficult teenager. The only thing more difficult than a sulking sixteen year old is a sulking fifteen year old, so it could have been worse.It looks like politics and criminal justice in the wizarding world are no different that they are in the Muggle world. I hadn't even thought of a plea bargain, but it's so typical of Lucius.Things are winding down, but don't end the story until the baby is born, she finally has the right formula for Remus ( it looks like she's super close now), Julia finally comes round, and most of all what is brewing between Eileen and Adrian.I think they would make a great couple, and Adrian is even more fatherly towards him than Dumbledore was. Another plus is that Adrian is much lees manipulative than DD was. You hint that Adrian has a great sorrow in his past, will we find out what it is?
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Thanks. I had a lot of fun with the different responses. After all, they are different people. Teenagers in general can be incredibly exasperating and Julia definitely fills this role.
Politics, what can I say? It doesn't seem to change no matter where you are. And we already know that Lucius has taken advantage of having money in the past.
Yup, the story is winding down. Probably one more chapter to wrap this installment all up. As for Eileen and Adrian, I am working on a story that is a companion piece to this one that will explore some events from her point of view and provide more backstory to what's going on at Hogwarts and about those two characters. :) And yes, Adrian is definitely less manipulative, something I'm sure Severus is happy for.
I love the twist at the end! Eileen /Elaine was right and now he is forced to make a decision. I'm betting on marriage. I bet Eileen/Elaine will be thrilled to find out she's going to be a grandmother.it really shouldn't be a hard choice for him, he wants her there with him. After her materninty leave there should be plenty of house elves who would volunteer to do day care and she could commute by Floo or apparate back and forth to work every day. The baby would also have it's sisters and grandmother nearby and they would be a complete family unit. This story must be nearing it's conclusion, is there any way I could once again inspire you to write another sequel? I will miss Aurealia, her girls and the new character you added to this story, Eileen. I know Severus would never be a Mr. Chips, but how about Powlett-Jones from Delderfield's To Serve Them All My Days? That would take him into the Headmastership and then to retirement.Since this update hasn't shown up on the site where I usually read it, I decided not to wait, to read and review it here.
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Thanks for the head's up on the Elaine/Eileen. I felt like such an idiot. And neither or my betas caught it either. LOL We all saw what we wanted to see.
As for house elves, I think that would be a wonderful thing to have when dealing with an infant. LOL I think that Severus will realize what a good thing he has and be bright about making choices.
For a sequel, I am working out some plot ideas. It will be set a bit in the future, probably around 15-17 years. We'll see how it works out. I need to see if I can write something that will cover some key points of the intermediary years without getting bogged down.
Response from Trickie Woo (Reviewer)
I'm a really good proof reader, not much gets by me. I caught a real zinger in the Wayside Gardens newsletter this week. They sent the email on June 14 advertising a buy 3 get 2 free sale on roses (shipped bare roots); at the top of the page were 2 pictures, one of a rose bush in full bloom and beside it a picture of the plant with bare roots the way it would arrive at your address. The picture of the bare roots rose said this picture taken June 16, 2006. I sent them back an email asking how they got a picture from the future because I'd love to have a camera like that. My email was sent June 14, 2006 at 11:13 PM. I got a reply from them today thanking me for pointing out the error. It was easy to see how Eileen became mixed up with Elaine, it's easy to overlook when the lettering sequence is so similar. But the date on that picture in the newsletter should have stuck out like a sore thumb.
Oh, my! I was not expecting that one! Wow! Wonderful job. I really can't wait to see how Severus reacts to this. This story has me captivated. Thank you so much for sharing. I can't want for the next update. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
LOL I don't think Severus was expecting it, either. Oh, how horribly he's likely to take this news. I love the little evil cliffhangers and this was a really good one form my standpoint. I am in the final revision phase of the next chapter and have even started on 14.
Hopefully, his reaction won't disappoint. I know I had fun imagining it.
How wonderful to find this updated! Must I hunt down and kill the plot bunnies attacking you or at least trap and release them later. So much is happening in this chapter - your unhurried pacing and attention to detail almost obscures that! Beautifully written as always!
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Thank you very much, kari. Especially for the help on trapping the offending plot bunnies. I'm having a hard time picking a project to settle on right now. I need to whip them into shape. On the upside, I did have a huge brainstorn on the next chapter and I think it will be a wonderful twist.
Well done. Her anxiety is so believable and just when Severus is becomming courageous. Remus' timing is doing nothing to endear himself to Severus! Remus is the one I'm worried about falling into the love the doctor syndrome... Looking forward to more!
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Thank you very much, kari. This is a scary time for Aurelia. Remus is such a sweetheart and I have a soft spot for him. Fortunately for Severus, Aurelia only sees Remus as a friend, though as you said, Remus should be careful not to get too attached to her.
