I never saw the commercial, but this story is supreme, untoppable.

Oh my God I laughed so freaking hard a this! Awesome job

Very spicey indeed.It was worth camping in that pup tent, just so she could finaly get it, Ron will never be the one for her.

This was a joy to read! Great job :)

Funny!! So funnnnnnny...LOL!!!!

Funny!! So funnnnnnny...LOL!!!!

I so needed to laugh today.  Thank you for translating that bit of culture into another culture.

l.o.l.

Oh, this is great.  I love that commercial and you've done a marvelous job twisting it just perfectly for this tale.

I LOVE those commercials and I loved this story.  Thanks of sharing it with us poor readers who do not have a patented daydream charm.

Loved the whole thing, and that masterful twist at the end where you had me also thinking she had married Ron, until I read the description of the children carefully . . . brava!  And I hope there will be a story of how she and Snape got together.  Was he somehow implicated in the production of the daydream charm?   PS  What a great holiday present!

So she did end up with Snape Yipeee!!

Love the commercial and love this fic! Great idea. I had one moment of panic that she stayed with Ron when you mentioned she received a badly wrapped charm each year. Relieved she didn't. Thanks.

Oh Gods!  what an ending!  I had to re-read the ending a few times before it clicked that they were Snapes kids...LOL

Very funny. I'm only curious how she managed to convince sSnape of the fact he is the ideal husband. Something tells me just confesing she is interested because of the daydream charm won't do the trick, so I'm dying to know how she did it :-)

That was hilarious!  I love that commercial and I love what you did with it!

I loved it!!!! HILARIOUS!!

hahahaaaa  Funny story!  I love those Old Spice commercials!!

Could this be any more hilarious?!?

Haha, love the beginning where she's mad at him and he just has no clue. So from the ending, I'm to take it that she gave up on the red haired prat? Lol

*Snort!* That daydream that Ron gave her, really DID knock some sense into that head of hers!

*Snort!* That daydream that Ron gave her, really DID knock some sense into that head of hers!

I love the Old Spice approach to the day dream charm. Particularly ending up with "Now I'm a horse," rather than the "Now I'm on a horse. Now I'm on a horse, backward." LOL. Cute bit.