Two
Chapter 2 of 7
sc010fHermione has more trouble. Snape refuses to give her the answer, but a ghost (or two) has some unwelcome insight.
ReviewedHermione's second clue that not all was well was when she tried to take a bath and ended up with a bathroom full of mud.
Her private room, usually reserved for the Head Girl (this year a Ravenclaw), came equipped with a private bath and shower.
After a soothing cup of tea and an hour's perusal of her Advanced Charm Making book, she ventured to the bathroom to soak the tension from her neck and shoulders.
"Aguamenti, " she murmured and went back to her room to undress.
When she returned to the bathroom, the tub was overflowing with mud.
"Finite Incantatem!" she cried, waving her wand at the tub, to no avail. Mud seeped and bubbled from the tap, dripped onto the floor and splattered everywhere.
"Finite! Finite! Finite!" she cried, voice ascending the scale as her panic increased. There was no effect.
Hermione Granger was not, by and large, a witch prone to bad language. Ron and Harry had sworn plenty for the three of them over the years. But at that particular moment, she deemed it necessary to let fly. "What the fucking hell is wrong with this fucking castle?" she wailed in despair. "First my feather, and nowthis!
Moaning Myrtle popped up through the slimy gunk and goggled at her. "Are you supposed to be using language like that? I'm telling if you're not," she cackled.
Hermione clutched her dressing gown to her and sank to the rapidly muddying floor in dismay. "Fuck off," she muttered.
Myrtle loosed a surprised gurgle and disappeared up the tap again.
Hermione sighed and waved her wand half-heartedly at the pile of mud that had been her bathroom. "Finite Incantatem," she tried again.
The fountain of mud hiccupped and stopped.
Hermione stared. "Evanesco?" she ventured.
The mud disappeared.
"Aguamenti!" she insisted. And from the tap poured crystal clear water.
Hermione scrambled to her feet and looked around. "Something," she said to herself, "is wrong."
Bathed, changed, and with her hair knotted and secured with her wand, Hermione spent the quiet hours after dinner and before curfew in the library, frantically researching topics on magic gone awry.
"It could be," she reflected aloud, "that I was hit by a spell during the battle. But I'd have felt it by now, and Madam Pomfrey checked me very carefully for Dark Magic. So that's out." She ruffled through her notes.
"Some disease affecting the entire wizarding world?" she wondered. "Surely there would be reports of it elsewhere. I wonder if…"
"What I wonder, Granger," Professor Snape cut in, "is why you cannot manage to do your work without the constant chatter. Some of us are trying to do serious research."
Hermione squeaked, jumped, and banged her knee on the bottom of the carrel. "Oh, bollocks!" she muttered, rubbing the injured part.
"Ten points for language," Snape snapped.
"What are you doing here, Professor?" Hermione gasped. "Nobody comes to this portion of the library!"
"Closest to the Restricted Section but not actually in it?" Snape leered at her.
Hermione blushed. "It's quiet," she said, "and nobody comes here. So I can do my research and, well, Madam Pince won't give me a pass yet. She said that I had, er, caused too much trouble in the past to warrant the privilege of access to the Restricted Section."
"I see."
"And anyway, I didn't know anybody was here."
"Well, I am. And you, Granger, should be abed. I do believe that the curfew bell is going to ring momentarily. Or do you feel that as such a decorated heroine of the War, you are somehow exempt from the rules?"
"No!"
"No, what?"
"Sir, no, sir."
"Do you need to be told again? Clean up your area and go to bed."
"Yes, sir," Hermione replied, not bothering to hide her petulant pout.
"Would you prefer Gryffindor to lose more points for your attitude this evening?"
"Sir, no, sir." Hermione straightened her area briskly and prepared to leave.
Suddenly, the torches in the library snuffed themselves out.
"What… what's happening, sir?" Hermione couldn't keep the panicky edge out of her voice. She might have been a War heroine, as Snape had called her (albeit derisively), but after the past year, the dark made her jumpy.
"The torches have gone out," Snape's familiar tones shot at her from the darkness. "I would think that much would be obvious, Granger. Even to you."
"I know that, sir. What I meant, sir, was why have the torches gone out?"
In the darkness, Snape sighed. "There was a great deal of damage done to the castle," he said, "and even the most basic of maintenance spells are difficult to sustain. Have you noticed, for instance, Granger, that the staircases do not currently move?"
Hermione opened her mouth to say that of course she'd noticed that the staircases were stationary, but closed it again. She hadn't.
"No, sir," she admitted, "I hadn't noticed. I'd been so wrapped up in preparing for my NEWTs this December – Professors Flitwick and McGonagall have arranged a special dispensation for me to take them early – that I'd just… missed it."
"Well, you know now," Snape replied. Hermione paused. Was that regret she heard in his voice?
"What… what else doesn't work?" she asked.
"Open your eyes, Granger," Snape snapped at her. "Look at the world around you for once, you insufferable swot."
Hermione gasped. "How dare you!" she demanded, whirling in the darkness to where she thought he was. "How dare you speak to me like that! I've been…" she trailed off. "Professor?"
There was no reply.
"Professor Snape?"
Silence greeted her.
Pushing down her rising panic, remembering that she was Hermione Bloody Granger, a heroine, the brightest witch of her age, the woman who aided Harry Potter, Hermione fished her wand from the knot of hair atop her head and held it out.
"Focus, Granger," she muttered. "Lumos."
The tip of her wand glowed. It was a weak, sputtery Lumos, but it was light. Hermione felt the panic subside.