“Contrary to popular belief, the world does not revolve around you.” Well said! Coded banging? Is Remus just changed enough to be wily and deadly? Thank goodness the next chapter is posted!!
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
I completely loved that line. Once I had it come to me, I knew I had to make sure to leave it in. Yes, you did get lucky that the next chapter is up.
What with her nervousness and mourning and his awkwardness and insecurities, you'll need all your skill to get them together.
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Yes, it will take a lot of skill won't it? Hopefully everyone will show the right amount of patience. :)
Feel sorry for the girls it must be hard to pull back from their previous relationship with Severus.The story has flowed nicely into the sequel. Once more I am going to enjoy the promise and a brilliant story to read. Best wishes
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
THanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
. It will be tough for everyone to adjust, but I think they will. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Some chapters are proving more difficult than others to write. *sigh*
I've enjoyed this story and its predecessor very much. Aurelia and her daughters are very satisfying OCs. Part of me wanted some sort of an epilogue but I think that's more a harking back to storytelling convention -- really, it ends very nicely.
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Thank you very much. :) There are times I do epilogues and times I don't. It really depends on how I think the story ends. Here, I thought it ended nicely. I do hope to revisit these characters in another future set fic once I knock out some other projects. :)
I hate to see the story end, is there any chance of inspiring you once more to continue with Severus, Aurelia and their children? Maybe a series of one shots as they grow up. I'd like to know if the have anymore children and what happens with Helen and Julia after they graduate; and maybe something about Marcus and his school days.I read and reviewed After the Awakening. Are you taking that beyond that day in the staff room when Eileen revealed her secret? If you do, then I hope there will be more of Severus & Aurelia in it. Eileen is Marcus's grandmother so it would fit in very naturally. I suspect there is something going on with Eileen and Adrian, but I don't think Severus would act in the bratty way that Julia did. I think he has matured emotionally now that he is a husband, father, and stepfather. Those hormonal mood swings taught him a lot of patience and diplomacy and he now seems to be a full fledged adult. Now about the baby'e name, I understand where the Aurelius came from, but if there was anything earlier in the story about the name Marcus I can't remember it. So where does the Marcus come from?
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
I have 3 other WIPs and a couple of one-shots I would like to pursue, but time permitting, I would like to revisit this view of the HP universe. :D
After the Awakening will probably be 4-5 chapters (I have to laugh at that since every other estimate I have made has turned out to be horribly off). I do think Severus would definitely be more mature than Julia. After all, he still feels some residual guilt over her situation. And this whole experience has definitely matured him.
Marcus Aurelius was the last of the great Roman emporers and philosophers. When he died, so did the Pax Romana, or so they say. While the movie Gladiator is not completely accurate, there is some truth, That was just happy fortune that Aurelius/Aurelia are fairly common names. Her name is the same as the mother of Julius Ceasar's mother.
Response from Trickie Woo (Reviewer)
I was looking at the family tree of Caesar Augustus's family Sunday night. I had come across something about Caligula and wanted to check it out.I loved 'I, Claudius' and it was on a web site about that mini series that I found the family trees. they were well documented and went into great detail. What little history of the Roman empire I learned about in school came from my 2 years of Latin in high school. I learned more from Robert Graves' books than from school.When we were on a Parish Holiday in Kent just west of Sandwich the first place they took us was Richborough Castle where the Roman occupying forces first landed in 43 AD and remained as their main port of entry during the occupation. In an area filled with history and many, many interesting places to see that turned out to be my favorite.I haven't been to Italy yet, but someday I'll get there and see the remnants of the Empire as well as the other place I have a strong desire to visit, Tuscany.
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
I had two years of Latin and then as one of my required humanities courses in college I took Roman History. Michael Grant's History of Rome is a great book on Roman history. While I've been to Italy, I never had near enough time. I had but one day in Rome, which is a travesty. I could spend weeks there. I love ancient Rome and Greece and hope to spend more time studying that area.
He's learning fast how volatile pregnant women can be, after the baby is born the experience will make it much easier to deal with PMS. He's learning the magic words are yes dear, I was wrong, and I was selfish. He hasn't yet learned my favorites though, I brought you chocolate, have some chocolate, and would you like to go out and get some chocolate. When I was pregnant with my son my morning sickness was 24/7 for the first 5 months, the only thing I could eat that would stay down was chocolate. It's funny, isn't it how you can get sick of eating almost anything, but chocolate never loses it's taste or appeal. I lost 30 lbs. during those 5 months and when he was born I weighed the same as I did when I got pregnant. When I left the hospital I weighed just a little more (15 lbs.) than I wanted to weigh.His adjustment to marriage would have been easier if they had time for a shakedown cruise before she got pregnant, but that can't be helped. Besides, if it hadn't happened they wouldn't be married yet. He would still be courting her and getting up the nerve to propose.I had thought about asking you to have Eileen talk to Julia, but no one but Severus, Aurelia and possibly Adrian knows who she really is, do they? Or is her identity common knowledge since the wedding when she was so obviously close to both of them. Maybe Severus could talk to her, he has around 25 years of experience in dealing with petulant (I had to ge that word in there) adolescents and it's not him, personally, that bothers her. Although he was never known for tact and diplomacy in dealing with any of them. But he always did take his responsibility to the Slytherins very seriously and took good care of them. Julia has to come round sooner or later, maybe it will be the new baby that will draw her in towards her mother.
