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The Awakening
Lucas45 Reviews | 8.44/10 (45 Ratings, 0 Likes, 14 Favorites )
The war is over, and so is Hermione’s marriage. An embittered Ron has walked away, leaving her empty and in terrible debt. Draco Malfoy has barely escaped life in Azkaban, and more recently, a torturous marriage to Pansy Parkinson. He, however, feels no pain until his mother is abducted, taking the only person left in his world. When Draco decides to hire Hermione to help him, they discover a disturbing perversion of nature in fey form, an enraged and envious villain, and something neither of them ever expected—each other.
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Aww, Draco is so sweet here. :)
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
See?? Deep down, those Malfoys are darlings, right?
Poor Ron. He's only trying to do what's best for him and Hermione. It just took him a while to figure it out. :)
Death Fairies? Sounds intriguing. Where do I find a copy of this book. *grin* Sounds like Ron is not going to be off the hook any time soon, doesn't it. ^_^
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
I wish the faerie book was real, too! I want to see the pictures!
Thank you for a great update. The fairie book sounded fantastic, if you ever come across an extra please send it to me:-))
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Maybe I'll have to actually write that someday! I wish it were real...
What an interesting story line! I like how you humanized Ron although still making him a git. The interactions between Draco and Hermione are terrific. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Thank you! I can't wait until you see where this is headed!
I like your story. Interesting to see Draco, still a jerk, slowly starting to respect Hermione. I hope they will solve the problem and rescuer Narcissa.
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Me, too! Thanks for the nice review.
With Hermione's help I'm sure they'll figure this out soon. Love the description of the library. Very intriguing. Looking forward to more.
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Thank you! I'll hurry with chapter four--just waiting on my beta. The whole book is written, so it will probably just be a week between chapters.
Poor Ron. He knows they're not good for each other. :)
amazing storybeautifulfrighteningsexy
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Thanks for the lovely review!
That sounds like a television program! "Millicent Bulstrode and Her Death Fairies". *giggle* I wonder what it would be about and which netword would take it on. CW perhaps? ^_^
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
How about TNT? lol
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!More, soon?
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Have two more in the queue! Thanks for reading!
I'm taking Draco's pronouncement as meaning Millicent is the culprit. Can't wait to see if I'm right. Love the suspense you have created.
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Oh, thank you! I love suspense, too!
And the plot (or is that pot?) thickens. Is Millicent an innocent bystander or the mysterious malefactor? Stay tuned to this website for our next exciting episode, "The Lions and the Snakes". ^_^
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Hahahaha! I love it!
EXCELLENT!!!!!!I look forward to reading future chapters......
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Thank you! Two more in the queue!
Nicely done! I could feel the family's pain in your descriptions. ^_^
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Thank you! It made me sad to write that part...
Thank you for a great update.
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
You're welcome, of course! More in the queue!
I know plenty of people who hurt people this way, Draco replied quietly. And I dont believe they are misunderstood or that theyve had such terrible lives that they couldnt help themselves. Ive seen the most privileged witches and wizards become monsters just for the fun of it, and I dont think there is ever an acceptable reason to do something like this.
Excellent job on this story! Really loved it.
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Thank you! Glad you had fun!
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Thank you! Glad you had fun!
You've caught my interest! Great beginning, I'm looking forward to more.
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Thank you for the encouragement!
i like where this story is headed...realistic reactions after the war to get married even though they really didn't know what they were getting into and now dealing with the aftermath...can't wait for the next chapter
Response from Lucas (Author of The Awakening)
Thank you for the kind words!