"You can do this," she told herself. "Lumos." The tip grew brighter. Finding her bearings, Hermione stepped carefully through the stacks as the curfew bell sounded. "You can do this, Granger," she told herself again, striding past the now empty desk of Madam Pince.
Disaster struck. Behind her, a floor board creaked, and a ghost (she never discovered which one) moaned. Hermione's Lumos flickered and died.
"Oh, bollocks," she squeaked. Her nerve broke as the ghost moaned again, and she dashed to the dim light of the entrance, not quite sobbing in terror.
Behind her, Professor Snape lurked, cloaked in the shadows, watching her. Beside him floated the ghost of Vincent Crabbe.
"Lumos." Snape turned to Crabbe and raised an eyebrow at his former student.
"What's wrong with her?" the ghost asked.
"I do not know, Crabbe," Snape replied. "Why are you in the library? You couldn't find this place with a map when you were alive."
Crabbe shrugged incorporeal shoulders. "It's pleasant here," he said. "Nobody bothers me, and I can catch up on my reading if students leave books open. Madam Pince doesn’t yell at me and lets me read, as long as I don't frighten the ickle firsties."
Snape did not reply.
"Times change, Professor," Crabbe said. "Not all of us were able to survive, but some of us managed to learn from our pasts. And anyway," the ghost said as he began to float back into the stacks, "I think if I'd known this place was so nice when I was a boy, I might have spent more time here. It's amazing what you can learn about yourself, Professor, if you stop to reflect for a moment."
AN: See Chapter One. These characters still do not belong to me.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Incense of the Heart
79 Reviews | 7.67/10 Average
I love that you set their place in Oregon! I'm from Eastern Washington so it was liike reading about home. Wonderful story. :-)
i really enjoyed that,sweet and quick!!
Surely it's only a matter of time now. That was a crazy dangerous commute to the states. Glad she's okay ...ish.
What IS going on here? Come on, Snape, help a poor girl out!
Poor Hermione! Surely Professor Snape can give her some pointers.
He makes it all sound so easy! Poor Hermione. I suspect she's found the right person to help her find her place. :)
I have been seized by a sudden impulse to holiday in America....
Thank you for this, it was a good read on this rainy afternoon.
Excellent, original story babe.
Love Sonia :)
Hello - I love this story and have recommended it today for the TPP Facebook page. Wonderful characterisation - and so funny in a gentle and clever way. A brilliant read - thank you for writing it (and what a clever idea to pin it around - kudos!!). Pxx
Nicely developped & built! :D
Looks like a lot of get-to-know-you time is in their future. Yay!
Well, let's hope she finds what she's looking for *is nervous *
this was so sweet. and that last line was golden!
methinks hermione is being a bit of a ditzy ninny. sad that crabbe's ghost is hanging round instead of at rest elsewhere.
Response from sc010f (Author of Incense of the Heart)
For a clever girl, she does some very dumb things!
great start! hilarious. i thought hermione would get all princess leia with the class, ya know "get-that-big-hairy-walking-carpet-out-of-MY-WAY" instead of a meltdown. but barreling into solid snapey oughta happen to ALL us gals running from our headaches. *sigh* A 10!
Response from sc010f (Author of Incense of the Heart)
Thank you! :)
Aw. i like this short and sweet. sequal. Pwease :))
Response from sc010f (Author of Incense of the Heart)
Ah, thank you! :)
*Yawns and stretches*I've stayed up far too late to finish your story. I'm going to pay for it tomorrow at work, but it was definitely worth it.I'd love to hear about what Vincent and Myrtly were up to in that bathroom of hers :-)Now that would be a spin off, wouldn't it?Thank you for that very entertaining read.
Response from sc010f (Author of Incense of the Heart)
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed this! :)
Very interesting dynamic.Well, if the source of a Witch's and a Wizard's magic is practically the same place, it doesn't need a genius to understand the implications of this.I wonder when it will dawn on Hermione.
Response from sc010f (Author of Incense of the Heart)
*g* I'm glad you're enjoying this!
So very Gryffindor ... she doesn't really know whether the place truly exists!I like Vincent as a ghost. He is brilliant.
Response from sc010f (Author of Incense of the Heart)
Yeah, sometimes Hermione should think a bit more carefully! :)
You have introduced a very interesting concept here. Something like homesickness for a place on doesn't know. Very intriguing ...I wonder how Hermione will go about finding this place.
Response from sc010f (Author of Incense of the Heart)
I'm so glad you're enjoying this!
Hmmm ... Hermione is very distressed. She doesn't seem to pay much attention to what's going on around her.I hope you will let us see something more of this ghost of the library:-)
Response from sc010f (Author of Incense of the Heart)
My Hermione tends to do that, unfortunately for her!
Oh, the joys of teaching eleven years old.Hermione should better learn fast how to break down the language, so the kids can actually understand what she is trying to teach them.Why is her wand not reacting properly? I'm heading to the next chapter to find out...Oh, I nearly forgot: very entertaining and well written! I love it.
Response from sc010f (Author of Incense of the Heart)
Thank you! :)
I really enjoyed this! Love the concept of twinned magic, that was quite original and fits into the Potterverse quite well.
Response from sc010f (Author of Incense of the Heart)
Thank you! :)
Very well written! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from sc010f (Author of Incense of the Heart)
Thank you!
What determines where your place is? Psychological importance, happy memories, or special people? I can't help but think that Hermione's place is going to figure largely with Severus Snape, somehow, and I can't wait to find out how! Also looking forward to seeing more of Crabbe's ghost, he's turning into a rather interesting character himself.
Response from sc010f (Author of Incense of the Heart)
I'm so glad you're enjoying this - especially Crabbe!