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Magic in Your Veins
nata9 Reviews | 9 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
Posh magical babies are in a lot of trouble, and parents intend to "kill" the messenger. Hermione orders Severus to investigate. Written for astopperindeath in the 2010 Summer SS/HG Exchange round.
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nata
Member Since 2006 | 8 Stories | Favorited by 6 | 436 Reviews Written | 218 Review Responses
Slytherin is my house by choice, no matter the Sorting Hat's opinion.
Central European. Mother. Scholar. Published author (one story as of January 2010, but, hey, it counts!), entirely thanks to Southern.
My stories have been Featured here at TPP:
- February 2010: The Proof of the Pudding
- April 2007: Cleared of the Murder
Reviews for Magic in Your Veins
predictable storyline, but well-written. you go where one fears to tread!
Response from nata (Author of Magic in Your Veins)
Thank you.
i just reread this chapter, and i still love it :):)
Response from nata (Author of Magic in Your Veins)
Thank you! I tried very hard to come up with a plot that would keep Hermione IC, yet follow the prompt. It was a great challenge and I'm glad you like it.
I can't wait to read more. Hermione's a bit of a conniving hard-ass. And Severus is quite manipulative. I love these grown-up characters and the post-war intrigue. Thanks for writing this! Bookmarked!
Response from nata (Author of Magic in Your Veins)
Thank you. Hermione was raised to a high position too quickly, riding on public support for her as a hero, and she didn't always adjust with grace. But also, there might be more to her behaviour here.
I love it. This is different. I like that purebloods are having to struggle with this.
Response from nata (Author of Magic in Your Veins)
Your review made me smile. Many Purebloods are so full of themselves in cannon that I love to make them suffer. Preferably in hell of their own making, although that is not always possible.
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
LOL.
Ooh - very intriguing beginning. A mysterious force at large in the magical world, and Hermione and Severus working as colleagues, with a hint - or is it? - of something more. I like it!
Response from nata (Author of Magic in Your Veins)
Thank you. You are right on all fronts. More will join the queue tonight.
i still love this story! ps: banner is *gorgeous*!!
Response from nata (Author of Magic in Your Veins)
You can't imagine how much that warms my heart. Thank you. Yes, the banner is great. brandy01 did a fantastic job on it.
Thank you, nata, for sharing a most intriguing story with us. It's been a pleasure working with you. x
Response from nata (Author of Magic in Your Veins)
*happy dance* I'm glad you liked it. TPP is my favourite site, and I love posting here.
oh dear. This is awful! I hope Severus and Hermione get a break of SOME SORT so they can get together! LOL.
Response from nata (Author of Magic in Your Veins)
They certainly will. Severus is on the edge of discovering who was responsible for the magical theft. And Hermione is about to have lots of free time.
What an interesting premise - I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Well done!
Response from nata (Author of Magic in Your Veins)
Thank you. Stopper's prompt (included with the last chapter) was fabulous, and this is what it lead to.