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
LOL yes, poor Severus really has a steep learning curve here when it comes to women, doesn't he? He's not exactly starting it at the most advantageous point, but he is learning. Personally, I couldn't imagine losing 30 lbs over that short a time, it must have been miserable for you.
At this point, I would actually have to look it up. I can't recall if anything wsa mentioned at the wedding or not to the girls. I don't think they do know. As for the petulant teenager, you have read the next chapter, so you know what happens. :D
I'm going to try again, I hope the whole shebang doesn't collapse when I try to post it this time.It was amazing how far he managed to regress in his emotional development at the beginning of the chapter. It was as if he took 10 steps backward for every step he had advanced before. It just goes to show that every boy can benefit from a good chewing out from his mother. And when he actually listened to her, look what it got him, make up sex and that's always the best kind. Plus he got a fiancee, a wedding to plan, a baby to get ready for, and she told him she would come to Hogwarts to live with him. Maybe the chapter should be titled 'Mother Knows Best'.I have one small worry, how will Julia respond to her mother's news when she finds out about the baby? The first and second years at Hogwarts seem to be more innocent that Muggle children. Helen probably doesn't know the mechanics of sex, or of pregnancy, or the signifigance of counting to nine. Since she already tried to set them up she will be pleased at the news. Julia is past that stage and at the age when teenagers think they are much smarter that any adult. She will probably be highly embarrassed at the thought of her mother having sex and even more embarassed and highly outraged that her mother became pregnant out of wedlock. The wizarding world can be very judgemental and moralistic, so I can just imagine the reaction of a teenager from that background to her mother's news.
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Thank you very much for your wonderful review, especially since you got hit by the database hiccup (I try to copy all long replies before submitting, but I still forget LOL)
Severus did take a big step(s) back, didn't he? Fear can do some amazing things to you, can't it? You know what, 'Mother Knows Best' would make a great title for this one. LOL If only he'd listened to her sooner.
I have been working on the next chapter and you will see reactions. This next chapter, for various reasons, has been one of the harder I've had to write. I won't say anymore for risk of ruining the surprise. :)
Hooray for this update! Now there's a sign of true love, Severus taking Harry along. Aurelia's captivity was very believable, espcially her alternating thoughts of capitulation, rescue and strength.
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Thanks, kari. LOL Working with Harry would be a sign of true love, wouldn't it. LOL I'm glad you found her captivity believable. It's always a hard thing to do. In this case moreso since Aurelia isn't as much like me as some of my other OCs have been. I'm just glad that her captivity is over.
I'm thrilled to find an update to your wonderful story. I jealously watched as your other stories were updated here on PP... finally, this one :) Quite a cliffhanger, I'm hoping this has nothing to do with Malfoy. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Thanks, kari. As for the other one getting updates, it's been done for a while now, I'm just catching up on posting here.
As for why Aurelia didn't make dinner, that will be revealed in the next chapter. Patience, my friend.
Well, there are indeed a few twists here! It would have seemed more natural to me to have Elaine's awakening back story. It felt too rushed here, what with the new job, identity and face. But it is nice that he will have someone with his best interests at heart to talk to. And I like the clever idea of hiding someone in Hogwarts as a new staff member. I don't think I've seen that done before. Also, how ironic and fun that Adrian would leave her door open for Severus!
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
In hindsight more backstory would be good. I might be convinced to do a little filler fic for this when I finish one of my projects. I wanted this story to focus on the story of Severus and Aurelia. I have to thank one of my betas of another story for that twist, though I wish I could take credit for that. I'm glad you are enjoying this. :)
You've doen an excellent job of capturing Severus' paranoia and awkwardness.
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Thanks, kari. Severus is a lot of fun to work with and I really have to thank Zen Lady for keeping me straight when I try to take him too far of his course. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
I'm so glad to find this sequel up so quickly. Helen a Slytherin, lol. I'm enjoying this more mature look at what happens after the war. In many ways harder to write I think...
Response from phoenix (Author of Beholden To No Man)
Thanks, kari. You got lucky on this. I actually started posting Wounded becasue I knew this sequel was getting ready for posting. You will see more about Helen and her Slytherin stripes in the future. :) The hardest part about this one was that I killed off so many from the pervious world and the rebuilding involved quite a bit of creation on my part, though that was fun. I hope you enjoy the rest of it.